Huntress
On the wild thing's trail
- Joined
- Sep 4, 2001
- Posts
- 1,050
Maureen Catlin
Exiting Kitty’s, Maureen noted how many more vehicles were parked out front than when she’d arrived and considered herself lucky to have avoided the breakfast rush. It was so crowded she literally had to squeeze between a van and a compact to reach the street. Something, a scratching at her awareness, an uncomfortable pinprick of consciousness, made her glance up as she slid past the passenger side mirror of the van. The driver, his face obscured by a full beard, was still sitting behind the wheel, gazing at her boldly. For an instant, their eyes met. It was Maureen who broke contact feeling suddenly stripped bare by the man’s blatant assessing stare. She found herself blushing furiously as she hurried across the street, grateful for the cool morning fog relieving her cheeks of the telltale pink stain.
“Coward,” accused a little voice, which echoed in her mind. “That’s it run away. Scaredy cat!”
It looked as though the fog was going to stay inland today, despite the sun’s earlier promise and Maureen was very glad of the sweater’s warmth as she walked down Main Street toward the beach. Wisps of fog swirled across the pavement and brick facades, wraithlike, thick in spots then clearing magically at an intersection where even the slightest breeze was capable of sweeping it away. The ethereal beauty of the white-gray mist was even now as enchanting as it had been during her childhood when she’d played in an abandoned orchard, running through waist-high grass in search of “crystal fairy necklaces”; spider webs covered with beads of dew. That sweet memory of discovery and wonder was still tugging at her heart as she stopped in front of a neat white clapboard, two-storey house with the numbers ‘35’ clearly painted on the curb.
A starchy looking woman was waiting on the front porch scribbling notes on a clipboard, with a briefcase at her feet. Her mouth was set in a grim line which gave her face a stern forbidding appearance. As the little picket gate squeaked open, she looked up from her notes riveting Maureen with a stare that was not hostile, but certainly not warm as she scanned Maureen from head to toe appraising. “Hmm… I guess not every one in a small town is going to be another Aunt Bea.” Putting on her best corporate façade, Maureen straightened her shoulders and strode up to the steps extending her hand.
“Good morning. Mrs. Peterson? I’m Maureen Catlin. We spoke last week about the bungalow. It’s nice to make your acquaintance.”
Mrs. Peterson blinked twice and smiled. The effect was disarming. Suddenly she was all warmth and charm.
“Oh! Mrs. Catlin. So glad to meet you, too. I didn’t expect to see you so early. I’ve only just arrived myself and it seems that my client isn’t at home right now. She must have stepped out to run an errand. I have keys, so I can go ahead and show you the cottage, if you’d still like to see it.”
Maureen wondered at the woman’s abrupt change in attitude but chalked it up to something akin to her own “city manners”. This was business, after all.
“Yes, please. I’m anxious to see it.”
A sloping stone path wound around the left side of the house and led to a beautiful English style garden full of hollyhocks, ivy, roses, coral bells and primroses. Maureen held her breath as Mrs. Peterson pushed open a gate in an ivy covered wall. It opened onto a second, smaller garden and a picturesque little white-washed cottage that looked as though someone had uprooted it from the English countryside, shipped it overseas intact and set it down right on the bluff overlooking the ocean. Mrs. Peterson was looking at her curiously and Maureen realized she must have been staring open-mouthed at the little house without even knowing it. Recovering her composure she turned to the real estate agent saying, “Oh, Mrs. Peterson. It’s absolutely lovely! May we go inside?”
“Sure. Follow me.”
She unlocked the deadbolt and pushed the wrought iron thumb latch. The heavy iron-bound wood door swung in silently to a stone entryway that opened out into a spacious living room with hardwood floors and a fieldstone fireplace. Maureen could not believe her good fortune. Something like this in San Francisco would have rented for upwards of two thousand dollars, not five hundred.
“This is the largest room in the cottage, the bedroom, bath and kitchen are pretty small. I expect you’ll have trouble fitting all your furniture in here,” Mrs. Peterson said with the assurance of someone who knew all about city folk. “I’m going to go back up to the main house and wait for Mrs. Burroughs, so if you want to look around, go ahead.”
Maureen nodded dumbly, fearing anything she said would break the spell of wonder that enthralled her. The door closed with a ‘snick’ and a silence beyond anything she could have expected descended on the cottage. Even the sound of the breakers was muffled. She turned around taking in the leaded glass windows, antique sconces and the stone hearth. It was so romantic. So beautifully quiet.
She walked down the narrow hallway off the living room and peeked in at the bedroom. It was small, but should accommodate her queen-sized bed, especially if she jammed it under the windowsill. Another memory rose to the surface of her thoughts; college days in a cramped room, a floor littered with fabric samples, scissors and a ridiculously small quilting frame. She shook her head remembering her roommate, Constance, yelping as she trod barefoot on a pin and cursing a blue streak. Connie’s proper Bostonian façade was never the quite same after that.
The bath was indeed tiny but the kitchen wasn’t too bad. At least it had a four-burner stove and room for a small table, plus the view was spectacular. The image of taking coffee in front of that window nearly made her giddy.
"Oh, God... please let it work out. I deserve to have something good happen to me for a change!"
She hoped Mrs. Burroughs would take a liking to her and that Mrs. Peterson wouldn’t do another about-face and sour the deal.
“Start praying now, Mo. Pray hard!”
Exiting Kitty’s, Maureen noted how many more vehicles were parked out front than when she’d arrived and considered herself lucky to have avoided the breakfast rush. It was so crowded she literally had to squeeze between a van and a compact to reach the street. Something, a scratching at her awareness, an uncomfortable pinprick of consciousness, made her glance up as she slid past the passenger side mirror of the van. The driver, his face obscured by a full beard, was still sitting behind the wheel, gazing at her boldly. For an instant, their eyes met. It was Maureen who broke contact feeling suddenly stripped bare by the man’s blatant assessing stare. She found herself blushing furiously as she hurried across the street, grateful for the cool morning fog relieving her cheeks of the telltale pink stain.
“Coward,” accused a little voice, which echoed in her mind. “That’s it run away. Scaredy cat!”
It looked as though the fog was going to stay inland today, despite the sun’s earlier promise and Maureen was very glad of the sweater’s warmth as she walked down Main Street toward the beach. Wisps of fog swirled across the pavement and brick facades, wraithlike, thick in spots then clearing magically at an intersection where even the slightest breeze was capable of sweeping it away. The ethereal beauty of the white-gray mist was even now as enchanting as it had been during her childhood when she’d played in an abandoned orchard, running through waist-high grass in search of “crystal fairy necklaces”; spider webs covered with beads of dew. That sweet memory of discovery and wonder was still tugging at her heart as she stopped in front of a neat white clapboard, two-storey house with the numbers ‘35’ clearly painted on the curb.
A starchy looking woman was waiting on the front porch scribbling notes on a clipboard, with a briefcase at her feet. Her mouth was set in a grim line which gave her face a stern forbidding appearance. As the little picket gate squeaked open, she looked up from her notes riveting Maureen with a stare that was not hostile, but certainly not warm as she scanned Maureen from head to toe appraising. “Hmm… I guess not every one in a small town is going to be another Aunt Bea.” Putting on her best corporate façade, Maureen straightened her shoulders and strode up to the steps extending her hand.
“Good morning. Mrs. Peterson? I’m Maureen Catlin. We spoke last week about the bungalow. It’s nice to make your acquaintance.”
Mrs. Peterson blinked twice and smiled. The effect was disarming. Suddenly she was all warmth and charm.
“Oh! Mrs. Catlin. So glad to meet you, too. I didn’t expect to see you so early. I’ve only just arrived myself and it seems that my client isn’t at home right now. She must have stepped out to run an errand. I have keys, so I can go ahead and show you the cottage, if you’d still like to see it.”
Maureen wondered at the woman’s abrupt change in attitude but chalked it up to something akin to her own “city manners”. This was business, after all.
“Yes, please. I’m anxious to see it.”
A sloping stone path wound around the left side of the house and led to a beautiful English style garden full of hollyhocks, ivy, roses, coral bells and primroses. Maureen held her breath as Mrs. Peterson pushed open a gate in an ivy covered wall. It opened onto a second, smaller garden and a picturesque little white-washed cottage that looked as though someone had uprooted it from the English countryside, shipped it overseas intact and set it down right on the bluff overlooking the ocean. Mrs. Peterson was looking at her curiously and Maureen realized she must have been staring open-mouthed at the little house without even knowing it. Recovering her composure she turned to the real estate agent saying, “Oh, Mrs. Peterson. It’s absolutely lovely! May we go inside?”
“Sure. Follow me.”
She unlocked the deadbolt and pushed the wrought iron thumb latch. The heavy iron-bound wood door swung in silently to a stone entryway that opened out into a spacious living room with hardwood floors and a fieldstone fireplace. Maureen could not believe her good fortune. Something like this in San Francisco would have rented for upwards of two thousand dollars, not five hundred.
“This is the largest room in the cottage, the bedroom, bath and kitchen are pretty small. I expect you’ll have trouble fitting all your furniture in here,” Mrs. Peterson said with the assurance of someone who knew all about city folk. “I’m going to go back up to the main house and wait for Mrs. Burroughs, so if you want to look around, go ahead.”
Maureen nodded dumbly, fearing anything she said would break the spell of wonder that enthralled her. The door closed with a ‘snick’ and a silence beyond anything she could have expected descended on the cottage. Even the sound of the breakers was muffled. She turned around taking in the leaded glass windows, antique sconces and the stone hearth. It was so romantic. So beautifully quiet.
She walked down the narrow hallway off the living room and peeked in at the bedroom. It was small, but should accommodate her queen-sized bed, especially if she jammed it under the windowsill. Another memory rose to the surface of her thoughts; college days in a cramped room, a floor littered with fabric samples, scissors and a ridiculously small quilting frame. She shook her head remembering her roommate, Constance, yelping as she trod barefoot on a pin and cursing a blue streak. Connie’s proper Bostonian façade was never the quite same after that.
The bath was indeed tiny but the kitchen wasn’t too bad. At least it had a four-burner stove and room for a small table, plus the view was spectacular. The image of taking coffee in front of that window nearly made her giddy.
"Oh, God... please let it work out. I deserve to have something good happen to me for a change!"
She hoped Mrs. Burroughs would take a liking to her and that Mrs. Peterson wouldn’t do another about-face and sour the deal.
“Start praying now, Mo. Pray hard!”
Last edited: