In praise of annaswirls

[BooMerengue]

Yoo Boo. I'm not on her, I'm making amends to Rybka, we had a small bit of a go.

I never noticed that. It's ok. I know it's rare for you to 'have a bit of a go' with someone!

*rolling all over the place laughing!

Peace!

 

[annaswirls]

Thank y'all-- it is wonderful to be surrounded by such talent and support! I am very fortunate to have found this community

-

as

 

[annaswirls]

Yoo Boo. I'm not on her, I'm making amends to Rybka, we had a small bit of a go.

I think you mean you had a small bit of a goo. It rhymes better.


I wasn't on her either, just sending my understanding of her not knowing the history or my name

My children passed out before the fireworks. The littlest one did not even make it into jammies. He is still wrapped in a towel curled on the bed from after bathtime! Is that wrong? I covered him with a blanket....

So

Who is going to come watch them so I can go?

 

[annaswirls]

twelveoone has exceeded their stored private messages quota and can not accept further messages until they clear some space.


DUDE. Comeon, you can do it.... download your private messages ... I swear it won't hurt.



eh hem.


okay, tell me, do you like delete them one at a time or something? Are you one of those guys that drives on empty, arriving at the gas stations on fumes and a prayer?

 

[Angeline]

I think you mean you had a small bit of a goo. It rhymes better.


I wasn't on her either, just sending my understanding of her not knowing the history or my name

My children passed out before the fireworks. The littlest one did not even make it into jammies. He is still wrapped in a towel curled on the bed from after bathtime! Is that wrong? I covered him with a blanket....

So

Who is going to come watch them so I can go?

I can see them from my deck--isn't that cool?

 

[Liar]

Since I haven't said it in a while:

anna is da bomb

 

[annaswirls]

I can see them from my deck--isn't that cool?

you can see my kids? That is a little freaky.

 

[twelveoone]

twelveoone has exceeded their stored private messages quota and can not accept further messages until they clear some space.


DUDE. Comeon, you can do it.... download your private messages ... I swear it won't hurt.



eh hem.


okay, tell me, do you like delete them one at a time or something? Are you one of those guys that drives on empty, arriving at the gas stations on fumes and a prayer?

I delete them all except yours
Then it hurts

 

[RhymeFairy]

*Bows to The Great Anna*


Anna is a wonderful,
carefree spirit
whom I hope to grow up an be,
"just like her.."

mmhmm *nods head*

Peace~

*Happy Writing to All~*

 

[BooMerengue]

you can see my kids? That is a little freaky.

I can't see your kids (Tho I'd be glad to watch them for you. I adore kids; it's adults I hate) but I did see you in Admit2 the other day, and meant to write and congratulate you, but then I moved from North to South and got distracted.

We really should stir up that Grab A Partner thread again. That was a lot of fun, and instructive, too!

 

[anonamouse]

twelveoone has exceeded their stored private messages quota and can not accept further messages until they clear some space.


DUDE. Comeon, you can do it.... download your private messages ... I swear it won't hurt.



eh hem.


okay, tell me, do you like delete them one at a time or something? Are you one of those guys that drives on empty, arriving at the gas stations on fumes and a prayer?

well lookie here...
annaswirls has exceeded their stored private messages quota and can not accept further messages until they clear some space.

 

[annaswirls]

well lookie here...
annaswirls has exceeded their stored private messages quota and can not accept further messages until they clear some space.

OMG I knew of COURSE it had to be you who got that message as soon as I saw my email reminder!! LOL! I knew it would happen....



tail between my legs!

 

[annaswirls]

well lookie here...
annaswirls has exceeded their stored private messages quota and can not accept further messages until they clear some space.

shouldn't it be he/she clears?

 

[sack]

Why Anna Swirls is so amazing:

1. She maintains a very high level of expertise in her own poems.
2. She's fiercely independent, yet can accept constructive criticism.
3. She supports new poets.
4. Her advice is spare and to the point, no shilly -shallying and no need to resort to the "everything is wonderful, ultra phony posturing" often used in the feedback area and elsewhere by less secure individuals.
5. She clearly has a vision, and continues to explore her long range goals every day, with each exciting new creation.
6. She is extremely intelligent, I bet her IQ is off the charts.
7. She is a genuinely nice person.

There are a few poets in this forum that are up to Jenn's level technically, but none can match her well developed personality and helpful quality, whether it be with an impatient newbie or experienced poet alike. I am simply grateful she exists!!

Thanks for being a positive influence in my life Jenn, it IS appreciated!

Sack

 

[echoes_s]

as always for anna who never stops lending me inspiration and keeps me in awe with her writing and her insurmountable dedication to the Art in all forms from touching to inspiring.

anna swirls

what’s this?
when I taste
I savor
the richness of you
in my mouth

“swirling” it around
dripping from tongue
to the back of throat
then front again

“a nn a”
are the sweetest sounds
of contemplation
and completion
of essence
the tang
of depletion
before swooping another same
sip again

"mmm" is addition
addiction
affliction
the missing of another
nibble of you

 

[RhymeFairy]

Lovely wording here~ To Match it's Attendee~ *Smiles*

as always for anna who never stops lending me inspiration and keeps me in awe with her writing and her insurmountable dedication to the Art in all forms from touching to inspiring.

anna swirls

what’s this?
when I taste
I savor
the richness of you
in my mouth

“swirling” it around
dripping from tongue
to the back of throat
then front again

“a nn a”
are the sweetest sounds
of contemplation
and completion
of essence
the tang
of depletion
before swooping another same
sip again

"mmm" is addition
addiction
affliction
the missing of another
nibble of you

I love this poem. An addicion with affliction ... Nice wording.
Addictive says Me~

 

[Jennifer C]

I love this poem. An addicion with affliction ... Nice wording.
Addictive says Me~

Well said RF, couldn't agree more

 

[BooMerengue]

as always for anna who never stops lending me inspiration and keeps me in awe with her writing and her insurmountable dedication to the Art in all forms from touching to inspiring.

anna swirls

what’s this?
when I taste
I savor
the richness of you
in my mouth

“swirling” it around
dripping from tongue
to the back of throat
then front again

“a nn a”
are the sweetest sounds
of contemplation
and completion
of essence
the tang
of depletion
before swooping another same
sip again

"mmm" is addition
addiction
affliction
the missing of another
nibble of you

Echoes, my good friend... Never ever stop writing. It would be a crime.

 

[twelveoone]

Hello,
anna of the green awning

Why do I feel
like Sweeny amoung the nightengales?
jug jug jug
tereu
jug jug jug
is this too shocking
too porno for you?

or should I write of weepy holes
The hardness of a Zircon
Mad adders taking plunge
at woeful silly wabbits

I am torn, very nearly ripped asunder
and because he's dead
I cannot consult the thunder
SO tell me please, what should I do
Go for Style
OR settle for substance?

Oh anna of comburant words

 

[RhymeFairy]

First Knight

Just had to let ya'll know.

Annas' new poem First Knight is a must read.
I love the imgery ... the thoughts it brings to mind.

Yes, praise her ... Anna is def. a keeper ~!!!

 

[annaswirls]

RhymeFairy, thanks for the plug on my baby dragon poem. I can never tell if what I write will make any connections, glad this one did

1201....

comburent? see I don't even know what that means.

I found out that pruient has two meanings, one of them being itchy, so it is my new favorite adjective describing the many sides of moi-self.

go for style? whose style?
settle for substance? I would say hold onto your sandbags you seem to be doing fine with the combination you have going.

but perhaps don't think so much or try too hard for either
cut the tether
forget the navigation
let it coast along a bit on its own
see where it all goes.

just try to avoid the satellite towers.

okay so what the fuck is comburent?

See I go answering the question without understanding which anna you wanted to answer, comburent, combattant, come-hither or comin' round the mountain?

okay it is time for dictionary.com
comburent I think is a 12th grade word and I have the vocab,
you know
tenth grade

~anna

Hello,
anna of the green awning

Why do I feel
like Sweeny amoung the nightengales?
jug jug jug
tereu
jug jug jug
is this too shocking
too porno for you?

or should I write of weepy holes
The hardness of a Zircon
Mad adders taking plunge
at woeful silly wabbits

I am torn, very nearly ripped asunder
and because he's dead
I cannot consult the thunder
SO tell me please, what should I do
Go for Style
OR settle for substance?

Oh anna of comburant words

 

[annaswirls]

see I must have known down inside that you were referring to my words that support combustion, and that is why I used the hot air metaphor

eh hem

I would like to see a poem about
weeping holes and man made crystals,
rabbits for pets or meat, and bent barrel pistols

the reptile that saved mankind from a life devoid of knowledge
choked innocence like Ivy around the columns of life's college

heheheee

can we have a bad poetry contest? it is actually kind of fun



well damn, I know we never found out
who'll stop the rain?
but someone killed thunder?
that's fucking insane!

 

[twelveoone]

Hello,
anna of the green awning

Why do I feel
like Sweeny amoung the nightengales?
jug jug jug
tereu
jug jug jug
is this too shocking
too porno for you?

or should I write of weepy holes
The hardness of a Zircon
Mad adders taking plunge
at woeful silly wabbits

I am torn, very nearly ripped asunder
and because he's dead
I cannot consult the thunder
SO tell me please, what should I do
Go for Style
OR settle for substance?

Oh anna of comburant words

wheh, wheh, wheh,
I yam wotes I yam

 

[SeattleRain]

wheh, wheh, wheh,
I yam wotes I yam

you ams what ye ams or
are ye what ye eats
or thinks or stinks?

I am guessin stinks
ye can tell lots ebouts a purson by theur smells yes?
my bicep poppin sailor?

 

[twelveoone]

you ams what ye ams or
are ye what ye eats
or thinks or stinks?

I am guessin stinks
ye can tell lots ebouts a purson by theur smells yes?
my bicep poppin sailor?

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what some?