OOC for "the River Runs Red"

[musicankane]

I don't mean that Jack is a human. I'm simply pointing out that I have just been following everyone else's plots. People tell me what Jack has to do so that's what I'm working on.

 

[kittenofdeath]

Oh, my mistake, though that doesnt stop you from cooking up a scheme of your own, such as making all those dam immortals pay for being a pain in Sullivans ass, or becoming one

Its always more fun to be the one moving the pawns

 

[musicankane]

I thought about working out a scheme where Jack gets hurt and becomes a vampire....but I decided that was too cliche and I ditched it.

So I think Jack is going to harass Lana and maybe get some more of that pussy. Though with Talons protection Jack is probably screwed in a bad way lol.

 

[kittenofdeath]

*grumbles* stupid Talon hogging Lana all to himself...

but yeah, Becoming a vampire would also rob this thread of the one and only human involved, and this thread is already woefully deficient in squishy human pawns. You could always plot the downfall of someone, im sure it wouldnt be to hard to change a peice of evidence here and there.

 

[musicankane]

Jack is a no nonsense guy. He would not fuck with the truth. Though he would duck with people so that he could get the bad guy behind bars. I just don't know how that is going to play out.

 

[Sweetp4u]

No one has told you what to do Kane I gave ya ideas hon. Feel free to create troubles but the whole getting lana naked thing? Not happening

Hiya Kitten hows the hang up coming?

Vt, Dee and Kane, I can't see anyone letting Jack back into CK any time soon. Especially not after he shot up the place. However if jack is creative, as detectives are, why not take the place of a delivery guy to the back door / kitchens bringing in a few boxes of misc foor product? Hide a box in it with the gun in it. Wear a cute little UPS guy suit... Oh yeah, those shorts are uh.. anyway

Thats the only route I see jack entering CK. Sneaking in the only exit door not heavily guarded. There's be a bouncer down there and a single camera. The door only opens from the inside. Delivery gets in, jack makes an excuse to use the restroom. and wah la

Just a thought

 

[VampiricTouch]

so.... it's okay to kill Sky with Jack's bullet?

 

[musicankane]

I am working on a big push post for Jack. If you can get your idea of getting Jack to shoot Sky them that's is fine by me. Just don't godmode Jack around he will be exactly where I post him.

 

[BLACK BART]

so.... it's okay to kill Sky with Jack's bullet?

Well it might be ok in your plotting as it seems Dee approves of it...

But there will be consequences for the person who fires the gun AND kills her, of course...

 

[BLACK BART]

Alrighty, reading what transpired, I am thinking it wise that I share what VT and I have been plotting ... as it is rather drastic. I was hoping to keep it a surprise, but I think Kane at the very least needs to know what we're planning. Kane, if you don't want to be a part of it or if the idea is too extreme, then we'll go with a different approach.

I never intended Sky to live longer than 3 days at the most. This is the first time ever, that I'm deliberately sabotaging my own character and killing her.

The plan is for her descendent Gabriella to be taken by Gabriel and to be killed. My next post will profile Gabriella and introduce her to the readers ... hence me needing the image of Andrew Hempsworth when Sky went to visit Maya. What I omit to tell B was that Sky has a link with Gabriella much the same as she has with Talon. So the moment Gabriel takes her, Sky will know. When you guys said that you were going to let Gabriel link with Sky I nearly clapped my hands ... it means she'll have a double connection and she'll see it happening from both sides.

Sky will go out of her mind. She won't be able to find them and she'll see Gabriel kill her only living descendent. Out of desperation, she will make her way to Lana's room. She knows about the portal to Hades because of Talon's memories (even though she can't remember how she knows it). She'll negotiate with Hades for Gabriella's soul, her life in return.

Hades being who he is, sees it as an opportunity to hit another nail into Talon's coffin. So instead of killing Sky, he takes her immortality and bestows it on Gabriella. (Sneaky bastard that he is - and I'm sure he'll watch with glee)

The plot then moves to Maya's room. Talon will be there and Sullivan will burst in to ask Talon something (haven't finalised this bit yet) and he sees Maya. She takes the form of something hated and Sullivan pulls his gun and fires a shot. (Hence us needing Sullivan in CK with a gun - it can be someone random as well ... but for extra drama )

At that very moment Sky is dumped in the room, in the way of a speeding bullet intended for Maya ... and she's mortal once more. (I know we're wicked Kane, all we told you was that Maya won't be hurt) Time slows down ... as it does while you're dying. Sky's eyes find Talon, connection locks in place ... she remembers their night together ... The bullet rips through her. Sky dies in Talon's arms, blood spattered all over the white lillies (hence us thinking that white lillies were prophetic )

Gabriella opens her immortal eyes for the first time:
So ... this is what it feels like to be dead? And I assume the character of Gabriella from there.

Sorry to spoil the surprise, but what say yeah?

I have already written the post, all of this will transpire in one big massive post, that I was going to throw in there the moment Gabriella is killed and both Talon and Sullivan are in place.


I know, we're very wicked I have never had so much fun plotting and scheming before

Reading your plot I'd say it's OK (as long as the other writers and their characters the plot affects) you've mentioned are in agreement with it

Just a reminder though, firing a gun in Lana's Sanctuary is a no no and Jack's already has one court date for that offense, AND killing in Haven will have to be investigated as well, OK?

 

[Sweetp4u]

Ok it is my turn to nit pick over a post in what I see is wrong and far fetched. No insult to anyone but I can't reply nor even acknowledge the stuff in Y's post.

First the incurable crotch itching, too GOD mode. Temporarily having a case of something is one thing (and would be funny, annoying revenge), but incurable was too much (and made a mockery of the story). Also in this section, entering Lana's place, ok sure.. Maybe.. but how? Its accessed only through private elevator. Skipped over too many details. And Talon's residence? Has two people inside as well as tight security all around. Again, how did she do it? I refuse to write Lana stopping every two minutes in story time to scratch her crotch. Sorry

Secondly - How does a HUMAN female of 125 pounds take out not only a woman, but the victims 'man' as well? There were no agreements or discussions made on powers like this to be gifted to Shay. Knowledge is one thing, but super powers? She casted nothing to gain said powers, again how was this done in a believable manner? I don't have problems with spells and things of that ilk being done, but in RP "If it is not written, it is not so" Not all cases, but for the most part this holds true. With the drastic changes and moves made by Shay, it should have been written out clearly how she managed to do something like that. It is also polite to discuss with others new abilities. A quick "Hey guys mind if I use mist and gain strength?" heads up helps alot when unexpected changes happen.

VT and Dee's plot is nothing like this. It is well thought out, and within reason. As long as Kane is ok with the direction their plot will take HIS character, then go with it. I know it is hard to come up with something as a solo character in a story, but details are important when it comes to doing these kinds of steps which affect other's characters. When it comes to a thread and rules, the creator of the thread set down his guidelines to write here, it is his right and we all agreed to follow them. So if it would affect the entire 'cast' of writers characters, it should've been discussed in the ooc before being posted or written out. Even just ran by BB if nothing else or desire to have a surprise.

This is how Ive been 'trained' to RP in lit. and with some cowriters i know personally i can pull more stuff on, like BB letting me move his guy around a bit and vice versa. But I would never presume to do that with Vt or Dee's characters. Not sure if I've done it to V or Kane in a manner unbecoming Anyway Ive said my peace and reasons, no offense intended at all and I hope this is taken as a learning tool and not a slight on Y.

 

[VampiricTouch]

nevermind

 

[yeishia]

Ok it is my turn to nit pick over a post in what I see is wrong and far fetched. No insult to anyone but I can't reply nor even acknowledge the stuff in Y's post.

First the incurable crotch itching, too GOD mode. Temporarily having a case of something is one thing (and would be funny, annoying revenge), but incurable was too much (and made a mockery of the story). Also in this section, entering Lana's place, ok sure.. Maybe.. but how? Its accessed only through private elevator. Skipped over too many details. And Talon's residence? Has two people inside as well as tight security all around. Again, how did she do it? I refuse to write Lana stopping every two minutes in story time to scratch her crotch. Sorry

Secondly - How does a HUMAN female of 125 pounds take out not only a woman, but the victims 'man' as well? There were no agreements or discussions made on powers like this to be gifted to Shay. Knowledge is one thing, but super powers? She casted nothing to gain said powers, again how was this done in a believable manner? I don't have problems with spells and things of that ilk being done, but in RP "If it is not written, it is not so" Not all cases, but for the most part this holds true. With the drastic changes and moves made by Shay, it should have been written out clearly how she managed to do something like that. It is also polite to discuss with others new abilities. A quick "Hey guys mind if I use mist and gain strength?" heads up helps alot when unexpected changes happen.

VT and Dee's plot is nothing like this. It is well thought out, and within reason. As long as Kane is ok with the direction their plot will take HIS character, then go with it. I know it is hard to come up with something as a solo character in a story, but details are important when it comes to doing these kinds of steps which affect other's characters. When it comes to a thread and rules, the creator of the thread set down his guidelines to write here, it is his right and we all agreed to follow them. So if it would affect the entire 'cast' of writers characters, it should've been discussed in the ooc before being posted or written out. Even just ran by BB if nothing else or desire to have a surprise.

This is how Ive been 'trained' to RP in lit. and with some cowriters i know personally i can pull more stuff on, like BB letting me move his guy around a bit and vice versa. But I would never presume to do that with Vt or Dee's characters. Not sure if I've done it to V or Kane in a manner unbecoming Anyway Ive said my peace and reasons, no offense intended at all and I hope this is taken as a learning tool and not a slight on Y.

No offense taken Sweet
As you pointed out, it is all about learning

I have removed all of my posts as requested BB.

I thank you for editing out your nasty comments BB. I do realize that you were upset; and consider it very adult of you, I do appreciate your gesture!

Happy plotting everyone!
Have fun ........

 

[Sweetp4u]

Yeishia hon the PM box of yours is full again!

 

[musicankane]

I wish I was that popular.

 

[DarkEmpress]

rofl

Nope, I never godmode anyone's characters, rest assured of that. It's more fun manoeuvring them around and 'letting them think' it was their idea to begin with

And you guys say you don't understand women ... the tragedy

 

[yeishia]

Mail box less full now lol

 

[Sweetp4u]

plotting to work out a plot success:

Had a thought and this made the most sense to me so bare with me and you can ignore the suggestion as well if you like as it involves Kane's character and VT/Emps Plot progression.

Bring in Gabriel, and either take control through the weak human mind, and use Jack to kill Sky. OR Gabriel incites madness into Jack with mind games, beatings, tauntings and whispers to drive him temp insane.(would also include luring jack to where Sky and the gang are currently located inside CK) Sky did tell gabe to come get her, so it makes good sense AND it gives Jack an excusable circumstance to keep from being vampire's pet food.


Kane we need to have a talk over you messing up CK's employees and breaking and entering with a credit card.....

 

[musicankane]

Ok I swear that delivery guy attacked me first. The guy was a total asshole. As for the dreit card well Jack got that as a gift from 007.

 

[Sweetp4u]

LOL! You're so grounded Kane!


So yes or no on manipulating JACK, kane? That is if VT and EMP dont already have a huge mile long reply waiting Granted I like reading their replies, so either way I am good

 

[musicankane]

I think he could be harassed or taunted mentally by the killer but manipulated...I don't think so. I'm just along for the ride though so what do I know?

 

[Sweetp4u]

*shrug*

it was a way out of a death sentence for Jack. Thought Id offer it up to save his cute ass

 

[musicankane]

Death sentence. Well ummm.......bummer.

 

[BLACK BART]

I think he could be harassed or taunted mentally by the killer but manipulated...I don't think so. I'm just along for the ride though so what do I know?

It's Sanctuary dude, where peace has to exist for ALL species, and if it is broken? Hell hath no fury like THE scorned woman called Lana!

So if Gabe twists his mind he can claim demon interference and once that's proven he's free

 

[musicankane]

yea I know. I need to work on a post once the plot in question develops further. I should have something worked out tomorrow.