Stories Yearning For Readers

[alias_the_archangel]

I've been coming to Literotica for quite a while now, and over the last while have written and posted a few stories of my own, with another to soon be added. However, I just barely discovered the wonders of the Forum, and thus I present you all with a link to my stories which, like their author, thirst for an audience. So please feel free to read/rate/critique, and thanks!

Stories by alias_the_archangel

Enjoy

alias_the_archangel

Eventually I hope to write at least one story for each and every category with at least a 4 ranking. Seems like a nice goal to have. Keeps it interesting and challenging.

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

alias_the_archangel

Eventually I hope to write at least one story for each and every category with at least a 4 ranking. Seems like a nice goal to have. Keeps it interesting and challenging.

Glad you found the forums. You might want to check out the "Author's Hangout." There's a Challege series cranking up over there that involves writing stories in as many different categories as possible.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[dr_mabeuse]

I'd really like to see longer paragraphs. Most of them are just 1-3 lines, and after a while, reading the story kind of felt like reading a telegram: two sentences, stop. One sentence, stop. Three sentences, stop. It gave it a very jerky feeling.

---dr.M.

 

[alias_the_archangel]

Thanks, Dr. M. Originally my paragraphs were longer, however the Lit editors rejected the stories the first time and told me I needed to break it up. Hence what you have. I'll try and find a happier medium though. I appreciate the honesty

- Alias

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

I'd really like to see longer paragraphs. Most of them are just 1-3 lines, and after a while, reading the story kind of felt like reading a telegram: two sentences, stop. One sentence, stop. Three sentences, stop. It gave it a very jerky feeling.

---dr.M.

ATA,

I'm going to expand on what Doc said. While I agree with him, IMHO, the problem isn't so much needing longer paragraphs, as it is needing a variety of paragraph lenghts. A one sentence or one word paragraph isn't a crime. All jokes aside, in writing, length is important, but variation is vital.

Rumple Foreskin