Writers wanted for new thread

[BLACK BART]

lol

No ones mad Destiny, shereads just picked up on one of a dozen odd clues I've tossed into the mix and I was having my fun with it...forgive me but that's my odd sense of humour at work...

I see we have a meeting to attend, I assume Ray is invited and able to speak...???

Thanks for sticking with it everyone, it will get more interesting and clearer as time progresses...Lady K was correct...I do have an odd sense...of odd!

 

[Lady_Kit]

the plot thickens!

and so does my schedule, but I'll be along by and by to tend to business.

Its great writing with all of you, please be patient with me while I juggle the many tasks that take up my time and energy.

 

[Lady_Kit]

Bart, a ruling on the "Sara" issue please. Shereads & I have made posts relating to Saras collapse. However, there seems to be some confusion, at least for us, as to whether or not Sara is actually in the room.

Help!

 

[BLACK BART]

sorry for the confusion.

"Sara" was to be a main key in the defense of Ray...with her writer opting to stand down that part of the thread has dissipated...

I had originally posted Sara as a victim of poison and soon to be dead as a solution, but upon rereading the entire post decided it was indeed....."crap"

Thus my deletion and the confusion, then my PM's to try to correct it, lol

*sigh*

Leave it up to a man to solve the problem by creting a bigger one.....


Let's treat the character as an NPC...referring to her if needed but placing her out of the room and our characters reach, then go forward with the thread. Rhovan's character could order her removal and we could press forward on Ray's questioning and attempt to prove his innocence...

 

[Lady_Kit]

No problem darlin, we can work through it. I hope you'll forgive my lapse in attention that went with the post to a missing character. All will be well with this group of talented writers.

 

[BLACK BART]

Not a problem Kit, just over joyed to see your return and hope all is well.

Absence makes the heart grow fonder, ya know

Posted to move us ahead...thanks for the support everyone and hope we can return to the mind set we had all seemed to be in and have some eery fun with this...

 

[shereads]

I second the "welcome back Lady Kit." Also hope that the family heath crises have ended happily...?

My first thread with Lady Kit outside of Rick's Rooftop. Can't wait to get started...well, restarted.

 

[BLACK BART]

Suggestions...

Perhaps to keep the thread moving we break away from the "meeting", allowing us to move into smaller groups and continue with the dialogue and character developments?

 

[Lady_Kit]

How many of us are there, Bart? I'm game, but it seems like we've lost some of our original momentum. Do you suppose the "curse" has gotten us again?

 

[BLACK BART]

True Kit, I think we were derailed again *heavy sigh*

Tis the curse, I tell ya, tis the curse matey....

OK, I'll poll the original writers and if it lacks the momentum will let it fade quietly away...

 

[Lay Z Butterfly]

Hey All... I am still very much wanting to be involved with the thread...I confess..my birthday this weekend had stopped me from posting anything though. So, I shall get cracking and figure out something as "Karen" is in a world of her own.

~LZB~

 

[BLACK BART]

WELL!!!!!!

Happiest Belated Birthday Wishes!!!!

Hope it was memorable and exhausting, then we all KNOW you had a blast!

And thanks for the vote, LZB...by tomorrow we may prove the curse has been lifted

 

[Lay Z Butterfly]

I had a wonderful weekend..and I was exhausted Sunday night. Went to be very early and woke up refreshed and ready for battle (in my classroom).

**I posted a small reponse to the thread. Just to get Karen going on.

 

[shereads]

Happy Birthday, LZ B!

I think an asylum for the criminally insane, and the set-up Bart created from the first post, is just too good to be abandoned because of some confusion. But I'm not sure that Grace, with my misunderstanding of the direction this needed to move in, is bringing much to the party. I'd love to be murdered, if that would help! I'm half-crazy myself.

I think I went too far on the assumption that Ray was a Ted Bundy type, and in partnership with Gregory. I went as far as to have Grace's mother's murder witnessed by an unidentifed "boy," so she could maybe be related to Ray - share a father who killed Grace's mother and made his son witness it? But that doesn't hold water if Ray is innocent...I've never posted in a thread where various plotlines had to mesh, so I got carried away. I think Grace is definitely going to go whacko, and if she lives she'll need a padded cell. Her mother was raped and later killed by someone from this institution. She has a connection here, and is doomed. A murder made to look like a suicide would be just the thing.

If my posts about Sara's collapse are in the way, I can delete. What would Bart and the rest of you like to do?

 

[BLACK BART]

shereads?

You're right on the money with all your thoughts and posts.

The thread was an attempt at deliberate confusion...or is that deliberate attempt AT confusion?

lol

Ray was pronounced guilty on the testimony of a police officer who lied...bought off by Sara's to wealthy and influential parents.

His death sentence was delayed by a young psychiatrists reveiw of him and her decision for him to be..."Re-reviewed"

Is that a word?

Anyhow...Sara's collapse was needed (rather than use her as an NPC) so please refer to it...


Now Ray has come to prove his side of the story, then if that doesn't work?

OK, that brings you up to date, BUT it doesn't give you too much of a clue as to what will happen next (I hope)

So rave on reporter...dig up the truth and the dirty deeds, hopefully the thread can continue and we all get the chance to find out just who's been sleeping with who!

 

[shereads]

deleting lots of double posts tonight.

 

[shereads]

Hooray. I feel an attack of the crazies coming on.

Maybe Gregory and Grace are the children of the same lunatic...All I know is, this place just feels like home!

One more question: did Sara kill somebody? Is that why her parents paid off the cop?

 

[shereads]

deleted triple post.

 

[BLACK BART]

Money and influence created one. In order to cover up the embarresment of a naughty woman they called thier daughter...

Who was involved? Well Ray knows and isn't telling...

Doctor Phil knows and can't tell...bound by professional oath and ethics...

And perhaps there are others...Karen for instance, she isn't a patient as she said in her posts...so what keeps her there???

Raven keeps and certainly reads all the files...

And Gregory in his high tech world of security and cameras certainly doesn't miss much...

And as far as the "naughty" thing Sara was caught doing???


MMMmmmmmm The reporter would have to get very close to someone to find that out

 

[shereads]

Close...but under such restrictive circumstances...It's enough to drive a person insane!



(Cue harpsichord)

 

[BLACK BART]

INDEED!

But what a way to go, hmmm?

Hope I've helped and teased you enough to peek your interests again...

It's always a pleasure reading what shereads...writes

And with that terrible pun

Night ALL!