Undercover PI Story

[danicanuck]

I would love to see a story a couple that works as private investigators and takes on a dangerous. In my fantasy of course it is myself and my BF as the couple. It's a case I can't turn down because I'm asked by a woman who was practically an aunt to me to help her daughter. She has gotten involved with a bad group working at a strip club. She is worried because it's been days since hearing from her and last she did hear she was acting different. We agree but not sure how to get in as the club is notorious for being run by criminals. My BF works with a couple of friends on the force to find our in. They manage to get him a job as a bartender and me a job as a dancer though to everyone there we do not know each other. I would like in the story for things to get very tense, my BF is tested to see if he is for real or not as the owner instructs him to spike the drinks of a few of the dancers he is taking to a party (including mine). He does and is rewarded by being the bartender for the party. He has to see me getting fucked by several men that night. But we also see the person we're looking for. The further into the case we go the more I end up getting deeper involved in the sex (private parties, prostitution or even pornography) and the more dangerous it really is.

Hoping there are some takers and would like to write. I can give a lot of detail if interested.

Dani
xoxo

 

[Sean Renaud]

Give all the possible details you can give here. PMs are a bad idea because they limit the number of readers.

That said I actually kinda like this idea. It's got all the makings of a really good tale.

 

[danicanuck]

Give all the possible details you can give here. PMs are a bad idea because they limit the number of readers.

That said I actually kinda like this idea. It's got all the makings of a really good tale.

I understand your point about the readers so here are my thoughts and details.

Details of myself (Dani or Danielle whichever you would like to use).
5'9" and 130lbs
blonde hair past my shoulders with blue eyes
breasts are 34B
long legs and a nice butt so I am told
very fair skinned
30 years old but look younger
I'm on the quieter almost shy side until I am comfortable but can act like the party girl if need be.
Sexually more submissive, not a prude so willing to have fun especially if drinking or smoking. Not into anal but in the story I would want that to be included as we get more involved with the club and the people.

Jay (my boyfriend)
5'11" and 195lbs
very short dark brown hair with brown eyes
average build with broad shoulders
size 7" and good thickness
36 years old (looks his age)
He's more outgoing and knows how to make the small talk and fit in. Can be very sarcstic Sexually he is more controlling and would have some interest in seeing me act and perform as a stripper but would be conflicted.

Alison (the daughter)
5'2" and 115lbs
long blonde hair and big blue eyes
athletic build, she was a cheerleader in school
smallish breasts but a great butt
20 years old
She is very outgoing and energetic. Very popular, well liked and attracts men but she is not easy. For the story it would be good to see how her personality is not the same the more she is with the people in the club.

The club itself and the people in it I would think it should be very sleazy. The men do not have high opinions for women other than how they look. It's definitely a dark atmosphere for the girls. I would think there would be prostitution being managed there, girls being used for porn etc.

 

[DocCIS]

My Lapdancing Girlfriend series is very similar to this idea...it's not a PI case, but it's along similar lines of BF pretending not to know stripper GF, who dances and is drugged and abused. Club Owner is bad guy and wanted by the law, so BF/GF team up to bring him to justice...

 

[HeyAll]

Sounds like a really fun idea.

But I personally think it would be more interesting if it were switched around to become an incest story. Maybe a strong N/C story.

Perhaps the PI angle is left out, and the main character is homicide detective working this case off the books.

Just an added thought...

 

[danicanuck]

My Lapdancing Girlfriend series is very similar to this idea...it's not a PI case, but it's along similar lines of BF pretending not to know stripper GF, who dances and is drugged and abused. Club Owner is bad guy and wanted by the law, so BF/GF team up to bring him to justice...

Hiya, I actually read these stories and found them very exciting and part of the inspiration behind what I was envisioning for my PI story idea.