annaswirls
Pointy?
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- Dec 9, 2003
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oh damn, I already have about 30 poems about these hands
and this room
the things on the floor of this room
my mind has already gone
and my heart has been out
for about 2 months now
I might pick something else
that sticks out
and butter it like a roll
but I will need a partner
for that endeavor
certainly I can write
and write and write it is all I do
about how so many women
in my church kept their last name
and in my friends house
there are three
and oh how ordinary this life
this name
this domesticated existence
I need an adventure.
and this room
the things on the floor of this room
my mind has already gone
and my heart has been out
for about 2 months now
I might pick something else
that sticks out
and butter it like a roll
but I will need a partner
for that endeavor
certainly I can write
and write and write it is all I do
about how so many women
in my church kept their last name
and in my friends house
there are three
and oh how ordinary this life
this name
this domesticated existence
I need an adventure.
wildsweetone said:you can write dear.
sit down, focus on the moment. write about your hands poised above the keyboard and typing. write about the room you are sitting in. let your mind go wherever it wills and write your heart out. i guarantee within ten minutes you'll be on a roll with something. if you stop then, look over what you've written, pick something that sticks out and expand on it.
relax and enjoy what happens.