Summer Title Challenge

[Magnetron]

That's two she's had slipped into her box
And she slept through it so sad lol

Make it three.

I just mailed in Entry #5.

 

[Magnetron]

no one likes a show off

just got something in. it's not rocket science and it's not pretty.

All of mine definitely need TLC; they are the furthest thing from poetic.

More like Idea Vomit.

 

[butters]

All of mine definitely need TLC; they are the furthest thing from poetic.

More like Idea Vomit.

poor girl's box overflowing with all our detritus

 

[AlwaysHungry]

Does anyone know or suspect what time zone Trix is in? I'm looking forward to grand exposure of these poems.

 

[HarryHill]

Does anyone know or suspect what time zone Trix is in? I'm looking forward to grand exposure of these poems.

She's awake just busy

 

[Magnetron]

I'm always available for some grand exposure.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

All of mine definitely need TLC; they are the furthest thing from poetic.

More like Idea Vomit.

Sloppy seconds?

 

[Trixareforkids]

I'm not a morning person y'all, though I do usually rise earlier than this. I'll have the pieces and the list of poets up soon.

 

[Magnetron]

Sloppy seconds?

My morning gag reflex just kicked in.

 

[Magnetron]

I'm not a morning person y'all, though I do usually rise earlier than this. I'll have the pieces and the list of poets up soon.

Hurry before I send in Number Six.

I seem to be losing all self control.

 

[HarryHill]

My morning gag reflex just kicked in.

Bada bump

 

[Trixareforkids]

Here are the challengers:

AlwaysHungry
Angeline
Butters
Champagne
EllenMore
GreenMountaineer
HarryHill
Magenetron
Pelegrino
Remec
StlGoddessFreya
Todski
Todski
UnderYourSpell

 

[Trixareforkids]

Stc #1

Moved it on over

 

[AlwaysHungry]

Trix, here I go again with the N00b questions: what is the protocol for commenting on a poem? Do I just quote the post where it appears, and let fly with the comments?

 

[bflagsst]

And we fairies, that do run
 By the triple Hecate’s team
 From the presence of the sun,
 Following darkness like a dream,
 Now are frolic. Not a mouse
 Shall disturb this hallowed house.
 I am sent with broom before
 To sweep the dust behind the door.

 

[Trixareforkids]

Stc #2

Moved it on over

 

[Magnetron]

moved to companion thread

 

[Trixareforkids]

Alright y'all keep your pants on and keep your comments in this thread.

 

[butters]

tods' so good she named him twice

 

[Magnetron]

Who the fuck is Magenetron?

He sounds like a magician's robot assistant.

 

[butters]

Who the fuck is Magenetron?

He sounds like a magician's robot assistant.

*smirks*

 

[Trixareforkids]

I'm NOT a morning person . the list is fixed, the entries are up, I'm not telling who wrote how many, though y'all can fess up iffn ya wanna

Have at it...

 

[HarryHill]

Entries so I don't have to keep going back to the main forum

 

[bflagsst]

Poem #1 was my favorite of the first dozen or so because of its competency at the basics.
Poem #2's ode to Robert Heinlein was amusing
Poem #14 is the cleanest, cleverest and most complete production.
Poem #15 has some very nice lines but begins the same as many of the others with the doors being doors

 

[butters]

wild guessing:

no.2 = Harry

no.3 = Always Hungry (though i did suspect H for a while, due to content)
ok, got that wrong - so maybe ellen moore or another gm-er?

no.5 = todski

no.6 = either champers/ellen or freya

no.7 = mags

no.9 = greenmountaineer

no.12 = angeline

no.13 = magnetron or pelegrino

no.16 = Harry/Remec?

no.17 = remec/tods

hmmn, some of those are likely way off