Chasin' Chickens

SnapDragon Part I

'not guilty'
(a sonnet series)

a Red drip dropped from a flower pedal
blade flashed silver as Snap Dragon turn
she stood over death with ivory and metal
the tears down her cheeks deeply burned

Sirens and handcuffs whisked her away
linen spread over her love and her life
She pleaded, "I am innocent I say."
"I stood next to him as I am his wife."

The trial was swift as a passing wind
Snap Dragon was found guilty and jailed
she knew her husband laid with her friend
mayor's daughter on guilty freedom sails

Deep in a cell she was cast and left
SnapDragon's vengence was now a gift






Sonnet
A Sonnet is a poem consisting of 14 lines (iambic pentameter) with a particular rhyming scheme:

Examples of a rhyming scheme:

#1) abab cdcd efef gg
 
do you have to have a license to hunt a nympho?

do women in the penal showers have the need to worry when dropping and picking up the soap?

are push-ups bought or earned through exercises points?
 
My Erotic Trail said:
Minute Poetry
The Minute Poem is rhyming verse form consisting of 12 lines of 60 syllables written in strict
iambic meter. The poem is formatted into 3 stanzas of 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4 syllables.
The rhyme scheme is as follows: aabb, ccdd, eeff





sex?

They pressed into each other
holds shuddered
grasping madly
sporadically

They hit the floor rolling
on top ruling
the other under
haste ushered

driving tight muscles to mesh
rough caress
limbs in flight
two men fight


Art...I tried my hand at this....

ok

here goes:

Your love takes me high and above
spinning, turning
round and around
breathtakenly

Your kisses fill me with joy and love
achingly sweet
desire, need
passionately

Your arms embrace me and I'm home
safely, soundly
peaceful, knowing
interweaving



Ok..did I do that right?
 
Honey123 said:
Art...I tried my hand at this....

ok

here goes:

Your love takes me high and above
spinning, turning
round and around
breathtakenly

Your kisses fill me with joy and love
achingly sweet
desire, need
passionately

Your arms embrace me and I'm home
safely, soundly
peaceful, knowing
interweaving



Ok..did I do that right?

Hey, that is great, I found a site with all the different styles of poetry and I am going to try and attempt each one, more for knowledge of what they are rather than to master them all <grin> I liked your poem.
 
Bo Whoop

the x-file case #1-12-1-1948

Hunting Bo Whoop

Daniel Boone named is rifle
"Old Tick-Licker"
claiming he could shoot a tick off an animal
and never touch the critter.

Davey Crocket's rifle is infamous
"Old Betsy"
'Kilt over one hundred bear'

Dick Cheney's shot gun
should be named, 'Bush's Quail"
is now said to be worth a fotune
perhaps even more so than Bo Whoop?

Famed Writer: Nash Buckingham's
Askins-Sweeley magnum 12-gauge
is said to have cost him a years pay

Col. Harold P. Sheldon named this gun
Bo Whoop
because of its destinct sound when shot

Dec, 1, 1948, 'outside' Clarendon, Ark
Buckingham was pulled over
and checked by local game wardens
after a morning duck hunt

After the routine check they drove away
it was several miles till they realized
the gun had been left on the fender

Buckingham and Green
went back to look for this expensive firearm
but it was never found.
The Hunt began for Bo Whoop
and is still going to this day

Hunting Bo Whoop
 
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making mud pies
requires a certain talent.
just as chasing chickens
is a disastrous career.
so come n play
have fun ... today.



good morning Art ... had to play
on your thread before work ....
Have a Great one ~

:rose:
 
RhymeFairy said:
making mud pies
requires a certain talent.
just as chasing chickens
is a disastrous career.
so come n play
have fun ... today.



good morning Art ... had to play
on your thread before work ....
Have a Great one ~

:rose:


a warm ray of sunshine
I am so glad your back <grin
 
Passion's flame
was a torch
that burned brightly

lighting our lives
sitting in the darkness
wrapped in each other's warmth

Passion's flame
still warms me
thinking about
so long ago

coals that never die
adding another
branch to thought
fire reborn
mental log
 
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ski the slopes
of soft skinned curves

trailing fingers
over sensual contours

tasting flesh
with licks and kisses

melding souls
fullfills hungers wishes
 
My Erotic Trail said:
ski the slopes
of soft skinned curves

trailing fingers
over sensual contours

tasting flesh
with licks and kisses

melding souls
fullfills hungers wishes

Yummy !! I like, a lot ~!!

:catroar:
 
RhymeFairy said:
Yummy !! I like, a lot ~!!

:catroar:
ski the slopes
of soft skinned curves

trailing fingers
over sensual contours

tasting flesh
with licks and kisses

melding souls
fullfills hungers wishes

swim the pools
of fire falls with legs open

climb the mountains
of breast meshed and fondled

driving the current
to fill the reservoir of love

kissing the moment
like there is no tomorrow
 
knock knock kncokc
I answer the door
an angel in tight jeans
stands there smiling

she said she was stranded
I looked out my door
I asked her,
"Did it hurt when you fell?"

She looked puzzled
so I explained
"When you fell from heaven!"
she laughed

She was prettier than a picture
but her horns soon grew
as the story unfolded
how she came to be dropped off
in the middle of no where
by my house

she talked faster than a speeding car
as excited as a Hen in the Hen house
running from a fox
unsettled turmoiled emotions

I was glad to take her to town
and drop her off
getting back to my peace and quiet
after a vist from
Halo and Horns
 
"snapdragon"
[sonnet] part I

Behind paper walls a light dimly glowed
pale face and cheeks as red as a rose
a bonsai shuttered on a corner table
the Emporer delighted in Geisha fables

slender fingers with ancient experience
milks a muscle till a man is entranced


............... working on it
 
bounce, lol

My Erotic Trail said:
the stars
dreams
caught in a black velvet sky

then there is you
illuminating hope
the moon



setting free the minds of grace
that whisper of wants, desires.
absently absorbed by the fall.
warmed from the fire of destiny
that burns from within you
torching this place, inside me.
upsetting emotions, ringing
raggedly on cloth of life.
shimmering evenings
escaping into brilliant mornings
boldly building a boathouse
of shelter for us
with us
in ...
 
My Erotic Trail said:
knock knock kncokc
I answer the door
an angel in tight jeans
stands there smiling

she said she was stranded
I looked out my door
I asked her,
"Did it hurt when you fell?"

She looked puzzled
so I explained
"When you fell from heaven!"
she laughed

She was prettier than a picture
but her horns soon grew
as the story unfolded
how she came to be dropped off
in the middle of no where
by my house

she talked faster than a speeding car
as excited as a Hen in the Hen house
running from a fox
unsettled turmoiled emotions

I was glad to take her to town
and drop her off
getting back to my peace and quiet
after a vist from
Halo and Horns


Halo and Horns? I like that.
 
Sonnet
A Sonnet is a poem consisting of 14 lines (iambic pentameter) with a particular rhyming scheme:

Examples of a rhyming scheme:

#1) abab cdcd efef gg

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Snap-Dragon; Part I

SnapDragon's bloom in a Geisha garden
Koi color a pool under a wooden bridge
Plush grass yeilds The Emporer, guarded
as SnapDragon kissed his cock's stiff ridge

Long slender fingers pull for his delight
milking his needs with a fan spread wide
Komono fallen and bare breasts in sight
wet fluids flow as her hand gently slides

She kissed his love and licked his muscle
tending to the job of releasing his tension
his final gasp of orgasmic pleasure tussels
Snap-Dragon smiles as the Emporer cums

In his delight and departure he tosses yen
to Snap-Dragon the Geisha of Do-San garden

Snap Dragon Part II
 
'Lone Star'
The lone legged Mocking Bird!

The founder scene was the drive thru, Dairy Queen

A baby bird hobbled and wobbled across the hot pavement
out the car door I went!

The State didn't want their State Bird
they said to say, "it's final words."

For a wing was broke and a leg too,
there was nothing any one could do.

The leg was hanging by a thread of dead skin
the vet said, "do some snipping."

Wrapped the wing and made it a home, open to
the whole living room.

My wife bought crickets from the bait shop
my son caught grasshoppers from around our lot.
I knew where the best fishing worms lived,
to the Mockingbird, supper was fed.

To much surprise, the Mockingbird survived
it found balance with one and a half legs.
It hopped every where till it's wing healed.

Now a name we must give!
The State bird of the Lone Star state
our minds state could relate
call it fate and to this date, my wife named him,

"Lone Star"
the lone legged mockingbird.

He sang to our lives for quite awhile.
He like to land on the black labs back
or in a soft crash land into a baseball cap.

We finally built a cage the size of a wall
the door was left open unless company called.
For Mockingbirds are fearless and territorial.

A part of the family he became
I still think about him to this day

Lone Star
The Lone Legged Mockingbird


(I should polish this and submit, any ideas?)
 
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My Erotic Trail said:
'Lone Star'
The lone legged Mocking Bird!

The founder scene was the drive thru, Dairy Queen

A baby bird hobbled and wobbled across the hot pavement
out the car door I went!

The State didn't want their State Bird
they said to say, "it's final words."

For a wing was broke and a leg too,
there was nothing any one could do.

The leg was hanging by a thread of dead skin
the vet said, "do some snipping."

Wrapped the wing and made it a home, open to
the whole living room.

My wife bought crickets from the bait shop
my son caught grasshoppers from around our lot.
I knew where the best fishing worms lived,
to the Mockingbird, supper was fed.

To much surprise, the Mockingbird survived
it found balance with one and a half legs.
It hopped every where till it's wing healed.

Now a name we must give!
The State bird of the Lone Star state
our minds state could relate
call it fate and to this date, my wife named him,

"Lone Star"
the lone legged mockingbird.

He sang to our lives for quite awhile.
He like to land on the black labs back
or in a soft crash land into a baseball cap.

We finally built a cage the size of a wall
the door was left open unless company called.
For Mockingbirds are fearless and territorial.

A part of the family he became
I still think about him to this day

Lone Star
The Lone Legged Mockingbird


(I should polish this and submit, any ideas?)

maybe even illustrated?
 
My Erotic Trail said:
Sonnet
A Sonnet is a poem consisting of 14 lines (iambic pentameter) with a particular rhyming scheme:

Examples of a rhyming scheme:

#1) abab cdcd efef gg

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Snap-Dragon; Part I

SnapDragon's bloom in a Geisha garden
Koi color a pool under a wooden bridge
Plush grass yeilds The Emporer, guarded
as SnapDragon kissed his cock's stiff ridge

Long slender fingers pull for his delight
milking his needs with a fan spread wide
Komono fallen and bare breasts in sight
wet fluids flow as her hand gently slides

She kissed his love and licked his muscle
tending to the job of releasing his tension
his final gasp of orgasmic pleasure tussels
Snap-Dragon smiles as the Emporer cums

In his delight and departure he tossed yen
to Snap-Dragon, flower of the Geisha garden

Snap Dragon Part II

The sun set low over the geisha garden
colors streaked across the sky in lure
a shadow run across the lawn, darting
SnapDragon sat before her vanity mirror

a scent before the shadow laid before her
an envelope with a wax seal from her village
snapdragon peered at him in the mirror
Ninjitsu shadow warrior's lust words spillage

"You must prevail at any cost. Understand?"
Snap Dragon nodded opening the envelope
 
My Erotic Trail said:
'Lone Star'
The lone legged Mocking Bird!

The founder scene was the drive thru, Dairy Queen

A baby bird hobbled and wobbled across the hot pavement(comma)
out the car door I went!

The State didn't want their State Bird
they said to say, "it's(its) final words."

For a wing was broke and a leg too,
there was nothing any one could do.

The leg was hanging by a thread of dead skin
the vet said, "do some snipping."

Wrapped the wing and made it a home, open to
the whole living room.

My wife bought crickets from the bait shop
my son caught grasshoppers from around our lot.
I knew where the best fishing worms lived,
to the Mockingbird, supper was fed.

To much surprise, the Mockingbird survived
it found balance with one and a half legs.
It hopped every where(everywhere - i think) till it's(its) wing healed.

Now a name we must give!
The State bird of the Lone Star state
our minds(minds' - the state belongs to the minds of you, your wife and son) state could relate
call it fate and to this date, my wife named him,

"Lone Star"
the lone legged mockingbird.

He sang to our lives for quite awhile.
He like(liked) to land on the black labs(lab's - the back belongs to the lab) back
or in a soft crash land into a baseball cap.(delete 'in a')

We finally built a cage the size of a wall
the door was left open unless company called.(called,)
For Mockingbirds are fearless and territorial.(for)

A part of the family he became
I still think about him to this day

Lone Star
The Lone Legged Mockingbird


(I should polish this and submit, any ideas?)

see my thoughts in bold.

i keep wanting to read with a rhythm that appears sometimes and disappears at other times. is this intentional?

you could add more antics the bird got up to if there are any. if there's masses well, you've a series on your hands. lol


:)
 
wildsweetone said:
see my thoughts in bold.

i keep wanting to read with a rhythm that appears sometimes and disappears at other times. is this intentional?

you could add more antics the bird got up to if there are any. if there's masses well, you've a series on your hands. lol


:)


thanks sweet,
I totally rearranged it last night and submitted it, perhaps you'll recognize it when it surfaces <grin> I did major structure reconstructure but kept the basic poem and words with some fixing of the ryhme.

(~_*) thanks wild one
 
Snap-Dragon; Part I

SnapDragon's bloom in a Geisha garden
Koi color a pool under a wooden bridge
Plush grass yeilds The Emporer, guarded
as SnapDragon kissed his cock's stiff ridge

Long slender fingers pull for his delight
milking his needs with a fan spread wide
Komono fallen and bare breasts in sight
wet fluids flow as her hand gently slides

She kissed his love and licked his muscle
tending to the job of releasing his tension
his final gasp of orgasmic pleasure tussels
Snap-Dragon smiles as the Emporer cums

In his delight and departure he tosses yen
to Snap-Dragon flower of the Geisha garden


My Erotic Trail said:
The sun set low over the geisha garden
colors streaked across the sky in lure
a shadow run across the lawn, darting
SnapDragon sat before her vanity mirror

a scent before the shadow laid before her
an envelope with a wax seal from her village
snapdragon peered at him in the mirror
Ninjitsu shadow warrior's lust words spillage

"You must prevail at any cost. Understand?"
Snap Dragon nodded opening the envelope
Her orders; 'kill the Emporer as soon as you can.'
She looked into the mirror for a ray of hope

For a flower of beauty and lust became poison
Snap Dragon wrote the Emporer an invitation

SnapDragon part III
 
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