New Poem Recommendations

[HoneyAdored]

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[greenmountaineer]

Guys

If you want something to jump start your day better than a cup of strong coffee, red AlinX's "My Wide Adoring Lips:"

https://www.literotica.com/p/my-wide-adoring-lips

 

[greenmountaineer]

Bliss, A Purgatory

legerdemer spent considerable time editing it in PF&D, but if you'd like to see the final product, go to

https://www.literotica.com/p/bliss-a-purgatory

A lovely poem.

 

[Ashesh9]

Tod' s " I worry boy " is worth a look & comments even though most frequenters of the PFD thread has probably already seen the same here !

 

[Ashesh9]

Benedict's The Wrong Hole is an offering where Alfred Lord Tennyson 's Charge of the Light Brigade collides with Anal Sex to produce a funny , humorous parody .....

 

[wakingDown]

https://www.literotica.com/p/non-feelingness

Ashesh9's '...non-feelingness' is a great poem, in my opinion, on wanting to feel less. I think he pulled it off in a manner that is tough to beat, and is certainly worth the read. I know it made me stop to read it few times, and I'll be going back to it again a few more, at the least.

 

[todski28]

Today's must reads

https://www.literotica.com/p/icon-1 by Ellen Moore the moor she posts the more I like her work

And

https://www.literotica.com/p/pal

by ssennjawa who's work normally doesn't work for me as a reader.

 

[Piscator]

Bathhouse Confessional by erectus123 https://www.literotica.com/p/bathhouse-confessional. An interesting treatment of a very difficult subject, at least to this long lapsed Catholic.

 

[todski28]

https://www.literotica.com/p/more-than-back-you-took-me-in

read it, twice, then a third time, then try not to cry...... by GM brilliant!!!

 

[Ashesh9]

GM's Glossolalia -----a wonderful smorgasbord of colliding concepts !!!

 

[todski28]

Seconded ash


https://www.literotica.com/p/glossolalia-1

Deftly handled erotica, light trigger words more of a true love story with a gentle emotional conclusion. Beautifully rendered the simple statements really set the imagination on a kaelaedoscope run of shifting imagery. Ending in a beautifying erotic twist.

Well done

 

[legerdemer]

GM's Glossolalia -----a wonderful smorgasbord of colliding concepts !!!

Seconded ash


https://www.literotica.com/p/glossolalia-1

Deftly handled erotica, light trigger words more of a true love story with a gentle emotional conclusion. Beautifully rendered the simple statements really set the imagination on a kaelaedoscope run of shifting imagery. Ending in a beautifying erotic twist.

Well done

Very much agree.

 

[legerdemer]

Lyricalli's Delightful Torment is just delightful, lovely in an understated way. Check it out.

 

[wakingDown]

tazz317 put one up recently that I just saw. 'The Outcome'. Stark, lean, aggressive, and driving. The first line like a fishhook aimed at the brain. It's definitely worth the read, in my opinion. Whatever anyone here may think about tazz (I know that there are some varying opinions), I think he put together a poem worth the reading here. Give it a look.

https://www.literotica.com/p/the-outcome

 

[todski28]

Lyricalli's Delightful Torment is just delightful, lovely in an understated way. Check it out.

Scond this.

 

[Piscator]

AlinaNicole's the-other-side - solid

 

[greenmountaineer]

I thought susansnow's "In the Style of Bukowski"

https://www.literotica.com/p/in-the-style-of-bukowski

and WillotheWisp's "Untitled"

https://www.literotica.com/p/untitled-139

were both well written.

 

[WillOtheWisp]

I thought susansnow's "In the Style of Bukowski"

https://www.literotica.com/p/in-the-style-of-bukowski

and WillotheWisp's "Untitled"

https://www.literotica.com/p/untitled-139

were both well written.

Thanks Green, although in the case of mine, I'm not sure I agree. That, and the others in the clump that I recently submitted were more "doodles" then poems; I didn't actually mean for anyone to see them. But after that fourth glass of wine one evening, it seemed like a good idea! I think I have to drink less. Or more. But again, thank you.

And I second your rec on susansnow's work.

 

[Magnetron]

Thanks Green, although in the case of mine, I'm not sure I agree. That, and the others in the clump that I recently submitted were more "doodles" then poems; I didn't actually mean for anyone to see them. But after that fourth glass of wine one evening, it seemed like a good idea! I think I have to drink less. Or more. But again, thank you.

More.

It's a bit unpolished, but definately worth recommending.

 

[butters]

I thought susansnow's "In the Style of Bukowski"

https://www.literotica.com/p/in-the-style-of-bukowski

and WillotheWisp's "Untitled"

https://www.literotica.com/p/untitled-139

were both well written.

Thanks Green, although in the case of mine, I'm not sure I agree. That, and the others in the clump that I recently submitted were more "doodles" then poems; I didn't actually mean for anyone to see them. But after that fourth glass of wine one evening, it seemed like a good idea! I think I have to drink less. Or more. But again, thank you.

And I second your rec on susansnow's work.

i'm very glad you had that fourth glass

i found it a very accessible, cohesive, well-made piece,with that final line a shiver of 'is this all there is?'

 

[greenmountaineer]

EllenMore does a fine job (as usual) with "Lives of Famous Whores:"

https://www.literotica.com/p/lives-of-famous-whores

 

[legerdemer]

EllenMore does a fine job (as usual) with "Lives of Famous Whores:"

https://www.literotica.com/p/lives-of-famous-whores

Very nice, indeed. Thanks for the pointer, gm.

 

[greenmountaineer]

GuiltyPleasure says so much with so few words with A Bone in the Leg.

 

[Piscator]

Came across this in craigslsit Missed connections

autumn charm in december (parkdale) http://toronto.craigslist.ca/tor/mis/5348833706.html

 

[Ashesh9]

How I Wish
byMysteria27©
Let's Have Sex For A Little While
byMysteria27
both these 2 offerings by Mysteria 27 has excellent rhyme structure whether you agree with the kinks involved or not !!!