OOC for "the River Runs Red"

[VampiricTouch]

I'm scared of Gabriel.... 0.0

 

[Sweetp4u]

Everyone is about up to the same point as Talon and Sky.

Since the scene with harrison and lana seems to have over laid from sunrise to sunset, we're just going to assume they did the deed all day or napped in there to explain away the time difference/ lapse.

Trying to get everyone to the same time in the story is harder than it looks. KOD had a post in mind so can finish off with KOD and get the summons when you're ready.

 

[VampiricTouch]

Okay I just got caught up...

Oh god... Sweetp your sex scenes are sizzling.....

And Gabriel scares me to no end now... I guess he's supposed to.

At the moment, I'd like Maya to avoid Sullivan, there's been a touch of... plotting in that area.

D... White lilies for Sky... quite prophetic.

BB, are we meeting the second night? or is this dawn of the second day?

 

[kittenofdeath]

Everyone is about up to the same point as Talon and Sky.

Since the scene with harrison and lana seems to have over laid from sunrise to sunset, we're just going to assume they did the deed all day or napped in there to explain away the time difference/ lapse.

Trying to get everyone to the same time in the story is harder than it looks. KOD had a post in mind so can finish off with KOD and get the summons when you're ready.

i'm about to start writing a post now, if you guys want Isaac to just excuse himself so everyone can get in the right timeline then just say the word

 

[VampiricTouch]

KoD, if you don't mind I'm going to move our characters to dawn.

 

[Sweetp4u]

Thank you VT I try to find ways so those who have to read my boring drivel get rewarded in between! lol srsly though, thank you I was hoping it was a pleasure to read as much as I wanted it to be so. Somedays stuff just sounds like stereo instructions in my head, good to know it wasnt

 

[kittenofdeath]

KoD, if you don't mind I'm going to move our characters to dawn.

thats fine by me

 

[VampiricTouch]

posted, stay or go is your call. But I'd like to put Maya to sleep in my next post.

 

[kittenofdeath]

posted, stay or go is your call. But I'd like to put Maya to sleep in my next post.

well dawn does cut him off a little, so unless he runs through the sun, or there's underground access, he may just have to take Maya up on that offer

 

[Sweetp4u]

Kitten, there are rooms available for the day at the bar

 

[kittenofdeath]

Kitten, there are rooms available for the day at the bar

yeah, but since its dawn, i'm assuming that the crowd has thinned somewhat, so Isaac comming down from upstairs wouldnt go unnoticed, questions would arrise as to why he was up there considering he doesnt have a room, Isaac doesnt want to cause problems

 

[Sweetp4u]

People tend to roam around, so it isnt going to be strange but I see your point.

The scenes coming from narrator and myself are just before dawn. which is approaching. BB lost track of time in his, so his post is in the 'future' night to come.

So when you get to that meeting point with talon it is after sleeping, waking and sunsetting before reaching talon and jack. That should put everyone at the same evening!

So consider Talon, Sky, Shay and Jack at 7pm Monday

rest of us are at pre dawn monday morning. Catch up and line up time and we're back on track! Make sense?

 

[kittenofdeath]

i figured that would be the case, but with everything that had happened, he wouldnt want to run the risk

 

[VampiricTouch]

Wait... but I thought Jack went from... being kicked outta CK to being visited by the killer to being escorted to Talon's.

I never knew time was so hard to manage here...

 

[VampiricTouch]

Okay.... I thought that Lana left Gabriel in hell and never saw him again...? Or was that a bad assumption? I guess if Gabriel got bounced on her knee at the age of three, Lana did actually go back to hell to visit Gabriel?

 

[Sweetp4u]

No lana didn't get to ever see nor hold Gabriel

the colors and women he remember are from his cell. They werent his mother.

The time issue is my fault i was discussing the various plots with BB when he was trying to post in the story and distracted him, there for messed him up and he proceeded to jump ahead to the next waking (skipped writing the sleeping process) and summoned everyone to him.

Which was replied to.. And is completely off kilter but too late now.

So we're all playing catch up to the same time to move forward again on the same page. Time is hard to manage with so much going on, Ive had this problem for years in stories with getting everyone on the same day, time, etc.

As for Narrator's post, he didn't get into the mistaken identity explanation. Just the point of view from Gabriel and what Gabe believes to be reality and his version of the past. Gabe isn't 'all there' anymore. the past has holes and a huge chunk from 91 til now 2010 in which the mind was warped further that hasnt been written yet. leaving room for surprises and mischief. I asked Narrator tomorrow to draw up a detailed profile for Gabriel now that he is actively seeking toys and fucking with ppl.

Also the vision in Kane's Jack's truck wasn't the flesh and blood Gabe but a hallucination Gabe wanted the human to see. Kane Ok'd that last minute cuz havent had a chance to get Gabe's gifts listed and detailed. Im so tired i hope i am not confusing you worse?

 

[VampiricTouch]

Thank you Sweetp for the clarification. So is everything in that post... Gabriel's imagination and what he thinks/remembers? or is it actually occurring to someone?


I've moved Maya and Sky to the second night.

also, is Talon's summons, a relocation? or is it just a meeting for a few hours?

 

[Sweetp4u]

Gabe's meeting with Jack was real, just a mental meeting of minds.

Talon's summons is for a meeting.

 

[musicankane]

Hey Bart make sure you don't kill Jack for being an asshole. His MO is to tick your ass off so you might possibly say something you didn't mean for him to know.

 

[Sweetp4u]

mmmmmmmmmm BBQ'd Jack and ....... coke?

Why can't we kill Jack for some munchies?? No one is catering the meeting


*grins*

 

[musicankane]

Cause Jack tastes like cigars and beer.

 

[BLACK BART]

Hey Bart make sure you don't kill Jack for being an asshole. His MO is to tick your ass off so you might possibly say something you didn't mean for him to know.

Who said Talon would kill him? He might toss Jack off the 13th floor, that wouldn't kill him, would it? Course the fall probably would, but is it Talon's fault he didn't know the man couldn't fly? lol

I'm enjoying their exchange actually, Talon wouldn't respect a Detective who has no courage... though he might cut the conversation short if he thinks Jack is threatening Lana....

 

[BLACK BART]

Gotta laugh at Sweet and her BBQ Jack and coke....

and apologize to everyone for the confusion in the times, it was my fault... but then not really? You see Sweet was whispering wicked, erotic things in my ear the entire time I was trying to put the narrator post together, and well... things got sorta steamed up?

 

[VampiricTouch]

I hope that Maya declining the invitation wasn't too big of a problem...?

 

[BLACK BART]

Actually VT I think it was wise on your part... reading all the excellent posts in the main thread it's obvious our characters are quite involved in several sub plots as well as having fully developed identities of their own... Refusing and keeping Maya's distance will allow those plots to be fully written out and enjoyed

btw,.... What ARE you and Dee plotting?