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My first foray as a writer. It's a short standalone story posted in Romance. After an exhausting day at work Kate's husband Rob spoils her with a warm bath and physical pleasure.

https://literotica.com/s/a-hot-soak

I'd appreciate any feedback you can give and definitely some constructive criticism about writing style or pitfalls I've fallen into.
 
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A 2k word story is pretty short but I like it! Sometimes I get discouraged when the story is several pages long. It's nice to have a refreshing story like this!
 
Going Back to School. Erotic Couplings. 13 pages

Guy retires from the military. moves back to his old hometown to take a position at the local university. There he meets a cute co-ed and a sexy professor.
 
Recent Divorcee moves to Austin and starts life over. There, he meets three amazing women, all based on three of my favorite Literotica Voce Actresses. Erotic Couplings. 3 pages

Welcome to Austin
 
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My latest story continues to explore themes of deceit, betrayal, lust, love and the corruption that stems from both:

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-un-niversary

It has a pretty stupid typo in the second line, unluckily for me, but—outside that—would love any feedback anyone has to give. Plus, anything else you may have found noteworthy about the story.
 
AmberSolis said:
Just published my 18th story on Literotica, a lesbian rom-com entitled,

"That's Not Real Love"

https://literotica.com/s/thats-not-real-love

An 18-year-old college freshman is shown that much of what she has been taught about female relationships is entirely wrong, when her friends teach her to open her heart and her legs.

Hope you all enjoy it!
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Loved it! Well-written, great fun and in parts exciting, even though a group of college girls at a sleepover isn't the most sexy context for me. 🙂
 
ColinPiper said:
My first ever story on Literotica, Deep Inside Pippa, has been posted in the Anal category. Around 2,000 words. Nothing too involved in terms of plot or conflict, just finding my feet with a short dirty tale. I'd still be grateful for any thoughts/feedback, especially from other authors. Thanks.
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With such an unlikable protagonist, you're fighting an uphill battle. You'll need more than a cardboard 'dirty girl' and an unimaginative description of anal sex to still win over your readers after that. Just my two cents. (With my apologies if the protagonist is an accurate description of you. 😏)
 
I finally have a new story out. Now that the little mix-up was cleared up. So here is what my editor said about my story, "I like your story because I haven't seen a really good one until now about a real (MFF) threesome figuring out a life together." It's a funny, erotic, touching short story. It's about 2 best friends that will do anything for each other. WINK WINK. ;);) I'm kidding... or am I? Guess you will have to read it to find out. https://literotica.com/s/part-of-the-show
 
The third installment of my anthology series called Portmanteau has just dropped

The latest installment, entitled Portmanteau: Gone Hollywood, has just gone live. Needless to say, I'm excited to get some feedback.

Each installment of Portmanteau is a collection of three stand-alone erotic short stories, all loosely associated with each other. All three stories in this installment center around. The stories are all based on real people or real events that occurred during my time living in the area. Elements of each of the stories make appearances in the other two stories. It makes for a fun read.

The fun part of these installments is there is no required reading order. Since each of the three stories in each installment can stand alone, you can read the installments or the story's within the installments in any order you choose.

Another reason for this post is to introduce portmanteau storytelling to the erotica community. A portmanteau story opens with a vignette from one of the stories, then begins the first story, pauses at its midpoint, tells a second story, then a third, then returns to the first story to complete it. These kinds of stories tend to have a cinematic quality, with elements of each of the stories making appearances in the other two tales.

Here are the two other installments released earlier this year:
One last note, I post under the erotic couplings category since that tends to cover 90% of the material in the stories. With this installment, I included a list of tags in the body of the text to give readers a heads-up as to what to expect. Each of the three stories culminates with intense erotic scenes based on true sexual liaisons set against fictional events.

Thanks to you all for supporting someone new to this venue.

Wendy Trilby
 
Just started a new series where I'm exploring each of the five senses (one per story) and how they relate to our arousal and enjoyment of sex.

The first five stories will be about characters discovering that link, and the next five will be about characters immersing themselves in the enjoyment of those senses.

The first one is up and called Pleasure's Scent.
I just submitted Pleasure's Taste this morning.

https://www.literotica.com/s/pleasures-scent
 
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