The Enchanted Cottage

[Shreik]

Hello sweet one....how are you? {{{{Shreik}}}}

Same as always. How are you lovely lady

 

[WyldBreeze]

Same as always. How are you lovely lady

No complaints, really.....though really missing my sweetie today. That's what I get for not working.....too much time to think. What are you into today?

 

[Shreik]

No complaints, really.....though really missing my sweetie today. That's what I get for not working.....too much time to think. What are you into today?

Nothing now just working on something for here I hope its ok not sure yet

 

[WyldBreeze]

Nothing now just working on something for here I hope its ok not sure yet

I can't wait to read it....I'm sure it will be perfect. All that matters is that it comes from the heart. At least in my humble opinion.....so take that for what it's worth. lol

 

[Thian]

Soft silken glow of passions light.
A loss of something not gained.
No I say to my haunted beloved, we are still the same.
Soft and tender, a caring caress.
A knowing look in our eyes
You are what my heart has searched for.
I have longed for your soft loving cries.
A childs silent tears in a midnight storm.
A dream perhaps of a treasue yet born.
A soft moaning sigh as we consumate our loveing desire.
A woman of haunted begining again a rekindled fire.
Loss of purpose time with no end.
Questioned sanity that began in sin.
Death long rememberd now faded and gone.
And I wake to find Im still alone.

DNE

 

[Shreik]

I can't wait to read it....I'm sure it will be perfect. All that matters is that it comes from the heart. At least in my humble opinion.....so take that for what it's worth. lol

Thank you sweet lass wait till you read it then judge please

 

[Shreik]

Soft silken glow of passions light.
A loss of something not gained.
No I say to my haunted beloved, we are still the same.
Soft and tender, a caring caress.
A knowing look in our eyes
You are what my heart has searched for.
I have longed for your soft loving cries.
A childs silent tears in a midnight storm.
A dream perhaps of a treasue yet born.
A soft moaning sigh as we consumate our loveing desire.
A woman of haunted begining again a rekindled fire.
Loss of purpose time with no end.
Questioned sanity that began in sin.
Death long rememberd now faded and gone.
And I wake to find Im still alone.

DNE

Wow very nice

 

[WyldBreeze]

Soft silken glow of passions light.
A loss of something not gained.
No I say to my haunted beloved, we are still the same.
Soft and tender, a caring caress.
A knowing look in our eyes
You are what my heart has searched for.
I have longed for your soft loving cries.
A childs silent tears in a midnight storm.
A dream perhaps of a treasue yet born.
A soft moaning sigh as we consumate our loveing desire.
A woman of haunted begining again a rekindled fire.
Loss of purpose time with no end.
Questioned sanity that began in sin.
Death long rememberd now faded and gone.
And I wake to find Im still alone.

DNE

This is still one of my favorites that you've posted, Thian. It's very haunting and emotional. Tugs at the heartstrings.

 

[WyldBreeze]

Thank you sweet lass wait till you read it then judge please

You know me, hun....I judge nothing and no one. I will simply enjoy.

 

[Shreik]

You know me, hun....I judge nothing and no one. I will simply enjoy.

Ok dear

 

[Shreik]

Why Can't I
Why can't I, hold you in my arms anymore
Why can't I, storke your soft silky hair
Why can't I, smell your sweet just washed body
Why can't I, tell you face-face how much I love you
Why can't I, travel lives highway with you anymore
Why can't I, lie and watch you peacefully sleeping
Why can't I, enjoy our love making anymore
Why can't I, just forgive the man that took you away
Why can't I, forgive him for drinking that night
Why can't I, forgive him for running that light
Why can't I, forgive the Dr. for saying there is nothing
else we can do
Why can't I, forgive him for taking my all my very reason
for living
Why can't I, be with you my love
Why can't I, forgive him for taking my reason for living
​

 

[WyldBreeze]

Why Can't I
Why can't I, hold you in my arms anymore
Why can't I, storke your soft silky hair
Why can't I, smell your sweet just washed body
Why can't I, tell you face-face how much I love you
Why can't I, travel lives highway with you anymore
Why can't I, lie and watch you peacefully sleeping
Why can't I, enjoy our love making anymore
Why can't I, just forgive the man that took you away
Why can't I, forgive him for drinking that night
Why can't I, forgive him for running that light
Why can't I, forgive the Dr. for saying there is nothing
else we can do
Why can't I, forgive him for taking my all my very reason
for living
Why can't I, be with you my love
Why can't I, forgive him for taking my reason for living
​

Oh Shreik......that's absolutely heart-wrenching. I lost someone close to me in that way......your words bring back every emotion. *hugs you as I wipe away a tear*

 

[Shreik]

Oh Shreik......that's absolutely heart-wrenching. I lost someone close to me in that way......your words bring back every emotion. *hugs you as I wipe away a tear*

I did not mean to bring tears. I was just expressing what was on my mind at the time.

 

[WyldBreeze]

I did not mean to bring tears. I was just expressing what was on my mind at the time.

It was very well written and so expressive....I doubt I'll be the only one to shed tears as they read it. You've written a beautiful piece about a difficult subject.

 

[Shreik]

It was very well written and so expressive....I doubt I'll be the only one to shed tears as they read it. You've written a beautiful piece about a difficult subject.

Thank you dear lady. Sadly most of what I write leans towards this type of thing. I guess I have more experience with it then most we shall see

 

[WyldBreeze]

Thank you dear lady. Sadly most of what I write leans towards this type of thing. I guess I have more experience with it then most we shall see

I'm sad for you that you have more experience with those things.....but not sad for your ability to express it. The world isn't always a happy place.....

 

[Shreik]

I'm sad for you that you have more experience with those things.....but not sad for your ability to express it. The world isn't always a happy place.....

Thank you. No the world is not otherwise it would be paradise

 

[WyldBreeze]

Thank you. No the world is not otherwise it would be paradise

Very true.....but there are moments in time that are paradise and times that are perfect because of the people surrounding us. I was just mentioning to someone else that the bad times need to be appreciated because they make the good times seem so much better.

 

[Shreik]

Very true.....but there are moments in time that are paradise and times that are perfect because of the people surrounding us. I was just mentioning to someone else that the bad times need to be appreciated because they make the good times seem so much better.

I agree no matter how much they hurt

 

[WyldBreeze]

I agree no matter how much they hurt

*big hugs*

 

[Shreik]

*big hugs*

Thank you darlin

 

[Thian]

This one has special meaning. Hope it doesnt scare you. Keep in mind Im former military.

BLACK RAIN

Death calls the name of man.
Beware you who see, the beast is the power in me.
The fire below, the void above, long has man forgotten of love.
A grown mans fears.
A womans tears.

BLACK RAIN

Tears that stain the earth bright red.
A song sung in lament of forgotten dead
The rich shall live, the poor shall die.
All hidden under the rain streaked sky.

Their son has died, for the power of years.
The sun on earth. Growing fears.
The powerful live in lingering pain.
Cowering in darkness, while saying their sane.

BLACK RAIN

Tears that stain the earth bright red.
A song sung in lament of forgotten dead
The rich shall live, the poor shall die.
All hidden under the rain streaked sky.

A child of death cries in the night.
The misshapen soul hordes the light.
The one with the weapon holds the might.
Does the poor no longer have the right.

BLACK RAIN

Tears that stain the earth bright red.
A song sung in lament of forgotten dead
The rich shall live, the poor shall die.
All hidden under the rain streaked sky.

A dark haired damsel and her mate. Have found their love has come to late.
The sky has shattered, and the shards that fell. Has turned the world
to a burning hell.
The masses cry for the peace that death does bring. But the wizards hold the living ring.
Now all is quiet. no voice is heard. Life is gone. Can you hear the dirge,
of BLACK RAIN.........

Her name was Mi

 

[Thian]

*As is my way again fades into the shadows*

 

[WyldBreeze]

This one has special meaning. Hope it doesnt scare you. Keep in mind Im former military.

BLACK RAIN

Death calls the name of man.
Beware you who see, the beast is the power in me.
The fire below, the void above, long has man forgotten of love.
A grown mans fears.
A womans tears.

BLACK RAIN

Tears that stain the earth bright red.
A song sung in lament of forgotten dead
The rich shall live, the poor shall die.
All hidden under the rain streaked sky.

Their son has died, for the power of years.
The sun on earth. Growing fears.
The powerful live in lingering pain.
Cowering in darkness, while saying their sane.

BLACK RAIN

Tears that stain the earth bright red.
A song sung in lament of forgotten dead
The rich shall live, the poor shall die.
All hidden under the rain streaked sky.

A child of death cries in the night.
The misshapen soul hordes the light.
The one with the weapon holds the might.
Does the poor no longer have the right.

BLACK RAIN

Tears that stain the earth bright red.
A song sung in lament of forgotten dead
The rich shall live, the poor shall die.
All hidden under the rain streaked sky.

A dark haired damsel and her mate. Have found their love has come to late.
The sky has shattered, and the shards that fell. Has turned the world
to a burning hell.
The masses cry for the peace that death does bring. But the wizards hold the living ring.
Now all is quiet. no voice is heard. Life is gone. Can you hear the dirge,
of BLACK RAIN.........

Her name was Mi

Very, very powerful, Thian. And assuming I'm correct in my thinking.....I'm very sorry for your loss. *big hugs*

 

[Thian]

You are. And it took me a long time to find me again. Now Like I said Im trying to rebuild a lost life.


Sorry for being a downer.