Tankers/cargo ships

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I've been thinking, there are many pirate seduction stories from the Age of Sail, what always turned me on the most about this scenario was being in complete isolation from civilized society with a bunch of tough, ruthless men.

What if this was transcribed into a modern-day setting? From what I know of tankers, or cargo ships, they're sparsely crewed, and do travel for long stretches at a time (not sure if these ships still travel for months on end). The possibilities are quite limitless. They don't even actually have to be pirates.

Example: Girl wants to leave country, but can't use the airport or the roads because of passport issues. So she arranges to be smuggled out of the country via cargo ship in exchange for sexual favours. Or maybe she stows away in some corner of the ship but is discovered.

I'd write this story myself, but realistically I know I'd never get it finished, and someone else could probably do a better job of it than me anyway.

Someone with knowledge of tankers/cargo ships chiming in @ the details would be great too. :D


(Or to swing it in a totally opposite direction, I'd read the same story set in ancient times on a Greek or Viking sailing boat.)
 
This brings to mind an old movie from the eighties with Michael Cain called 'The Island.' Think they might have done a remake of it recently, but I haven't seen it if they have.
It's about a group of ruthless pirate decendents that time passes by, that base their operations off an island in the Caribbean raiding small sailing boats. They kill, rape and pillage, all the stuff pirates of old used to do, but on occasion would keep a select number of prisoners alive as 'breeding' stock to replenish their numbers. Depending how you write it, you could go numerous ways with this.

As for large cargo ships, that might be a bit hard without some serious plot develpment. Not as easy as it used to be in a realistic sense; just look at all the trouble the Somali pirates have been having as of late. Rapid responds by the U.N or their native country, GPS tracking, satellite comunications, and upgraded security measures by the owners of the tankers. Those ships aren't cheap, and without googling it, my guess is that they would have a crew of around 20-30, no doubt armed to some extent, now

A good base idea for a story though; definitely worth pursuing.
 
I once read a story about a woman with kids who was searching for a special ship for a passage. In the harbour, she takes the wrong ship. In the middle of the sea, the crew reveal her mistake and tell her, that she has to fulfil sexual deeds to pay for the passage.

Basically, this sounds interesting, but then thing was: the woman was described as being very religious and modest. But when the captain told her about the seuxal dees, she accepted pretty fast. And she didn't even mind, that her underage kids also got fucked by the crew ...
 
As for large cargo ships, that might be a bit hard without some serious plot develpment. Not as easy as it used to be in a realistic sense; just look at all the trouble the Somali pirates have been having as of late. Rapid responds by the U.N or their native country, GPS tracking, satellite comunications, and upgraded security measures by the owners of the tankers. Those ships aren't cheap, and without googling it, my guess is that they would have a crew of around 20-30, no doubt armed to some extent, now

A good base idea for a story though; definitely worth pursuing.

I don't see a real problem here. As far as I know, GPS became available for the public around 2000. So just set the story 10-15 years back in time. And even though those ships aren't cheap - do all the ships have GPS nowadays? I mean, some of the ships on the oceans are totally rusty, a swimming piece of junk. So maybe those don't have GPS.

A girl/woman needs to get on a ship out of the country. She goes to the harbour and somehow manages to find out what ship goes to where (she is good looking and with some nice talking ...) She can't be picky about the ship, so she gets on one that looks really rusty.
Or maybe she just needs a ship, no matter where it goes, as long as it leaves the harbour. And late at night, she didn't notice how run down the ship is.
Or maybe she just wanted to hide in the ship. She thinks the ship will never leave the harbour, because it looks as if it would sink as soon as it leaves the harbour. But then she falls asleep and when she wakes up, she is in the middle of the ocean ...

Or even if the ship has GPS - maybe the ship company wants to do an insurance fraud. They have just a limited crew on board, because they want to sink it in the middle of the ocean ...

Example: Girl wants to leave country, but can't use the airport or the roads because of passport issues. So she arranges to be smuggled out of the country via cargo ship in exchange for sexual favours. Or maybe she stows away in some corner of the ship but is discovered.


Someone with knowledge of tankers/cargo ships chiming in @ the details would be great too. :D


(Or to swing it in a totally opposite direction, I'd read the same story set in ancient times on a Greek or Viking sailing boat.)

There is this old joke: a girl wants to travel on a ship from England to the USA. In the harbour she meets this handsome sailor. He offers her to bring her on board and hide her in his cabin, until they arrive in the USA. However, as a payment, she has to have sex with him, on every day. She accepts.
The sailor brings her on board and hides her. From day 1, he fucks her. After about 4 weeks, the captain notices, that one of his sailors hides a woman in his cabin.
When the sailor is gone, he enters the cabin, to talk to her.
"Oh, you caught me. I am just a poor girl who couldn't afford a ticket, so I offered to pay with my body. He can fuck me on every day, until we arrive in the USA. By the way, how long will it take until we finally arrive there?"
"Arrive in the USA? This is a ferry, going from England to France on a daily basis ..."
 
I don't see a real problem here. As far as I know, GPS became available for the public around 2000. So just set the story 10-15 years back in time. And even though those ships aren't cheap - do all the ships have GPS nowadays? I mean, some of the ships on the oceans are totally rusty, a swimming piece of junk. So maybe those don't have GPS.

Or even if the ship has GPS - maybe the ship company wants to do an insurance fraud. They have just a limited crew on board, because they want to sink it in the middle of the ocean ...



There is this old joke: a girl wants to travel on a ship from England to the USA. In the harbour she meets this handsome sailor. He offers her to bring her on board and hide her in his cabin, until they arrive in the USA. However, as a payment, she has to have sex with him, on every day. She accepts.
The sailor brings her on board and hides her. From day 1, he fucks her. After about 4 weeks, the captain notices, that one of his sailors hides a woman in his cabin.
When the sailor is gone, he enters the cabin, to talk to her.
"Oh, you caught me. I am just a poor girl who couldn't afford a ticket, so I offered to pay with my body. He can fuck me on every day, until we arrive in the USA. By the way, how long will it take until we finally arrive there?"
"Arrive in the USA? This is a ferry, going from England to France on a daily basis ..."

I just assumed that when the OP said 'modern-day' it ment in a present setting, and I pictured something like a very large cargo ship or a modern Oil Tanker as the starting point. If that's the case, then yes, they would have state of the art tracking and communication systems. I think any ship today would have those, including privatly owned small sailing ships, if you're talking about trans-oceanic travel.
Just becasue a ship looks like a piece of junk, doesn't mean it is; apperences can be decieving.

It's not a problem, like you said, just change the time line around a little and any thing works. Tweak the idea how ever you want, it's a good one with lots of possibilites depending on what you like to write.

Good joke by the way :D
 
Modern freighters such as container ships will sometimes accept passengers. Accomodations are pretty good and you eat in the officers dining room.

The downside to this method of travel is the lack of any entertainment other than whatever DVDs, music, and books the crew might have. As I understand, people normally share things like these on a long voyage, but I assume that without a specific job to do, boredom would set in. Do a Google search and you can find out all about this method of travel.

Lots of story ideas are possible be that a rough pirate-type crew or a shipboard romance unique due to the lack of a Love Boat setting.

Christopher
 
How long is a typical journey for such ships? Or does it vary?

A girl/woman needs to get on a ship out of the country. She goes to the harbour and somehow manages to find out what ship goes to where (she is good looking and with some nice talking ...) She can't be picky about the ship, so she gets on one that looks really rusty.
Or maybe she just needs a ship, no matter where it goes, as long as it leaves the harbour. And late at night, she didn't notice how run down the ship is.
Or maybe she just wanted to hide in the ship. She thinks the ship will never leave the harbour, because it looks as if it would sink as soon as it leaves the harbour. But then she falls asleep and when she wakes up, she is in the middle of the ocean ...
Good ideas! :) Keep 'em coming.

There is this old joke: a girl wants to travel on a ship from England to the USA. In the harbour she meets this handsome sailor. He offers her to bring her on board and hide her in his cabin, until they arrive in the USA. However, as a payment, she has to have sex with him, on every day. She accepts.
The sailor brings her on board and hides her. From day 1, he fucks her. After about 4 weeks, the captain notices, that one of his sailors hides a woman in his cabin.
When the sailor is gone, he enters the cabin, to talk to her.
"Oh, you caught me. I am just a poor girl who couldn't afford a ticket, so I offered to pay with my body. He can fuck me on every day, until we arrive in the USA. By the way, how long will it take until we finally arrive there?"
"Arrive in the USA? This is a ferry, going from England to France on a daily basis ..."
:D I might actually write this story. The twist is hilarious.


@ the GPS, I was actually thinking more of the action between a girl and the crew of an ordinary tanker/container ship, but I think the pirate angle would work too - a female captain, her crew slaughtered and her ship captured, submits to her captors. Probably not set in the modern day, but maybe ten years ago, before GPS and the current UN naval actions.
 
Modern freighters such as container ships will sometimes accept passengers. Accomodations are pretty good and you eat in the officers dining room.

The downside to this method of travel is the lack of any entertainment other than whatever DVDs, music, and books the crew might have. As I understand, people normally share things like these on a long voyage, but I assume that without a specific job to do, boredom would set in. Do a Google search and you can find out all about this method of travel.

Lots of story ideas are possible be that a rough pirate-type crew or a shipboard romance unique due to the lack of a Love Boat setting.

Christopher

This gives me 3 new ideas:

1. The girl is poor but desperate, so she offers to pay with her body. However, when she made this offer, she thought, she would only fuck with the captain - but on the middle of the sea, the captain explains her: you have to serve ALL the seamen. And since this ship is big, there are a many seamen on it -and soon, there will be many semen in you ...

2. The girl pays for her voyage. She is rich, and could afford her own private plane, but she wants to experience some new adventures, that I why she travels on a cargo ship. (her name could be "Paris" or something like that)
She is well prepared with some books and DVDs, but the problem is: since the entire crew is working at daytime, she is alone - and so it doesn't take long until she read all books and watched all DVDs ... she gets bored. So she starts to think: she could try to seduce one of the seamen - that would be fun. It doesn't take long until she fucked with the entire crew.

3. Basically this goes back to the thread starter. This "Paris" girl from idea 2 is on the ship. Suddenly, the ship is taken over by pirates. They kidnap or kill the crew. Paris hides somewhere, but they find her. Since the pirates are horny and the girl is good looking, they offer her a deal: either you live and open your legs, or you die and will sink in the ocean ...
 
How long is a typical journey for such ships? Or does it vary?


Good ideas! :) Keep 'em coming.


:D I might actually write this story. The twist is hilarious.


@ the GPS, I was actually thinking more of the action between a girl and the crew of an ordinary tanker/container ship, but I think the pirate angle would work too - a female captain, her crew slaughtered and her ship captured, submits to her captors. Probably not set in the modern day, but maybe ten years ago, before GPS and the current UN naval actions.

The time varies, could be weeks or months depending on the destination.

A lot of good ideas on this one, mainly centered around reluctance, blackmail or NC, but still good ideas.
I think the willing passenger idea is the best place to start IMO, books a cheap ticket, maybe with a friend (girl or guy) and is taken advantage of at some point when out at sea. I like the unscrupulous captain and crew better then pirates for a modern setting. Seems a bit more realistic IMO.
 
How long is a typical journey for such ships? Or does it vary?

Maybe something in the ship breaks and the ship is stuck in the middle of the ocean. Now they are waiting for another ship to pick them up or to deliver a spare part.

That way, the journey would last very long, I guess.
 
Maria needs to go on a long journey and, being poor, she thinks the best and cheapest way would be to travel on a cargo freighter. She finds out she can pay her way by working in the kitchen. She knows that a girl travelling alone with an all-male crew is asking for trouble, so she disguises herself as a man. and calls herself Hector. Everything's fine for the first few days, as Maria keeps herself to herself and keeps up the pretense of being a man. Working in the kitchen, she avoids showering with the other crewmen, and manages to keep her secret even from the guy she shares a cabin with. Everything's fine until they cross the equator and the captain announces that it's customary for a crew member to be dressed as a girl and make himself available for the rest of the crew. Votes are counted and verified and by an overwhelming majority, it's Hector, the kitchen boy, who has the dubious honour of being a girl for a night...
 
I’ve heard of something like this before. A couple of guys I work with were in the Navy, and they’ve mentioned something like this in the past; there’s actually a name for it.
It’s like a rite of passage or hazing they use to scare new crew members with; being a glory hole recipient, dressing like a woman, sex, making the person member swim nude once they cross the equator and enter the southern hemisphere for the first time. I agree; it could make for an interesting plot twist if the girl is pretending to be a member of the crew.
 
The Tanker type story makes me think about Water World - Kevin Costner




I've been thinking, there are many pirate seduction stories from the Age of Sail, what always turned me on the most about this scenario was being in complete isolation from civilized society with a bunch of tough, ruthless men.

What if this was transcribed into a modern-day setting? From what I know of tankers, or cargo ships, they're sparsely crewed, and do travel for long stretches at a time (not sure if these ships still travel for months on end). The possibilities are quite limitless. They don't even actually have to be pirates.

Example: Girl wants to leave country, but can't use the airport or the roads because of passport issues. So she arranges to be smuggled out of the country via cargo ship in exchange for sexual favours. Or maybe she stows away in some corner of the ship but is discovered.

I'd write this story myself, but realistically I know I'd never get it finished, and someone else could probably do a better job of it than me anyway.

Someone with knowledge of tankers/cargo ships chiming in @ the details would be great too. :D


(Or to swing it in a totally opposite direction, I'd read the same story set in ancient times on a Greek or Viking sailing boat.)
 
I’ve heard of something like this before. A couple of guys I work with were in the Navy, and they’ve mentioned something like this in the past; there’s actually a name for it.
It’s like a rite of passage or hazing they use to scare new crew members with; being a glory hole recipient, dressing like a woman, sex, making the person member swim nude once they cross the equator and enter the southern hemisphere for the first time. I agree; it could make for an interesting plot twist if the girl is pretending to be a member of the crew.

I think I saw it on a documentary when I was a kid. I don't remember the details, except I seem to recall a dress was involved...

Anyway, another girl-dressed-as-boy-on-a-ship idea with a different twist...

Eva needs to travel from southern Argentina to New York and, being poor, she gets a job on a cargo freighter, working in the kitchen. She knows that a pretty girl alone amongst an all-male crew is asking for trouble, so she disguises herself as a man. and calls herself Eduardo. But on the first day out, her cabin-mate discovers her secret when he spies on her getting changed. He can't believe they've got a hot young woman on board, and tells Eva he'll keep her secret between them, on the condition that she lets him fuck her. The girl reluctantly agrees, figuring that having sex with one ugly crew member is better than everyone finding out and using her in a gangbang.

But one night, Eva and the guy are going at it, and another crew member passes by and hears the unmistakable sound of two people having sex. Not knowing Eva is a girl, he assumes they're having gay sex, which is common in an all-male environment where men are deprived of female company. Well, the crewman decides he'd like to try it, and figures that Eduardo, the young kitchen boy, being the most girly of the crew, would be the least repugnant guy to fuck.

So poor Eva has her pussy fucked all night by one crewman and her ass fucked during the day by another crewman, who still thinks she's a boy. Of course, it's a long way to New York and maybe other crewmen will want some of that sweet ass too.
 
I think I saw it on a documentary when I was a kid. I don't remember the details, except I seem to recall a dress was involved...

Anyway, another girl-dressed-as-boy-on-a-ship idea with a different twist...

Eva needs to travel from southern Argentina to New York and, being poor, she gets a job on a cargo freighter, working in the kitchen. She knows that a pretty girl alone amongst an all-male crew is asking for trouble, so she disguises herself as a man. and calls herself Eduardo. But on the first day out, her cabin-mate discovers her secret when he spies on her getting changed. He can't believe they've got a hot young woman on board, and tells Eva he'll keep her secret between them, on the condition that she lets him fuck her. The girl reluctantly agrees, figuring that having sex with one ugly crew member is better than everyone finding out and using her in a gangbang.

But one night, Eva and the guy are going at it, and another crew member passes by and hears the unmistakable sound of two people having sex. Not knowing Eva is a girl, he assumes they're having gay sex, which is common in an all-male environment where men are deprived of female company. Well, the crewman decides he'd like to try it, and figures that Eduardo, the young kitchen boy, being the most girly of the crew, would be the least repugnant guy to fuck.

So poor Eva has her pussy fucked all night by one crewman and her ass fucked during the day by another crewman, who still thinks she's a boy. Of course, it's a long way to New York and maybe other crewmen will want some of that sweet ass too.

That does make for an interesting twist. The crew, or a t least a few of them, end of thinking she's a sissy and use her as such, oral and anal. Maybe the first guy to find out she isn't a guy could catch he in the shower, or undressing? You could throw some elements of voyeurism into this.
 
Maria needs to go on a long journey and, being poor, she thinks the best and cheapest way would be to travel on a cargo freighter. She finds out she can pay her way by working in the kitchen. She knows that a girl travelling alone with an all-male crew is asking for trouble, so she disguises herself as a man. and calls herself Hector. Everything's fine for the first few days, as Maria keeps herself to herself and keeps up the pretense of being a man. Working in the kitchen, she avoids showering with the other crewmen, and manages to keep her secret even from the guy she shares a cabin with. Everything's fine until they cross the equator and the captain announces that it's customary for a crew member to be dressed as a girl and make himself available for the rest of the crew. Votes are counted and verified and by an overwhelming majority, it's Hector, the kitchen boy, who has the dubious honour of being a girl for a night...

This sounds similar to one of the soap operas that my wife is watching.

A young woman loves icehockey. I don't remember all the details, but for some reasons, she wants to be in an all-male team, so she disguises herself as a guy. However, she fell in love with one of the other team-mates. But since she pretends to be a guy, she can't be open about that.
He also notices some feelings, but he fears that he is gay. Later the girl reveals her real identity and the guy is glad that he is not gay ...
 
This sounds similar to one of the soap operas that my wife is watching.

A young woman loves icehockey. I don't remember all the details, but for some reasons, she wants to be in an all-male team, so she disguises herself as a guy. However, she fell in love with one of the other team-mates. But since she pretends to be a guy, she can't be open about that.
He also notices some feelings, but he fears that he is gay. Later the girl reveals her real identity and the guy is glad that he is not gay ...



Yeah, now that I think about it, that idea is pretty played out on T.V. and movies. Nothing saying it wouldn't work, but the concpt isn't very original.
 
Yeah, now that I think about it, that idea is pretty played out on T.V. and movies. Nothing saying it wouldn't work, but the concpt isn't very original.

Well, I think when it comes to sex stories, it is hard to come up with something original. But who cares, as long as it is written well.

And personally, I think the idea is original. I mean, a girl, disguised as a guy - and there is this guy who is so horny and desperate, that (even though he is not gay or bi) he fucks another "guy".

Now think about it: he pulls her pants down and is surprised because the ass doesn't look like he expected it. The skin is smooth and the butt is in great shape. So maybe buttfucking another guy wouldn't be that bad. With some fantasy, he could try to imagine it is a girl.
He starts to lube up the butthole he is about to enter, but something is wrong. There are no balls. It looks almost as if this guy has a pussy. He takes another look and then he realizes that she really is a girl.

Another interesting version could be (sorry, but this will go a little bit off topic): A woman fell in love with a gay guy. She wants to turn him over. So at first, she disguises herself as a guy. She manages to seduce him. She asks him to buttfuck her. She pulls her pants down, and the guy enters her butthole. While he does that, he also wants to play with her dick and balls - but there are none ...
 
Well, I think when it comes to sex stories, it is hard to come up with something original. But who cares, as long as it is written well.

And personally, I think the idea is original. I mean, a girl, disguised as a guy - and there is this guy who is so horny and desperate, that (even though he is not gay or bi) he fucks another "guy".

Now think about it: he pulls her pants down and is surprised because the ass doesn't look like he expected it. The skin is smooth and the butt is in great shape. So maybe buttfucking another guy wouldn't be that bad. With some fantasy, he could try to imagine it is a girl.
He starts to lube up the butthole he is about to enter, but something is wrong. There are no balls. It looks almost as if this guy has a pussy. He takes another look and then he realizes that she really is a girl.

Another interesting version could be (sorry, but this will go a little bit off topic): A woman fell in love with a gay guy. She wants to turn him over. So at first, she disguises herself as a guy. She manages to seduce him. She asks him to buttfuck her. She pulls her pants down, and the guy enters her butthole. While he does that, he also wants to play with her dick and balls - but there are none ...

I agree, as long as it's well writen, who's really going to cares? Just making a point that this concept has been used numerous times in the past. (the names of the shows arent coming to mind at the moment) Nothing saying you can't take the basic idea and turn it into something original, like we've done in the previous posts.

That would be pretty funny and entertaining to write in a way. A gay guy thinking that he's going to have sex with another man, and finds out that 'he's' a 'she' and the guy is mortified, turned off, even angery becuase he feels betrayed. She begs him to keep her secret and he does, for the time being.
A relationship begins to develope, and he's never been with a woman before, a virgin in a way. Maybe the other crew didn't know he was gay and finds out their sleeping together, but are under the impression their both men. It comes down to a lynching type scene and then the truth comes out that 'he's' actually a woman. The story could go in numerous direction from there.
 
That would be pretty funny and entertaining to write in a way. A gay guy thinking that he's going to have sex with another man, and finds out that 'he's' a 'she' and the guy is mortified, turned off, even angery becuase he feels betrayed. She begs him to keep her secret and he does, for the time being.
A relationship begins to develope, and he's never been with a woman before, a virgin in a way. Maybe the other crew didn't know he was gay and finds out their sleeping together, but are under the impression their both men. It comes down to a lynching type scene and then the truth comes out that 'he's' actually a woman. The story could go in numerous direction from there.

The idea with the lynching sounds really cool. They almost hang him, when the girl starts "He is not gay - I am a woman."
"We don't believe you. We think you are a gay guy who tries to protect his lover with some stupid lies."
"O.k. I will prove it. Take a look at my tits and at my pussy ..." She drops her clothes and stands naked in front of a group of unscrupulous guys. Just think: moments ago, they wanted to kill a guy because they thought he was gay. Now they are faced with a nude young lady, after they spent weeks (or maybe even months) without having sex ...

By the way: the woman disguised as a guy could also work in a story placed in an Islamic country, or in a story based in ancient times, when women had no rights.
I once read a fantasy book about medieval times. A woman wanted to become a doctor (or something like that). Back then, a woman couldn't become a doctor, it was forbidden (at least that was what the book said), so she disguised as a guy, to become a doctor.

To get back to the original story idea: maybe a woman wants to work on a ship, but for some reasons, she can't. I know there is a superstition - a woman on board of a ship will bring bad luck.
Or maybe - the woman knows that she will spent a few weeks with a bunch of guys. She is sure, if they know that she is a girl, they will flirt with her. To avoid that, she pretends to be a guy ...
 
The idea with the lynching sounds really cool. They almost hang him, when the girl starts "He is not gay - I am a woman."
"We don't believe you. We think you are a gay guy who tries to protect his lover with some stupid lies."
"O.k. I will prove it. Take a look at my tits and at my pussy ..." She drops her clothes and stands naked in front of a group of unscrupulous guys. Just think: moments ago, they wanted to kill a guy because they thought he was gay. Now they are faced with a nude young lady, after they spent weeks (or maybe even months) without having sex ...

By the way: the woman disguised as a guy could also work in a story placed in an Islamic country, or in a story based in ancient times, when women had no rights.
I once read a fantasy book about medieval times. A woman wanted to become a doctor (or something like that). Back then, a woman couldn't become a doctor, it was forbidden (at least that was what the book said), so she disguised as a guy, to become a doctor.

To get back to the original story idea: maybe a woman wants to work on a ship, but for some reasons, she can't. I know there is a superstition - a woman on board of a ship will bring bad luck.
Or maybe - the woman knows that she will spent a few weeks with a bunch of guys. She is sure, if they know that she is a girl, they will flirt with her. To avoid that, she pretends to be a guy ...


I'm really starting to like where this idea is going. So they're faced with a pretty nude woman after being out at sea for 'X' amount of time. Not hard to figure out what happens from there, but like you reminded me, tradtionally women on board ship are a bad omen in some cultures. So they use her and either sell her off at some port into slavery, or how about this? They put her and her 'gay' lover in a life boat and set them adrift.
Gee, it kind of flows right into you Robinson Crusoe thread, doesn't it?
 
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I'm really starting to like where this idea is going. So they're faced with a pretty nude woman after being out at sea for 'X' amount of time. Not hard to figure out what happens from there, but like you reminded me, tradtionally women on board ship are a bad omen in some cultures. So they use her and either sell her off at some port into slavery, or how about this? They put her and her 'gay' lover in a life boat and set them adrift.
Gee, it kind of flows right into you Robinson Crusoe thread, doesn't it?

This is a nice idea. It could become a multi-part story. At first this woman disguises as a guy. She has sex with one of the crew members. He soon finds out that she is a girl, but he keeps on fucking her. The other crew members discover that she is a girl. The guy who fucked her tells the other guys that she is a witch and she jinxed him, into fucking her. The crew members are all very superstitious, so they want to kill "the witch". She begs for her life and offers them, everyone can fuck her, if they let her live. The crew members accept and have an orgy with her.
However, they still fear her and her witch powers, so they decide to abandon her on a secluded island, where usually, no ship comes by.

And on this secluded island, the Robinson Crusoe story line starts ...
 
This is a nice idea. It could become a multi-part story. At first this woman disguises as a guy. She has sex with one of the crew members. He soon finds out that she is a girl, but he keeps on fucking her. The other crew members discover that she is a girl. The guy who fucked her tells the other guys that she is a witch and she jinxed him, into fucking her. The crew members are all very superstitious, so they want to kill "the witch". She begs for her life and offers them, everyone can fuck her, if they let her live. The crew members accept and have an orgy with her.
However, they still fear her and her witch powers, so they decide to abandon her on a secluded island, where usually, no ship comes by.

And on this secluded island, the Robinson Crusoe story line starts ...

You know, we haven't heard anything from the OP on this topic for some time. I think all the variations we've thown out have been good, or at least workable ideas for a story to some degree or another, but I was originaly under the assumption that she was looking for ideas for a story of her own and fishing for help. After going back and re-reading her initial post, I guess she was just thowing it to the wind, though.

I like the idea above, and the lead up to the Crusoe thing, but a witch? We're talking pretty far back in history I think, where as having a woman on board a ship was still frowned upon as superstion in the 19th and early 20th century, I think. Just seems a bit more realistic to me.
I'm not trying to focus on the sex aspect of the idea at this point, but the adventure and unfolding drama of the woman in question. The sex will come easily enough, but without a good plot, it might as well be just a short porn story as I see it.
 
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