Chasin' Chickens

[My Erotic Tale]

Just wondering about the spelling - I'd just hate for you to put together something that's good and have it nitpicked to death because some would question the spelling ~~ and it's the least I can do - for the chance to have you take up one of my suggestions and change wording to where your work sounds and seems to "flow" better.

thanks leon I take all the insight I can get, usualy SOMETIMES it goes through spell check from here to the submit page <grin> depending on the seriousness of the poem and du's schedule <lol> the rose series are serious <grin> thanks again, I will make it english for less hurdles in reading, to achieve the smooth flow (~_*) thanks Art~,

 

[RhymeFairy]

Good Grief, ya'll are postin faster than I can read ...
Did I tell ya I am a speed reader? Grins* ..
Had to refresh this twice, to see all comments ~

Try bein a lil kinder Boyzzz~

winks an Huggsss ~

 

[My Erotic Tale]

hey RF, good to see ya, hang in there, gotta get better <grin>

 

[RhymeFairy]

hey RF, good to see ya, hang in there, gotta get better <grin>

I will show ya'll better. *weg*
Just let me get caught up on all my
hot~sexy~emails~ lmao ~
Cookin supper and tryin to be a sport,
see where that gets me?
Told Jenn I am gonna do a poem on invoke,
hard to do when one has a ham in the oven,
house is 100 degrees and kids are ... well
ya get the pic. Lol

Be around, will try to write in a bit,
off an on .. grrr an on again
yeppp on an on .. sliding, shimmy,
rocks, rides, invoking my love to do my will Grrrrrrr~
wheres my whippp when I need it, eh? lol

promise it will soon get better~

*winks*

 

[My Erotic Tale]

looking forward to it

I will show ya'll better. *weg*
Just let me get caught up on all my
hot~sexy~emails~ lmao ~
Cookin supper and tryin to be a sport,
see where that gets me?
Told Jenn I am gonna do a poem on invoke,
hard to do when one has a ham in the oven,
house is 100 degrees and kids are ... well
ya get the pic. Lol

Be around, will try to write in a bit,
off an on .. grrr an on again
yeppp on an on .. sliding, shimmy,
rocks, rides, invoking my love to do my will Grrrrrrr~
wheres my whippp when I need it, eh? lol

promise it will soon get better~

*winks*

 

[My Erotic Tale]

what do you think about the title for the book


"Tail Wagging?"

true stories of a black labrador

 

[My Erotic Tale]

chewing on it

a yellow rose: gringo challenge

The doors swung open in a gust of wind
scrupulous gang of cut throats walked in
like wolves they growled at everything
wearing bullets, knives and guns holstering

Pushing their way into the crowded bar
the desperados acted as if it was war
The dancing continued for stepping toes
eyes fell on the beauty of a yellow rose

The song hadn't ended and dancing he demanded
an hombre with a hunger for twirling and romancing
"I want to dance with the 'sinorita en amarillo'"
a hush fell upon the tavern around a yellow rose

The piano man stopped playing his tune
he knew that trouble was about to bloom
The hombre pushed the suited man back
took the lady by the waste and tossed his hat

The gentleman tapped on the hombres shouler
"I wasn't through dancing," he said slightly bolder
"I will dance with the lady, you go sit down."
the hombre said as his freinds gathered around

"I don't think the lady wishes to dance with you,"
the gentleman said and silence fell upon the room
"I propose a challenge if you are up to it," He said
this hombre became angered and turned face red

"Tell me of this challenge," he said with gritting teeth
every one waited for bullets to fly in heated release
"You dance then I dance, is the challenge I propose,
the winner gets to dance the night with a Yellow rose

 

[My Erotic Tale]

a yellow rose: gringo challenge

The doors swung open in a gust of wind
scrupulous gang of cut-throats walked in
like wolves they growled at everything
bullets, knives and guns come drinking

Pushing their way into the crowded bar
the desperados acted as if it was war
The dancing continued for stepping toes
eyes fell on the beauty of a yellow rose

The song hadn't ended and dancing he demanded
an hombre with a hunger for twirling and romancing
"I want to dance with the Lady," pushing the fellow
a hush fell upon the tavern around a yellow rose

The piano man stopped playing his tune
he knew that trouble was about to bloom
The hombre pushed the suited man back
took the lady by the waste and tossed his hat

The gentleman tapped on the hombres shouler
"I wasn't through dancing," he said slightly bolder
"I will dance with the lady, you go sit down."
the hombre said as his freinds gathered around

"I don't think the lady wishes to dance with you,"
the gentleman said and silence fell upon the room
"I propose a challenge if you are up to it," He said
this hombre became angered and turned face red

"Tell me of this challenge," he said with gritting teeth
every one waited for bullets to fly in heated release
"You dance then I dance, is the challenge I propose,
the winner gets to dance the night with a Yellow rose"


A Yellow Rose: Hombre's tango

There was silence in the tavern of a dance hall
a challenge was laid as an hombre

 

[bluerains]

not bad

what do you think about the title for the book


"Tail Wagging?"

true stories of a black labrador

tis better than "Wag the Dog"....

 

[My Erotic Tale]

wag the dog?

is that a book?...cool title <grin>

 

[My Erotic Tale]

a yellow rose: gringo challenge

The doors swung open in a gust of wind
scrupulous gang of cut-throats walked in
like wolves they growled at everything
bullets, knives and guns come drinking

Pushing their way into the crowded bar
the desperados acted as if it was war
The dancing continued for stepping toes
eyes fell on the beauty of a yellow rose

The song hadn't ended and dancing he demanded
an hombre with a hunger for twirling and romancing
"I want to dance with the Lady," pushing the fellow
a hush fell upon the tavern around a yellow rose

The piano man stopped playing his tune
he knew that trouble was about to bloom
The hombre pushed the suited man back
took the lady by the waste and tossed his hat

The gentleman tapped on the hombres shouler
"I wasn't through dancing," he said slightly bolder
"I will dance with the lady, you go sit down."
the hombre said as his freinds gathered around

"I don't think the lady wishes to dance with you,"
the gentleman said and silence fell upon the room
"I propose a challenge if you are up to it," He said
this hombre became angered and turned face red

"Tell me of this challenge," he said with gritting teeth
every one waited for bullets to fly in heated release
"You dance then I dance, is the challenge I propose,
the winner gets to dance the night with a Yellow rose"


A Yellow Rose: Hombre's tango

There was silence in the tavern of this dance hall
a challenge was laid as an hombre stalled

He stroked his mustache and glarred at the man
holding the lady tight, "Okay, I except this challenge."

The Hombre walked over to the piano man's stool
the gentleman said to the lady "I'm doing what I can do!"
The piano man sprang forth a zippy tapping tune
the hombre swayed over as if dancing with a broom

He waved the gentleman to back off the dance floor
grasped the lady in yellow and they began to soar
She followed his lead reluctanly in a side step tango
held whisker close and dancing with a yellow rose

cheek to cheek and arms extended outward
across the floor they drifted in a single blur
all eyes watched this hombre preform well
as if the song had cast a musical dancing spell

The gentleman shuffled a nervous foot tapping
watching this hombre's energy surge in rapsody
twisting and turning, extending an outward toe
impressive dancing, an hombre and a yellow rose

 

[My Erotic Tale]

A Yellow Rose: Hombre's tango

There was silence in the tavern of this dance hall
a challenge was laid as an hombre stalled


He stroked his mustache and glarred at the man
holding the lady tight, "Okay, I except this challenge."

The Hombre walked over to the piano man's stool
the gentleman said to the lady "I'm doing what I can do!"
The piano man sprang forth a zippy tapping tune
the hombre swayed over as if dancing with a broom

He waved the gentleman to back off the dance floor
grasped the lady in yellow and they began to soar
She followed his lead reluctanly in a side step tango
held whisker close and dancing with a yellow rose

cheek to cheek and arms extended outward
across the floor they drifted in a single blur
all eyes watched this hombre preform well
as if the song had cast a musical dancing spell

The gentleman shuffled a nervous foot tapping
watching this hombre's energy surge in rapsody
twisting and turning, extending an outward toe
impressive dancing, an hombre and a yellow rose

 

[RhymeFairy]

what do you think about the title for the book


"Tail Wagging?"

true stories of a black labrador

Think it is Great. I like the humor,
which you have by the truck load
and it will draw the readers in.
They will know right off the bat
what they are gettin' so to speak.

Sorry it took me so long.
I got caught up in a rain storm *weg* lol...

You always seem to miss the fun.
I am beginning to think it is intentional.
I just have a feeling you are NOT
the quiet shy type that likes to hover and watch ~

maybe ... you are UhhHuhh~ hehehehe.

I finally figured ya out Art, boy are you
gonna get in some trouble now.
I am gonna make ya sweat wonderin
when we will Pounce on ya ~ lol.

 

[Jennifer C]

what do you think about the title for the book


"Tail Wagging?"

true stories of a black labrador

LMAO oh that is genius Art ~

 

[My Erotic Tale]

Think it is Great. I like the humor,
which you have by the truck load
and it will draw the readers in.
They will know right off the bat
what they are gettin' so to speak.

Sorry it took me so long.
I got caught up in a rain storm *weg* lol...

You always seem to miss the fun.
I am beginning to think it is intentional.
I just have a feeling you are NOT
the quiet shy type that likes to hover and watch ~

maybe ... you are UhhHuhh~ hehehehe.

I finally figured ya out Art, boy are you
gonna get in some trouble now.
I am gonna make ya sweat wonderin
when we will Pounce on ya ~ lol.

I am not sure what that means but ya'll seem to play when I am at work or during the day...I am a night poster <grin> and I am a HARD one to figure out <grin> I stay busy is all sweetie...<grin>

 

[Du Lac]

Zen Fire rekindled

Burning, licking, swirling and twirling,
powerful dance of life and death,
cradled in the heat
of a tiny flame.

Energy of light illuminates
taunting a scorching touch
reflective flickering in dancing silouettes
for darkness runs from fire.

Look above and see the truth,
cleansing fury bringing life to our world.
Generations away with influence so strong,
dependence floats on a solar wind.

A devouring fury with crackling fangs
consuming that which gives it life.
Limbs that bite in a burning grasp
melting the physical world into it's soup of existance.

Hot virginal ablution found in the flames
incessant umbra dusted with soot
smoldering embers breathing life to all
dark to light birthing white soaked moments of hope.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

warmth in illuminous flickers
uncontainable molten fingers trickle
liquid turns to stone in temperment
forged in times kiln worshipping the Sun


fix the last stanza honey so we can finish lol
du

 

[My Erotic Tale]

Burning, licking, swirling and twirling,
powerful dance of life and death,
cradled in the heat
of a tiny flame.

Energy of light illuminates
taunting a scorching touch
reflective flickering in dancing silouettes
for darkness runs from fire.

Look above and see the truth,
cleansing fury bringing life to our world.
Generations away with influence so strong,
dependence floats on a solar wind.

A devouring fury with crackling fangs
consuming that which gives it life.
Limbs that bite in a burning grasp
melting the physical world into it's soup of existance.

Hot virginal ablution found in the flames
incessant umbra dusted with soot
smoldering embers breathing life to all
dark to light birthing white soaked moments of hope.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

warmth in illuminous flickers
uncontainable molten fingers trickle
liquid turns to stone in temperment
forged in times kiln worshipping the Sun

Energy in life that runs rampant
over vegitation sustained in a shpere
planetary realm in spinning stillness encircles
solid zen in emptiness of space, cups and holds life and water

 

[Du Lac]

which one do you want to use? they both were yours lol.. du

warmth in illuminous flickers
uncontainable molten fingers trickle
liquid turns to stone in temperment
forged in times kiln worshipping the Sun

Energy in life that runs rampant
over vegitation sustained in a shpere
planetary realm in spinning stillness encircles
solid zen in emptiness of space, cups and holds life and water

 

[My Erotic Tale]

Burning, licking, swirling and twirling,
powerful dance of life and death,
cradled in the heat
of a tiny flame.

Energy of light illuminates
taunting a scorching touch
reflective flickering in dancing silouettes
for darkness runs from fire.

Look above and see the truth,
cleansing fury bringing life to our world.
Generations away with influence so strong,
dependence floats on a solar wind.

A devouring fury with crackling fangs
consuming that which gives it life.
Limbs that bite in a burning grasp
melting the physical world into it's soup of existance.

Hot virginal ablution found in the flames
incessant umbra dusted with soot
smoldering embers breathing life to all
dark to light birthing white soaked moments of hope.


Energy in life that runs rampant
over vegitation sustained in a shpere
planetary realm in spinning stillness encircles
solid zen in emptiness of space, cups and holds life and water
__________________

 

[My Erotic Tale]

poems for fun ~

I read that we are not to have fun
we should focuss on our poetry we done
I find this to be so very strange
where I read ....hog wash ...every day

no more chats about monkey beer
or hugs and grins with someone dear
get your pens to writing poets
fun will live and we all know it

put back on your panties and AVs
some one is upset that fun is to be had
so keep your posts with a ryhming song
so that we can all still get along <grin>

some get way to serious here
so try and over look their lil fear
and scratch out a little poem hun
cause like it or not we're gonna have fun

 

[My Erotic Tale]

poems for fun~

poems for fun ~

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I read that we are not to have fun
we should focuss on our poetry we done
I find this to be so very strange
where I read ....hog wash ...every day

no more chats about monkey beer
or hugs and grins with someone dear
get your pens to writing poets
fun will live and we all know it

put back on your panties and AVs
some one is upset that fun is to be had
so keep your posts with a ryhming song
so that we can all still get along <grin>

some get way to serious here
so try and over look their lil fear
and scratch out a little poem hun
cause like it or not we're gonna have fun

 

[RhymeFairy]

I am not sure what that means but ya'll seem to play when I am at work or during the day...I am a night poster <grin> and I am a HARD one to figure out <grin> I stay busy is all sweetie...<grin>

You silly boy !! I work during the day too. The dialers were down today, so I gotta come home an play. I was gonna mow, but my sinuses .. well they said NO !! *grins*

I too, am a night poster, not to be confued with a pin-up, *grins*
Hard to figure out? You !!! Good grief, still waters and such eh ~

dark waters
runnth deep
no where to run
to stay outta
tha creek

trickles of laughter
shimmy down
playful days spent
water bound

mud fights
to be had
yes, we
are ALL so bad.

on hot steamy days
come ... play
we shall refresh
you, this way ~

 

[My Erotic Tale]

oh my (~_*) mud slinging ...hehehe

 

[bluerains]

prey

*katrina
flames glow
in dark caverns
spaces not of this
dimension
grip natures
soft caress
superiority feeds
beauty of
dark shards
of a crimson
huntress as she
bleeds her trail
binding threads
into the webs of
her prey
we lick our paws....

 

[champagne1982]

This seems a good place to put this lil resurrection. Thanks MET, this poem was written to illustrate the fun we can have writing, even though the piece is designed around examples we use in our art all the time.

Poetry Happens

Time to strip bare
Minimalist poetry.

I WANT to FEEL my HEART beaTING
in RHYTHmic METered MEAsures.

Each syllable of your strophe,
spoken,
A caress of my tongue.

The play of alliteration through
Lurid, luscious lips;
Liquid, languid language.

Don't deny your poetic devices,
The deception of symplicity,
Like virginal innocence, entices
Poems of perfect prosody.

Ignoring the structures of long ago
Can labour the meaning of words, you know?
So trust in the fun
My poetic one
And let style, rhyme and rhythm flow.

There's more to be said,
I could go on and on,
About the joy in turning
The perfect phrase.
Never forgetting that,
There's a certain satisfaction,
Describing, in magical metaphor,
That last instant before
Poetic birth.