EmilyMiller
Good men did nothing
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Look forward to itSo my attempt, Julian Jones Nurhachis Gem, just published. Think for it is: https://literotica.com/s/juliana-jones-and-nurhachis-gem .
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Look forward to itSo my attempt, Julian Jones Nurhachis Gem, just published. Think for it is: https://literotica.com/s/juliana-jones-and-nurhachis-gem .
Mine is in limbo - my own fault as I noticed a typo at the eleventh hour.Interesting my Dr Jones story which was uploaded yesterday has been "revised" to have been uploaded an hour ago.
There must be gremlins in the system!
Weird, same here. Except it was uploaded on 2/12, and it says 5 hours ago now.Interesting my Dr Jones story which was uploaded yesterday has been "revised" to have been uploaded an hour ago.
There must be gremlins in the system!
Read it, my review is as follows…
Yours was perfect, somehow you fit setup, adventure, betrayal, death, sexual reminiscing, and penetration into 750 words without seeming to rush. It felt like twice that many.Juliana Jones and the Rod of Ra
I tried to keep it old skool - with one obvious anachronism for any gamers out there.
I really want to write more of Juliana.
Emily
Haven’t read. Will. But also kinda busy today.Yours was perfect, somehow you fit setup, adventure, betrayal, death, sexual reminiscing, and penetration into 750 words without seeming to rush. It felt like twice that many.
I only had room to barely hint at off-screen sex, and no penetration happens (unless you count the temple itself!)...
Juliana Jones and the Emerald Fist
I'm more disappointed that the musical inputs have been ignoredRead it, my review is as follows…
Yi wang si-i wa ye kan duoI'm more disappointed that the musical inputs have been ignored
I am calling Dr Jones...you need help.Yi wang si-i wa ye kan duo
Xin li bian yao la jing bao jin tian zhi
Dao
Anything goes.
You are braver than I. Mine was “OK” so I dumped it at the last minute.Just submitted. I dont love it, but I was determined to finish it.
The trick will be literally making it sound like a plan...or a dream...otherwise you will run out wordsGods of erotica help me, I’m thinking of trying this. Julianna recruits some of my semi-retired commando characters to help her secure an artifact from neo-Nazi terrorists and has a celebratory orgy with them afterwards. Now if I can only manage finishing it by next Thursday and keeping it to 750 words…
Nothing to say you can’t write a longer story if it works for you. I’m gonna at some point.Gods of erotica help me, I’m thinking of trying this. Julianna recruits some of my semi-retired commando characters to help her secure an artifact from neo-Nazi terrorists and has a celebratory orgy with them afterwards. Now if I can only manage finishing it by next Thursday and keeping it to 750 words…
Will add to my reading listFinally is out there. Not great.
Who woulda thought she was a doninatrix?
https://literotica.com/s/juliana-jones-and-the-canyon-of-pleasure
Thank you. My best draft has 1464 words and I don't want to cut a single one. I may even be able to lengthen the sex now.Nothing to say you can’t write a longer story if it works for you. I’m gonna at some point.
Emily
Cool - FWIW I really struggle to stick to 750 words with my Juliana story.Thank you. My best draft has 1464 words and I don't want to cut a single one. I may even be able to lengthen the sex now.
This story will feature my first MM action (though there is also FF, hetero, and group action) and go in Fanfiction if accepted. Coming soon- "Julianna Jones & the Inspiring Art."
Yeah, it's rough sticking to a certain length. I did it more by luck with "Invite Accepted" than anything else.Cool - FWIW I really struggle to stick to 750 words with my Juliana story.
Emily