OOC for "the River Runs Red"

[BLACK BART]

SweetP it's okay.... I'll be competing with you! Lets see who lasts the longest!!!

Mmmmm, I think I sense a second victim, err, volunteer in the fore-mentioned orgy...

 

[VampiricTouch]

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Originally Posted by kittenofdeath View Post
i vote towards not killing anyone off, though since there are no black charaters, horror movie law says that one of the first to pair off and get some will be next to die





I'm wondering what consumates "getting some"? Rushed back and checked... Shay & Sullivan are neck and neck with Sky & Talon, so it could hang in the balance of a single post?

Of course if they all qualify half of the writers are technically on death row?

They're no longer neck and neck!! Seems Shay and Sullivan have won in terms of the first to be 'getting some'.

She sends a note to The Narrator about who to hit up next on his list...

 

[The_Narrator]

They're no longer neck and neck!! Seems Shay and Sullivan have won in terms of the first to be 'getting some'.

She sends a note to The Narrator about who to hit up next on his list...

Indeed. But perhaps it's not who goes first, but who cums last, that counts?

 

[VampiricTouch]

Then you'll be waiting a very very very very long time to find out? I do hope you're a patient killer....

 

[yeishia]

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[VampiricTouch]

I will be MIA tomorrow and at least 3 days after that. I'm praying it will be three days and that will be it, but I doubt it. I'm going home and there's a terrifying lack of privacy there.

 

[yeishia]

Miss you already

 

[BLACK BART]

I will be MIA tomorrow and at least 3 days after that. I'm praying it will be three days and that will be it, but I doubt it. I'm going home and there's a terrifying lack of privacy there.

The horror of it all *hugs* You'll make it through and come back to us.... yes?

Hope it's a pleasant journey and visit VT

 

[Veroe]

Sorry it took me so long to respond guys, but I was thinking up that flashback and then debating whether or not to use it.

I'm still not sure I should've used it. I was afraid it would seem out of place and with the rest of the post the way it is it gives Sweet very little to respond to.

Anyway, tell me what you guys think about it, OK?

 

[VampiricTouch]

(2 hours before vanishing)

I loved it. It definitely brought a lot of sympathy from me for Harrison. It also provides a window into Harrison's past for a reader to see... esp since the reader doesn't get the nice timeline between Talon Harrison and Lilly.

I think this is a tangible statement of a tension filled history between the three and it also brings up the questions of why Harrison still plays to being Talon's lapdog.

Edit: As to what SweetP can respond to... Well she's a busy woman. She's got people all lined up to see her... At least it seems that Sullivan's up and haring to go grill her. Besides, she's a business to run, I think she can keep herself quite busy... Of course thats for her to decide.... but I think she'll be just fine...

and yes I'll be back

 

[BLACK BART]

Sorry it took me so long to respond guys, but I was thinking up that flashback and then debating whether or not to use it.

I'm still not sure I should've used it. I was afraid it would seem out of place and with the rest of the post the way it is it gives Sweet very little to respond to.

Anyway, tell me what you guys think about it, OK?

Heh, when SweetP wants to she can respond to anything... or in some cases absolutely nothing

Excellent post V, gave me an understanding as to the depth of V's character and his pain....

 

[Veroe]

Thank you everybody for your feedback.

I wanted to use that so: 1.) to get across that the way Harrison is living like a hermit is not really what Lilly would've wanted for him. 2.) To give everyone an idea what Lilly was like before going crazy.

I got a flashback in mind between Talon and Harrison too-just need an appropos moment to use it. And don't worry when I see the oppurtunity to use it I'll PM it to you BB so you can put your 2 cents in on it before I post it.

 

[Sweetp4u]

A very good post indeed V

and what BB is trying to say is I blab on and on and on and on and on and on too much

 

[Veroe]

Everybody's doing a fantastic job on their posts in IC. Coudos everyone.

 

[yeishia]

Jack's not having a good day

I hope you have fun with my post

If Sweet or Ice "You ARE not amused: ( Queen Victoria quote) It can easily be removed

ROFLMAO

oopsy!

 

[VampiricTouch]

-Steals online to catch up reading-

Oh gosh.... I seriously thought Sweetp was going to get fucked there and then... I suppose she still can...

 

[yeishia]

By whom or what ? he he

She has choices now lol


:caning: Go on I deserve it!:caning:

 

[VampiricTouch]

Well... I'm not sure how any of this is going to be handled... Especially since I wouldn't know what to do with myself if it happened to Maya.

 

[Sweetp4u]

I can not even respond right now ... I have yet to stop laughing my ass off to even think of something, anything, scolding or otherwise!

 

[yeishia]

* grins*


wait till you see my spell misfires hehe

 

[BLACK BART]

Thank you everybody for your feedback.

I wanted to use that so: 1.) to get across that the way Harrison is living like a hermit is not really what Lilly would've wanted for him. 2.) To give everyone an idea what Lilly was like before going crazy.

I got a flashback in mind between Talon and Harrison too-just need an appropos moment to use it. And don't worry when I see the oppurtunity to use it I'll PM it to you BB so you can put your 2 cents in on it before I post it.

Glad to see you're getting into the character V I can't wait to see what you come up with! And with inflation it's about 50 cents worth now, unless you're limiting me?

 

[BLACK BART]

and what BB is trying to say is I blab on and on and on and on and on and on too much

Me? Say THAT? Nope! Uhhh UHHH, not me, wasn't even thinking it, not a bit Nope, not one teeny, tiny iota

 

[BLACK BART]

Everybody's doing a fantastic job on their posts in IC. Coudos everyone.

Indeed, I agree, love the plotting and character building, we've some great characters shaping up in this one V, doncha think?

 

[Veroe]

Wow! Sullivan's now no. 1 on PETA's hit list. Killing Shay's cats was unexpected and shocking!

Should we bring them back? Or perhaps the question is does Yeishia want them back? Like Sweet alluded to in her post they can be returned to life being creatures of a mystical nature as I understand it. I even wonder if this isn't a good oppurtinity to involve some of the other characters too?

 

[BLACK BART]

Wow! Sullivan's now no. 1 on PETA's hit list. Killing Shay's cats was unexpected and shocking!

Should we bring them back? Or perhaps the question is does Yeishia want them back? Like Sweet alluded to in her post they can be returned to life being creatures of a mystical nature as I understand it. I even wonder if this isn't a good opportunity to involve some of the other characters too?

Good questions, the answers I'm wondering about myself. I've PM'd everyone that was involved and am waiting to hear back.

Personally I want the thread to continue but do think the air needs to cleared a bit, so want to stress this...

We all are entitled to our own opinions and made a commitment to this thread and the other writers. We've also (all of us) enjoyed the thread and gave a lot of time, writing and thought to it.

That said lets keep our comments level headed and constructive. If you feel you need to voice stronger words do so via pm, unless you enjoy embarrassing yourself publicly?

I'm open for your comments in any form via any medium, nuff said