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Hi. My first story was just published. I'd be interested in hearing what people thought. Hope you Enjoy!!

Bouncing Back

A story about a college student who has just broken up and meets a fun young woman at a cafeteria breakfast.
 
Do you want to read romance? Perhaps you'd like a story about a married couple doing married couple things? And sex, I’m sure you want to read about that, right? Like, that's why you're here, that's not even something you can deny. But do you like a story to go along with the sex?

Maybe my story Searching for Perfection is what you’re looking for? Give it a crack, see if it tickles your fancy…

Shrugging my shoulders I turn, walking into the bedroom, switching the light off, turning our bedside lamps to a soft glow. I’m undressed, hearing the toilet flush, water running at the sink, electric toothbrush noises, then the ensuite light goes out and Bridget stands in front of me, naked except for her glasses. Her lips part ever so slightly, her eyes on mine, and I bite my bottom lip, but Bridget’s hopeless at keeping a straight face and breaks into a smile.

“Beautiful,” I whisper, admiring her magnificence, gorgeous hair falling around her shoulders, her dark eyes catching the soft light from the lamp, smile lighting up the room, breasts round and firm, nipples lovely and hard, body muscular but feminine, legs going forever, inverted triangle of hair between them.

“Sorry I haven’t shaved for you,” she says, probably noting where my eyes settled. “But I did my legs earlier.”

“Don’t be sorry, you know I don’t mind. Though, your legs were a bit like sandpaper last night.”

Smiling, she climbs on the bed, approaching on all fours, over the top of me, her breasts hanging between us, and I reach up, gently placing my hand on her waist. She leans her face to mine, our lips not quite touching, scent of minty toothpaste, then she grins and whispers, “I hear you’re a cunning linguist.”

“I’ve been called worse things.”

She struggles not to laugh. “I bet you have. A pussy muncher, an eater of cunts…”

“Whoa, hold up,” I say. “Not plural cunts, one cunt, I’ve only eaten one cunt over the past fifteen years.”

“You know I hate the word cunt,” she says, emphasising the word cunt. We’re both biting our lips, trying so hard not to laugh. It’s like we’re in our twenties again and I love it.
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Hello all. Fairly recently started submitting my scribblings here, with only one published story (chapters) thus far. I realise view count is a fickle beast, as is feedback but sadly real life got between my 1st and 2nd chapters so possibly now suffers from temporal indifference.

I just submitted the 3rd chapter, closer to the 2nd so hopefully it will gain a few new sets of eyes. What I really need is some feedback on the style and content. Style may be less relevant when dealing with erotic fantasy but I like nuance of emotion and tension in the stories I read so try and reflect that in my own writing.

Anyway, the writer is at the mercy of his or her audience.....

Chanel and Ashley - A Love Story

Many thanks for your time.
 
PrincessArianrhod said:
Hello all. Fairly recently started submitting my scribblings here, with only one published story (chapters) thus far. I realise view count is a fickle beast, as is feedback but sadly real life got between my 1st and 2nd chapters so possibly now suffers from temporal indifference.

I just submitted the 3rd chapter, closer to the 2nd so hopefully it will gain a few new sets of eyes. What I really need is some feedback on the style and content. Style may be less relevant when dealing with erotic fantasy but I like nuance of emotion and tension in the stories I read so try and reflect that in my own writing.

Anyway, the writer is at the mercy of his or her audience.....

Chanel and Ashley - A Love Story

Many thanks for your time.
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I released my story in chapters as well. View count definitely is a fickle beast. As my chapters were published, the views dropped for each chapter with my last chapter being the least viewed but yet with the highest score. I learned that you cannot please everyone, as long as you are satisfied with you finished work that's all that matters.
 
PrincessArianrhod said:
Hello all. Fairly recently started submitting my scribblings here, with only one published story (chapters) thus far. I realise view count is a fickle beast, as is feedback but sadly real life got between my 1st and 2nd chapters so possibly now suffers from temporal indifference.

I just submitted the 3rd chapter, closer to the 2nd so hopefully it will gain a few new sets of eyes. What I really need is some feedback on the style and content. Style may be less relevant when dealing with erotic fantasy but I like nuance of emotion and tension in the stories I read so try and reflect that in my own writing.

Anyway, the writer is at the mercy of his or her audience.....

Chanel and Ashley - A Love Story

Many thanks for your time.
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After submitting 30+ stories I've finally realized that there is very little rhyme or reason to either viewing count, scores or feedback.
The ones that I feel read the best and tell the best stories are not always the ones that do best.
As others have said, try to enjoy the writing process and be proud of what you write.
Enjoy the positive feedback and ignore ignorant and hurtful (nearly always anonymous) comments.
 
EarlyDawn1973 said:
I released my story in chapters as well. View count definitely is a fickle beast. As my chapters were published, the views dropped for each chapter with my last chapter being the least viewed but yet with the highest score. I learned that you cannot please everyone, as long as you are satisfied with you finished work that's all that matters.
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This makes complete logical sense to me.
If I see a new story posted and it's chapter 12 of something, I'm unlikely to view it. If I like the premise then maybe I'll take a look but chances are I'll go find chapter 1. On the flip side if it's the 12th part of something I'm following then if I bother to read it chances are that I like the story and so I'm already biased towards giving it a positive rating.
 
harmonicks said:
This makes complete logical sense to me.
If I see a new story posted and it's chapter 12 of something, I'm unlikely to view it. If I like the premise then maybe I'll take a look but chances are I'll go find chapter 1. On the flip side if it's the 12th part of something I'm following then if I bother to read it chances are that I like the story and so I'm already biased towards giving it a positive rating.
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I do the same thing. I have read many latter chapters and then go back and read the whole story from start to finish. The one thing that I will do however is if I read a story all the way through I will favor it and give it a five star rating. If I get board part of the way through and stop reading the story I don't rate it but I will favor it and mark it to read later.
 
If you like a story with a a lot of different characters who mingle between relationships I've got a Story for You.
 
Hi everyone, figured I'd post my first story here in case anyone is interested. It's a bit of a slow burn, but I've always been more of a fan of those stories than those that quickly rush into sex. I had not planned on doing a part 2, but the overwhelming response so far has led me into the direction of a part 2. The gist of the story is mother/son where a series of meetups lead into dates, and the conservative mom slowly morphs into a cougar.

https://literotica.com/s/dating-mom
 
LurksForFun said:
Hello Everyone. I've posted a sequel/2nd chapter to my first story "Bouncing Back." You can find it below! Thanks to all who have read and given feedback! Hope you enjoy!

https://literotica.com/s/bouncing-back-ch-02
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I just read the second installment and loved it. I gave both the first and second installments 5 stars and if I could I would give both of them 10 stars. I love romantic stories. Looking forward to a third part.
 
Hello everyone,

I'm posting a story after a break of one year. Finally got some time to write erotica again.

This time I'm trying my hand at a CFNM(Clothed Female Nude Male) themed series.

The story contains light malesub, femdom, humiliation, masturbation, etc.

Enjoy Bare-assed and Embarrassed Ch. 01!
 
Hioooooohi !

Dive into Olga and Richard's sexy journey across North-America. A passionate romance alongside many hot encounters await you ! Road-X-Trip is an ongoing multi-chapters novel that I'll be updating regularly.

Chapter One : The Airport
"Olga and Richard have been waiting their flight for a few hours now. And there's still so much time to kill ! Too much for the fidgety Olga. She wants to have fun ! Suddently, she has an idea and drags Richard into the nearest toilets..."

Tags : BJ, Oral, HJ, MF, Voy, Public, Exhib, OC
 
MahMan said:
Hioooooohi !

Dive into Olga and Richard's sexy journey across North-America. A passionate romance alongside many hot encounters await you ! Road-X-Trip is an ongoing multi-chapters novel that I'll be updating regularly.

Chapter One : The Airport
"Olga and Richard have been waiting their flight for a few hours now. And there's still so much time to kill ! Too much for the fidgety Olga. She wants to have fun ! Suddently, she has an idea and drags Richard into the nearest toilets..."

Tags : BJ, Oral, HJ, MF, Voy, Public, Exhib, OC
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sounds interesting will have to read it when I finish the series i am reading right now.
 
The Chickadee Connection

Another stranger story, this one an erotic encounter in the woods.

Then, as if it was the most obvious thing in the world for a man to do, Deborah watched him as he undid his boots, took them and his socks off, and pulled the jeans down from his legs. She watched him as he made a small bed from the jeans and his shirt, and lay back on them.

And in her watching place, caught now in a spell, Deborah did the same. She took her boots and socks off, pulled down her shorts and panties, and lay on the grass on her belly, watching him. She wriggled, and opened her legs, opened her pussy wide, and entered herself with her fingers.

She saw his hand move slowly over his cock, soft in a curve around his balls, and she saw how his cock thickened, straightened, and in not much time at all, was erect, long against his belly. Thick, long and straight. Deborah wanted it in her. Her fingers were a poor substitute, but she filled herself as deep as she could with two fingers, her other hand fierce on a nipple. She fucked herself as she watched his hand slowly move along his cock, up and around his cock head, down and around his balls.
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AwkwardMD said:
I finished a new story. It's a stand alone, but it follows my previous stories Attack Decay Sustain Release and The Beast In Me.

It's called Sidechain, and it's the best thing I've ever written.
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I haven't looked at this new one yet. But I want to say, your "Orchid" was awfully damn good, and a very high bar for any "best thing you've written" to clear. 🙂
 
Hioohi, it’s MahMan again !

#SUPER PACK : DOUBLE RELEASE#
Chapter Two : Gliding interlude
Chapter Three : Concessions

*Voiceover* "In the second and third installments of ROAD-X-TRIP: Olga and Richard have taken off for North America. After a moment of respite and contemplation aboard the plane, they finally set foot in Montreal. No time to stop, though: they have an appointment at a second-hand car dealership to pick up a motor home. But, as soon as they arrive, they realize that the vehicle they had reserved has been sold! Olga will have to use her charms to get compensation from the unscrupulous seller…"

Chapter Tags: HJ, Breasplay, MF, Humil, Sub, Torment, OC, Young/Old, WIP
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Dive into Olga and Richard's sexy journey across North-America. A passionate romance alongside many hot encounters await you ! Road-X-Trip is an ongoing multi-chapters novel that I'll be updated regularly. From now on you'll be able to review/ talk about and follow the story from this thread where I'll be updating you on the latest releases ! See you there!

Xoxo MahMan
 
Hi all! I've lurked around Literotica for some time, but finally made an account to work on submitting some of my writing and build a little self-esteem. This is my first time publishing anything anywhere, so I'm kinda nervous but anxious for feedback even though I know it's not a lot to go on just yet.

This story is about a male vampire, highly successful businessman by day with a multimillion dollar empire, submissive by night on his knees for a mysterious Master whose identity's secrecy is protected by their contract.

Title: Leather And Fangs
Category: BDSM
https://literotica.com/s/leather-and-fangs

I'm anxious for feedback of any kind, whether it's regarding the story content, premise, or actual prose - I excitedly await your responses!
 
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