Non Poetry Posts from the Suddenly Thread

[Tathagata]

Re: Re: For Anna

oooohhhh!!! thats pretty, will you do me next?

Lol
oh baby I will

 

[tungtied2u]

Re: For Maria

I see her
kneeling in fertile earth
hands blackened
with nurturing
coaxing
pleading
life
out of tired soil

a streak
across her forehead
where she swiped at sweat
and she coos
hums
recites
chants
archaic words
of growth

she turns her pain
into life
and words
of splendor
wonder
innocence lost
lust
light
and simple
coffee at dawn

she looks out
over her children
begs the heavens for rain
and settles
content
on the porch swing
to watch the world
spin


Mother goddess
garden sprite
bedroom enticer
weaver of spells
bringer of life

Beautiful Tath

And deservedly so.

 

[Tathagata]

Re: Re: For Maria

Beautiful Tath

And deservedly so.

Thank you Sir

They are both very special women

 

[Maria2394]

Re: For Maria

I see her
kneeling in fertile earth
hands blackened
with nurturing
coaxing
pleading
life
out of tired soil

a streak
across her forehead
where she swiped at sweat
and she coos
hums
recites
chants
archaic words
of growth

she turns her pain
into life
and words
of splendor
wonder
innocence lost
lust
light
and simple
coffee at dawn

she looks out
over her children
begs the heavens for rain
and settles
content
on the porch swing
to watch the world
spin


Mother goddess
garden sprite
bedroom enticer
weaver of spells
bringer of life

OMG, Tath, that is just simply wonderful, thank you So very much

and to think, all I was asking for was a quickie in the closet!! thanks dear friend, that poem is just perfect

 

[Tathagata]

Re: Re: For Maria

OMG, Tath, that is just simply wonderful, thank you So very much

and to think, all I was asking for was a quickie in the closet!! thanks dear friend, that poem is just perfect

Oh NOW you tell me


most welcome

 

[echoes_s]

really bad idea...or something


uhmm, sorry, I had meant what I tried to write tonguetied, not what you wrote

ahhh, erase me!

 

[normal jean]

Wisteria languidly lays uponmy arbor
Filling the evening air with it's fine perfume
Purple passiom soothing and soft

Stargazer, flushed white petals as if caught in some
naughty deed,
thick syrup dripping from your stamen
Marking with her auburn pollen
those who make advances towards her

Flame azalea- burning orange
begging attention
Fire, fire
Look here now!

Bearded iris purple and yellow,
long lean and delicate
Brush my fuzz against your cheek
You'll be mine

Rhododendron
russet, purple and pink
Bursting forth with colors like a forth of Julty
fireworks, astouding and captivating

Climbing roses
bloom upon bloom
petal upon petal
Curling back
Layer upon layer
Revealing a fullness
and richneess
hard to fathom

Sweet magnolia
Nightimes gift from the south
Sweet intoxicating scent
Velvety petals to wrap around you

Such is my garden
Rich and varied
Gentle, strong , soft, full
and fragrant

So are our poets
Lucky us
Lucky me

this is a beautiful poem sounds almost like you have visited maria's garden, except she doesnt have any irises, a vole, or a mole or something with beady eyes ate the rhizomes, bad critters, bad I say!!

I consider myself the lucky one to be here reading and learning, from all these gifted writers

 

[echoes_s]

Wisteria languidly lays uponmy arbor
Filling the evening air with it's fine perfume
Purple passiom soothing and soft

Stargazer, flushed white petals as if caught in some
naughty deed,
thick syrup dripping from your stamen
Marking with her auburn pollen
those who make advances towards her

Flame azalea- burning orange
begging attention
Fire, fire
Look here now!

Bearded iris purple and yellow,
long lean and delicate
Brush my fuzz against your cheek
You'll be mine

Rhododendron
russet, purple and pink
Bursting forth with colors like a forth of Julty
fireworks, astouding and captivating

Climbing roses
bloom upon bloom
petal upon petal
Curling back
Layer upon layer
Revealing a fullness
and richneess
hard to fathom

Sweet magnolia
Nightimes gift from the south
Sweet intoxicating scent
Velvety petals to wrap around you

Such is my garden
Rich and varied
Gentle, strong , soft, full
and fragrant

So are our poets
Lucky us
Lucky me

nice to meet you normal jean, I have been remiss visiting nor reading for a while, but I see I have missed some amazing and beautifully picturesque artist's writings.
i apologize, this is

 

[Maria2394]

nice to meet you normal jean, I have been remiss visiting nor reading for a while, but I see I have missed some amazing and beautifully picturesque artist's writings.
i apologize, this is

ohhh echoes!!! hey, I ve missed you..
I'll tell jean you said hello, I think she's still in seattles closet, prolly asleep by now sniffing panties or dirty shoes

she is me, darlin, just kinda silly and a whole lot younger

 

[Tathagata]

sniffing panties or dirty shoes
[/color]

Ya know............

ah fuck never mind

 

[Maria2394]

Ya know............

ah fuck never mind

umm, Tath, you know what? the expression o n your Av's face like, totally matches your comment

and as for panties, we dont wear them, but I am waaay past the novel panty sniff stage, its just new to her, let her have her fun..one day she'llget a really funky pair, prolly with some gross skids and that will cure her forever!!!

( isnt that a pleasant image?)

 

[Tathagata]

oh now

this is exquisite

Or the grass
sprout of baby green
a brush of boot would
bruise it dark
yet paints flourished dew
a blink of passed tight
sprinkled light
or soft coolness
breathing, feeding
meaning

 

[Tathagata]

umm, Tath, you know what? the expression o n your Av's face like, totally matches your comment

and as for panties, we dont wear them, but I am waaay past the novel panty sniff stage, its just new to her, let her have her fun..one day she'llget a really funky pair, prolly with some gross skids and that will cure her forever!!!

( isnt that a pleasant image?)

yes That's half the reason i chose this av
lol


ummmmmmm
that's an image i'll keep till death.......
Lol

 

[echoes_s]

Re: oh now

this is exquisite

Thank you Tath, I can only seem to come up with half poems
one verse, but can't do anything else with it.save 'em for later

 

[Tathagata]

Re: Re: oh now

Thank you Tath, I can only seem to come up with half poems
one verse, but can't do anything else with it.save 'em for later

Lol

no no
the poem was wonderful
but that verse
just blew me away



save all those half poems and put em all together and submit it as a " stream of consciousness" work

 

[echoes_s]

Re: Re: Re: oh now

Lol

no no
the poem was wonderful
but that verse
just blew me away



save all those half poems and put em all together and submit it as a " stream of consciousness" work

I claim the 5th amendment here

maybe I should did up those other half poems then

lol, then I see your last statement....

 

[echoes_s]

and thank you Tath
I appreciate this from you.

 

[Tathagata]

and thank you Tath
I appreciate this from you.

tis true
and you are welcome

 

[Syndra Lynn]

Re: For Maria

I see her
kneeling in fertile earth
hands blackened
with nurturing
coaxing
pleading
life
out of tired soil

a streak
across her forehead
where she swiped at sweat
and she coos
hums
recites
chants
archaic words
of growth

she turns her pain
into life
and words
of splendor
wonder
innocence lost
lust
light
and simple
coffee at dawn

she looks out
over her children
begs the heavens for rain
and settles
content
on the porch swing
to watch the world
spin


Mother goddess
garden sprite
bedroom enticer
weaver of spells
bringer of life

Damn, T! Stop my heart. This is wonderful. Thanks.

 

[Tathagata]

Re: Re: For Maria

Damn, T! Stop my heart. This is wonderful. Thanks.

I can recognize a goddess when I see one
; )
and you all move me

 

[Tathagata]

Re: Yosemite

I have been to the cathedral of God
and found Her home.
She threw open Her arms in welcome,
anointed my soul with the smell of warm pine,
lifted my spirit on the wings of eagles.

I stood in awe of Her sanctuary.
Where architecture of man might use stained glass,
waterfalls wrapped in rainbow ribbons
catch the light
draw your eyes to their beauty.

Hand chiseled walls of pure granite,
a thousand stories high,
delicately painted over millions of years
by fire and ice, hardship and love,
draw tears from my eyes.

And in the cracks the earth gives footing
to manzanita, pine and oak
where She dabbles in the ancient,
patient art of bonsai
on a megalithic scale.

An offering of sweat seemed proper
and on the mountainside was proffered.
She held my hand and lent me strength
as I climbed and climbed into thin air
to overlook the full, unimaginable grandeur.

I try to imagine the crushing, grinding
pressure of the massive weight of glaciers.
Is that what one must bear to gain
this depth and breadth of serenity?
Or may I simply borrow some?

I peel away my skin of everyday
and lie upon the shining granite,
my body offered up
to the God of the sun
who comes to worship in me.

Welcome back from heaven Sis
: )

feel renewed??

 

[echoes_s]

Re: Yosemite

I have been to the cathedral of God
and found Her home.
She threw open Her arms in welcome,
anointed my soul with the smell of warm pine,
lifted my spirit on the wings of eagles.

I stood in awe of Her sanctuary.
Where architecture of man might use stained glass,
waterfalls wrapped in rainbow ribbons
catch the light
draw your eyes to their beauty.

Hand chiseled walls of pure granite,
a thousand stories high,
delicately painted over millions of years
by fire and ice, hardship and love,
draw tears from my eyes.

And in the cracks the earth gives footing
to manzanita, pine and oak
where She dabbles in the ancient,
patient art of bonsai
on a megalithic scale.

An offering of sweat seemed proper
and on the mountainside was proffered.
She held my hand and lent me strength
as I climbed and climbed into thin air
to overlook the full, unimaginable grandeur.

I try to imagine the crushing, grinding
pressure of the massive weight of glaciers.
Is that what one must bear to gain
this depth and breadth of serenity?
Or may I simply borrow some?

I peel away my skin of everyday
and lie upon the shining granite,
my body offered up
to the God of the sun
who comes to worship in me.

absolutely beautiful. I wouldn't change a thing, this is unimaginable the way you expressed this.

 

[Syndra Lynn]

Re: Re: Yosemite

Welcome back from heaven Sis
: )

feel renewed??

I can walk on water.

Syn

 

[Syndra Lynn]

Re: Re: Yosemite

absolutely beautiful. I wouldn't change a thing, this is unimaginable the way you expressed this.

Why, thank you lovely one. I am far too anal not to edit before posting, but I kinda like it, too!

Syn

 

[Tathagata]

Re: Re: Re: Yosemite

I can walk on water.

Syn

Naked??