OOC for "the River Runs Red"

[kittenofdeath]

KOD, just get naked

it works! Honest...

tempting idea, very tempting

 

[Sweetp4u]

It would definitely spice things up! Well maybe, VT might also bite you instead but that could be kinky too.. right?

Do you guys think we need more writers in here to play off of? If all else fails Kitten, you could tell VT sorry and run for it. I hate when I get those blank days myself, here lately with being so busy i don't get much time for thinking. Hell I cant even remember the last time Ive done more than post to my own threads and look in email for reported stuff to fix then log.

maybe I shouldnt be admitting that huh? lol I dont get time to browse the actual srp forum anymore but it's alright I have wonderful distractions in my subscription folder!

So Kitten, need some ideas?

 

[kittenofdeath]

Sigh, I never have blank days, if I go blank, it lasts a while, plus, a few of my threads are slowly bleeding out and dieing, that doesnt make for a happy kitty

so yeah, ideas would be greatly appreciated

 

[Sweetp4u]

Why not tell Maya what Redgrave is looking for? It's answers.

Could ask her what exactly she can do, maybe notice she is powerful for a human being?

Could admit to snooping around and what happened earlier. or ask her if she is even aware of the murder house that was found?

Can have a bouncer come by, looking to see if anyone was hurt and notice he is in the wrong place (if you seek a way out of the scene for now), even armed and in the wrong place to be so.

Go dashing and debonair on her, flirt, tease, coy, shy? Flirt and make excuses, make his sneaking to make it look more like a liason but fortunate to find a better room?

Hmm lots of ideas come to mind but with writer's block the best thing might be to get himself untangled from Maya until you have inspiration restored.

Perhaps he is simply speechless and disturbed to see a lost lover's face on a human body and knows he best go before something bad happens?

Talon's summons could interrupt the conversation as well.

A phone call.

Sky's arrival could free her up.

 

[kittenofdeath]

Why not tell Maya what Redgrave is looking for? It's answers.

Isaac is curious about a few things, but content with her answers so far

Could ask her what exactly she can do, maybe notice she is powerful for a human being?

He just assumes she's a witch with a specialised skill set

Could admit to snooping around and what happened earlier. or ask her if she is even aware of the murder house that was found?

A straight admition was one of the ideas i was thinking of, mentioning the murder house sounds like fun though

Can have a bouncer come by, looking to see if anyone was hurt and notice he is in the wrong place (if you seek a way out of the scene for now), even armed and in the wrong place to be so.

Go dashing and debonair on her, flirt, tease, coy, shy? Flirt and make excuses, make his sneaking to make it look more like a liason but fortunate to find a better room?

i started writing a post just like that, but it felt wrong to have him hitting on her so soon

Hmm lots of ideas come to mind but with writer's block the best thing might be to get himself untangled from Maya until you have inspiration restored.

Perhaps he is simply speechless and disturbed to see a lost lover's face on a human body and knows he best go before something bad happens?

Talon's summons could interrupt the conversation as well.

A phone call.

Sky's arrival could free her up.

I think i know what i'm going to do now, tell Maya straight what he's hiding from, but skirt away from why, bring up the murder house to change the subject (sticking his nose where it doesnt belong, schemimg and mischeif is much more his style) then either make a stealthy exit when someone shows up, be it sky or whoever is delivering the flowers, or make up some excuse for his being there

what do you think?

 

[Sweetp4u]

sounds good hon but we need to get you buried into it up to your character's nostrils! So hope that something triggers a renewal of inspiration

as for the flirting I meant it as a smoke screen to distract from subjects he doesnt wish to discuss. but glad you got something in mind Might need to find a new harem girls to pass the time in smutsville with ya

 

[BLACK BART]

sorry, Ive had a bit of a case of writers block on this thread, I didnt realy ever plan to have Isaac have a serious moment, my plan was for him to just do whatever seemed like would be fun, but now we've gone and thrown him in to a situation where he has to actualy think and be serious.

Not that its a bad thing that happened, I'm eagerly looking forward to seeing how this plays out, but I dont have the slightest clue of how it will right now

Reread your characters profile and have an idea, will send you a PM and if it appeals to you I'll alter my last post accordingly...

 

[musicankane]

Hey guys I had an idea. In order to get Jack another post, I was wondering if I could have the killer appear as a black shadow in his car. You know typical bad guy warning off the good guy. "Blah blah, Jack. You are meddling in things you don't understand Jack, Blah blah...You should give up and go back to the human world. This is not your concern."

 

[BLACK BART]

Hmmm, I do have a twist to that idea...

PM sent

 

[musicankane]

And Bart you're post just gave me a great opening. Thank you sir. I'm posting now. Once our PM is worked out.

 

[BLACK BART]

umm, you're welcome?

 

[DarkEmpress]

Quick question. What time is it in River now? Have we moved to the next day as yet? Is it dark outside?

Edit: Another question (while we're on the topic). KoD, if you want I can let Sky throw you out of Maya's room, none too gently either /grins wickedly. VT and I have quite an intense scene planned, you are of course welcome to stay in the room if you want. Let me know what you would like to do, either way I don't mind.

Edit #2: I will of course leave Sky sleeping until there is a gap for her to see Maya. So no rush

 

[musicankane]

Posted it Bart. I will edit if you feel it is too wrong for the thread.

 

[BLACK BART]

Quick question. What time is it in River now? Have we moved to the next day as yet? Is it dark outside?

Edit: Another question (while we're on the topic). KoD, if you want I can let Sky throw you out of Maya's room, none too gently either /grins wickedly. VT and I have quite an intense scene planned, you are of course welcome to stay in the room if you want. Let me know what you would like to do, either way I don't mind.

Edit #2: I will of course leave Sky sleeping until there is a gap for her to see Maya. So no rush

I've moved Talon to the evening of day two... He's caught up on what is obvious and in reactions asked each character to come to the towers....

Each writer doesn't need to feel rushed though and can finish the scene they have in mind if they're still in night #1...

 

[BLACK BART]

Posted it Bart. I will edit if you feel it is too wrong for the thread.

Reads good to me! You've got to move the npc & jack to the towers before Talon can interact though...

 

[BLACK BART]

I've decided that on occasion I'll question the writers motive for his or her characters actions...

We've all put out a huge effort into this thread already and have developed specific plot lines for our characters and how they interact with our fellow characters...

So IF the characters actions don't seem to fit, I'll contact the writer via PM and question the motives... Don't be alarmed or offended, I'm not going to criticize or castrate, simply make sure it all blends together and offer suggestions if it looks like it doesn't...

OK?

 

[yeishia]

I've decided that on occasion I'll question the writers motive for his or her characters actions...

We've all put out a huge effort into this thread already and have developed specific plot lines for our characters and how they interact with our fellow characters...

So IF the characters actions don't seem to fit, I'll contact the writer via PM and question the motives... Don't be alarmed or offended, I'm not going to criticize or castrate, simply make sure it all blends together and offer suggestions if it looks like it doesn't...

OK?

I would love to have that kind of interaction..any interaction..

In fact as it is only now that I have an idea of where Shay is heading.

As for how she interacts with fellow characters... she doesn't now does she? This is something I am working on how to do this?

I will be posting after I get Vassal caught up!

Shay will meet the devil and join him, return to the bar only to leave to take up residence in the human part of town in the house that he has provided her with. She will leave note for Talon so that he knows where to find her should he wish to. and be available for her trial

I have taken into consideration all that I have been told and will not step on toes, Once again it is a shift in geography and I am open to as to what will happens next.

Feel free to critique after I have posted and I will make any necessary amendments

Should be up bty tonight

 

[Veroe]

Shay will meet the devil and join him, return to the bar only to leave to take up residence in the human part of town in the house that he has provided her with. She will leave note for Talon so that he knows where to find her should he wish to. and be available for her trial-Yeishia​

Interesting direction to take Yeishia I can't wait to read how it all turns out.

 

[BLACK BART]

I would love to have that kind of interaction..any interaction..

In fact as it is only now that I have an idea of where Shay is heading.

As for how she interacts with fellow characters... she doesn't now does she? This is something I am working on how to do this?

I will be posting after I get Vassal caught up!

Shay will meet the devil and join him, return to the bar only to leave to take up residence in the human part of town in the house that he has provided her with. She will leave note for Talon so that he knows where to find her should he wish to. and be available for her trial

I have taken into consideration all that I have been told and will not step on toes, Once again it is a shift in geography and I am open to as to what will happens next.

Feel free to critique after I have posted and I will make any necessary amendments

Should be up bty tonight

All well and good, you're busy with other threads like the rest of us...

As for Shay's attitude to Talon's request???

It will definitely color her own defense in the wrong colors as she is one of the newest in Haven and also the most insolent, so yes, as V has pointed out... it will be MOST interesting how it plays out

 

[Sweetp4u]

Damn! So no more odd behavior???

*big sigh*

Someone put a fire extinguisher outside Maya's room. Im sure Lana will send a note with harrison to excuse herself from boardroom bore

She has her hair to wash...

Should be fun to see Yeishia Lots of plot options.

BB u gotta PM

I am still trying to wake up. We had an accident outside my house last night where some young idiot caught some air in an accura of all fkn things at the end of my drive way last night about 2am. Landed down on top of, and this is the agonizing part, 4 motorcycles through a fence and feet shy of my neighbor's house. No one was hurt thank god, but my hubby seen his bikes and seriously contemplated murder.. So 4am I finally got to bed *sigh*

 

[musicankane]

OH NO! SWEETP!!!!!

*runs to get her some coffee*

 

[yeishia]

All well and good, you're busy with other threads like the rest of us...

As for Shay's attitude to Talon's request???

It will definitely color her own defense in the wrong colors as she is one of the newest in Haven and also the most insolent, so yes, as V has pointed out... it will be MOST interesting how it plays out

Sorry I missed the request We had discussed the plans..you changed your mind?

I was speed reading and you called her something else ..Shayla ...sorry.

I will assume that she left before your messenger got to her and as I left Shay wrapped in flames I doubt that he would have delivered the dictate yet!

I will go with her getting into hot water then

Sounds like fun hehe!

 

[yeishia]

I posted please let me know if I made any huge boo boos!

Feed back would be welcome

LoL Shay got out before she received her summons!

 

[Sweetp4u]

very nicely done Yeishia

 

[VampiricTouch]

Okay... being gone for the weekend... I'm still reading to catch up. Is it the next day already?? I know Sky and Talon seemed to have moved on... Should I be moving Maya to morning and giving Redgrave the boot?