So much damn incest

I've written a few stories on this topic and I think the most interesting part is trying to look at things through the eyes of a person who would never consider incest being presented with a situation where it eventually becomes more plausible. "Uncharted" is one I feel particularly good about despite the fact that it relies on the silly premise of being marooned on a desert island to set up the story.

The mom has been forced to raise her young child. The boy has now gone through puberty and confesses to her that he's become romantically/sexually attracted to her. Nothing really surprising considering the circumstances, even if the setup was outrageous to begin with. Now she has to make a decision: does she want to live the rest of her life without ever feeling love again as well as deprive her son from ever experiencing those feelings, or adhere to morals that her son argues shouldn't even apply to them in this time and place. It's not too crazy to believe she would choose the former, but it also makes sense that taking such a step would be difficult for her to put into action.

That inner conflict is what interests me the most, far more so than writing about the actual sex, which I find mostly tedious and easily the hardest parts to complete.
 
I've written a few stories on this topic and I think the most interesting part is trying to look at things through the eyes of a person who would never consider incest being presented with a situation where it eventually becomes more plausible. "Uncharted" is one I feel particularly good about despite the fact that it relies on the silly premise of being marooned on a desert island to set up the story.

The mom has been forced to raise her young child. The boy has now gone through puberty and confesses to her that he's become romantically/sexually attracted to her. Nothing really surprising considering the circumstances, even if the setup was outrageous to begin with. Now she has to make a decision: does she want to live the rest of her life without ever feeling love again as well as deprive her son from ever experiencing those feelings, or adhere to morals that her son argues shouldn't even apply to them in this time and place. It's not too crazy to believe she would choose the former, but it also makes sense that taking such a step would be difficult for her to put into action.

That inner conflict is what interests me the most, far more so than writing about the actual sex, which I find mostly tedious and easily the hardest parts to complete.

For me, the characters need to be plausible in their actions. If someone is won over to something as taboo as incest in the space of a paragraph - it would break the fantasy.

I've had criticism for my story pushing characters into things, but I've tried to show their thought processes and the journey they've taken to get where they have ended up...
 
That is where you part company from the vast majority of "authors" who have posted stories on this website.
Scare-quoting does your argument no favors. Implying that they are less than makes you look like a snob.
 
For me, the characters need to be plausible in their actions. If someone is won over to something as taboo as incest in the space of a paragraph - it would break the fantasy.

I've had criticism for my story pushing characters into things, but I've tried to show their thought processes and the journey they've taken to get where they have ended up...
It should never be an easy decision, especially for the main character imo. The longer you can draw out that process without the audience losing interest the better that story is for me.
 
It should never be an easy decision, especially for the main character imo. The longer you can draw out that process without the audience losing interest the better that story is for me.
Yes, absolutely. In "My mom is a slut", without giving away spoilers, there was a moment when I was about to go ahead with something, but then diverted from it because I felt the character wasn't ready.

The story I've written takes place over a very compact time frame. I probably could have set it over a longer time, to allow the characters some more time to breath and digest information... reach their decisions... but also - it's a story. You don't write every "and then this happened and then that happened and then I went to the toilet and then I - ". You're presenting events in a fashion to entertain the reader.
 
Scare-quoting does your argument no favors. Implying that they are less than makes you look like a snob.

Oh, I'm an outright and proud snob... one who's glad not to type "English" like this. You know: that kind of snob.

There was no "argument" but simply factual observation.
 
What's the deal with so much focus on incest? Don't people get turned on by people other than their sister and mother??? Geeze.
Not all incest is about sex or fetish, there is a lot of good incest with amazing plot out there. Try getting out of ur comfort zone, try reading the stories written by blackmatter and Anomic.
 
If I could come up with another story idea as solid as "Crash Into Me" was, I'd absolutely dive into the category again. It's a great writing challenge!
 
What's the deal with so much focus on incest? Don't people get turned on by people other than their sister and mother??? Geeze.

Incest incest everywhere and not a relative to fuck.

If I could come up with another story idea as solid as "Crash Into Me" was, I'd absolutely dive into the category again. It's a great writing challenge!

Maybe THIS will inspire you.
 
If anyone cares about my 5 cents, I came here only to read incest stories. Then I decided I wanted to try and write one myself. But to do that I needed an account, so I got one.
Then I discovered the Forum button. I started being active in there and made some friends.
So I came here for the incest, stayed for the company ❤️
I came here for the incest and stayed for the incest.
 
I'm not a fan. The notion is a turn-off for me, and I don't care for how it seems to creep into other categories on this site. I get how stories often touch multiple genres, but it would be really nice if there was some kind of filter to cut off anything with incest in it.
 
I'm not a fan. The notion is a turn-off for me, and I don't care for how it seems to creep into other categories on this site. I get how stories often touch multiple genres, but it would be really nice if there was some kind of filter to cut off anything with incest in it.
Stories with incest themes that are outside the main category will usually always get an editor's note at the top.
 
Incest may be popular, but I will never, ever write a story that includes such a relationship. In the real world, it isn't about your hot-step brother accidentally flashing you and then you 'fall into bed'. In the real world it's about a powerful adult taking advantage of a child. I know someone was used that way as a child, and it stripped her of her confidence, and damaged her in ways I cannot describe. No. No.. No.
 
I find “masturbating” is a good search. Many incest stories go off the rails. Specially the ones where mom really cares about her virgin son and end with him sodomizing her.
I'm genuinely quite intrigued with this phenomenon - incest fans getting very upset if mummy takes it up the bum. I've written plenty of mother-son incest stories and will happily throw in a bit of anal sex. It's hot, it's nasty and it's fun. But a lot of incest fans take terrible offence at this development. I really struggle to see why. The maternal character is too 'precious' to be sodomized, but it's fine for her son to fuck her in every other way? I find it a weird take on incest, but I see it's quite widespread.
 
I'm genuinely quite intrigued with this phenomenon - incest fans getting very upset if mummy takes it up the bum. I've written plenty of mother-son incest stories and will happily throw in a bit of anal sex. It's hot, it's nasty and it's fun. But a lot of incest fans take terrible offence at this development. I really struggle to see why. The maternal character is too 'precious' to be sodomized, but it's fine for her son to fuck her in every other way? I find it a weird take on incest, but I see it's quite widespread.
Most "mom" incest stories are pretty innocent how the two get on the subject. That evolving to ass fucking is weird? Mom wants her boy to feel good. Eventually finding a woman to satisfy of his own?
That said I have been with many women. Lost count long ago. There were a few where my finger may have penetrated the pretty pert, but I have not come across one that even wants and ass fucking. I see a lot of men into that here. For me it is not the norm and does not excite me. Makes me worried what the kid might catch. Distracting.
Modern porn has gone this way too. I hate being into a good scene and it go to anal. Specially where the guy pulls out and she sucks licks and handles the shit slippery shaft. Ew.
 
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