should I try another Loving Wives story?

[sirhugs]

... thinking on working in a tentacle monster (despite my fascination with them, don't recall putting one in any of my stories), but it might seem ....forced...

 

[sirhugs]

...now I'm stuck with hubby erect, NOT thinking of wife with a lover....is it a cop out if hubby just falls asleep with a handful of hard-on?

 

[sirhugs]

last call for help. Otherwise I get unstuck by random choice (nd know how much Hypoxia dislikes THAT).

Seems my choices are:

1. MC DOES cum, thinking about wife possibly fucking his bf

2. MC DOES cum, but thinking about how sexy wifeis, not about him fucki9ng BF

3. the meta choice: "If this was a Literotica story, I would have gushed great gobs of goo thinking of Cassie fucking Jim, but this was real life, and I dozed off with my fist still full of hard cock."

I like #3, but wonder if it is too much of a cheat.

 

[sirhugs]

last call for help. Otherwise I get unstuck by random choice (nd know how much Hypoxia dislikes THAT).

Seems my choices are:

1. MC DOES cum, thinking about wife possibly fucking his bf

2. MC DOES cum, but thinking about how sexy wifeis, not about him fucki9ng BF

3. the meta choice: "If this was a Literotica story, I would have gushed great gobs of goo thinking of Cassie fucking Jim, but this was real life, and I dozed off with my fist still full of hard cock."

I like #3, but wonder if it is too much of a cheat.

I think I solved it. Option #4.

Want to know what it is?
Or wait to read the story?

 

[JRaven]

I think I solved it. Option #4.

Want to know what it is?
Or wait to read the story?

at the least, you could PM me...

 

[sirhugs]

but I didn't know that you were lurking, my dear.

 

[sirhugs]

First draft complete. Now just need to edit.

*sigh* not the fun part...

 

[Zionisacat]

But think of the inevitable comment :

This is the perfect Loving Wives story sure to unite the warring BtB and RAAC factions together for all eternity, but you fucked up where and were so I could only give it 1 * you fucking cretin

Is hours of editing not worth it to avoid comments like that?

 

[lovecraft68]

Loving wives is the most putrid cesspool on the internet, incels, woman haters, racists, fat slobs living in mom's basement and not a spine among them when they don't have "anon' in front of them.

The only stories that do well their are burn the bitch stories which are filth written by filth for filth.

Why anyone wastes time and effort to write a decent story and post it there is beyond me. Post it in EC or fetish you'll get less votes and comments, but they won't be the high pitched squealing and oinking of pigs, they'll be from actual humans.

 

[sirhugs]

Loving wives is the most putrid cesspool on the internet, incels, woman haters, racists, fat slobs living in mom's basement and not a spine among them when they don't have "anon' in front of them.

The only stories that do well their are burn the bitch stories which are filth written by filth for filth.

Why anyone wastes time and effort to write a decent story and post it there is beyond me. Post it in EC or fetish you'll get less votes and comments, but they won't be the high pitched squealing and oinking of pigs, they'll be from actual humans.

I started out as an LW story, because at that point in my life, I had stories to tell. It was less of a cesspool back then. Somewhere along the way, I stopped writing them, but not on purpose.

For nostalgia reasons I want to try posting there again. I am prepared for thee results off the experiment- I am a better writer, but it is a tougher audience. I can take it.

 

[gunhilltrain]

My first series on Lit was LW, and for a while I revisited the genre, posting twenty stories in the category. After my divorce, they faded away without conscious decision on my part. Oddly, the stepdaughter vibe continued til 2015.

Now, it seems it has been nine years since my last effort in that category, Forgiveness, which frankly fared poorly - I don't know if it is because my effort at capturing a specific vibe failed, or if that vibe was just unpopular.

In any event, I have not submitted to LW since. I don't think it was a conscious decision. My stories still feature a lot of married folks fucking others, happily.

should I put a specifically LW plot into the pipeline?
If so, what should I use as a hook?

(Don't say tentacle monsters- just because I'm currently obsessed with them doesn't mean that I think I can do them justice. Mind you, a LW fucking their pet TM would be an interesting twist- hubby of course tolerates it because it's not like she's fucking another HUMAN guy... )

or maybe after nine years, it's been just too long...

I looked at your scores, and you've done very well over the years. Forgiveness got a 3.94, which is pretty good for LW - better than my attempts in the category.

I've seen this before. People complain about their reception from readers, but they're actually doing great by my standards. (I have scores like 2.76 on some of my stories.) People like your work! So write whatever you want and the scores will take care of themselves.

 

[sirhugs]

I looked at your scores, and you've done very well over the years. Forgiveness got a 3.94, which is pretty good for LW - better than my attempts in the category.

I've seen this before. People complain about their reception from readers, but they're actually doing great by my standards. (I have scores like 2.76 on some of my stories.) People like your work! So write whatever you want and the scores will take care of themselves.

thanks for the kind words. They end up much where I decided to be, despite my usual desire to see that big red "H". As with some other stories I wrote "for me", what will be will be.

 

[gunhilltrain]

thanks for the kind words. They end up much where I decided to be, despite my usual desire to see that big red "H". As with some other stories I wrote "for me", what will be will be.

You're welcome! I only have three red H's out of more than seventy stories. I think I've had two more but then the scores dropped and that was that.

I only go into Loving Wives if I have something that really seems to belong there, and that's only happened twice. Arguably I could have put them in another category. People will sometimes say that something doesn't belong in LW, but I don't think anyone ever says the opposite and claims that it should go into LW.

 

[sirhugs]

I PM'd JRaven to see if she wanted a sneak peek by proofreading the story, and she volunteered. So in a week or so, it might be ready for prime time. whatever time that is for LW fans.

 

[sirhugs]

My effort is submitted, and yes into LW, because that was the whole point. So let your troll friends know to watch for it. The rest of you, I hope you like the twist.

 

[RetroFan]

I wrote a story for Loving Wives last year about a grumpy middle aged high school teacher whose cheating floozy of a wife makes a fool of him all over town, but chickened out at the last minute and ended up posting it in Group Sex instead.

I'm writing another one now where the narrator is a lesbian. I'm not sure what the LW crowd think of lesbians. I've seen LW stories featuring gay men, and the feedback was not positive to put it mildly.

 

[Carnevil9]

I wrote a story for Loving Wives last year about a grumpy middle aged high school teacher whose cheating floozy of a wife makes a fool of him all over town, but chickened out at the last minute and ended up posting it in Group Sex instead.

I'm writing another one now where the narrator is a lesbian. I'm not sure what the LW crowd think of lesbians. I've seen LW stories featuring gay men, and the feedback was not positive to put it mildly.

The feedback is NEVER positive in Loving Wives, in my experience!

 

[Carnevil9]

My effort is submitted, and yes into LW, because that was the whole point. So let your troll friends know to watch for it. The rest of you, I hope you like the twist.

Looking forward to it!

 

[sirhugs]

The feedback is NEVER positive in Loving Wives, in my experience!

I've been here long enough to actually have had some positive feedback in LW stories. as I explained before, I innocently started out as a writer of LW tales, because that was the story I had to tell. It was only later that I diversified, and I gad never intended to give up on LW, but my interest shifted.

 

[sirhugs]

AND it's up!

https://classic.literotica.com/s/not-another-loving-wives-tale

opening at 2.23 on 87 votes....not even I expected such a low score... the experiment proved something... never had 87 votes s quickly before

but I still like it.

 

[sirhugs]

Well, the trolls found it.

Had 22 comments day one. Deleted three, but even then, in those I left, a lot of dislike. A few supportive, even thoughtful.

So, if we look for scoring or supportive comments, the answer to my original question is "No, I should not have written another LW tale", but I still like it myself, and like my main female character in particular, so that I am glad that I did. I just don't plan a sequel anytime soon, and that budding thought of reviving my Nude Beach Bride as a Nude Day vehicle is parked.

 

[yowser]

I thought it was brilliant. You could just hear the gears grinding in the readers' heads.

Wait ... what? ... That's not how these LW stories are supposed to go .. tentacles? .. grosso puko ... fuck this.

A lovely tweak and craftily done. I'll do a LW headspinner at some point, just for kicks, but it won't be as good as this.

 

[sirhugs]

I thought it was brilliant. You could just hear the gears grinding in the readers' heads.

Wait ... what? ... That's not how these LW stories are supposed to go .. tentacles? .. grosso puko ... fuck this.

A lovely tweak and craftily done. I'll do a LW headspinner at some point, just for kicks, but it won't be as good as this.

Thank you.

I love how the comments range from insults to a request for a sequel...

 

[AvroAnsonXIX]

The perfect ‘Loving Wives’ story!

WARNING, CONTAINS: Humor (in trace amounts), Loving Wives, Incest, Anal Sex, BDSM, Lesbian, Interracial Sex, Mature, Transgender, Voyeurism, Fetish (pee and chastity belt), Non Con, Non Human, Mind Control, Gay Male, First Time, Group Sex, and Sex Toys (dildo).

Easter Sunday I was doing Mescaline shots and listening to Steve Goodman’s ‘You never even called me by my name’ on the stereo …

“Well, I was drunk the day my mom got out of prison … ”

It struck me -- like a bolt of lightning. Right then I knew that I could write: “the perfect ‘Loving Wives’ story!”

(1865 of the story's 1977 words reside here -- it was just submitted -- look for it (link below in signature) -- well -- that is if submitting it doesn't get me banned .)

And when the guys with the purple dreadlocks came to visit, which was every time there was a new first run live performance on Broadway -- just who do those guys know to get tickets anyway -- everyone got to chant: “I want an alien dick in my ass, I am happy because I have an alien dick in my ass."

(To prevent me from ever writing another story, please send $US 50.00 to …)

 

[yowser]

WARNING, CONTAINS: Humor (in trace amounts), Loving Wives, Incest, Anal Sex, BDSM, Lesbian, Interracial Sex, Mature, Transgender, Voyeurism, Fetish (pee and chastity belt), Non Con, Non Human, Mind Control, Gay Male, First Time, Group Sex, and Sex Toys (dildo).

Wait, you forgot Reviews & Essays (intelligent, nuanced political analysis.)