OOC for "the River Runs Red"

[BLACK BART]

There's been a TON of plotting in this thread and that's great... but the drawback is we're all trying to write it out at once... I'm guilty in a lot of that plotting, and yes... in the middle of it. *sigh*

It doesn't mean it won't happen as we planned... just not as fast... that also gives others the chance to do some plotting as well, as you and Dee are doing... and hopefully the other men in the thread?

 

[yeishia]

Hmmm I will ask my question again, I asked you before BB and received no answer

- Did talon get Shays letter?

- Would you like her to remain at her house while the other men plot?

or do you want her to ncp knowledge of the summons and arrive at Talon's place???????

I ask because I have no knowledge of any of your plots and do not want to ruin any ones plans.

I am simply trying to fit in someplace......

Thanks in advance

 

[Sweetp4u]

well the letter is at CK and in Shay's old room she's left already (no one knows she is gone yet) there would be no way for an npc's of Talon's to miraculously know where Shay has relocated to so soon after sending out word but one might find the letter and take it to Talon's

 

[BLACK BART]

Hmmm I will ask my question again, I asked you before BB and received no answer

- Did talon get Shays letter?

- Would you like her to remain at her house while the other men plot?

or do you want her to ncp knowledge of the summons and arrive at Talon's place???????

I ask because I have no knowledge of any of your plots and do not want to ruin any ones plans.

I am simply trying to fit in someplace......

Thanks in advance

Again.... It's not for wanting to do the writing of the plot or action, simply the timing of it... Everything can't be written at once and if it's rushed as it has been in some parts of my writing?

Of course I've read your posts and do appreciate them... but there are previous plots as you've pointed out yourself to put into motion first

 

[DarkEmpress]

Apologies. I was trying to be as vague as I possibly could in the description of Gabriel. Will mention the tattoos next time

mmmmm .... so me and VT need to keep each other busy ... /grins wickedly.

That sounds like fun!

Bring it!!

Rrrraawwwrrrr (god WoW talk lol)

Anybody wanna offer their services as an evil masochistic Master? That's our speciality

 

[BLACK BART]

Just a note as I've pointed out to some in PM since most of us are referring to Gabriel the demon in our posts, either being visited by him or trying to find or "see" him...

Gabe needs physical contact or blood of his victim to use his mental powers on them... in example he was touching Lana.... and later when visiting Harrison had scratched the man to use blood to make that contact... so Gabriel does have limits

Also... our own characters might be able to see Gabe... Maya and Shay specifically have the mental power to do so.... But run the risk of him returning the favor as another link has been created... a link directly from his twisted mind into that of the one, or ones who originally created the link...Visiting a victim and seeing Gabe's foul deeds opens the doorway for him...

So be careful, beware and be warned

 

[Sweetp4u]

but gabe can't hurt from the mental link making connection merely taunt with visions.

Blood or touching the person to do physical damage as well as mental damage

@ BB go to bed!

Night all


edited note: Sorry! meant to get gabe's bio up today but have been so danged busy with RL that I forgot to mention it to BB.

Another note, Sky or Maya could and should expect a demonic visitor via mental vision at some point soon. real soon

 

[VampiricTouch]

Sky is personally going to go looking for Gabriel... once Talon leaves his tower to pay a visit to Maya... and Maya and Talon were scheduled to do a search and link of Gabriel when Talon arrives.

I was hoping those points would give Gabe a window to ... pay them some attention.

Also we can see his human form now right?

 

[Sweetp4u]

I made BB edit it due to him short cutting and cheating in his assumptions. So he is going to repost tomorrow without skipping corners. Poor guy has much on his plate atm, but luckily his and my plotting was to a certain point and we're almost there with it. That frees him up as well as Lana for furthering things and pulling more in to interact.

Lana has yet to even meet Sky or visit her resident witch, Maya.

please hold off a little longer in seeing the 'mini' Talon with any kind of detail. can see his human form, shrouded or dressed or from the back. maybe see his eyes but not the whole of his face just yet. Cuz I know once someone sees it, they will either think it's Talon or know Talon has a son. That information if possible IF BB will stop trying to sneak it all from me lol, is supposed to be a shocker when Talon comes face to face with Gabriel. Not sure it will hold out that long tho, if all else fails someone will

Going to discuss hiring Redgrave. (talon is)

Got to get ol Hades interacting with Shay as well as BB more time to actually move Gabe around and do some trouble

Gabe will be sending a mental nudge , forcefully at Sky since he spied his 'father' visiting the teacher. this shouldnt hurt sky in any way, as he is not touching her and does not have her blood, but it wont shut off easily for her. Meaning to block him out but it will be possible if you choose to Dee.

As well as fucking with Veroe a little more Im sure. Which could get painful as he has taken Harrison's blood.

Yeishia, I know you're bored hon! Working on that too. btw were you planning on being in residence with Gabriel or just near by and handy to Hades?

Kitten, do you need an assistant? I can't do major roles but I can definitely do assistant stuff to give ya someone to interact off of and get Redgrave active.

BTW the odd phone number in Lana's phone was from a phone booth not far from the house where all the bodies were discovered. Incase anyone wanted to know that information.

btw the 'child like' mannerisms aren't part of gabe's personality, in the post of him meeting his mother he reverted back to a hopeful child in thought patterns, but it stopped once he realized she didnt know him, and she was not the mother he wanted her to be. Rules being what they are and me having to enforce them as per my job description, this has to change to adult, crazed, twisted etc. but no more child like words, mannerisms, and so on. He wasn't supposed to ever be that way just came out that way unintentionally I think. It isn't bad now nor breaking the rules, but i worry it will get to that rule breaking stage so its best to nip it in the bud now.

Ok I am so tired and rambling like an idiot. Happy plotting everyone and see ya later



btw this has to be said before I hit submit lol LOVE! The scene with Sky and Maya, very very well written and realistic

 

[DarkEmpress]

A mental nudge sounds good

I should have Sky out of Maya's room in the next 2 posts (if everything goes according to plan) I need to start setting everything up for our 'plot' soonish - provided all the puzzle pieces fall into place as we plan.

If I can ask everyone to please steer clear of Sky once she's out of Maya's room, I'd appreciate it. The nudge from Gabe should still be fine and I'll work around it ... will be interesting to see what Sky makes of it, seeing as she can't remember the event anymore. I will let everyone know when it's fine to approach Sky again

And thank you for the compliment Sweet, it is much appreciated.

 

[yeishia]

well the letter is at CK and in Shay's old room she's left already (no one knows she is gone yet) there would be no way for an npc's of Talon's to miraculously know where Shay has relocated to so soon after sending out word but one might find the letter and take it to Talon's

She put it in the pocket of the guy now knownas shorty

He emptied his pockets for Harrison..he ate the lint hehehh

Which is why I asked!

 

[yeishia]

Again.... It's not for wanting to do the writing of the plot or action, simply the timing of it... Everything can't be written at once and if it's rushed as it has been in some parts of my writing?

Of course I've read your posts and do appreciate them... but there are previous plots as you've pointed out yourself to put into motion first

BB I do understand THAT!

which is why I was asking YOU for direction; and still am........

Especially as I am not psychic

I am in no rush,I just do not want to make any more mistakes like my last one with the cats//

I was hoping that you would understand.

I will asume that Shay will stay put then andd ignore the summons

 

[Sweetp4u]

I must've missed something Yeishia, I dont recall that happening in the post I read and i believe the lint was in harrison's pockets not the messengers? easily fixed though since it hasnt been posted.

I so need coffee.

Dee hon dont worry about a nudge from Gabe, it will wait until you're not busy with other stuff. You're welcome too

 

[yeishia]

All that was left of her presence was a small envelope addressed to Talon which she slipped into the bouncer’s jacket pocket as she left!

No worries Sweet , that's what happens when you are faced with reading long boring posts hehe.

I was gonna have shorty wake shay up in the wee hours and give her the summons, and after a fe prepatory spells have her turn up at the meeting.

But if BB would prefer her to ignore the summons that's good to.

I am easy ( not cheap tho)

So sweet if You have any idea as to stay or go let me know please

 

[Sweetp4u]

Nah dont ignore the summons, just NPC to wait at Talon's office if you want, wait a few more posts, cast some spells on someone (jack looks bored) or other various acts of trouble and chaos

and the post was not long and/nor boring! (edited note! yes i am giving you meanie faces dont say that abt yourself ) but the 'bouncer' is where the confusion came from. Shorty is not an employee of Lana's but Talons someone made up some where. hence the confusion sorry

add to the fact I am not awake

should contact kane and see what kinds of misfortune Shay can rain down on his head

 

[yeishia]

Thanks sweet ..will do

 

[DarkEmpress]

Hi Sweet

No, a nudge from Gabe would be perfect ... the sooner the better. It fits in perfectly with what we are planning ... would actually give it that extra edge it needs

Plus Sky needs to kill time until all the puzzle pieces are in place, which from the looks of it will take a bit of time. So go for it.

 

[The_Narrator]

Gabriel's Profile

Name: Gabriel

Alias: Gabriel Lafayette Ver’idian LV, Elvie

Born: October 31, 1981 (earth time)

Age: 28 (looks younger as he stopped aging about 25)

Personality over all is that of a cruel dominating task master. Driven to succeed to the point of cutting off his right arm to get something done. He was taught to rape, it isn’t something he developed on his own. So when women hit on him in vamp form, or become aroused around him, even if not by their own doing, he is driven to rape them and punish them for wanting him/sex/ etc.

His Gift/ Ability: Gabe has one major skill, the mind link. He has a very strong mind, enough so that rarely does a human be able to lock him out, or in some cases seek him out (mind’s eye etc). If he has your blood, his will is your reality. Not only does he make you see it, hear it, smell it, taste it but he also makes your body respond to it. If he is raping your mind, he is raping your body without touching you physically. Which means there will be tearing, bruises, pain etc. It is limited to blood exchange or touching skin to skin. (and of course writers working out the scene with approval) Without touching and no blood to open the gate way between them, yet minds touch, he can only taunt for a short time. (each varies depending on how strong the person is mentally) He can project what he wants you to see to your mind, but you wont feel anything. It won’t be for long, most often as it was with Jack Sullivan, to deliver a warning or message.


Vampire Form: (human being look/ mini Talon mask)

Black uneven cropped hair, hangs in his face , around his ears, and down to the back of his shirt collar. Green eyes, unblemished and clear. Full lips, straight slim nose, slightly tan all over to a golden brown. Lashes mar his body, however more faint in this form and fewer are visible.

6’1” tall, 220 lbs since it is important to the story, he has nearly 8 inch penis, standard size width in this form.

Abilities: Quick Healing, feeding, changing others to vampire, blood bonding and strength (limited to be better than human but not super human)

He can NOT: turn into mist, fly, shape shift, hypnotize

Weaknesses: Sun light, dog whistles / or other high pitches, high range loud noises as they cause severe migraines and if too loud, fleeing. Slutty women or the appearance of a slut, in some cases a pair of shoes could set him off, causes extreme rage(s).

Personality: Think Joker here with him. Life’s a game and even death can be too. rapist, torturer. The emotional side of Gabe is when in this form.

Demon Form: Incubi (human being in this form with some differences) no cloven hoof feet or tail.

His hair stays the same, and his eyes change color to black. Nose is more elfin and pointy as are his ears, mouth the same but larger and full of a few more fangs than vampy form. His skin turns black, carved into his skin are symbols and hieroglyphs all bent on things like Pain, Suffering, Sacrifice, Revenge, Omens, Luck, but you wont find anything on forgiveness as he has none and seeks none. Skin is thick and not hard but definitely leather like.

7’6” tall, nearly 400 lbs in weight. (someone gave him wings so he has a pair  ) and he is without horns ( a gifted request in the past) penis in this form is ten inches in length and three inches wide. (think close to pop can width)

Abilities: See auras of others. Incite arousal. Teleport to hell

He can NOT: Change his appearance, feed in this form nor in the incubus manner. Impregnate others.

Personality: Cold, calm and calculative. Quiet, methodical, centered. He kills in this form, not the other. Rapist (usually mentally doing so, not physical but now and then he makes exceptions.)

Weaknesses: Sunlight, Cats


Profession: (thinking wtf does he need a job for, right? Lol) He is a biochemist, working at the firm that handles Ver’idian Ent. And Lana’s product. He has been doing so for awhile now, unbeknown to the rest of Haven, in the hopes of mixing a super potion that will make him God like. It’s madness of course, but it is his goal. He is an excellent worker, always on time and though hot as hell to look at, he speaks to no one unless he has to and it is only work related. He is in norm form at work, so as one could imagine it is hard for him, but he controls himself well. Rage brews beneath the surface, especially with the female co-workers behavior, so he is edgy almost nonstop while ‘up top’ on earth.


Both halves of Gabe are separate and some things are combined. No matter which form he is in, he incites lust in some form or another, but eventually… even hideous demonic form, people want him. The mental link is available to both forms, but he tends to use it only while in demon form at the present, as he is in hiding.


note: this is subject to change as we go along incase something was forgotten but he wont be more powerful than this first draft.

 

[yeishia]

No more powerful than this draft

Imagine my relief hehe

Great bio

 

[DarkEmpress]

Ooooo! Love the link with Sky.

/rubs hands together

VT? Shall we?

 

[VampiricTouch]

I agree, we'll have loads of fun with it, but I'm going MIA for the next 48 hours.... =(

 

[musicankane]

I unfortunately have very limited time until tomorrow night. I will say that Jack will move on with his investigation, making his interaction simply solo for now. If any of you would like a run in with Jack please pm me with your ideas.

 

[DarkEmpress]

Post is done with input from VT, just need her to give it a once over before I post it

 

[BLACK BART]

Great posts everyone. The plot is thickening and Talon is moving from the Towers to recruit help for the upcoming war...

 

[Veroe]

Coudos on excellent posts BB, Sweet.

Hmm so many startling revelations for Harrison to absorb and react to, It'll be fun as a writer to chart his emotional journey in this next post.