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Is I supposed to be the new girl who wanted to see Lana? Thats not quite settled in but is bout to be whisked off to meet Talon for the first time? If so you'll be waiting another ~20 hours before I'll get the privacy/time to write/post.
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Yes, it's a reference, a reason to bring her into the scheme of things... Not time related as the post for Talon, but simply to involve her?
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Name: once Edgar Eugene Harrison jr. now he just goes by the name of Harrison.
Age:27 when turned actually 123
Height: 5'7''
Weight: 160
Race: Vampire of the Belle Morte line (Incubus)
Appearance: Dark hair bound in ponytail and muscular. Wears blue business suits buttoned up and always immaculate.
Quirks: Being an incubus Harrison has the ability referred to as Ardeur, drawing power from the lust of others, but his individual quirk of this power is that it makes him a victim of it. He is exceptionally good food for other vampires with the power of Ardeur-tripling or quadrupling the yield of power gained from sexual relations with him. And he has to be constantly on guard with anyone he has such relations with for they may become addicted to drawing lust from him. He's had his one and only love in his life as a vampire end horribly because of that.
As a result Harrison's very reserved, a wall-flower, and home-body. He doesn't go out socializing or partying he stays at home and works constantly.
He's also still mourning the death of his wife and sire: Lilly.
History: Edgar E. Harrison jr. was a desperado of the old west robbing banks, stagecoaches, railroads the whole Billy the Kid wannabe act. Unfortunately his career as a rough and rowdy bandit didn't last long in an old west changing into the modern west. He got caught by a posse and dragged into a jail in the middle of nowhere texas. There he met a woman, a vampire, a succubus of the Belle Morte Line named Lilly who worked at the town's brothel.
During the nights as he waited his execution she would come to the window and they would talk, for Lilly had a problem with her power of Ardeur, she couldn't stop attracting anyone she was around for long-an asset for a whore but not so great when she just wanted to talk to someone. fortunately no matter how badly she attracted Harrison being locked in that jailcell prevented him from acting rashly on it.
So they would talk, and get to know eachother, and become friends. Until the night before his execution she decided to free him and turn him. From then on they were inseperable traveling the world over for a hundred years. Feeding and fending for eachother, but eventually Lilly grew too needy for him, addicted to him, and driven mad by it.
She locked him away for years as her sex slave until one day she suddenly became lucent again and walked off from their house. Harrison later found her dead body burnt to a crisp by the sunrise.
Now he lives to work as the business manager for Talon, only feeding when absolutely necessary and never seeking any sort of relationship with anyone beyond that.
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Hey BB.
I had an idea about the friendship between your character and mine. Can Talon have known Lilly and Harrison as acquaintances if not friends from before her death, which was why Talon has taken Harrison under his protection, and is looking for ways to help him get out of his shell.
And Sweet
Would you like to pursue the direction we were going down in Rui oras in this new incarnation of it?
Age:27 when turned actually 123
Height: 5'7''
Weight: 160
Race: Vampire of the Belle Morte line (Incubus)
Appearance: Dark hair bound in ponytail and muscular. Wears blue business suits buttoned up and always immaculate.
Quirks: Being an incubus Harrison has the ability referred to as Ardeur, drawing power from the lust of others, but his individual quirk of this power is that it makes him a victim of it. He is exceptionally good food for other vampires with the power of Ardeur-tripling or quadrupling the yield of power gained from sexual relations with him. And he has to be constantly on guard with anyone he has such relations with for they may become addicted to drawing lust from him. He's had his one and only love in his life as a vampire end horribly because of that.
As a result Harrison's very reserved, a wall-flower, and home-body. He doesn't go out socializing or partying he stays at home and works constantly.
He's also still mourning the death of his wife and sire: Lilly.
History: Edgar E. Harrison jr. was a desperado of the old west robbing banks, stagecoaches, railroads the whole Billy the Kid wannabe act. Unfortunately his career as a rough and rowdy bandit didn't last long in an old west changing into the modern west. He got caught by a posse and dragged into a jail in the middle of nowhere texas. There he met a woman, a vampire, a succubus of the Belle Morte Line named Lilly who worked at the town's brothel.
During the nights as he waited his execution she would come to the window and they would talk, for Lilly had a problem with her power of Ardeur, she couldn't stop attracting anyone she was around for long-an asset for a whore but not so great when she just wanted to talk to someone. fortunately no matter how badly she attracted Harrison being locked in that jailcell prevented him from acting rashly on it.
So they would talk, and get to know eachother, and become friends. Until the night before his execution she decided to free him and turn him. From then on they were inseperable traveling the world over for a hundred years. Feeding and fending for eachother, but eventually Lilly grew too needy for him, addicted to him, and driven mad by it.
She locked him away for years as her sex slave until one day she suddenly became lucent again and walked off from their house. Harrison later found her dead body burnt to a crisp by the sunrise.
Now he lives to work as the business manager for Talon, only feeding when absolutely necessary and never seeking any sort of relationship with anyone beyond that.
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Hey BB.
I had an idea about the friendship between your character and mine. Can Talon have known Lilly and Harrison as acquaintances if not friends from before her death, which was why Talon has taken Harrison under his protection, and is looking for ways to help him get out of his shell.
And Sweet
Would you like to pursue the direction we were going down in Rui oras in this new incarnation of it?
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Welcome Veroe!
Great bio and perfect timing!
Your reference to knowing Lilly works too, Talon will see Harrison as a project and sympathize for him knowing what Lilly was really like... Talon will drag him out every chance he gets!
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OK Veroe! Wicked dreams and plenty of them!
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- This might be a bit presumptuous to ask... but could I get an idea of what people will "see" when they meet Maya? (Location would be sweet as well, but for now isn't quite necessary, along with a tag whether friend or foe) so as a writer I have some warning as to how fast someone will want to kill her (or bed her) because of appearances?
(it'll also give me a gauge on what sort of tension I'll be handling...)
- I'm guessing Veroe||Harrison would most likely see Lilly? And sweet dreams!
(it'll also give me a gauge on what sort of tension I'll be handling...)
- I'm guessing Veroe||Harrison would most likely see Lilly? And sweet dreams!
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VT, if you're more comfortable with either Talon of Harrison coming to you it can be written? I'm thinking a good image either might see is the npc Veroe and I have been talking of called Lilly? That is assuming I'm reading you correctly in the "faceless witch" reference you made in her bio?
Veroe might give you the details as she was Harrisons lost love and I'll follow along with what he decides?
As for friend or foe... assume friend, or at least neutral, Haven draws it's name from still welcoming all kinds regardless of their past, so other then some minor bartering from Talon there shouldn't be much resistance....
Hope that helps?
Veroe might give you the details as she was Harrisons lost love and I'll follow along with what he decides?
As for friend or foe... assume friend, or at least neutral, Haven draws it's name from still welcoming all kinds regardless of their past, so other then some minor bartering from Talon there shouldn't be much resistance....
Hope that helps?
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Sounds good to me Veroe, working around the same general direction. Prepare to be teased to hell and back 
As for VT's witch, I am still trying to come up with something Lana could see. Being as she also takes on new appearences and is a lover (not a fighter) I'm thinking along the lines of Lana seeing an attractive woman / friend. Also enables your witch to set up in Carnal Knowledge. By no means does that mean that Lana will persue the witch as a sex toy, incase that makes ya uncomfortable.
Light I have some details of the crime scene that we might wanna discuss? Was hashing it with BB earlier before he had to go to bed. Tho my time is limited, well soon to be as I have to go on a quick trip to Idaho for a week or two. I will post frequently as i can and if I cant, I will move Lana into a sulking rage of no where'sville until I can return.
As for VT's witch, I am still trying to come up with something Lana could see. Being as she also takes on new appearences and is a lover (not a fighter) I'm thinking along the lines of Lana seeing an attractive woman / friend. Also enables your witch to set up in Carnal Knowledge. By no means does that mean that Lana will persue the witch as a sex toy, incase that makes ya uncomfortable.
Light I have some details of the crime scene that we might wanna discuss? Was hashing it with BB earlier before he had to go to bed. Tho my time is limited, well soon to be as I have to go on a quick trip to Idaho for a week or two. I will post frequently as i can and if I cant, I will move Lana into a sulking rage of no where'sville until I can return.
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finsihed the profile, now i need sleep, badly, night all
Name: Isaac Redgrave
Race: Vampire
Height: 6ft
Appearance: Isaac’s most obvious identifying feature is colour, or the lack of it, Isaac was born with OCA1b TS, more commonly known as albinism, something that got him in to quite a bit of trouble back in his early years. He normally keeps the signs of it hidden, dyeing his white hair, wearing tinted glasses to hide his red eyes, luckily being a vampire comes with pale skin or he would have to get a fake tan.
(Here’s a picture, just ignore the holy water part, that’s not a permanent thing http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs48/f/2009/150/a/d/Unsound_Endeavor_by_LigerNekoka.jpg )
Sexual preference: Straight
Age: 504
Profession: Trader/arms dealer/mercenary/shop owner/anything you want
History:
During Isaac’s early human life, he was ostracized by what passed for ‘civilized’ society in those times due to his appearance, but luckily for him he lived in a port town, and eventually fell in with a group of pirates who saw a sort of kindred spirit in the unruly young lad.
A killer instinct and one hell of a violent streak helped him climb up through the ranks and eventually become captain of the ship, after the previous captain died to an infection. After a few years of terrorizing the seas, in which time he made quite a name for himself as an exceptionally violent man when opposed, as well as being quite a tactical mastermind, he stopped in at a port and stole the heart of the wrong woman.
He had hit on a young and newly turned vampire, and somehow managed to sweep her off her feet, she was the unwilling plaything of an older and more experienced vampire, and decided that she wanted Isaac for herself, she turned him that night.
He was rather confused when he awoke, but his ‘beloved’ explained it to him, slowly, and quite a few times until he understood, at that point he want sure how he felt about his new state of being, but his sires master did, as far as he was concerned there was just a little to much life left in his undead body and decided to do him a favor by stamping it out.
The two fought, at first it seemed Isaac had the upper hand, but the vampire knew more of their limits, and had more than just physical strength on his side, quickly turning the tide with strange powers. Isaac was used to playing the underdog though, so he adapted and bided his time, waiting until he had a clear shot before badly wounding the vampire and escaping in to the night.
That was the start of Isaacs unlife, over the years he had quite a few notable adventures, from his life as a pirate, to the present day, he doesn’t have some big business and ridiculous amounts of money like most vampires his age (though he doesn’t exactly need more money) he finds stuff like that too easy, he only has a small shop in Haven and a side business as a mercenary and dealer for whatever in the world you want.
Powers: Isaac has the standard vampiric gifts, such as strength and speed ect ect, and he can grow a whole mouthful of sharp teeth if he feels like it, but his more advanced tricks reflect the life he leads, he cant fly or anything like that, and he’s no better at magic than anyone else (he has quite a few good books and manuals on the subject though) what he can do is heal, he can heal anything and he does it fast, impale him, he’ll pull out the blade and the blood will stop in seconds, rip off his arm, he’ll grow a new one and punch you in the face at the same time.
Name: Isaac Redgrave
Race: Vampire
Height: 6ft
Appearance: Isaac’s most obvious identifying feature is colour, or the lack of it, Isaac was born with OCA1b TS, more commonly known as albinism, something that got him in to quite a bit of trouble back in his early years. He normally keeps the signs of it hidden, dyeing his white hair, wearing tinted glasses to hide his red eyes, luckily being a vampire comes with pale skin or he would have to get a fake tan.
(Here’s a picture, just ignore the holy water part, that’s not a permanent thing http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs48/f/2009/150/a/d/Unsound_Endeavor_by_LigerNekoka.jpg )
Sexual preference: Straight
Age: 504
Profession: Trader/arms dealer/mercenary/shop owner/anything you want
History:
During Isaac’s early human life, he was ostracized by what passed for ‘civilized’ society in those times due to his appearance, but luckily for him he lived in a port town, and eventually fell in with a group of pirates who saw a sort of kindred spirit in the unruly young lad.
A killer instinct and one hell of a violent streak helped him climb up through the ranks and eventually become captain of the ship, after the previous captain died to an infection. After a few years of terrorizing the seas, in which time he made quite a name for himself as an exceptionally violent man when opposed, as well as being quite a tactical mastermind, he stopped in at a port and stole the heart of the wrong woman.
He had hit on a young and newly turned vampire, and somehow managed to sweep her off her feet, she was the unwilling plaything of an older and more experienced vampire, and decided that she wanted Isaac for herself, she turned him that night.
He was rather confused when he awoke, but his ‘beloved’ explained it to him, slowly, and quite a few times until he understood, at that point he want sure how he felt about his new state of being, but his sires master did, as far as he was concerned there was just a little to much life left in his undead body and decided to do him a favor by stamping it out.
The two fought, at first it seemed Isaac had the upper hand, but the vampire knew more of their limits, and had more than just physical strength on his side, quickly turning the tide with strange powers. Isaac was used to playing the underdog though, so he adapted and bided his time, waiting until he had a clear shot before badly wounding the vampire and escaping in to the night.
That was the start of Isaacs unlife, over the years he had quite a few notable adventures, from his life as a pirate, to the present day, he doesn’t have some big business and ridiculous amounts of money like most vampires his age (though he doesn’t exactly need more money) he finds stuff like that too easy, he only has a small shop in Haven and a side business as a mercenary and dealer for whatever in the world you want.
Powers: Isaac has the standard vampiric gifts, such as strength and speed ect ect, and he can grow a whole mouthful of sharp teeth if he feels like it, but his more advanced tricks reflect the life he leads, he cant fly or anything like that, and he’s no better at magic than anyone else (he has quite a few good books and manuals on the subject though) what he can do is heal, he can heal anything and he does it fast, impale him, he’ll pull out the blade and the blood will stop in seconds, rip off his arm, he’ll grow a new one and punch you in the face at the same time.
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We're off to an excellent start. Thank You each and everyone for your patience and imaginations, I'm in awe of the talent we have in this thread....
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Well, I take it people who look on your character see the people they desire most, correct?
If that's so, then Harrison would see Lilly, his dead wife and sire (siress?). Though as the storyline myself and Sweet's going to pursue progresses he'll more than likely see her character (Lana) when he looks at yours later on.
As to how Harrison will react to it-considering he has a lot of regret and guilt about how their relationship ended (What with her being driven crazy by his power and committing the Vampire form of suicide) and no form of closure in the twenty years since...he'll be terrified of your character...not that he's afraid you'll hurt him...just looking at your character and seeing his dead wife will be painful enough.
Sweet's character, Lana, will frighten him similarly, since she's a succubus she'll affect him the same way Lilly did on the inside. In the original thread I had him get drunk and mistake Lana for Lilly.
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Welcome back V its good to see ya back in action. And you're so right BB, lots of excellent talent in here.. So why did you let me in again?? This time around wont be like the first as I've changed lana a bit to be more ... well less friendly than she was before. More calculating I guess would be the word, but not quite a cold hearted bitch
as for RL i leave in the morning for two weeks, but I will post as often as I can or move lana to an out of the way place to not hinder the story, or slow it down. There's plenty of time, room and plot to go through before I have to do much more than write glaring @ talon and using blackmail
So don't feel too rushed V to get into an indepth scene right away. *sigh*
its good to see ya back in action. And you're so right BB, lots of excellent talent in here.. So why did you let me in again?? This time around wont be like the first as I've changed lana a bit to be more ... well less friendly than she was before. More calculating I guess would be the word, but not quite a cold hearted bitch as for RL i leave in the morning for two weeks, but I will post as often as I can or move lana to an out of the way place to not hinder the story, or slow it down. There's plenty of time, room and plot to go through before I have to do much more than write glaring @ talon and using blackmail
So don't feel too rushed V to get into an indepth scene right away. *sigh*
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SweetP is there a need for Maya to meet Lana after getting escorted to her suite? What would be the payment for her stay at Lana's place?
Also for whoever it is that needs to meet Maya, whether Talon or Harrison, is it alright to meet in the suite itself? or is there a back way down to wherever meeting room it is
Also for whoever it is that needs to meet Maya, whether Talon or Harrison, is it alright to meet in the suite itself? or is there a back way down to wherever meeting room it is
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It is a completely new beginning, not a follow up at all. With the exception to V with Harrison and Lana angle that never had a chance to play out for mischief. I told V that I wouldn't mind writing what we were going to before with seeing how the two succubi/inccubi meshed with the two intense abilities.
His magnification and her ability to absorb and channel those energies once absorbed / fed off of.
Should be way explosive
His magnification and her ability to absorb and channel those energies once absorbed / fed off of.
Should be way explosive
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Talon's suite is in a front corner for easy access. It would be a quick trip inside through the side (day entrance) up the open balcony stairs to the guest floor / rooms and a short trip down the hall.
Lana is currently within Talon's suite, waiting for Harrison to enter. Talon is out in the club some where by the bar i believe (he is sulking cuz he didnt win the arguement lol) , talking to Dark Emp's character?
Lana's establishment is like a free clinic of sorts. A half way house more apt? She is backed by Talon, her inventions and old money from aging without a shopping addiction. So she doesn't charge those who need a home. In exchange they work in trade, in whatever means they are able to.
For instance, the cook lives basicly on the roof (thinking a gargoyle man) for his 'rent' he fixes everyone's meals. waitresses wait tables in exchange, etc etc and so forth.
The entrance fee to nonresidents, the drink sales etc also help keep CK running. Your character has the gift of sight etc, so perhaps some kind of gypsy tarrot thing or a few displays of concoctions created are sold to help with maintaining CK? Open to ideas, but the exchange is in trade skills.
Tho I dont think Lana has a resident male ho to trade with *sigh*
Lana is currently within Talon's suite, waiting for Harrison to enter. Talon is out in the club some where by the bar i believe (he is sulking cuz he didnt win the arguement lol) , talking to Dark Emp's character?
Lana's establishment is like a free clinic of sorts. A half way house more apt? She is backed by Talon, her inventions and old money from aging without a shopping addiction. So she doesn't charge those who need a home. In exchange they work in trade, in whatever means they are able to.
For instance, the cook lives basicly on the roof (thinking a gargoyle man) for his 'rent' he fixes everyone's meals. waitresses wait tables in exchange, etc etc and so forth.
The entrance fee to nonresidents, the drink sales etc also help keep CK running. Your character has the gift of sight etc, so perhaps some kind of gypsy tarrot thing or a few displays of concoctions created are sold to help with maintaining CK? Open to ideas, but the exchange is in trade skills.
Tho I dont think Lana has a resident male ho to trade with *sigh*
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Talon has been politely put off by Sky (Dee's character) and is now looking for the third strike, Shay... in the hour...
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lol poor baby Lana wasn't a strike out on HER part.. Someone was being a meanie!
Poor picked on succubi....... Yeah ok, not too believable is it? lol I leave in the AM and just got done questioning my grandmother to find out she DOES have internet... omigawd! Cuz like this town has one stop light... lol So WOOT they're upgraded to the y2k stuff! Heard they even had a subway open up there.. lol so weird going to BFE places. Anyway, see ya sooner than I thought
Poor picked on succubi....... Yeah ok, not too believable is it? lol I leave in the AM and just got done questioning my grandmother to find out she DOES have internet... omigawd! Cuz like this town has one stop light... lol So WOOT they're upgraded to the y2k stuff! Heard they even had a subway open up there.. lol so weird going to BFE places. Anyway, see ya sooner than I thought
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YAY~!!! Sweetp will be here sooner!
Now... uh.. is Talon grilling me or is Harrison grilling me? and since I really don't want to post in the middle of someone else's conversation....
(and man do I feel sorry for Harrison if he's the one who has to deal with me... first the succubi and then the woman that'll look exactly like Lilly....)
Now... uh.. is Talon grilling me or is Harrison grilling me? and since I really don't want to post in the middle of someone else's conversation....
(and man do I feel sorry for Harrison if he's the one who has to deal with me... first the succubi and then the woman that'll look exactly like Lilly....)
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Harrison's currently meeting with Lana right now, VT. So my guess is Talon is on his way to see you after Yeishia's character. I believe Light Ice's character is on the first floor having a drink all by his lonesome if you feel the need to interact with some one right now, or perhaps Dee's character now that she's alone.
And see my post to get an idea on how Harrison will react to your character once he knows it isn't Lilly. Poor guy, is right, I plan to have him freak out hillariously when he looks at you and sees his dead wife.
BTW, Light Ice I really like the reimagining of Sullivan you've done here, coudos.
And see my post to get an idea on how Harrison will react to your character once he knows it isn't Lilly. Poor guy, is right, I plan to have him freak out hillariously when he looks at you and sees his dead wife.
BTW, Light Ice I really like the reimagining of Sullivan you've done here, coudos.
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I was thinking that the girl Maya sees in the search turns out to be one of the killer's first victims.... or someone that was caught up in the whole mess down below.... what do ya'll think
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