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[Shendude]

Hi again, making another request.

Some time ago I read a story that inspired the following mental image:

A Mother and her two daughters. Mother is average height, 30-35 years old, curvy and voluptous with really big breasts. Older daughter is tall, 18-21 years old, skinny (in a good way), breasts as big as her mother's, maybe a little bigger. Younger daughter is short, 15-18 years old, pudgy (again, in a good way) has the biggest breasts of all.

They're standing in a row, Mother in the middle, older daughter to the right, younger to the left. They're naked. Each of them is holding a tray with two plates on it, their breasts resting on the plates.

 

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[Dar~]

I should start over...I am gonna lose their feet...started to low on the page.


ditching pony tails ..makes her look TOO young

I think she looks fine with the pony tails. you should leave them. It is a nice drawing.

 

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[Dar~]

too late...hair cut!

can always erase and go back...we not always, eventually the paper can't take it.

thanks Dar.

I don't like her hair at all. maybe if you take it long and give her bangs?

The center girl is old enough to have trimmed her bush a bit and the younger one should have the full bush. I think that contributes to the age thing also. You might want to lengthen the middle girls hair too.
Hahaha forgive me for being annoying.

 

[Black Tulip]

I like the last one, after the haircut.
One thing, I think the mum has a very thin face.
Or maybe her head is too small in relation to the rest of her?

 

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[Black Tulip]

I should have known better, than to jump right back in after 24 hours of travelling.

Sowry!

 

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[TheLittleWolf]

LOL Rhino...
Please tell me who your hairstylist is?
And do they do waxings?

I can't wait for Shendudes critique and then your final product.
Keep sketching

 

[Shendude]

I like it.

Actually, my main problem is the Mother's hairstyle, sorry.

It looks like some kind of spike cut to me, which just doesn't mesh with her being a mother.

 

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[Black Tulip]

LOL Rhino, that's good to know.

I acquired some fierce ones.

 

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[Shendude]

I'm not saying sh should look frumpy, she just shouldn't look like a punk.

But this is good.

Only problem with the new pic is that it's a bit difficult to see the trays.

 

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[TheLittleWolf]

Rhino,
Is it possible that the oldest daughter just came back from a trip to the Riviera where she spent her time topless on a nude beach and lost her "upper" tan lines?

LOL






Just kidding.

 

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[Dar~]

I am sorry for my intrusion RG. I was just jumpin gin uninvited. You really are quite talented and I will just step back now and enjoy the drawings.

 

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