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[FurryFury]

Yes, I did everything to keep it from being a snuff. But, I did mention killing in the text. I don't think they mean it's a snuff story, though. That...

* Is there excessive degradation, violence, snuff, or abuse of characters in your submission? If it is submitted as a Horror story, is it more snuff than actual horror?

is a catch all for anything they don't feel OK with posting. Snuff just happens to be in there. No, it's far from a snuff story, but it does have degradation and even some abuse of characters in it. But, as for any of it being excessive...I guess that's for the reader to decide. And, I'm guessing some could see violence in there, too. Again, it's the reader who decides that.

I had trouble getting Laurel to allow "My New Boss" to be in the BDSM section. That's actually why I posting the installments here. She put the story in the nonconsent area, because there was bondage. I don't think she understands some of the feelings of her site's readers, or she's trying to control things, to keep her site out of any trouble.

And I understand that. She's got priorities. I thought there might be a problem getting this one published, from the beginning. I guess I was right. There are other ways to get the story out, though. Anyone got ideas that I might look into? I could send you all personal copies, but that would be a lot of emails for me. LOL.

Yummy! I love it.

Not long ago I was faced with having something I wrote be edited of anything that, in my eyes, made it worthwhile but having it be published or deciding I'd rather it NOT be published if it were made into something with no meaning for me.

I chose option two.

I'm glad I did.

 

[DVS]

~ Suggestion... if I may?
Embed the story as 'text' (.txt) format into the body of an email, Sir.

I'd end up sending a lot of emails. But, it's getting closer to that option, every day.

 

[Victoria_2001_02769]

I'd end up sending a lot of emails. But, it's getting closer to that option, every day.

~ Maybe one email with the addresses divided between the To: and CC: fields is in order versus multiple emails is in order?

 

[DVS]

I guess I don't have a problem sending a few emails. So, anybody who wants to read this story, "A Victim of Subterfuge" (BANNED BY LITEROTICA EDITORS!!! that should get a few more interested...LOL), listen up!

If you want to read the story, send me a PM with the email address you want me to send it to. I'll wait a day or two and let the messages accumulate. I don't have a problem sending a few group emails, if I get my story read.

To make the emails small, I'll send the story in text format. That's a more universal method than any other word processor. Right now, it's in MS Word Rich text format. And it could mess with your Word dictionary, if you live somewhere other than the U.S.

I once had an editor who lived in another country. We sent Word files through emails. After a while, I noticed my Word program spell check was finding the British spelling of words, and not the American spellings. It was finding things like colour, instead of color, for example.

I have no problem sending a text file, although we are talking about 20,000+ words. The font that is in most text editors isn't that easy on the eyes for that much reading. But, I also know the default font can be changed, if your operating system is Windows based.

So, please send your PMs, if you want to read this story. And let me know, via this thread if you honestly liked the story. I might ask Laurel to view the replys some day, so please don't say anything that you don't truly beliieve. And thanks.

Oh, if you don't read this message and get your PM sent to me in a couple of days, don't worry. Just send me a PM anytime and let me know you want to read "A Victim of Subterfuge". Also remember to include an email address and I'll send you a text formated copy.

Oh, and as a necessary evil I need to include. I know some of you might want to send the story to others. I don't want it to be floating around the Internet and eventually end up on some web site that I can't get it removed from. But, I must say that any copies of the story must be ONLY in its complete and unedited form, AND including my copyright. This is my baby. I hope you treat it as such. That isn't too much to ask, is it?


EDITED TO ADD...

Be sure your email address is spelled correctly. Please, double check it before you hit send. If it's not correct, I won't know and somebody else will get your copy.

AND, if my PM box gets full, don't fret. I check my messages every day. It will be cleaned out so you can try again.

 

[DVS]

~ Maybe one email with the addresses divided between the To: and CC: fields is in order versus multiple emails is in order?

I always send multiple emails BCC, so nobody will be able to see the other email addresses. I hate spammers.

 

[Victoria_2001_02769]

No worries DVS... I fully understand.

I know I am usually more prolific with what I say. But... let me say this about your new story....

WOW! ​

Have You thought about a sequel... or are You already working on one?

 

[gypziedoll]

HEYYYYy I'm back and with nothing to make me squirm *pouts* no fair Sir

 

[BiaTcHiNFiRe]

*bump*

Still busy with ur new story, i like it btw, will say more after i read it all

 

[DVS]

Still busy with ur new story, i like it btw, will say more after i read it all

No, busy with the car, mostly, as well as some house painting, too. I just took my vacation a couple of weeks ago, and some things I started then aren't finished. I'm mostly catching up on things that need to be done before winter sets in. Burrrrrr!

 

[BiaTcHiNFiRe]

A Victim of Subterfuge

Okay so i have read it whole now and heres my opinion.

It's a great story as usualy DVS! I didn't expect anything else, your stories are devious and hot, i just love it. I have really enjoy reading it!!

Only one negative thing about it is i miss some end in that story? Are you sure it's whole?!? Don't get me wrong please, i love the story and i really loved the way you tortured the poor Angela *purrrrrrs*. OMG get tortured like that could be fun i'd love, you devious man you!!

Still, i think the story miss some ending. Like a point when she finaly start answearing Spencer's questions, or get free by other secret agents, or die in that chair or anyhthing ya know?

Is the story done yet or you will write more to this one? I really think it's needed. Write some end to it? Deal with Angela as you see fit, break her or kill her or i dunno, but leave the story open like this isn't allowed! You ethernal teaser!!

I want an end to your stories, to the My New Boss story and to the A Victim of Subterfuge as well. Both of them are great, full of devious torturing, you don't have a clue how much i love it. But do finish them please? Both of your stories, i miss some ending for the fuck toy and for Angela as well.

I am sure you already know what you wanna do with the poor Angela and with the Fuck Toy as well. Be nice and spit it out pleaseeee!!!!! *devious wink*

However you decide, i am fun of your stories and still think you should write books or even better make a movie like that, fuck that would rock!! oppps

What can i say, I LOVED IT!!! And i don't understand why you didnt get aproval to post "A Victim of Subterfuge" on Lit webby?!? :/ Nvm, i have read it so i am happy.

 

[Victoria_2001_02769]

A Victim of Subterfuge

Okay so i have read it whole now and heres my opinion.

It's a great story as usualy DVS! I didn't expect anything else, your stories are devious and hot, i just love it. I have really enjoy reading it!!

Only one negative thing about it is i miss some end in that story? Are you sure it's whole?!? Don't get me wrong please, i love the story and i really loved the way you tortured the poor Angela *purrrrrrs*. OMG get tortured like that could be fun i'd love, you devious man you!!

Still, i think the story miss some ending. Like a point when she finaly start answearing Spencer's questions, or get free by other secret agents, or die in that chair or anyhthing ya know?

Is the story done yet or you will write more to this one? I really think it's needed. Write some end to it? Deal with Angela as you see fit, break her or kill her or i dunno, but leave the story open like this isn't allowed! You ethernal teaser!!

I want an end to your stories, to the My New Boss story and to the A Victim of Subterfuge as well. Both of them are great, full of devious torturing, you don't have a clue how much i love it. But do finish them please? Both of your stories, i miss some ending for the fuck toy and for Angela as well.

I am sure you already know what you wanna do with the poor Angela and with the Fuck Toy as well. Be nice and spit it out pleaseeee!!!!! *devious wink*

However you decide, i am fun of your stories and still think you should write books or even better make a movie like that, fuck that would rock!! oppps

What can i say, I LOVED IT!!! And i don't understand why you didnt get aproval to post "A Victim of Subterfuge" on Lit webby?!? :/ Nvm, i have read it so i am happy.

~ I hope DVS won't mind my 4 cents worth here... I am not answering for Him... not at all. He is quite capable of doing that for himself. But... those of us who also follow His stories have come to expect the "open-enededness" of them - because it is that unfinished quality... that keeps us on the edges of our chairs, eager for another installment; eager to read what His devious mind will challenge us to think.

We all mentally find ourselves in the position of 'fuck toy'.... and it leaves us filled with need and want; and many of us find ourselves greatly turned on when we're through reading.

This is just my humble opinion. I am not trying to speak for any of the other ladies who visit here.

 

[gypziedoll]

biatchinfire...i agree with you, that it would make an AWESOME movie.....

as well as I thinksome of Sir DVS's stories would make wonderful books....I just love how his devious twisted mind works

Victoria, well said and I agree with you 100%

i hope you are well Sir, take care of you....*hugs*

 

[Pagen]

A Victim of Subterfuge

I loved it! Thanks DVS.

 

[gypziedoll]

stopping in to leave you a little hello from the spanish moss oaks of the bayou Sir

 

[Blushing Bottom]

*peeking*

 

[BiaTcHiNFiRe]

Lusting for new installment

 

[Chained_Enigma]

*bumping cause this thread is hot*
Threads like these make me REALLY wish I wasn't in love with someone who's vanilla...

 

[Victoria_2001_02769]

*bumping cause this thread is hot*
Threads like these make me REALLY wish I wasn't in love with someone who's vanilla...

This is just my humble opinion or feeling... but...
Being in love with, or even in a long-term relationship with, someone who is 'vanilla' - when one's body (and mind) craves to feel/know what is often referred to as 'the dark(er) side', alternate lifestyle, etc. - will soon make the 'vanilla' seem pale in comparison and you will find a way to introduce what you want into your relationship.

 

[gypziedoll]

This is just my humble opinion or feeling... but...
Being in love with, or even in a long-term relationship with, someone who is 'vanilla' - when one's body (and mind) craves to feel/know what is often referred to as 'the dark(er) side', alternate lifestyle, etc. - will soon make the 'vanilla' seem pale in comparison and you will find a way to introduce what you want into your relationship.

sometimes that is just not possible....most people in the vanilla world are scared to venture to the dark side of alternative lifestyles.....just my opinion from my own observations.....

 

[Victoria_2001_02769]

sometimes that is just not possible....most people in the vanilla world are scared to venture to the dark side of alternative lifestyles.....just my opinion from my own observations.....

this is very true my dear. I was beginning to get tired when I replied and I see now where I left out words and forgot to add more at the end of the sentence/paragraph. my bad most definitely... and evidence to myself that I should not reply when I am too tired to think coherently as I respond. *crooked smile*

again, my apologies if what I said was misleading to any. I do realize that it is not always possible to introduce what one craves/needs/wants when in a vanilla relationship specifically for the very reason you stated.

 

[gypziedoll]

this is very true my dear. I was beginning to get tired when I replied and I see now where I left out words and forgot to add more at the end of the sentence/paragraph. my bad most definitely... and evidence to myself that I should not reply when I am too tired to think coherently as I respond. *crooked smile*

again, my apologies if what I said was misleading to any. I do realize that it is not always possible to introduce what one craves/needs/wants when in a vanilla relationship specifically for the very reason you stated.

no worries dahlin'...i have experienced it first hand though as well as have experienced people who eat, sleep, dream, walk, talk, and pray this lifestyle and other alternative ones and when it is finally put in front of them and they realize the power and freedom of it...they run tail....and try to hide from what they truly are.

Only to find for the rest of their lives they have a huge hole in their soul that nothing can repair.

 

[Victoria_2001_02769]

no worries dahlin'...i have experienced it first hand though as well as have experienced people who eat, sleep, dream, walk, talk, and pray this lifestyle and other alternative ones and when it is finally put in front of them and they realize the power and freedom of it...they run tail....and try to hide from what they truly are.

Only to find for the rest of their lives they have a huge hole in their soul that nothing can repair.

*nods slowly*
nothing can repair it (that hole) just as nothing can fill it.

*sighs heavily*
I know of one such person as you have described.

*feels the pain stab at her heart again as a tear courses down her cheek*

 

[gypziedoll]

*nods slowly*
nothing can repair it (that hole) just as nothing can fill it.

*sighs heavily*
I know of one such person as you have described.

*feels the pain stab at her heart again as a tear courses down her cheek*

I'm sorry Petite' I didn't mean to make you cry. I wasn't necessarily talking about Him.....I was just making a general statement about others I have known....please forgive me.

 

[Victoria_2001_02769]

I'm sorry Petite' I didn't mean to make you cry. I wasn't necessarily talking about Him.....I was just making a general statement about others I have known....please forgive me.

Sha babay

je comprends. Pas de qua.
He is the only one I know who has acted in a similar manner as those of whom you speak. There is nothing to forgive ma coeur.
x 13

 

[BiaTcHiNFiRe]

Are we there yet??

I mean, hows the fuck toy DVS ?
(soz i couldnt resist to bump this sexy thread )