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[Mastered_again]

Proclivities Part 8 has posted.
Some role reversal in this one

https://literotica.com/s/proclivities-pt-08-the-experiment

 

[Bob_Aganoush]

The latest in my series of interviews with Literotica authors has just been posted, this one with Imstillfun. Check it out here

If you have any idea of an author who would be good for an interview, please DM me. Thanks.

Bob

 

[Priscilla_June]

I have released 2 chapters of a new sci fi series called May Rising that follows a small town girl as she is cast out into the world (and beyond) of the 22nd century. Follow her as she makes her way to survive extra-planetary conflict and explore the unknown!

Check it out:
May Rising Chapter 1
May Rising Chapter 2

 

[Mastered_again]

I have released 2 chapters of a new sci fi series called May Rising that follows a small town girl as she is cast out into the world (and beyond) of the 22nd century. Follow her as she makes her way to survive extra-planetary conflict and explore the unknown!

Check it out:
May Rising Chapter 1
May Rising Chapter 2

I read chapter 1. Enjoyed it thoroughly. The descriptions of the church, the town and characters are precise as are the interplay of the characters and the emotions of Priscilla May in her determination for independence. Thanks and I'll definitely take in Chapter 2.

Sci-fi may now be something I'll have to consider writing.

 

[Priscilla_June]

I read chapter 1. Enjoyed it thoroughly. The descriptions of the church, the town and characters are precise as are the interplay of the characters and the emotions of Priscilla May in her determination for independence. Thanks and I'll definitely take in Chapter 2.

Sci-fi may now be something I'll have to consider writing.

Aw yay! i’m glad that you enjoyed it! I was kinda worried that my writing/story was too slow off the bat and that folks got turned off. But in glad someone liked that

Let me know what you think of chapter 2!

 

[Mastered_again]

Aw yay! i’m glad that you enjoyed it! I was kinda worried that my writing/story was too slow off the bat and that folks got turned off. But in glad someone liked that

Let me know what you think of chapter 2!

I left a comment on chapter 2. Enjoyed it as well.

Don't worry, my stories are more than straight to the sex. I like background and character development along with descriptions of the setting. Some readers might find that too much effort, but I'm doing okay. However, it seems that my one erotic coup!ings story is too vanilla for most. Que sera sera.

Don't let others tell you what or how to write, unless it's unreadable owing to poor spelling, grammar and other pitfalls of bad writing. Certainly not an issue with yours.

 

[Whanmore]

I posted Chapter 2 of my new series Deviant Dorm Series! Took some early critiques into consideration and certainly hope to improve even more. The story title kinda explains it all. Its an Erotic Coupling story about some college students in Southern Indiana.

 

[Just_stories]

After taking so much from this site and giving back so little for 10+ years, I have submitted a new story, "Making Friends on Vacation". A classic plot (shy wife having fun letting loose), but with a decent amount of character development. It's around 20K words, so make a drink and settle in. Spoiler alert, she has sex.

And hopefully I've grabbed the record for, "Most time between becoming a member and submitting a story", if anyone is keeping track of that.

Finally, don't forget to thank your editors. Without them, this story originally looked like a dictionary that had been put in a blender set on, "frappé".

 

[April602]

Hello
New to this so hope I don’t mess it up. First stories.
I have written a couple of true stories of my adventures while responding to a Craigslist Ad. Remember those?
Here are the stories

https://literotica.com/s/student-aid

https://literotica.com/s/student-aid-ch-02

Love to read your comments and please rate my story if you like it….I need the encouragement…lol
Feel free to follow me also as I have submitted another story and hopefully it will get published soon.
All my stories are true.

Thanks
April602

 

[Mastered_again]

Hello
New to this so hope I don’t mess it up. First stories.
I have written a couple of true stories of my adventures while responding to a Craigslist Ad. Remember those?
Here are the stories

https://literotica.com/s/student-aid

https://literotica.com/s/student-aid-ch-02

Love to read your comments and please rate my story if you like it….I need the encouragement…lol
Feel free to follow me also as I have submitted another story and hopefully it will get published soon.
All my stories are true.

Thanks
April602

Congratulations on your first stories. I read both parts of Student Aid. April is certainly adventurous and as first stories they're good.

However, one technical issue. Please don't combine the dialog of two characters into the same paragraph. Just makes following the story easier to read.

The sex scenes are great and I particularly enjoyed April's awakening in chapter 2. That said, I find her slipping into it bit too readily. A little more reluctance and convincing by Paul and Jim would have gone a long way.

Keep writing!

 

[April602]

Congratulations on your first stories. I read both parts of Student Aid. April is certainly adventurous and as first stories they're good.

However, one technical issue. Please don't combine the dialog of two characters into the same paragraph. Just makes following the story easier to read.

The sex scenes are great and I particularly enjoyed April's awakening in chapter 2. That said, I find her slipping into it bit too readily. A little more reluctance and convincing by Paul and Jim would have gone a long way.

Keep writing!

Thank you for the great feedback. Will keep that in mind going forward.
A

 

[Mastered_again]

Thank you for the great feedback. Will keep that in mind going forward.
A

Most welcome. New here, so to speak, and trying to get acquainted.

 

[April602]

Most welcome. New here, so to speak, and trying to get acquainted.

Feel free to follow me as I will you…if you don’t mind

 

[EnglishTeacher]

Blood Passion Chapter 8 is up and live: https://literotica.com/s/blood-passion-ch-08
If you enjoy the supernatural, vampires and incest, enjoy the read.

 

[Priscilla_June]

Just posted my fourth story here on Lit! If you are in to pregnancy and a little steamy office action then this is for you. Based on the ratings thus far this morning readers love it and give it 5 stars but unfortunately it seems I caught a few 1 stars from folks who disagree with its premises

https://literotica.com/s/maternity-paper-chase

So check it out, I think if your in to that sort of thing you’ll love it!

 

[Mastered_again]

I gave it a read, and although the premise is indeed controversial, you wrote it very well, particularly both the physical and emotional effects of pregnancy. The sex was steamy too.

I did leave a comment and hopefully the moderators will post it soon. Five stars too, but I'm sure there will bombers who can resist their righteous indignation that you've insulted their sensibilities. Screw 'em. Keep writing.

 

[Priscilla_June]

I gave it a read, and although the premise is indeed controversial, you wrote it very well, particularly both the physical and emotional effects of pregnancy. The sex was steamy too.

I did leave a comment and hopefully the moderators will post it soon. Five stars too, but I'm sure there will bombers who can resist their righteous indignation that you've insulted their sensibilities. Screw 'em. Keep writing.

Thank you, phew, im glad to hear I didn’t just slap some words together haphazardly, kindof a shame folks will read something (or maybe just click to low rate it) instead of just moving on… but thanks again for the feedback

 

[monkeyfish]

https://literotica.com/s/edge-of-the-world-ch-01

Student and teacher erotic encounter, takes a minute for the naughty to start. My first attempt at the genre, ready to know how I did.

 

[JuanSeiszFitzHall]

“A Boyfriend Shirt Tale”

https://literotica.com/s/a-boyfriend-shirt-tale

Posted today in Exhibitionist and Voyeur is the story of a young woman and man just becoming sex buddies. With sparse experience, they enjoy first tries at intimate silliness. When Lois puts on Rob’s shirt, their fun gives her an idea. The idea becomes a webcam show in which Lois, as ‘Shirley,’ wears shirts sent by her viewers. Rob does the video and web work, using nobody else, as they hope to keep their real identities secure. Working together on the cam show brings Lois and Rob closer together, but her use of boyfriend shirts from other men might drive them apart. This is a complete story, in ten thousand words. Enjoy!

 

[Salirophilia]

For the first time in its history, Wamford Academy is admitting a female student. But this new arrival brings plenty of challenges. For example, due to school regulations, she is required to wear her schoolgirl uniform in the pool during swimming practice. But due to a loophole, she can wear her skirt as short as she likes (which is very short!). Find out more by reading these Emails from Wamford Academy.

 

[CurvySassyAJ]

The third chapter of my Kris series is up.

https://literotica.com/s/princess-kris-ch-03-the-throne


Working slowly on what will be the final chapter now.

 

[Bazzle]

A little short "dark side ish" smoking fetish story

https://literotica.com/s/the-second-husband

 

[Mastered_again]

Proclivities Part 9 has posted. George and Linda engage in some role playing. Linda's bondage fantasy is fulfilled.

Make my Mothers' Day, give it read and a comment (even belatedly). Thanks

https://literotica.com/s/proclivities-pt-09-psychoanalysis

 

[mmcix]

Relatively new to writing, but tried my hand at a multi-part sci-fi story. Romance and wormhole technology with a dash of selfcest (sort of) and a pinch of body part swapping.

If interested, the first part of four is here:
http://literotica.com/s/wormholes-endless-possibility-ch-01

The story is now complete, the fourth and final chapter was published today. I'd love some feedback.

 

[AWhoopsieDaisy]

Identity Crisis Chapter Two!

Eddie Brock has some sexy tentacle fun in the shower with Venom.