Story: Prisoner on Tau-Ceti Two

[Zingiber]

Umm, hmm anything else i want to say... I think i'll have to come up with some designations for the clones, something for the Captain to refer to them as (or one of them anyway) so any ideas for that would be good. Umm, other than that, just enjoy it, feedback is greatly appreciated.

Thread link http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/52654/

Give the clones non-consecutive numbers. Then there'll be a story about why they're Seven and Thirteen or Fourteen and Thirty-One rather than a more obvious, say, Seventeen and Eighteen.

-Z.

 

[blades123]

A plan of attack

Another top-notch thread by android1966, had been added to the story. Don't miss it, its superb!

 

[narlen]

New thread by me entittled On the way back... probably doesn't fit it the best but oh well :/ Already got another one written ready to go too. Enjoy.

 

[blades123]

On the contrary......

....your threads have all been very well written and enjoyable, and huge thanks for pitching in!

 

[narlen]

Nah i just ment the follow on option/name didn't fit it Glad you like it tho, happy to contribute to such a great story, just added another thread too, not entirely sure where i'm taking it from here after the next thread, i'll see how it goes.

 

[android1966]

Hi Narlen

Great series of threads so far. Nice to see Twelve pop up again, she's kind of my favourite amongst the guardwomen. Good decription for the new guard Maya too, she'd be the equivelent of an NCO, yes?

I should have another thread ready today, just got to type it with my lame ass hunt and peck typing. Not that much action in this one, but it's setting the scene for a couple of threads of fucking in the Port Morgan branch of the story.

I should find the time to make some more images, made a Gypsy character two or three weeks back, but havn't got round to making a picture with her yet.

Anyhow a belated hello to you and I look forward to reading future threads.

 

[narlen]

Hey android, looking forward to more threads, hehehee, it'll also up the deepest thread count. I agree about twelve, she's probably my favourite because she just seems so innocent and sexy. Not sure what an NCO is some kind of Comanding Officer i guess? I just felt like a new character would be a cool idea, another little contribution to the Tau-Ceti universe. As for her being head of the work crew it was just something i came up with to explain why Calvo recognised her and to give a bit of info on her, fitted in alright with the 'True Human' part, which was mostly because I wanted a guard with an actual name rather than a number, hehe Ahh, thats the good thing about this story, it's got structure but alot of freedom to make stuff up too which makes writing for it enjoyable, plus the promise of sex is always nice

Alrighty, well looking forward to your thread, talk to ya all later, hopefully i'll get another thread up tomorrow but I'm not making any promises

 

[Fencer]

Android1966.....

....has posted another of his top class threads for the Tau-Ceti story. My own workload is easing, so I should be able to write some threads myself, but on the other hand, who needs me!!

 

[Torg]

My own workload is easing, so I should be able to write some threads myself, but on the other hand, who needs me!!

Au contraire! It is the combination of efforts that makes this story great.

 

[android1966]

Hey, you got people out here been waiting to see what happens in Tombstone.

 

[Zingiber]

Not sure what an NCO is some kind of Comanding Officer i guess?

Non-commissioned officer, like a corporal or a sergeant in the army, or a shift boss or team leader in industrial or retail work -- someone responsible for managing and motivating a small team of people but not for setting strategy or policy.

Commissioned officers typically have a formal relationship with the troops they command, while an NCO is closer to being one of the troops. One of the stock themes in military fiction is when an experienced NCO has to subtly train a new commissioned officer how to do their job.

-Z.

 

[narlen]

Ahh, yeah i guess that sounds about right then Zingiber, altho she's a guard so she can't get too close to the prisoners

Yay fencer! Like android said i wanna know what happens in tombstone

 

[Nobby Stiles]

Hi Fencer

Is it ok if I use the characters Calvo and Gypsy in another story over at renderotica? The general idea is from Finister with several people each adding their own crewmembers or passengers to a ship and I was thinking of using those two. It would be in my mind a sorta further adventures of...with Calvo and Gypsy teamed up as undercover agents posing as pirates, following up from where they are in the Port Morgan thread in the Tao Ceti story.

 

[android1966]

Ooops, used the wrong log-in that was my post^

 

[niceguy2002tim]

So the guards we know are:
The read haired guard captain
The black luitenant
The clone sisters (V & Stripe)
The asian (Dragon)
The petite black haired 12
The blonde amazonian 18

This sound about right? Any more info on the guards I should know?

I just created two new guards in the beach path, in which Calvo finds the force dome, then he changes the controls causing the girls inside to freeze. The guardswomen are:

Nineteen (19) a very attractive blonde, with sharp blue eyes.

&

Forty-Nine (49) a cute petite redheaded girl with taut perky breasts, and a tight little ass you’d only see on a girl of 19.

I was wondering if we should make a new thread to keep track of the girls and other characters. Any thoughts?

-Tim (niceguy2002tim)

 

[Fencer]

Many Thanks..........

..... to those who've kept the Tau-Ceti story going. It really has grown and developed, way beyong my meagre abbilities as a writer! Niceguy, I see no reason why you shouldn't have a seperate thread with a Dramatis Personae, and Nobby, you can use any of the stories characters that you wish.

Take care all

Fencer

 

[Bastian]

I've been trying on and off for the last week to write a thread for "24.1 The party gets seperated." But everything I've come up with so far has sucked. Anyone have any suggestions. -I really want to write this thread-

edit: i worked something out

 

[android1966]

Good threads Bastian. Liked the interaction between Twelve and Calvo and the deepening sense of paranoia. Though I suppose it's not really paranoid if you really are being manipulated and watched

 

[Torg]

I've written a storyline branching from when Calvo wakes up in a cave after almost freezing in the mountains with an exotic alien woman sucking his cock. My storyline follows their tryst and then follows Calvo as he tries to get farther away from the prison. He gets captured by a tribe of aliens. The storyline starts here.

I'm rather fond of it and have lots more planned.

 

[narlen]

Hey I have to say nice stuff so far Torg, I like it ^^

Also I'm back. Ya miss me hehe, ahh well anyway I'm back and i've added a new thread. I'm so bad with the hook and option names though so it's entitled Twelve Reports .

Hope ya like it, I'm not entirely certain where I'm taking it but I've got a few ideas, let me know if I need to fix anything

 

[Fencer]

Superb work.....

Some great threads are being added to the story, well done one and all!

 

[Bastian]

Lost one of the threads I was working on. Don't know how, but the file just isn't there anymore...

On a completely different note, I think I remember seeing a list of characters for PoTC, am I wrong or is such a thread floating around somewhere. Inconsistency is a pet peave of mine and It's frustrating to have to search through threads trying to find a character description.

 

[narlen]

Description thread ^^

So the guards we know are:
The read haired guard captain
The black luitenant
The clone sisters (V & Stripe)
The asian (Dragon)
The petite black haired 12
The blonde amazonian 18

Hmm well there's that list that existed before, although in one thread someone else refered to Twelve with brown hair, and she was not a clone but a human (or so I believe) named Maria. Then I added Maya another human and these two

Nineteen (19) a very attractive blonde, with sharp blue eyes.

&

Forty-Nine (49) a cute petite redheaded girl with taut perky breasts, and a tight little ass you’d only see on a girl of 19.

by Niceguy

As for descriptions I'll go search for some, I'm just bored enough to do it

But uhh, to answer your question one was never created and now there are already 4 options on the first page so I'm not sure were you could put it *shrug* I'll edit this post when I find some description (starting with my own of course )

 

[Bastian]

Much appreciated, I don't know why but for some reason I thought there was a really detailed list of what every character looked like and what not. Anyways, thanks for the info.

On a completely diffenrent note, I finally got around to writing what I hope is a half decent sex scene. This is by far the longest I've ever written, it spans three threads and is about 3000 words in total. It's also the first one I've ever written from a woman's perspective. At any rate, since Fencer seems to be away I figured I'd post it here so you guys could provide me with some constructive criticism as to how I might improve my writing.

note: the sex scene technically starts about a third of the way down with the words "soap-on-a-rope..." please pardon the humour.

Starting from http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/58066/49515

edit: all the threads are up, but I'd still appreciate any feedback.

 

[Fencer]

Once again.....

...some great new threads have been added to the story, and I'm really enjoying how the various story arcs are developing. Kudos!