The Perfect Heist (closed)

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At 28 Tommy has been in and out of jail for a good amount of his life, mostly for assault. For the past couple of years he has been pulling off bank robberies with a group of childhood friends.

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5 minutes in and out. That's all it was supposed to take. Tommy and the crew would go in, hit the counters, leave. Two at the counter, two taking care of the security cameras. Tommy had this planned for weeks; everything down to the T. The heist would be quick, easy and nobody gets hurt. Things were going fine for the ski mask wearing crew until suddenly Tommy heard the worst thing he could; the police scanner.

"We have a robbery going on at the Wells Fargo on main and 12th street. Proceed with caution."

"What the hell is that about?" Jason called from the counter. From behind his ski mask Tommy looked down the row of tellers, quickly examing he noticed the silent alarm. Jason, as if he were psychic, immediately walked up to anolder gentlemannext to it.ames shouted "The fuck was that about? You really want to fuck with us old man?" Without remorse he hit the bank manager in the head with the butt of his shotgun.

"Stop right now!" Tommy yelled at his colleague. "Get the others, we're getting the fuck outta here." As Jason ran to the back Tommy surveyed the area. Thinking on his feet he took the tie off of the unconcious manager and some tape. Grabbing a nearby teller Tommy blindfolded her with the tie and wrapped her wrists in tape as much as he could as the crew came out from the back.

"We're leaving, now." Tommy said to his crew. Pulling out a pistol he held it to the back of the terrified bank teller. "You say a single thing and she's fuckin' dead!" Tommy yelled as he headed out the door. Seeing the van he threw her in. Racing away from the bank he couldn't help but think 'This was supposed to be the perfect heist.'

 

[Mayu]

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Grace had been working at the bank for a few months, it was smooth sailing really
but on this particular day she would learn to hate banks. People came in quickly,
and it all went to hell. She wanted to run off and hide, these people had guns and
didn't know who they were, but the leaders voice sounded familiar to her. But
before she had a chance to do much she was grabbed, she cried out since he
hurt her and threw her into the van.

Her heart was pounding, who where these people? And why did one voice sound
familiar to her. This was to much, she was to afraid to say a word however so
she just stayed quiet. Being as far back in the van as she could, without accidentally
going out the back. Why did they have to pick her of all people, she stayed quiet.
Afraid to die.

 

[Narratred_By]

The van slowly crawled through the crowded streets of the city. A mile down the road Tommy removed his ski mask; the rest followed suit. The crew did their best to look completely inconspicuous to the world; normal law abiding citizens. Things were much different inside.

At first there was silence. The police scanner being the only noise in the van. You could practically taste the tension. Finally the quiet was broken by Jason.

"So what the fuck was that?" he asked with venom in his voice.

"What do you mean 'what the fuck was that'? Some asshole hit the alarm, we got out of there with the cash we had. What don't you get?" Tommy yelled back.

"You said you had everything planned! You had the lay out, you knew the shifts, everything. And what the fuck is up with this bitch???" Jason replied.

"Look, I panicked. I figured this could get get people off our backs and CLEARLY it did. So back the fuck off!" Tommy retorted.

"Well clearly you've lost your touch. So do you need me to take care of her?" Jason implied with his hand on his pistol.

"No I'll take care of it. Just head east." Tommy ordered. Finally getting out of the city the van headed east towards a suburb near the desert.

 

[Mayu]

Grace heard the silence and almost made her deaf with it, but soon everyone started to talk. And
they were talking about what was going on, she wrapped her arms around her legs, just praying
that they wouldn't kill her. But when one man asked what to do with her, that is when she knew
her time was up. But when she looked up, she did know who one of them were, Tommy they
lived around the same place. She was a fool to think he was a friend, now he had kidnapped her
and now she was going to die.