Young girl in the Big City

[Destiny_Brent]

I smile as I can finally see my face in the oak tabletop. The last one, the last table needing to be cleaned. I look around the room, "Gorgeous." It was clean, the place posotively shone, and the light that finally was able to find it's way in reflected off the tabletops gorgeously.

"He's up."

I mumbled as I heard the shower going... before long he was out here complaining about the blinds and smell,

"I took them down, the light brightens the place up, it looks better. And the smell, that's soap, get used to it. We'll be using it more often."

I looked him up and down and nodded approvingly, he hand't even noticed I'd gotten him new jeans instead of the grubby old ones.

"Glad to see you've finally used the shower..."

 

[BLACK BART]

I look at the girl standing in front of me, it's obvious how hard she has worked, the place showed it. I ask gruffly, trying to cover up the admiration for her efforts I felt, saying "Who put me to bed, and where's my shirt and boots?"
You wipe your brow and toss a rag down, that I suddenly recognise...."My shirt, you used my shirt for a rag?" I stammered "It was only a month old and you ruined it?"
I lean against the shining bar, my hand rubbing the shining, smooth surface "Say, you didn't do too bad, this looks ok" I try complimenting you, awkward at it.
"Do you suppose I could get a drink?" I ask, looking for a glass, there normally being dozens scattered all over the place.......

 

[Destiny_Brent]

I watched as he looked around seeming to be impressed, I almost smiled, almost. He wrecked it in an instant, 'Who put me to bed? and Where's my shirt and boots?', I rolled my eyes exasperated as he began to spout off about his shirt.

"You passed out, I put you to bed... with a littl help. Your boots are in the wash and there's not a rag in this place, and your shirt had rips in it."

You lean against the bar and run your fingers smoothly along the surface,

"Didn't do to bad?"

At first I acted incredulous, then I chuckled,

"I say I did damn well, this place didn't look like it'd seen light in years!"

I smiled, he'd glanced about awkwardly, that compliment had been hard, it deserved reward. I drew down a glass from the now clean and organized cupboard,

"Didn't know ya had these did ya?"

I laughed again as I tossed him the glass,

"Try to limit yourself, you were a pain to take care of yesterday... Oh yeah, and I bought you a few new things, there in the dresser in the room we put you in. That girl said it was your room."

I smiled and then took a seat tiredly on a barstool having scrubbed the entire morning.

 

[BLACK BART]

I caught the glass she tossed and replied, "Ah, Coffee? When I said drink I meant coffee....and No, I didn't know we had glasses in this place, my brother took care of the bar and brothel...I stayed, ah you know, outside"
I walked around the bar, looking at the clean floor, glasses and even wash basins, finding a pot, but no coffee grounds. Looking up I see your tired face and guiltily offer "Let me take you out for breakfast, you need a rest and I need that coffee, besides if you gave me an answer, I don't remember, and we need to work out the terms"
"You think I'm quite the drunk, don't you" I ask, as I walk back around the bar "Tell me the truth, no punches pulled"

 

[Destiny_Brent]

I chuckled at him and took the glass,

"So you're not as hopeless as I thought... good."

I was feeling exauhsted as I watched you clammer around the back of the bar, thankfully not making a big mess as you searched through everything.

"I said yes. That's all we discussed before you passed out cold."

I got up slowly taking a coat I'd found off the coat rack I'd also found, previously holding a lot of sex paraphanalia it now held several decent coats and hats.


"Sounds allright. And yes, I do think you're a drunk. You should have seen yourself yesterday, not only that a sex-crazed drunk. Look what you do for a living? Look at your brother, I will give you he's a lot worse."



OOC: Night Bart! I loved it, love seeing you always!

 

[BLACK BART]

OOC: Good night, sweet lady, pleasant dreams....

I pull a jacket on, the fit a little tight on my shoulders, saying protectively "Don't put my brother down, you can say all you want about me, but leave him alone, he's all I have" I try to soften the sound of the words, joking "And I'm all he's ever had, maybe that's why he was so rough"
I grow silent, my thoughts morose, blaming myself for all the years wasted....."Come on, lets get some breakfast" I invite, trying to shake off the blue mood. I turn and attempt gallantly, extending my arm "Please my lady, honor me with your company?"

 

[Destiny_Brent]

"I'm sorry... "

I was taken by surprise, here he had just shot and pretty much mutilated his brother and he was telling me to take it easy,

"I just meant... nevermind I'm sorry."

I glanced at him as he joked glad he wasn't too upset with me, I knew the consequences that would come with that, but then he'd seemed different lately,

"Yeah I guess that'd do the trick."

I notice him turning sober, depressed and my brow furrows slightly. But I can't help but giggle a little at his try at Chivalry,


"Well thank you gallant night, I shall gladly join you."

invite, trying to shake off the blue mood. I turn and attempt gallantly, extending my arm "Please my lady, honor me with your company?"

 

[BLACK BART]

We stride out to the restaurant and order a "dinner?" The mood is light hearted, festive almost as we both sit facing each other...."You did a excellent job with the bar, it shines.I assume your staying, seem to remember you saying that much before I passed out..Now what about your plans for the brothel?" I started out the conversation "Alonzo scared off all the girls...and if I remember right you can't run a brothel without women"
I sat waiting, toying with my chips and salsa, wondering if she would ask me to go back "on the road". I hoped not, wanting to change some things in my life also, and volunteered.
"We could advertise, maybe, word of mouth carries a long way in this county?"
I poured her a glass of Sangria, noting her raised eyebrow as I did so. "You can't drink the water, it'll kill you in a week, this is a much slower, more pleasant way to die" I told her.
Our food arrived, hot in temperature and spice also, I warned her to take it easy as she began to pour on the sauce from the small bowl that was brought with our dinner.
"I know what I'm doing" she retorted, taking a large bite and chewing it. The sweat broke out on her forehead and cheeks as she took a second bite as if to say "See?"
I offered the wine again, and she rapidly took it this time, drinking the entire glass in one large swallow. I dipped my enchilada quickly in the bowl, taking small bites and said with sarcasm "You were saying?"
Maybe she would take some advice, I pondered, but then again it might be fun to stick around and watch her make a few small mistakes on her own.
It was my turn to laugh as she drank a second glass of wine, trying to be serious and reply to my earlier questions.

 

[Destiny_Brent]

I smile a little, "Thank you. I tried... Yeah I'm stayiing but... I'm not so sure what to do with the brothel... I'm not even sure how it works? But... I watched as he talked, "I know what I'm doing though, I'll figure it out."

I took a sharp bite of the chip as if making a point as my eyes squinted looking at him. I looked angrily down at the table and the bowl of chips and dip.

"I was saying that we are going to run a clean, decent brothel. Well as clean as it can be being what it is. We only accept volunteers for these jobs... no rape and dragging away. I glare at him intentionally driving the point home,

"And if you want any attention, you'll need to keep with the girls in the brothel. No rape, and I mean it."

I look down rubbing my brow trying to keep up my fortitude when facing him.

"But... I do need your help... I mean I'd appreciate it."

 

[BLACK BART]

So she needed me? At least for the business, she had conceded that much, her mild demeanor had changed to an assertive business woman almost overnite.
"You need women, for the brothel" I clarified "Down here being a whore is not as bad as you think, the pay is actually pretty good compared to what they're used to"
"But you need to start recruiting as fast as possible, if you want to stay in business" I continued "Ask any girl under the age of 23 and you will have your "house" full by night fall.
Sam looked at me increduosly, not beleiving, as our second course arrived...
"Ask this girl, for example, if she wants the job"
Sam's eyes had "bugged out", as I cajoled her to ask the waitress....I nudged her under the table and she she spoke to the dark haired girl as she was turning away....


OOC: We need new women for the brothel, any takers?
We'll also need customers if Sam can recruit the women

 

[Diamondnrough]

waitress

OOC: may I join, I could be the waitress and first recruit?

IC: Bonita, often called Bonny, slim but strong, 120 pounds 36d,24,34...have worked at restaurant for two years and like the work and employers, but can't afford to live on my own with what they pay me. This forces me to live with mother and slimy step dad...
I know the senor, but not the senorita, they are discussing something important, as I serve thier meal, I clear the dishes as they talk and turn to leave when the american woman speks to me....
I turn and answer, politely, "Yes senorita, what may I do for you?"

 

[BLACK BART]

OOC: It's ok with me, and you Destiny?....also it's my turn to say goodnite....happy memorial...will post again 5-28 pm

 

[THEBRAT]

I'll give it a try

 

[Destiny_Brent]

OOC: I'll see ya Bart! Welcome I'm glad to see someone join!!!!


IC:

I nodded, "I know, I guess I should just give in, but it's voluntary." I noticed him gesture to the nurse and hissed lightly under my breath as the waitress approached, "Are you crazy?!?"

God damn he actually expected me to ask this girl, this innocent wiatress to be a whore. How on earth did he expect me to aks... He kicked me gently under the table as the girl went to leave I gave him a sharp glare but then conceded and decided to try and speak,

"Um?"

I paused nervously as the girl turned around,

"I wanted to ask you something, if you wouldn't mind?"

I fidgeted a little as she stepped back to the table smiling sweetly, charming for a tip.

"I have an opening, at my brothel... it's a decent enough place, clean, and it pays good. Would you be interested?"

 

[Diamondnrough]

I stare at the american women, then giggle, then with wide eyes, apologise, hoping she did not misunderstand me.
"You are not of this country, so you do not realise what you ask" I clarify "To be a waitress is a lowly station, a position of no importance, where one can not meet anyone of great significance"
I put the rag down I have been cleaning the table tops with and continue "To work in your house is a great honor, a chance to live on my own, and meet great people who will come to know me, and I them"
I untie the apron from my curved hips and smooth my short skirt, looking at the couple at the table and telling them proudly, with a deep breath that strains my full breasts against my blouse.
"I will gladly join you, immediately, in your house, for I have just quit my job here" I turn towards the kitchen, and yell as loudly as I can "Rico, you lazy old man, I have found a real job and I QUIT"
I turn back and smile brightly at the startled looks on the couples faces and ask them "Shall we go?".......

 

[BLACK BART]

I smirk at Sam, having expected the response, and can't help but get a jab in myself "Now will you listen to me?" as I rise and pay the bill.
I offer my arm to Sam, waiting for her to accept, then offer the other to our "new girl"...I can't wait to try her out, I thought to myself....or does Sam think she owns me?
With two luscious women on my arms we walk out of the restaurant and back to the bar and brothel.
"You really need to name this joint" I tell Sam "Maybe we should call it Black Bart's Bed and Bar" I tease, laughing at the bad joke....

 

[THEBRAT]

Can I be someone that acts like they need to be thought a lesson.But you find out that I was raped and tortured and almost killed.

 

[Destiny_Brent]

I nod slowly as she giggled flushing deeply, "Uh.. I'm sorry..." I look down at my hands fidgeting a little before returning my gaze upward. I listen to her amazed as she smiled telling me how wonderful a job like that would be. I can't believe she just expected, in America this would be so horrible... where was I that this was such a wonderful opportunity.

"I suppose I see..."

I smile as she removes the apron eagerly excited, my first time asking and allready she accepted, so eager so happy. It made me feel like I was helping her, perhaps I was... in this land if this is such a great thing, maybe I was helping her. With that a touch of the guilt and shame I felt was lifted, it was still there, but I was begining to loosen up. I looked at Bart and couldn't help but beam proudly as the waitress told us she accepted.

I felt a little shock as she yelled back to Rico right away that she quit. That was certainly not how we would be able to do it where I'd used to work... this would be terrific. My surprise gave way to a smile as I looked at Bart,


"Allright Allright, you're right." I took his hand warmly and smiled looking him over, he did clean up nicely.

I looked to the waitress,

"Yes We can go.".

I glance at him, "A name?"

I hadn't even thought about it,

"Didn't have a name before, when you and Alonzo owned it?"

I did chuckle at his joke though,

"Well, that would really attract the customers and all, but... no."

OOC: The Brat... hmmm... ok... what exactly did you have in mind though? I'm not quite sure what you want to have happen.

 

[THEBRAT]

I'll get bact to you got to think because this really happened to me.

 

[BLACK BART]

OOC: Meanwhile, back in virtual reality.....

IC: I stroll with the two beautiful young ladies back to the bar, chatting merrily, teasing the two beauties as we walk.
"I hope we can all be good friends, and develop a "firm" working relationship" I tell them.
"Sam" I question "Is it too early for a drink? One small toast to your newest employee, and our partnership?"
I look at her curious if she has "warmed up" or is it all business for us now?
"I hope we can be more then just friends" I say groping for an answer from either lady......

 

[Destiny_Brent]

IC:

I chuckled, amazed he'd actually began to asking me permission,

"No, it's not... I'd kinda like a drink anyways."

I chuckled and punched his stomache playfully, surprised at my own action I immediately stepped away. I raised a couple fingers to rub my temple a little, god what was wrong with me sometimes. I went and grabbed three glasses laying htem on the counter before us, I decided to kill the awkward feeling probobally only I felt,

"I'm sorry, but I can't remember for the life of me what you said your name was?"

She looked Bonny over, remembering it was a pretty name... something very appropriate to her appearance, I racked my brain to think of it.


I chuckle,

"Yeah, well we're friends at least... which is a big step up for you."

I grin a little quirking a brow,

"you tryin' to press your luck huh?"

 

[Diamondnrough]

I reply to my new employer "My name is Bonita, Bonita Delaflois, I would be honored if you called me Bonny, as all my friends do"
I am amused at the byplay between her and Bart, and decide to join in...I look impishly at Bart and say teasingly "You will need very good luck indeed, if you wish to get lucky with my mistress, for she is obviously a lady of quality, unlike some in here"
I had meant it to tease him, perhaps prick his ego, but quickly think it may have been a mistake by his face. I turn to my mistress and ask her "What is the first thing you wish me to do, senorita? I fear I have no proper clothes for this job, I hope I can find some quickly to fit me"

 

[Destiny_Brent]

I smiled rolling the name on my tounge,

"Bonita, it's very fitting. Bonny it is then."

I offered my hand,

"Sam, simple and plain, but it works."

I chuckled and then leaned back against the back wall as I poured the drinks grinning as she joined in seeming to tease, but not so much tease as ignite him. From the look on his face, it might have worked.

I turned my attention to her though as she asked me,

"Of course. I've just gotten this place, but If I recall, there are some clothes that should fit you perfectly in the closet in the hall."

I handed her a glass,

"Here, you drink this, then we'll get you in the proper clothes. Besides, you don't need to jump into work right off, let's celebrate first, you are our first recruit."

I smiled warmly at her lifting a glass,

"To you, Bonny Delaflois."

 

[wildxfire]

ooc: time for me to move on, good writing you two, enjoy it all, hope to see you in a future thread....

[Edited by wildxfire on 05-30-2001 at 11:32 PM]

 

[Diamondnrough]

I take the glass offered me and toss it back, toasting Sam and our new relationship. I notice Bart sipping his and take another shot at him, teasing again. "Can't handle your women, or your drink, Bartholemew?"
I giggle at his reaction to my name calling and turn to Sam again, asking her. "You mentioned trying on clothes? Do we do it front of this gringo, or somewhere more private"
I let my eyes roam up and down her rounded figure, and lick my lips, wondering what was behind her clothes....