Stalzyn
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About your last post Sparrow, the part where the giants are coming to Serana's rescue. I just want to make it clear that an escape form the empire's prison by an outside force is impossible. I think you should edit it, you know its like saying giants stormed into Altair, into the royal palace, to the prison and to rescue someone.
The empire has all its takes both magic and sword to stop any outside force. If it was that simple to escape, Kalatar's teleportation spell is of no use in the first place.
Bottom line, your escape route can maybe come from bargaining with a guard using your feminine charms or from bargaining with Vladmir, or from your little dragon. Not giants.
It's a miracle you even intruded alone into the palace.
Hope i'm not sounding cocky but that's how strong i want the empire to look.
The empire has all its takes both magic and sword to stop any outside force. If it was that simple to escape, Kalatar's teleportation spell is of no use in the first place.
Bottom line, your escape route can maybe come from bargaining with a guard using your feminine charms or from bargaining with Vladmir, or from your little dragon. Not giants.
It's a miracle you even intruded alone into the palace.
Hope i'm not sounding cocky but that's how strong i want the empire to look.
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