Stella_Omega
No Gentleman
- Joined
- Jul 14, 2005
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well, that's just poor editing, really.Never said:bisexplicit,
Background is fluff. I once read a story about a young woman who learns to control the minds of her peers. It began several years before the story started and spent four pages out of six detailing her growing sexuality - none of which had anything to do with the story.
When I write, I often find myself writing tons of that side stuff. it's fun to work it all out in my mind- but it does nothing but nothing for the reader.
I cut it all back out again, sometimes with great sorrow.
I've seen many a volume of indie erotica untouched by the hand of any editor, and I think it sucks.

