Challenge: The Perfect Ten (v2.0)

[vampiredust]

my computer
likes jerking off

I see

01010101010
all the time

 

[Remec]

grey flannel sky
falls clouds to ground
blankets hot surround

surrounding heat
does not compare to
how you burn me

 

[Remec]

My replacement is blonde.

Did she
have to be blonde?

Perhaps

Could be there was
a sale on bleach?

Maybe?

 

[HotKittySpank]

surrounding heat
does not compare to
how you burn me

burns and turns
forever fuel fresh
fires in our hearts

 

[HotKittySpank]

Perhaps

Could be there was
a sale on bleach?

Maybe?

bleach blonde bomb shells
burn boys to ground
ka - pow!

 

[HotKittySpank]

my computer
likes jerking off

I see

01010101010
all the time

uhhh...tick...tick...error
does not compute...pop
sizzle.....
damn!

 

[clutching_calliope]

.....

 

[Remec]

burns and turns
forever fuel fresh
fires in our hearts

Melting, bubbling,
I've become a
tire fire,
feeding off myself.

 

[Remec]

bleach blonde bomb shells
burn boys to ground
ka - pow!

No blocker or SPF
high enough for
those rays.

Stunning.

 

[HotKittySpank]

Melting, bubbling,
I've become a
tire fire,
feeding off myself.

acrid, foul
my black smoke chokes
sucking all fresh air

 

[HotKittySpank]

No blocker or SPF
high enough for
those rays.

Stunning.

don't believe the hype

she's enhanced,
a false white light

 

[HotKittySpank]

Everyday
I steel myself

and jump from the cliff
again.

catching air
on fearless wings
we begin to soar again

 

[AChild]

tar riff
heart picking
juice flicka
cape get down
JAMES!!!!!!!!!!!!

JAMES!!!!!!!!!!!! juice flicka
cape picking heart
riff get tar
down

tar heart juice down riff,
get
cape picking
flicka JAMES!!!!!!!!!!!


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jump through that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[clutching_calliope]

.....

 

[Tzara]

Everyday
I steel myself

and jump from the cliff
again.

Everyday
I steal myself

then, anxiously,
I fudge the books.

 

[clutching_calliope]

......

 

[Tzara]

If you think
laughter
will prove you win,

you're right.

There is
nothing

funny about
dread.

You
can laugh.

Though.

 

[Remec]

don't believe the hype

she's enhanced,
a false white light

I bask in the
psuedoglow anyways,

better false than
nothing.

 

[Remec]

acrid, foul
my black smoke chokes
sucking all fresh air

At least city living's shown
me this,

Fresh air's overrated.

 

[clutching_calliope]

.....

 

[HotKittySpank]

I bask in the
psuedoglow anyways,

better false than
nothing.

poor paramour;

people pleasing
peroxide pyrotechnics
possibly protect pride?

painful price.

(i find it hard to believe that you would get nothing)

 

[HotKittySpank]

At least city living's shown
me this,

Fresh air's overrated.

*cough*sputter*wheeze*
hand me a tissue, will you please?

 

[HotKittySpank]

tar riff
heart picking
juice flicka
cape get down
JAMES!!!!!!!!!!!!

JAMES!!!!!!!!!!!! juice flicka
cape picking heart
riff get tar
down

tar heart juice down riff,
get
cape picking
flicka JAMES!!!!!!!!!!!


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jump through that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

jumping hoops
i wanna be like mike
'cept no hype

 

[clutching_calliope]

.....

 

[Tzara]

I'm a guru now.
Not sure

if
that's entirely good.

Guru, good.
Kuru, bad.

Don't laugh, please.
It scares me.