~~Haiku River~~

My erotic tail
Plays good witch and bad witch
In five-seven-five
 
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indescribable;

in leaving, she crowed the dove

where she had lain:
shame.
 
Unbridled_Passion said:
shame is only in
the mind of one's journey to
find the perfect self
shame is;
or perhaps...

that which
impinges
perfect:

the fly
in ointment
 
drown said:
shame is;
or perhaps...

that which
impinges
perfect:

the fly
in ointment
mind moving current
shame is like a river deep
bleeding in the mind
 
lobomao said:
the water seems cold
a new year rolls on silent
ice and shame will melt

tuning forks bend sun
music washes the flood plain
all is forgotten
 
shameless willow tree
cries from the banks of the never
remembering now
 
and with this,
anew

ah
were it so easy to...

pull the lever;
flush.
 
:rolleyes: looking up...
wow, so many good ones (~_~)

strong current
dodging drifting logs
paddling up river
 
simply illusion...

to drift
as though in ether

ours
is
gravity
 
drown said:
simply illusion...

to drift
as though in ether

ours
is
gravity

nice... "as though in ether"... sounds like something I'd write... love it...

attraction pulls us
niether in ether nor air
water borne are we
 
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