OOC for "the River Runs Red"

[BLACK BART]

36 C's tho I am thinking closer to a D but I like them unjiggly

Looks at hands on keyboard and then your 36 C/D's

Hmmmm, purrrrrrfect fit, I think

Wanna try?

 

[Seductive Sin]

Stacy Burnes
age mid 30s
5'7" 132 1/2 pounds, 36-24-30 blonde hair, blue eyes.


^ bio

Human single female. not sure where to place her other than working at some random strip joint on the human side of the river. could moon light across the river for the rush and maybe hoping to be changed into a vamp before the looks are completely gone?

 

[Sweetp4u]

lol I didn't even get a notice you posted a reply BB

but you can just behave yourself before I have to slap both those hands of yours and ruin your chance to type the whole weekend

 

[BLACK BART]

lol I didn't even get a notice you posted a reply BB

but you can just behave yourself before I have to slap both those hands of yours and ruin your chance to type the whole weekend

Might be worth it, depending on what I got those hands on... first?

 

[VampiricTouch]

alright, I've taken cared of Maya for the next few hours.... so for any who stumble into her room.... here is what you'll probably see -

- Because she is inside her Secret Garden and going through the memories of an item, she will not hear if you make noise outside of the perimeter. So she won't respond to knocking.

- Coming into the room a person will see the four candles in the living room area of the suite, cleared out to make a large enough space for the Secret Garden. (about 10 x 10 feet square) One would see Maya as whoever it is you see her as but the Secret Garden does not go into affect. The entire room will be seen as normal.

- Should a person step into the Secret Garden, they will immediately walk into the 'memory' she is viewing. By entering, she will also see the said person appear.

- For those that sense emotion.... they will only sense the emotion Maya is radiating, not the memory she is seeing.

 

[kittenofdeath]

hey VT, i have a question, what would happen if someone saw Maya, but they didnt want to see anyone more than anyone else?

 

[VampiricTouch]

hmm... tough.

I think this effect will find strong memories in a viewer's mind. Someone that's left a particularly heavy impression. Something riveting that's left said person constantly thinking about it.

Honestly, in the life span of a vampire... there's got to be something extremely memorable.

(I don't know if that answered the question)

The reason Maya was created was to give people a chance to do some reflection of their own character... build something beyond the action and reaction.... give people a reason to create depth in their character.

 

[VampiricTouch]

Also.... I could've sworn Veroe's character's name was Edgar? Who's Edward?

 

[Veroe]

Nice catch VT.

It is Edgar, but don't feel bad about it Sweet. Even I missed it and I had Sykorsky use it in just one post before that one. I just never expected you to use it.

But that's how I likes women: beautiful and surprising.

 

[kittenofdeath]

hmm... tough.

I think this effect will find strong memories in a viewer's mind. Someone that's left a particularly heavy impression. Something riveting that's left said person constantly thinking about it.

Honestly, in the life span of a vampire... there's got to be something extremely memorable.

(I don't know if that answered the question)

The reason Maya was created was to give people a chance to do some reflection of their own character... build something beyond the action and reaction.... give people a reason to create depth in their character.

hmmm... there are two characters from his past, but neither would be very interesting or appropriate (ones a little girl older than him, the other is a skeleton) but i'll think something up if it arises

Also.... I could've sworn Veroe's character's name was Edgar? Who's Edward?

my mind edits out all references to vampires named Edward, so i didn't notice

 

[VampiricTouch]

so why is it not... appropriate?
(Why the skeleton? Who was this skeleton before it became a bundle of bones? and who's the girl?)

 

[kittenofdeath]

so why is it not... appropriate?
(Why the skeleton? Who was this skeleton before it became a bundle of bones? and who's the girl?)

well the skeleton was a ruthless knight raised for the sole purpose of killing Isaac, after a while they became friends, its complicated (i just don't think it would be that interesting to use him)

and the girl is very young (looking anyway, her actual age is almost 1000) but the appearance is still to young to be in a thread of this type

both of these are from a game i play called warhammer, Isaac was based on my army general, vampires in that game can be rather messed the hell up

 

[yeishia]

Vt. Shay is very young but if she ever meets up with Maya I am thinking maybe.. some idiot who tried to burn her at the stake; I will work on that if we ever interact or try and use a protective spell which amplifies instead of reducing maybe

I was thinking Bart. You say you need victims?

I think my witch may be supercilious given that Vt joined us as a witch... albeit a more complex powerful and efficient one ( Love the Secret Garden btw.) with the same purpose ie: to help Talon. Do we need two witches?

I cant see really how she (Shay) will fit into the story, with the exception of maybe sleeping with all the chars male and femaleto perhaps give a bit of balance or even comedic relief with spells gone wrong etc. of course I have no problem with that!

I was thinking of putting a protection spell on Talon, it would give him a huge tail instead with which he would accidentally send the killer flying during a conflict and this give him an advantage .... hehe I AM joking I would not do that to Talon...Blackbart maybe

My question is would you like to make her a victim, maybe used her as a lure before she is mutilated ..

Or should I just keep going as I am?

Any ideas would be welcomed!

 

[Veroe]

That's BB's say, of course, Yeishia.

But I think its important to ask: If you do use your character as a victim, would you still wish to continue in the thread with another character?

 

[Sweetp4u]

Well since I reply to the previous post, any ol E name works lol I will edit it to fix his own name mess up As for how she heard it, she knows Talon better than ya think so Lana knows alot more than expected

I don't see why we can't have a few witches to cause trouble? No reason to off her, but I do like the idea of her causing trouble with spells gone wrong. Course that is just me and I love a good chuckle.

 

[yeishia]

Sweet thanks for input......

I love humor hehe don't get to write it much

 

[Sweetp4u]

Ty for listening to me ramble lol


I edited BB's first post (he can spank me later) and linked everyone's profile by their Lit ID with their Character's name so we can find details easier. Also a few other misc links of info. Like CK lay out (think there is a second descript too) , Rules and City History post from BB I found.

If anyone sees a helpful post in the ooc I missed that a short cut to will help let me know the post # and I will link it up there or try and explain to BB how to do it

 

[VampiricTouch]

OMG It's SOOOO organized!!!! cheers and jumps up and down excitedly

Would you consider this one part of the City History as well? Post 36

I think this is the second description you were talking about, but it's not much of a description... if anything it's like an update/clarification of where everyone was at... at that point in time.

 

[yeishia]

That's BB's say, of course, Yeishia.

But I think its important to ask: If you do use your character as a victim, would you still wish to continue in the thread with another character?

Good point Veroe....

OMG It's SOOOO organized!!!! cheers and jumps up and down excitedly

Would you consider this one part of the City History as well? Post 36

I think this is the second description you were talking about, but it's not much of a description... if anything it's like an update/clarification of where everyone was at... at that point in time.

Thanks for the second description VT... tells me where Talons suite actually is..

Talons suite is now Shaylyn's

I do hope Lana was gone by the time she brought her detective back

Did he clean out his stuff or can Shay go snopping He He

 

[BLACK BART]

Vt. Shay is very young but if she ever meets up with Maya I am thinking maybe.. some idiot who tried to burn her at the stake; I will work on that if we ever interact or try and use a protective spell which amplifies instead of reducing maybe

I was thinking Bart. You say you need victims?

I think my witch may be supercilious given that Vt joined us as a witch... albeit a more complex powerful and efficient one ( Love the Secret Garden btw.) with the same purpose ie: to help Talon. Do we need two witches?

I cant see really how she (Shay) will fit into the story, with the exception of maybe sleeping with all the chars male and femaleto perhaps give a bit of balance or even comedic relief with spells gone wrong etc. of course I have no problem with that!

I was thinking of putting a protection spell on Talon, it would give him a huge tail instead with which he would accidentally send the killer flying during a conflict and this give him an advantage .... hehe I AM joking I would not do that to Talon...Blackbart maybe

My question is would you like to make her a victim, maybe used her as a lure before she is mutilated ..

Or should I just keep going as I am?

Any ideas would be welcomed!

OK. I'm NOT up for your character being a victim and having her killed off.

Reasons why?

Shay has HUGE opportunities most of the other characters don't as of yet.

She's been given a task by Talon...(one subplot)

About to bed the one and only official investigator of a crime that blow Haven wide open (several subplots)

And has yet to define which side she's on (several MORE subplots possible)

Witch, a word to me that is a general term, not necessarily meaning having the same powers, abilities and definitely not motives...

Give your character, and the thread, a chance to fully develop

To my knowledge (Yes, albeit a limited one, SweetP ) there are at least four subplots being developed and the fun is just starting....

I love the comical aspect of a few spells backfiring and maybe later using Shay as bait...

But not having her as a victim that would almost certainly write her off...

 

[BLACK BART]

Ty for listening to me ramble lol


I edited BB's first post (he can spank me later) and linked everyone's profile by their Lit ID with their Character's name so we can find details easier. Also a few other misc links of info. Like CK lay out (think there is a second descript too) , Rules and City History post from BB I found.

If anyone sees a helpful post in the ooc I missed that a short cut to will help let me know the post # and I will link it up there or try and explain to BB how to do it

Good Golly GOSH!

A man gets his cave exactly the way he wasn't it and some woman comes in and cleans it up?????

What does he dare say?

Nice job SweetP and thank you Mistress

the spanking, will most definitely come later, for you

 

[Veroe]

OK. I'm NOT up for your character being a victim and having her killed off.

Reasons why?

Shay has HUGE opportunities most of the other characters don't as of yet.

She's been given a task by Talon...(one subplot)

About to bed the one and only official investigator of a crime that blow Haven wide open (several subplots)

And has yet to define which side she's on (several MORE subplots possible)

Witch, a word to me that is a general term, not necessarily meaning having the same powers, abilities and definitely not motives...

Give your character, and the thread, a chance to fully develop

To my knowledge (Yes, albeit a limited one, SweetP ) there are at least four subplots being developed and the fun is just starting....

I love the comical aspect of a few spells backfiring and maybe later using Shay as bait...

But not having her as a victim that would almost certainly write her off...

I think I have to agree with BB, on this, Yeishia.

Most specifically on the potential plotline between Shay and Sullivan. I really enjoyed the interaction between the two characters so far. Because I think Shay could be a good character foil to Light Ice's Sullivan. It will give him a unjaded fun-loving perspective to play off the gritty film noir detective aspect of Sullivan's character.

What does everyone else think?

 

[kittenofdeath]

I think I have to agree with BB, on this, Yeishia.

Most specifically on the potential plotline between Shay and Sullivan. I really enjoyed the interaction between the two characters so far. Because I think Shay could be a good character foil to Light Ice's Sullivan. It will give him a unjaded fun-loving perspective to play off the gritty film noir detective aspect of Sullivan's character.

What does everyone else think?

i vote towards not killing anyone off, though since there are no black charaters, horror movie law says that one of the first to pair off and get some will be next to die

 

[BLACK BART]

though since there are no black charaters, horror movie law says that one of the first to pair off and get some will be next to die

GULP

 

[Veroe]

i vote towards not killing anyone off, though since there are no black charaters, horror movie law says that one of the first to pair off and get some will be next to die

Well then, if anyone hears something in a dark room or the basement or the woods don't go off alone to investigate, and for the love of god if you do don't tell the other person: "I'll be right back."