Wife confesses affairs

[ibelee]

As we both lay in bed masturbating, wife give erotic details of her affairs.

 

[Carnevil9]

That's a hot idea. There would be a lot of dialog, so you'd have to be comfortable writing that.

I'd write it in first person, from the perspective of the husband, and reveal his inner thoughts as his wife tells him all the naughty things she did.

Go for it!.......Carney

 

[Carnevil9]

Melissa was on her back on her side of the bed, naked. She had her feet flat and her knees up and spread, and gently rubbed her pussy as she spoke.

"He made me suck his cock," she was saying. "It was huge. Much bigger than yours. I could barely get my mouth around the head."

Lying there next to her, I felt the blood rising in my cheeks. I was so humiliated by her infidelity, and worse yet, by her total lack of shame over it. She seemed downright proud of herself!

"I wrapped both my hands around it," she continued. "My fingers didn't even meet, that's how thick it was. I jacked his shaft up and down while I tried to get the head into my mouth. Eventually I gave up on that, and just licked around the rim while I kept jacking him. I slurped the head like an ice cream cone. I even stuck my tongue into his pee slit. It was so wide open, that was easy."

Through my shame, I felt my cock getting harder and harder as she spoke. Almost against my will, my hands crept to my groin. I found that I was stroking my own shaft, and involuntarily bucking my hips upward toward my hand.

"He got tired of my licks on his cock, and he made me lie on my back. His cock was dripping tons of pre-cum, and my pussy was wetter than it's ever been. I spread my legs -- just like I'm doing now -- and waited for him to enter me. His cock came at me like a torpedo; it looked even bigger than ever. I thought he might split me in half, but I didn't care. I was so tired of your puny little dick that I was willing to die to be fucked by a real cock."

By now, I was jacking myself furiously, and was tugging on my balls with my other hand. I felt a queasy feeling in the pit of my stomach; a combination of shame, humiliation, and extreme horniness. Her words continued to burn into my brain.

"When his cock first touched me, it felt like electricity. It was hot and cold all at the same time. It slipped into my sopping pussy like an electric eel, alive and on fire, stabbing and jabbing. I felt myself so stretched that I started to scream in pain, but it was a delicious pain. He supported himself on his arms on each side of me, and I could feel his hot breath on my neck. His eyes just glared at me, telling me that he knew he owned me, body and soul."

My knees were shaking and my hips were bucking as I continued to stroke myself, hanging on her every word. I pictured the brute taking her, stabbing her, splitting her, and it drove me wild. I wrapped both fists around my cock, and jerked for all I was worth. I gritted my teeth, blood rushing in my ears, and fire burning at my groin.....

 

[jedclampet69]

hmmmm...maybe it could be a couple whos wife has asked for time out...saying she needs a break but in reality she has been finding it hard to stay faithful and at time was not as in her inner self she realy is a true slut who has always wanted more cock just never knew how to approach her husband...
Now the sepperated hubby is having a sleep over...the wife wants him back but cant realy reunite as she would be guilty once again over her extra matital activities of the past and future if the get back together...she could guage his reactiuon by starting to tell him of the extra cock she has been getting since separation...
Well could he accept new rule that allow her to keep her cock loving ways...just a thought for an angle

 

[roomfor1more]

For me, I feel it would be a story worth reading. The one issue you will face, I feel, will be negative comments and low votes. From my experience, such a stroy will attract some hostility because it involves a spouse having sex outside of the relationship. Placing the story in the right category will be crucial and my initial feeling without knowing more about the story, you would want to place it in "Group Sex", not "Loving Wives." If you place it in "Loving Wives," I feel you would attract negative comments due to the fact it is a cheating spouse and readers in that category would see that there is nothing loving about cheating.

 

[jedclampet69]

hmmmm...l think you maybe right...but then if they were seperated which would be the start of her telling him about the sex she was getting during that time...but then she could find it gets him rather hard and aroused so then she slips in the times she had been unfaithful before...which could excite him even more...pathing the way for her to be a loving wife

 

[Davide_UK]

Sounds good, as long as her confession doesn't appear out of the blue. Make sure her husband backs her into a corner. Give her no choice but to confess.

"What's this?" Theresa's back was against the kitchen workbench; she could retreat no further. Trembling with rage, Gordon looked at her with eyes of menace, holding a pair of his wife's panties an inch from her face. Theresa gazed at the deep pink undergarment, its gusset crusted heavily with Tyson's sperm. Her nose twitched at the unmistakable smell of his dried ejaculate and her mind raced, recalling mind blowing climaxes, her involuntary cries, like she'd never known in her life.............

 

[jeninflorida]

That's a hot idea. There would be a lot of dialog, so you'd have to be comfortable writing that.

I'd write it in first person, from the perspective of the husband, and reveal his inner thoughts as his wife tells him all the naughty things she did.

Go for it!.......Carney

I tend to use a lot of dialog in my erotica....well, I think that I do.

so men want to hear about these things?

 

[RjThoughts]

I tend to use a lot of dialog in my erotica....well, I think that I do.

so men want to hear about these things?

Especially when the affairs are with OTHER womens!!!!

 

[Carnevil9]

Especially when the affairs are with OTHER womens!!!!

That's an interesting twist that I hadn't thought of! Good show!

 

[jeninflorida]

Especially when the affairs are with OTHER womens!!!!

one of the projects that I've been working on is a ebook where the wife comes to terms of her bisexuality only she is afraid her husband will freak out. As he's pretty religious

so, you guys would enjoy bedroom talk, with the wife talking about how she finds one of her friends/coworkers hot and is curious to bed her?

 

[want2_watchwife]

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[Carnevil9]

I like a story about first time cheating, especially if it's due to a huge cock. And, I like a little gentle teasing. But, this wife despises her husband. Why are they married at all, never mind being in bed together?

Good questions, and they need to be answered in a story that has any hopes of working. Actually, I am working on this story. In my story, the husband and wife have been married a long time, and the sex has become rote. They stay together through inertial. But the wife eventually strays, due to boredom. When she eventually confessions her transgressions, they both find themselves turned on by the naughtiness of the situation.

Is it realistic? Perhaps not. But I think it speaks to a certain undercurrent that many of us can relate to. At least, I hope it does........Carney (who suspects the trolls will have a field day with this story!)

 

[jeninflorida]

I like a story about first time cheating, especially if it's due to a huge cock. And, I like a little gentle teasing. But, this wife despises her husband. Why are they married at all, never mind being in bed together?

then this turns into a man's story. not sure if any woman would have an affair cuz the guy has a huge cock

 

[want2_watchwife]

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[want2_watchwife]

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[sirhugs]

I tend to use a lot of dialog in my erotica....well, I think that I do.

so men want to hear about these things?

some of us do

 

[RjThoughts]

one of the projects that I've been working on is a ebook where the wife comes to terms of her bisexuality only she is afraid her husband will freak out. As he's pretty religious

so, you guys would enjoy bedroom talk, with the wife talking about how she finds one of her friends/coworkers hot and is curious to bed her?

That would make most of the men on Lit VERY excited! From personal experience, I know they would LOVE LOVE LOVE it!!

 

[Carnevil9]

Well, gang.... I wrote up and submitted this story, and it came out today. I did it partly because I thought it was a hot concept. But I also did it because I figured it would rile up the trolls at the Loving Wives board! Boy was I right! So far, it has 23 comments, almost all of them hugely negative. And it is #2 on the "most comments in the last 24 hours" list. Woohoo!!

I love feedback, positive or negative. And after writing stories that get two, one, or even zero comments, I long for any kind of feedback. A story like this is guaranteed to get some zingers!

Anyway, check it out. And stay tuned for two more chapters coming in the next few days......Carney

MIDNIGHT CONFESSIONS: http://www.literotica.com/s/midnight-confessions

 

[sirhugs]

Well, gang.... I wrote up and submitted this story, and it came out today. I did it partly because I thought it was a hot concept. But I also did it because I figured it would rile up the trolls at the Loving Wives board! Boy was I right! So far, it has 23 comments, almost all of them hugely negative. And it is #2 on the "most comments in the last 24 hours" list. Woohoo!!

I love feedback, positive or negative. And after writing stories that get two, one, or even zero comments, I long for any kind of feedback. A story like this is guaranteed to get some zingers!

Anyway, check it out. And stay tuned for two more chapters coming in the next few days......Carney

MIDNIGHT CONFESSIONS: http://www.literotica.com/s/midnight-confessions

It was so ... sooo.... AWFUL

that I had to read it more slowly the second time

 

[jeninflorida]

Well, gang.... I wrote up and submitted this story, and it came out today. I did it partly because I thought it was a hot concept. But I also did it because I figured it would rile up the trolls at the Loving Wives board! Boy was I right! So far, it has 23 comments, almost all of them hugely negative. And it is #2 on the "most comments in the last 24 hours" list. Woohoo!!

I love feedback, positive or negative. And after writing stories that get two, one, or even zero comments, I long for any kind of feedback. A story like this is guaranteed to get some zingers!

Anyway, check it out. And stay tuned for two more chapters coming in the next few days......Carney

MIDNIGHT CONFESSIONS: http://www.literotica.com/s/midnight-confessions

well, the trolls are out and slamming your story. sorry

I think you wrote the best carp story ever - per sirhugs

 

[jeninflorida]

That would make most of the men on Lit VERY excited! From personal experience, I know they would LOVE LOVE LOVE it!!

okay coolio! my only issue is that the story will get hammered as we can see via Midnight confessions. I'm going to toss one out next week in the group story section.

my your desk become six inches taller!

(hum, I need more coffee as this could be a great spin on the star track line - may the force be with you)

 

[NeverWinterNite]

Well, gang.... I wrote up and submitted this story, and it came out today. I did it partly because I thought it was a hot concept. But I also did it because I figured it would rile up the trolls at the Loving Wives board! Boy was I right! So far, it has 23 comments, almost all of them hugely negative. And it is #2 on the "most comments in the last 24 hours" list. Woohoo!!

I love feedback, positive or negative. And after writing stories that get two, one, or even zero comments, I long for any kind of feedback. A story like this is guaranteed to get some zingers!

Anyway, check it out. And stay tuned for two more chapters coming in the next few days......Carney

MIDNIGHT CONFESSIONS: http://www.literotica.com/s/midnight-confessions

Your story is hot and very well written.

I can't wait to read the other chapters.

 

[Carnevil9]

Thanks to those of you who liked the story. You "got" it. I know it isn't for everyone!

As for the negative comments, they don't bother me a bit. That's part of the fun!

 

[Carnevil9]

Chapter 2 is up! And Chapter 3, the grande finale, is submitted......

http://www.literotica.com/s/midnight-confessions-ch-02