I Am A Girl!

[Lionheart72]

trust me...perhaps it sounds crazy to say that. but from some of the PMs and emails i've recieved, it seems as though finding women on here is like finding oil in your backyard. and we all just can't be as lucky as the beverly hillbillys...

A lot of guys are still under the delusion that most women are nice, wholesome creatures who would never write about sex. So, any woman who would write something like that would also do something like that... with them. I think it's sad really because it shows a horrible lack of understanding about women.

The story is seems pretty well written to me, though I'll agree with Erica that's it lacks believability. Still, IMO, suspension of disbelief runs pretty high in porn. I say nice first story. I'll look forward to seeing your next.

 

[shy slave]

I am a bit baffled by this

I write fairly extreme stories, some of which are posted on Lit, and some which are not.

But no-one has ever said to me that I wasn't female, because of the content of the actual stories.

I am quite surprised, but then I mainly hang out down the hall in the BDSM forums, most people in there just accept that perverted is perverted, regardless of gender.

Perhaps you should point said people to books by Nancy Friday?, they are a wealth of American womens fantasies, and as a UK person they are the books that made me realise there is more to American women than the Brady Bunch!

 

[alittlecloser69]

Hi, I just popping in to say there are quite a few women I've run into on this site. *muuuah* back at you

I read the story. As one commenter said, it seemed pretty unbelievable. I couldn't really connect with the main character at all and had a hard time believing that she would remain a virgin until her 21st birthday and then let some guys in a parking garage do all they did to her. I think you need to develop her character a little bit to help the reader understand why she would do this. But it's your first try, so keep working on it. Also, you might want to run it by an editor to help with plot and character development.

Regards,

Erica

Thank you for the response. I guess my reasoning for everything is that I've read stories like this, and get easily bored when the story takes to long to "get to the good stuff". When I'm reading an erotic story I like it to be fun and crazy and kinky and completely beyond my own scope of realism. It's supposed to be fantasy...for me at least. I do see the novelity in making the story more realistic, because than maybe it'll give people hope for what can happen to them. ;-) So I'm thinking that maybe I will try that for my next story, but I just wanted it to be understood that while I am a novice erotic literature writer, I'm not a novice at reading it. :-D I was writing it how I would like to read stories, but I think that since I'm writing for actual readers I'll try and make it more "believable" and see what kind of response I get. But hopefully I will attract readers like me who like it to be short, sweet, to the point, and a kinky crazy fantasy.

<3

 

[alittlecloser69]

I am a bit baffled by this

I write fairly extreme stories, some of which are posted on Lit, and some which are not.

But no-one has ever said to me that I wasn't female, because of the content of the actual stories.

I am quite surprised, but then I mainly hang out down the hall in the BDSM forums, most people in there just accept that perverted is perverted, regardless of gender.

Perhaps you should point said people to books by Nancy Friday?, they are a wealth of American womens fantasies, and as a UK person they are the books that made me realise there is more to American women than the Brady Bunch!

I've never heard of Nancy Friday! I will have to look these books up, because now you've definitely sparked my interest! It's kind of exciting to know there's other women out there like me...we're our own revolution! <3

 

[alittlecloser69]

A lot of guys are still under the delusion that most women are nice, wholesome creatures who would never write about sex. So, any woman who would write something like that would also do something like that... with them. I think it's sad really because it shows a horrible lack of understanding about women.

The story is seems pretty well written to me, though I'll agree with Erica that's it lacks believability. Still, IMO, suspension of disbelief runs pretty high in porn. I say nice first story. I'll look forward to seeing your next.

Exactly...it's a fantasy. Haha...thank you so much for your response. I think I'm going to try and change it up a little for my next story, and see what kind of response I get. <3

 

[Lionheart72]

I was writing it how I would like to read stories, but I think that since I'm writing for actual readers I'll try and make it more "believable" and see what kind of response I get. But hopefully I will attract readers like me who like it to be short, sweet, to the point, and a kinky crazy fantasy.
<3

Well, I think the best thing to write is something you'd enjoy reading. Of course, I'm biased because we appear to have similar tastes in this matter. I prefer to read short, sweet, to the point and a little crazy fun and I've post a couple along those lines myself.

Anyway, I'll be looking for whatever you write next.

 

[Ellebeth]

I'm a girl too. Just submitted my first story to literotica last night. I have been writing little sexually explicit stories for some of my EQ2 gamer friends for a few years now. Every one of them have found the stories quite hot and a few have suggested this site. I know there will be peeps out there just waiting to destroy a story and I hope I am thick skinned enough to take it. I am a bit concerned that peeps who have read many stories and/or who are not into fantasy worlds might find it to tame but I won't know till it's online and being read.

Anyway, just wanted you to know that there are plenty of other girls out here who think about sex alot and are writing about it too. I have to get to work, but I will read your story this afternoon.

 

[alittlecloser69]

I'm a girl too. Just submitted my first story to literotica last night. I have been writing little sexually explicit stories for some of my EQ2 gamer friends for a few years now. Every one of them have found the stories quite hot and a few have suggested this site. I know there will be peeps out there just waiting to destroy a story and I hope I am thick skinned enough to take it. I am a bit concerned that peeps who have read many stories and/or who are not into fantasy worlds might find it to tame but I won't know till it's online and being read.

Anyway, just wanted you to know that there are plenty of other girls out here who think about sex alot and are writing about it too. I have to get to work, but I will read your story this afternoon.

Thanx! I'll take a look at yours tonight as well, because I've never read any stories based in fantasy worlds. Could be cool since I do like Hentai maybe it'll be similar??

 

[alittlecloser69]

Well, I think the best thing to write is something you'd enjoy reading. Of course, I'm biased because we appear to have similar tastes in this matter. I prefer to read short, sweet, to the point and a little crazy fun and I've post a couple along those lines myself.

Anyway, I'll be looking for whatever you write next.

I agree completely! Thank you!

 

[alittlecloser69]

I'm a girl too. Just submitted my first story to literotica last night. I have been writing little sexually explicit stories for some of my EQ2 gamer friends for a few years now. Every one of them have found the stories quite hot and a few have suggested this site. I know there will be peeps out there just waiting to destroy a story and I hope I am thick skinned enough to take it. I am a bit concerned that peeps who have read many stories and/or who are not into fantasy worlds might find it to tame but I won't know till it's online and being read.

Anyway, just wanted you to know that there are plenty of other girls out here who think about sex alot and are writing about it too. I have to get to work, but I will read your story this afternoon.

you should post a link to your stories! :-D

 

[fateofall]

hey..... read

you say you are a girl how do we know hit me up on my space www.myspace.com/danameistroy ummm im a 19 yr old and i got a 9in. cock but it seems like its growing im here to read and meet pple not to write and yea if u wanna add my myspace tell me its u tho

 

[fateofall]

;]

I love it when its to the point send me writings to my myspace ill tell u if they r good how fast i was able to get off and so on

 

[Ellebeth]

you should post a link to your stories! :-D

My story is still pending. Hope it will be on the site by next week. I'll post a link when I have one

I just finished reading your story. WOW!!! The stuff fanatasies are made of. It got me hot, lol. I saw the critical comments and I say, oh well, you can never please everyone. (of course it's not my work). I had no problem seeing the story playing out. She was a shy small town girl who decided to go out of character for a day and become the hot slut she probably visualized when she touced herself. The kind of situation she had is usually only in pornos, not so likely in real life, but it is a hot fantasy and that's what many of us are here for.

My story is in the sci-fi/fantasy catagory. It is more like Tolkkien does Dallas than Hentai. The characters are based on MMORPG type games.

 

[shy slave]

I've never heard of Nancy Friday! I will have to look these books up, because now you've definitely sparked my interest! It's kind of exciting to know there's other women out there like me...we're our own revolution! <3

Yes, it is a revelation when you read her books. At least it was for me!

The ones I have read are 'Women on Top' and 'My Secret graden'

Although they were written in the 70's it doesn't show from the writing.

I would be interested to know what you think...

 

[goodgirl79]

welcome to lit

LOTS of women on here

 

[pinkstarfish]

I understand that it's rare to find women on this site, but I'm a rare kinda girl.

I took a glance at your "story" and it's obvious to me you're a girl. Stop queefing your own pussy. You ain't all that. There are plenty of women out here that I'm sure are a lot raunchier than you. Get over yourself.

 

[alittlecloser69]

I took a glance at your "story" and it's obvious to me you're a girl. Stop queefing your own pussy. You ain't all that. There are plenty of women out here that I'm sure are a lot raunchier than you. Get over yourself.

hahahhahaha

yah making this forum has definitely introduced me to a lot of women. shockingly they're all alot nicer than you. however i will say "queefing your own pussy"...that's the first time i've heard that...hilarious.

 

[alittlecloser69]

welcome to lit

LOTS of women on here

thank you.

and yay! i see that now!

 

[alittlecloser69]

Yes, it is a revelation when you read her books. At least it was for me!

The ones I have read are 'Women on Top' and 'My Secret graden'

Although they were written in the 70's it doesn't show from the writing.

I would be interested to know what you think...

am googling Nancy Friday...haha....will let you know soon...

 

[alittlecloser69]

My story is still pending. Hope it will be on the site by next week. I'll post a link when I have one

I just finished reading your story. WOW!!! The stuff fanatasies are made of. It got me hot, lol. I saw the critical comments and I say, oh well, you can never please everyone. (of course it's not my work). I had no problem seeing the story playing out. She was a shy small town girl who decided to go out of character for a day and become the hot slut she probably visualized when she touced herself. The kind of situation she had is usually only in pornos, not so likely in real life, but it is a hot fantasy and that's what many of us are here for.

My story is in the sci-fi/fantasy catagory. It is more like Tolkkien does Dallas than Hentai. The characters are based on MMORPG type games.

THANK YOU! It's all about the yummy crazy fantasies for me! I look forward to reading your story! It'll definitely be different than anything else I've ever read before! And that is exciting!

 

[emap]

There's a handy trick to ignoring the negative comments. If it's not constructive, they are writing it to you because they got off really well and feel guilty about it so lash out at the person who's fault it has to be, the writers.

Logic never even entered the building when you're talking about porn and erotica.

Same thing with positive feedback, they just don't feel guilty.

Now be careful of geronimo, he's got one of those really perverted minds.

 

[alittlecloser69]

There's a handy trick to ignoring the negative comments. If it's not constructive, they are writing it to you because they got off really well and feel guilty about it so lash out at the person who's fault it has to be, the writers.

Logic never even entered the building when you're talking about porn and erotica.

Same thing with positive feedback, they just don't feel guilty.

Now be careful of geronimo, he's got one of those really perverted minds.

haha fantastic idea!



whats wrong with really perverted minds??

 

[Ellebeth]

haha fantastic idea!



whats wrong with really perverted minds??

Nothing.

 

[tinman69s]

haha fantastic idea!



whats wrong with really perverted minds??

there's NOTHING wrong with a good perverted mind!! I have one and I love it!!

 

[emap]

Nothing besides geronimo's, he's got shifty eyes.