Story: Prisoner on Tau-Ceti Two
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'Sligo's Things'
A new thread, entitled 'Sligo's Things' has been posted, together with an illustration at the Raunchyminds site. Feedback and criticism always most welcome!
http://www.raunchyminds.com/gallery/details.php?image_id=10148&mode=search
A new thread, entitled 'Sligo's Things' has been posted, together with an illustration at the Raunchyminds site. Feedback and criticism always most welcome!
http://www.raunchyminds.com/gallery/details.php?image_id=10148&mode=search
android1966
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Fencer said:
Really sorry to hear that, I'd be happy to take care of the story while you're gone.
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As long as you're coming back and you approve pending threads within a week, there's no reason you can't keep the story. If you want, give some good writers Trusted status, and maybe one of them Sub-editor.Fencer said:
I certainly have stories I haven't added to in a long time.
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It has a lot of meat to it on many levels. The sci-fi level of the setting is great. Aliens, starships, pirates, weird indigenous plants, Bacchus glands, and climate domes. The plot is exciting (and more than just the briefest vehicle to getting the characters to have sex). Prison breaks, captured guards, pirate attack, sneaking onboard a pirate ship, captured by aliens, sacrifices to ancient gods, and life among the lowlifes. And the sex! The rape of a captured guard, xeno-sex, hungry-never-had-a-man-before sex, passion in a cargo container, primitive drug-induced orgies, oh my.
I think the broad appeal of this story is the reason it is the fastest growing story I’ve ever seen on CHYOO. In a two short months, it has grown to 123 threads. I can only wish for such a successful story.
May you have many more threads. I gotta see what happens in these storylines.
I think the broad appeal of this story is the reason it is the fastest growing story I’ve ever seen on CHYOO. In a two short months, it has grown to 123 threads. I can only wish for such a successful story.
May you have many more threads. I gotta see what happens in these storylines.
I just have to say this story, out of the stories i've read on CHYOO (which i admit is somewhat limited) is the best one there. I've been following it from the start & only recently checked the forums to coment on it. The story telling is excellent with flowing plots (except with the linking threads mentioned, this may have been fixed since i read it) & detailed characters . It's good to see this kind of story telling. For an erotic tale it's a bit light on the sex, but never the less it's had me hooked since the start. Good to see the fast growth of it too, it's refreshing compared to some of the other tales which have alot of potential but struggle along slowly, sad to hear that you're been busy, look forward to your quick return to continue on with it 
Just on a technical note (probably for torg i'd guess) I've noticed that sometimes it shows up as fresh but i cannot notice any new threads on the story (it has grown quite large so i may not notice new threads on the fringes). Basically what I'm asking is what would cause a thread to register as fresh? Could it just be editing a thread or what? Thanks, I enjoy alot of your threads too torg
Oh, just one more thing on the inroduction 1 page, the link to a picture has been shortened to http://www.raunchyminds.com/gallery...622&mode=search which i'm guessing you've copy/pasted it from somewhere or somesuch & so I can't see the picture. Cheers guys, keep up the EXCELLENT work.
Just on a technical note (probably for torg i'd guess) I've noticed that sometimes it shows up as fresh but i cannot notice any new threads on the story (it has grown quite large so i may not notice new threads on the fringes). Basically what I'm asking is what would cause a thread to register as fresh? Could it just be editing a thread or what? Thanks, I enjoy alot of your threads too torg
Oh, just one more thing on the inroduction 1 page, the link to a picture has been shortened to http://www.raunchyminds.com/gallery...622&mode=search which i'm guessing you've copy/pasted it from somewhere or somesuch & so I can't see the picture. Cheers guys, keep up the EXCELLENT work.
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When someone rates a thread, it becomes Fresh. Editing doesn't make it fresh. This is one thing I'd like to see changed in Chyoo.com (3).narlen said:Just on a technical note (probably for torg i'd guess) I've noticed that sometimes it shows up as fresh but i cannot notice any new threads on the story (it has grown quite large so i may not notice new threads on the fringes). Basically what I'm asking is what would cause a thread to register as fresh? Could it just be editing a thread or what? Thanks, I enjoy alot of your threads too torg
New threads!!
A couple of fantastic new threads have been added by the incomprable android1966!
Thanks very much for your comments Narlen, they really are appreciated. I fully agree with you and Torg about the ratings making a thread 'fresh', I find it frustrating too.
Also, I'd love to see more people contributing to the story....plenty of story paths yet to be followed!
A couple of fantastic new threads have been added by the incomprable android1966!
Thanks very much for your comments Narlen, they really are appreciated. I fully agree with you and Torg about the ratings making a thread 'fresh', I find it frustrating too.
Also, I'd love to see more people contributing to the story....plenty of story paths yet to be followed!
Hmm might make a contribution, it'd be the second story i've added to outside my own lol, I'm still pretty new
EDIT: Hey well i added a thread to one of the early unused areas, when Calvo finds the guards in the dome & turns down the temp I think i got the perspective right but i'm not sure if the tense is a bit muddled, been a while since I've done much writing and I'm out of practise Feel free to edit it a bit if you feel it needs it. Hope you like it
EDIT: Hey well i added a thread to one of the early unused areas, when Calvo finds the guards in the dome & turns down the temp
I think i got the perspective right but i'm not sure if the tense is a bit muddled, been a while since I've done much writing and I'm out of practise Feel free to edit it a bit if you feel it needs it. Hope you like it
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New thread.
A new thread, 'The Alien Attack' has been posted by the always excellent android1966, Check it out, its action packed!
Narlen, yes those are the guards we have been introduced to, although its perfectly possible there were others at the prison. Once again, welcom aboard!
A new thread, 'The Alien Attack' has been posted by the always excellent android1966, Check it out, its action packed!
Narlen, yes those are the guards we have been introduced to, although its perfectly possible there were others at the prison. Once again, welcom aboard!
New thread - Rude Awakening - http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/52654
Hey, well i've added another thread on as a follow up to my previous one, I think i've got a plot lined up for another few threads at least, even if it isn't quite what i originally wanted to go with, i just couldn't quite make my other idea fit.
Anyway, I introduced a new guard woman, I figured we were a bit limited with 6 guards & this ones a brunette Also made a bit of a description for dragon and a very brief one of the clones, hope they fit with what you guys had in mind, the pictures helped with that.
Umm, hmm anything else i want to say... I think i'll have to come up with some designations for the clones, something for the Captain to refer to them as (or one of them anyway) so any ideas for that would be good. Umm, other than that, just enjoy it, feedback is greatly appreciated.
Thread link http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/52654/
Hey, well i've added another thread on as a follow up to my previous one, I think i've got a plot lined up for another few threads at least, even if it isn't quite what i originally wanted to go with, i just couldn't quite make my other idea fit.
Anyway, I introduced a new guard woman, I figured we were a bit limited with 6 guards & this ones a brunette
Also made a bit of a description for dragon and a very brief one of the clones, hope they fit with what you guys had in mind, the pictures helped with that.Umm, hmm anything else i want to say... I think i'll have to come up with some designations for the clones, something for the Captain to refer to them as (or one of them anyway) so any ideas for that would be good. Umm, other than that, just enjoy it, feedback is greatly appreciated.
Thread link http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/52654/
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