Raw Anal Lust

DVS said:
OK, how about some more squirming? I've got another story that I'll be submitting rather soon to Lit. It's called "A Victim of Subterfuge" and I'm sure it will be put in the non-consentual story section. And, I have no problem with that, because that's exactly what it is.

I've been working on this story off and on for a couple of years now, and I must say I'm glad to be at this point in the story's history. I kind of feel like my kid is graduating from something. Well, I don't have any kids so it's just my imagination going a little wild.

I have some minor fine tuning yet to do on the story, and some final proofing for those typos that are so difficult to find. But, I'm guessing sometime in the next couple of weeks, at least, and probably sooner. I hope I've sufficently created some squirm in everyone who is reading this to keep an eye out for this story.

I might add to the squirm factor by saying it has major anal torment in it. Maybe not a lot of it, but what is in there is major. And, I also should say it has NO SEX AT ALL...just this anal torment. Are you starting to understand why I'm sure it will be in the non-consentual section? LOL.

I will say it does have a plot, too. So, there is a story and the story has anal torment in it and the torment is in there with reason, not just torment for torment's sake.

There are a few of you that have read at least one verson of this story, when I was having trouble with story line choices. Don't spoil it for others. Keep this to yourselves. It won't be long before anybody who wants to can read it for themselves.

Oh, if Laurel rejects the story and doesn't publish it, I'll find a place for it. But, I think it will be published. If not...I'll just die. I can't have my kid flunking out!!!!! :rolleyes:


God, I hope I didn't over sell it. I guess we'll find out. LOL.


~ Can't wait to read it, quite anxious to in fact. Your stories are always well done Sir.
 
Looking forward to seeing it DVS!

BTW, I had hot butt monkey sex last night! It's been too long! I thought of this thread afterwards!
 
DVS said:
OK, how about some more squirming? I've got another story that I'll be submitting rather soon to Lit. It's called "A Victim of Subterfuge" and I'm sure it will be put in the non-consentual story section. And, I have no problem with that, because that's exactly what it is.

I've been working on this story off and on for a couple of years now, and I must say I'm glad to be at this point in the story's history. I kind of feel like my kid is graduating from something. Well, I don't have any kids so it's just my imagination going a little wild.

I have some minor fine tuning yet to do on the story, and some final proofing for those typos that are so difficult to find. But, I'm guessing sometime in the next couple of weeks, at least, and probably sooner. I hope I've sufficently created some squirm in everyone who is reading this to keep an eye out for this story.

I might add to the squirm factor by saying it has major anal torment in it. Maybe not a lot of it, but what is in there is major. And, I also should say it has NO SEX AT ALL...just this anal torment. Are you starting to understand why I'm sure it will be in the non-consentual section? LOL.

I will say it does have a plot, too. So, there is a story and the story has anal torment in it and the torment is in there with reason, not just torment for torment's sake.

There are a few of you that have read at least one verson of this story, when I was having trouble with story line choices. Don't spoil it for others. Keep this to yourselves. It won't be long before anybody who wants to can read it for themselves.

Oh, if Laurel rejects the story and doesn't publish it, I'll find a place for it. But, I think it will be published. If not...I'll just die. I can't have my kid flunking out!!!!! :rolleyes:


God, I hope I didn't over sell it. I guess we'll find out. LOL.


eagerly awaiting Sir.....
 
I have a question for everyone in this forum... MYD has decided he wants to overcome my fear of anal sex, so the last 2 days have been spent trying to overcome this by play with my ass and a butt plus. I was wondering if anyone has had any suggestions for making this an exhilarating experience for me. ;)
 
SubKekiLee said:
I have a question for everyone in this forum... MYD has decided he wants to overcome my fear of anal sex, so the last 2 days have been spent trying to overcome this by play with my ass and a butt plus. I was wondering if anyone has had any suggestions for making this an exhilarating experience for me. ;)
When you say fear, is it a justifiable fear from some past trama in your life? And is this attempt to help you overcome your fear your choice, too?

Do you want to experience anal sex? Not because your Dom wants it, but because YOU want it? Is it or was it one of your hard limits or one of your soft limits?

It's not really easy to help someone overcome a fear if the fear is something the mind has created. The mind can do some strange things because of a past trama or some other experience that's happened.

Before someone should attempt this sort of thing, be sure you have no past experiences that can be made worse by this. It could be a previous attempt that went bad or some other rape or assault experience that you're relating this to.

Now when you say fear, I might be assuming the worst and it's just because you haven't experienced anal sex before. Yes, there is a kind of fear with that, but that' not the same as the fear I'm talking about.

Everybody is different. Anal sex isn't something everybody should or will enjoy. But, if you have no past fear to overcome, and you want it for the right reasons, it's at least worth a try.
 
Anal Sex

DVS said:
When you say fear, is it a justifiable fear from some past trama in your life? And is this attempt to help you overcome your fear your choice, too?

Do you want to experience anal sex? Not because your Dom wants it, but because YOU want it? Is it or was it one of your hard limits or one of your soft limits?

It's not really easy to help someone overcome a fear if the fear is something the mind has created. The mind can do some strange things because of a past trama or some other experience that's happened.

Before someone should attempt this sort of thing, be sure you have no past experiences that can be made worse by this. It could be a previous attempt that went bad or some other rape or assault experience that you're relating this to.

Now when you say fear, I might be assuming the worst and it's just because you haven't experienced anal sex before. Yes, there is a kind of fear with that, but that' not the same as the fear I'm talking about.

Everybody is different. Anal sex isn't something everybody should or will enjoy. But, if you have no past fear to overcome, and you want it for the right reasons, it's at least worth a try.

Thanks DVS Ill explain as best as I can...
From a LONG time ago... a boyfriend ( who was not into BDSM) kept taking anal sex from me without as to being any kind of nice to me and it was kinda scary as I was saying please no... Now I Want to try it again and it was a soft limit. that I sat with MyD. I tried a little butt plug yesterday and I am to try it again today. I went to the store and got some Analese and it made it better. I want to try it I am just looking for some advice to make it more exciting.. ;)

DOes that help?
 
SubKekiLee said:
Thanks DVS Ill explain as best as I can...
From a LONG time ago... a boyfriend ( who was not into BDSM) kept taking anal sex from me without as to being any kind of nice to me and it was kinda scary as I was saying please no... Now I Want to try it again and it was a soft limit. that I sat with MyD. I tried a little butt plug yesterday and I am to try it again today. I went to the store and got some Analese and it made it better. I want to try it I am just looking for some advice to make it more exciting.. ;)

DOes that help?
It does give me more info to work with. I see you have a history of a bad experience, but you do want to try agian, with someone else. As long as you want to do this for you, it's worth a try.

You do need to always use plenty of lube. Never attempt things without it. You might get away with it once in a while, but you will not only cause more pain, but you could also tear your insides, and that isn't a fun thing. Always have lube available.

As for making it more exciting for you, you need to think about what it is that excites you. Does the thought of anal sex arouse you? If not, that's going to be a big wall against you. But, if you can think of a scenario that would be sexy, I'd think about that while you masturbate your ass with something small. Don't try anything too big, just yet.

Get used to the feeling of something there. Maybe some thin vibrator or something like that. I'm thinking of something smooth and thin like a test tube would be. I don't think glass is a good idea, but something along that shape and size would be ideal.

Use a lot of lub, get into a position that you can work with, close your eyes and think of the scenario that works for you. If it is your Dom taking you, that would be good. But, it can be anything, as long as it is erotic for you.

Stimulate yourself while doing this, at least at first. Some people prefer not to, but I think in the beginning you should. This is to help keep it erotic for you and this will also help you to relax.

Only you can decide this, but in time you can introduce your Dom into the picture. You are in control of this. Don't let him go too fast, nor let him force you before you're ready to advance. Allow him to masturbate you with whatever you choose to use and just lay back and experience the feeling. Position yourself in a submissive pose, that the both of you find sexy. Keep your scenario in your head, because you want to relate anal sex with a good feeling, to counter the bad times you've had.

Either of you should continue to stumulate your clit. If you climax from this, that's a good sign. The main purpose is to help you relax.

Again, you can only decide this but when you feel the time is right, move up to larger items and allow your Dom to continue masturbating your ass that way. ALWAYS use a lot of lube and maybe he can introduce talk like he's fucking your ass. Things like "your ass is so tight" or "I love fucking your ass" or anything else that would go along with the scenaro you chose to use.

Slowly, you make changes that will put you closer and closer to his taking your ass. When you are to that point, keep your erotic scenario in your head. In times like this, it's not a crime to think of something other than what is happening, if it makes it work for you. If your scenario is to think of your Dom taking you, that's fine. But, if it's a stranger that's in your scenario, that's OK. Just think of your Dom as that stranger. Eventually, that scenario will be a part of it, and you wan't even think about it. It will just happen.

You will know when the time is right to make each elevating change. It could go pretty fast, or it could take time. Be patient and don't rush it. Rushing this could make it that much more difficult for you to get where you want.

Make sure your Dom knows not to force you, at any time in this progression. You must e in charge until you feel secure that anal sex is for you. He might want it to happen sooner, but he must realize he could only damage it for the both of you. Your past needs to be erased and forcing you before you want it, isn't going to help.

I've laid out some steps you can follow, but as you feel comfortable, you can go as fast as you want. Everybody is different. Some need the time to adjust, but some seem to do better at adjusting than others. The main thing is to always make it erotic for you. It should never turn into a chore.

Oh, and did I say use plenty of lube? You might want to purchase some economy size until you know what your needs will be. I'm more of a KY guy, but some people don't like it. It can dry out, but I just keep applying more. You are going to have to find one that works for you.

Have fun and keep me posted on your progress.
 
DVS said:
This installment is a continuation from post #2313

I know...I know...it's been a whle. But, shit happens. It's still happening. In fact, I should be doing something right now, but instead, I'm finishing and posting this iinstallment. See how much I care about you people? LOL.

Anyway, this is always a continuation of the previous installment. And, there is always a link from the previous installment to the next. I hope you are all still out there waiting for this. If you have wandered off to other places, it's time to come back. I hope you didn't go too far.



I knew that because she was so close to cuming before, that it wouldn’t take very much to bring her back up to that same point again. In fact, it was going to be increasingly more difficult to control her reactions. I knew I would have to either let her cum or give her to Rita to really take her mind off of it.

I didn’t have it in me to just give her to Rita and waste what I’d built up to. But, I wanted her climax to be powerful, and I wanted to include something that would maybe take her over the edge in an instant. My problem was...what would that something be?

My mind was blank. I decided the best plan of action was to continue as I had been, and maybe I’d come up with something. And, maybe the slut would come up with something, and show me by how her body responded to it.

“What level are you at now, slut,” I asked. I needed to know where we stood as far as her arousal. I still had to think about control, because she was almost hyper aroused.

“Level seven, Sir.”

Geez. She hadn’t gone down any more than that? She was like a loaded gun. And the safety was off. And, I knew if I just touched her trigger, she’d go off. I didn’t want that to happen before I was ready for it.

“Level seven? Are you sure you’re still that high?”

“Oh yes, Sir. And just knowing we’re about to continue, I’m almost at level eight.”

Level eight? Shit, just talking to her could set her off. She was squirming quite a bit. Maybe I didn’t know my own abilities. That’s what I loved about the game. There’s never a dull moment.

“OK. We’re going to begin. I want you to let me know if you reach level nine. Remember that.”

The slut smiled and I think I saw her body shiver, just a little. “Level nine. Yes, Sir.”

I picked up the vibe and turned it on. She moaned so loud, I thought sure she was going over the edge. I stopped for a second, to see if she would calm down. She didn’t calm down, but I guess I could say she did level off. I didn’t know if touching her with the thing would set her off or not, but I had to try.

I figured her belly button was a safe place to start. It was kind of middle of the road, when thinking about sensitive areas of her body. But, when I touched her even lightly, the buzzing seemed to send her into a moaning spell. She closed her eyes and started wiggling her body, in reaction to the vibe’s touch. I know she has a special thing for the vibe, but I guess I was finding out just how special her relationship with it was.

“I’ve never asked you, slut...how do you masturbate?”

It was obvious that she wasn’t listening to me. And, I knew the reason why. Her moaning almost louder than I was talking. I picked the vibe up and turned it off. That brought her back to me. She immediately stopped moaning, and opened her eyes.

I waved at her. “Welcome back.”

She looked at me in a puzzled sort of way. “Sir? Welcome back?”

“It was a joke, slut. Never mind. I’ve never asked you...how do you masturbate?”

“How do I masturbate?”

“Yes. How?”

“I don’t know what you mean, Sir.”

“Huh? It’s a simple question, isn’t it? How do you do it?”

“Most of the time, I rub my clit, Sir. Is that what you mean?”

“Yes, but, what toys do you like to use?”

She smiled like she was talking about her best friend. “Oh, that would be a vibrator, Sir.”

“I thought so. And, I’d guess you do this a lot?”

She smiled again, and her face got red. “I’m highly sexed, Sir. I need my relaxation.”

“I’m sure of that. So, I guess you enjoy your time with the vibe, then?”

“Oh yes, Sir, very much. I can lie back, find the right spot, think of things that give me pleasure, and...”

“OK, slut. I get the idea. You’ve told me what I needed to know.” Geeez, I had to stop her. I thought she was going to cum from just talking about it. But I knew a different plan was necessary. The vibe wasn’t the way to start. I needed something to cool her off a little, first.

I answered my own question. I’d forgotten about the ice cubes in the cooler. They would work perfectly. I slid the cooler over beside me, so I’d have a handy supply at the ready. But, I needed something else to add to the fun. I asked Lucy if there was a blindfold in one of their bags. She hopped right up and quickly went over to one of the bags and pulled out a very nice blindfold. It was black and had elastic bands to hold it securely in place. She held it up for my inspection.

“That’s perfect, Lucy. Would you please bring it over here?”

Lucy brought it right over and reached out her hand, to give it to me.

“No, you put it on her, for me. Brush the hair from her face, and make sure she can’t see. We don’t want her peeking.”

Lucy kneeled down at the slut’s head and lightly brushed the hair from her face. Then, she placed the blindfold over her eyes and held it there with one hand, while she pulled the elastic bands behind the slut’s head. “Lift your head up, slut.” The slut raised her head, and Lucy secured the blindfold. She looked up at me, for my approval.

“That’s fine, Lucy. Thank you.” Lucy smiled and walked back to her spot beside Rita. She whispered something to her, and they both giggled. I hope they weren’t planning anything. There was something about that giggle that bothered me.

I returned my attention to the slut. “Can you see, slut?”

“No, Sir.”

I waved my hand in front of her face. “You can’t see this?”

“No, Sir.”

Then, I put the vibe right above her nose. “Can you see this?”

“No, Sir. I can’t see anything. All I can see is darkness.”

“Great. That’s perfect. Now we can get started.”

I reached into the cooler and found a nice sized cube that would last a while. I tried to be quiet, but I know the slut was aware of the cooler. I didn’t touch her with the cube, but held it just above her stomach, and waited for it to start dripping.

As soon as it started to drip, the slut gasped in a cute way, from the cold sensations. She inhaled and her stomach muscles tightened, as she felt the cold water drip into her belly button. I could see goose bumps forming all around her stomach.

“What level are you at now, slut?”

“I can’t say for sure, Sir. Level six, or maybe seven.”

“You can’t say for sure?”

“It’s the cold, Sir. It’s different.”

“Yes, I know it is. That’s my plan.”

“But, it’s not like it was, before. I like this. This is interesting.”

I touched the cube right to her clit as I said, “You mean, not like this?”

Just as quickly as I touched her with it, I removed it. The slut gasped, and nearly screamed when she felt the ice cube on her clit. But, when it was gone, she calmed down.

“Yes, Sir. Like that.”

“OK, what level are you at, now?”

“That’s not fair, Sir.”

“Not fair? What’s not fair?”

“The ice cube, Sir. I couldn’t see what you were doing.”

“Isn’t that what blindfolds are for?”

After a little hesitation, she replied, “I guess so, Sir.”

“So, what level are you at?”

“Maybe level four or five, Sir.”

“You still don’t know what level you are at? Maybe another touch of the ice cube will help you decide.”

“No...no, Sir. No, that’s not necessary." The slut was quick to reply that she didn’t need any more of the ice cube to decide. "I’m at level five.”

“Level five? Good. The ice cube does calm you down, at least. I’ll remember that.”

I held the melting cube above her body and let it drip onto her naked flesh at different places. I moved it around so it dripped into her belly button, and also between her tits. I also let it drip right on each nipple, and let the water run off. Part of that water dripped off her sides, and part of it dripped into the cleft of her neck.

Goose bumps were forming all over her body. But, her nipples were hard, so I knew the drips must have been working. The vibe was just too much for her. But the cold drips were just the right amount of sensual sensation.

I continued this fun for a while. I got a new ice cube when necessary and we played around with the dripping. I let the water drip right on her clit and she moaned. She twisted her body around and she slightly opened her legs to allow the water to drip all the way down her ass crack.

I even let the water drip on her thighs. It was amazing how the goose bumps would form so quickly. It wasn’t cold in the room, but I guess her not knowing where the drips would fall was causing that. The extreme temperature changes at only certain points on her body were giving her interesting sensations. And, because she couldn’t see what I was doing, her body could only react after she felt the drip.

It was fun to watch. She was moaning and wiggling around and sometimes she would gasp when the water landed in some places. How it flowed into and around her tender areas caused it to feel almost like someone was touching her there. And, in a way I was touching her. At least I was sort of controlling where the ice was dripping.

As I continued with the ice, I watched to see how she reacted to it. I was looking for a time to return the vibe to the scene, because I knew she enjoyed it so. With the ice dripping and the vibe, I was sure I could control her arousal a lot better than with the vibe alone. That damn vibe was like a stimulant to her. I didn’t want to bring it back too soon.

“Slut, what level are you at, now?”

“I’m in heaven, Sir.”

“Is that a level?” This relaxed slut was almost too calm. “What level, slut? Not what altitude.”

She smiled as she said, “I think heaven is somewhere between levels six and seven, Sir.”

“Again with the two levels? Can’t you just pick one?”

“Oh. I’m sorry, Sir. Level six.”

“Six. OK, that’s better.” She’d leveled off a little. Just like I hoped she would. The ice was doing its job as a cooling agent. A little more of the dripping fun, and I might be able to introduce the vibe, again.

I loved watching her body wiggle when the cold water dripped on it. I also loved how the water would sometimes run down her body and cause her to whimper when it did. I wasn’t controlling that. In fact, it was when her body contorted in a refex action that the water would make a path to certain body crevasses. If she could have kept her body motionless, all of that might stop. But, it wouldn’t be near as much fun for me, that’s for sure.

It was also fun to get two ice cubes and drip cold water on her body in several different places. It was quite sensuous whenever she would react to the water. Her body was very sexy and with the goose bumps and the hard erect nipples, you could tell she was very turned on.

When an ice cube got small, I would sometimes lay it somewhere on her body, and watch it melt. As she moved, it would sometimes slide around. I found that with ice, there were several ways to play. And they were all fun.

I watched her mouth contort into different shapes, when the ice cube dripped between her legs. Her mouth changed into several very sexy grins, and her tongue often found its way out to wet her lips. That is always sexy to watch. She moaned and moved her head from side to side as the cold water dripped down her thighs, curling around and making way to her ass.

It was even fun to fill her belly button up with cold water, as kind of a reservoir. Then, I’d move the ice cube to a more sensitive area of her body. That would often cause her to twist her body in reaction to the cold sensations. Her twisting would then cause the water in her belly button to move. Watching where it would all go was always fun. There was enough cold water to make her gasp, no matter where it ended up going.

I got a fresh ice cube and was dripping it on her tits and face. And she opened her mouth to catch some of the drips. When she was involved in that I grabbed the vibe with my other hand, turned it on and pressed it against her clit.

Her body reacted like the vibe was a branding iron. At first she tensed up, then she pushed her hips up against it, doing her best to get it pressed harder and harder against her throbbing clit. But, I pulled it away, because I just wanted to see how she’d react. I think the idea of ice cubes and vibe were doing the trick. One would take her up, and the other would bring her down. We could do that all night.

This is the most recent installment of the story...so far.


When i found this thread and start reading it i got quite aroused, must say it get much more intense as i start reading more and more. I was on 1 site of this thread yesterday and i was so SO happy it hot 97 sites, i thought i will have lots of fun reading this thread for couple of dayz, but it seems i was bit too greedy cuz i am on the last site of this thread already. I've spent some nasty hours with reading your story. I just couldnt stop reading it, bet it would be funny to watch me as i read it with open mouth as i gollop every word of your story and i did i really did....

What else can i say??? please have mercy and finish this damn HOT story!!

Think i will just read it all over and over again and let it saok into my very soul some more :rolleyes:



(OMG i need my Master..................... NOW *moans*)
 
Just a proud announcement:

Today I managed a cock, a dildo, and two fingers -- all in my hot little asshole, at the same time!

:nana:
 
NemoAlia said:
Just a proud announcement:

Today I managed a cock, a dildo, and two fingers -- all in my hot little asshole, at the same time!

:nana:


One word Babe: DAAAAYUM!

Ok. 5 more: I am scared of you :devil:
 
NALA CAYENNE said:
One word Babe: DAAAAYUM!

Ok. 5 more: I am scared of you :devil:
Aw, shucks! You're too kind.

Seriously, though. I spent most of the afternoon in bed. And after my guy left? Still horny. So I went to the store to get some chocolate ice cream, so that I at least have a chance of getting some work done before I indulge myself again at bedtime.
 
NemoAlia said:
Aw, shucks! You're too kind.

Seriously, though. I spent most of the afternoon in bed. And after my guy left? Still horny. So I went to the store to get some chocolate ice cream, so that I at least have a chance of getting some work done before I indulge myself again at bedtime.


You are definitely my heroine :kiss:
 
NemoAlia said:
Just a proud announcement:

Today I managed a cock, a dildo, and two fingers -- all in my hot little asshole, at the same time!

:nana:
Was there some record you were going for, or were you just shoving things in there as you (or he) found them available? I can see your desire for fun, but I've never gone any further than one cock at a time. Somehow, I feel so inadequate, right now.

Is there any room left for that dancing banana? :nana:
 
damn and i thought you just posted another instalment of that sweet story of yours DVS :)

nvm, i will wait. Do not take ages with it tho, I dont like to simmer for too long ;)

When you talk about adding things up the ass i got say my experience too lol. My man once fucked my ass with my dildo wich is pretty big btw, and then he stick there his cock as well, by excident LOL, but nvm i let him fuck it, i loved the streching :D
 
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DVS said:
Was there some record you were going for, or were you just shoving things in there as you (or he) found them available? I can see your desire for fun, but I've never gone any further than one cock at a time. Somehow, I feel so inadequate, right now.

Is there any room left for that dancing banana? :nana:
Not exactly that we were trying to set a record (although I'm pretty sure we did!) -- just that it was fun forwards, so clearly the next step is farther back.
 
*bowing repeatedly*

"We're not worthy...we're not worthy...we're not...."

NemoAlia said:
Just a proud announcement:

Today I managed a cock, a dildo, and two fingers -- all in my hot little asshole, at the same time!

:nana:
 
BiaTcHiNFiRe said:
Hello, did you forget about us DVS? ;)
Take it easy. I've been on vacation. But, sadly, I go back to work tonight. In about an hour, actually. Do you all feel for me?

I've been working on "A Victim of Subterfuge" and it's about ready to go. I just have to finish editing the last 8,000 words of the text for typos. I'll be doing that tonight and tomorrow night at work (don't tell my boss) and with a little luck probably submit it to Lit on Wednesday or Thursday.

I haven't been thinking much about anything except getting a car. Now that I have one, I've got insurance and fixed the little things that I wanted to fix on it. I'm waiting for the title to come, so I can get it inspected and tags.

Then, I can get my mind back on the slut. Patience...patience. OK?


Although I am glad you are so interested in the story...eager, even. :D
 
*smiles*

DVS said:
Do you all feel for me?
NO. I feel sorry just for myself cuz of the need to read the rest of your story!!! :D

ok ok i am jokin, of course i do feel sorry for you!!......I am a good girl ya know.....ehm, since i admited i feel sorry for you................can you please write the rest of the story now??? :rolleyes:


DVS said:
Patience...patience. OK?
I am tryin i am tryin......patience aint really my strong side *blushes*

DVS said:
Although I am glad you are so interested in the story...eager, even. :D
Well your stories are the best i have read yet IMO, i just love them, so i am very eager to read more yes.

Btw your story "If You Dare" is a great one too!! I kinda keep myself busy with reading the rest of your stories you published on Lit webby and i can always reread it over again too hehe.

I understand you got things to do and life to live. I got alot of a free time atm so i read alot, i love it. Especialy if its so HOT as your stories. I love stories wich drag you in to the plot and thats what your stories deffo do to me.

I honestly think you could write stories like this for living, you are very good in it!


Okay, guess i will just sit nicely as a good girl should and wait for the rest of your story :)
*sighs helplessly*
 
DVS said:
Take it easy. I've been on vacation. But, sadly, I go back to work tonight. In about an hour, actually. Do you all feel for me?

I've been working on "A Victim of Subterfuge" and it's about ready to go. I just have to finish editing the last 8,000 words of the text for typos. I'll be doing that tonight and tomorrow night at work (don't tell my boss) and with a little luck probably submit it to Lit on Wednesday or Thursday.

I haven't been thinking much about anything except getting a car. Now that I have one, I've got insurance and fixed the little things that I wanted to fix on it. I'm waiting for the title to come, so I can get it inspected and tags.

Then, I can get my mind back on the slut. Patience...patience. OK?


Although I am glad you are so interested in the story...eager, even. :D

It is okay DVS but please hurry we miss your writings...;)
 
Well, you impatient ones might be glad to hear that I did all of the editing of the last 8,000 words of "A Victim of Subterfuge" last night at work. I actually did something worth while at work. Woo Hoo! Now, I just have to put those edits to the text on my computer and then submit it to Lit.

So, if everything goes as planned, I think I can do that today. That means I can submit the story sooner, too. I'm hoping Lit will accept this story. I'll be one pissed puppy if Laurel doesn't like it for some reason. I'd guess I'll be submitting it sometime this afternoon or maybe tomorrow. That means it should be up in about a week or maybe a little less.

I know I've been hyping this story for a while now...but I've been dealing with it for a couple years. I'm glad to be finally finished with it. And, I hiope all of you anal pain sluts enjoy it.

I'll keep you posted on where the story is.
 
BiaTcHiNFiRe said:
Hello, did you forget about us DVS? ;)


Sir never forgets about us BF. He's got so many irons in the fire (stories to edit and fine tune), don't you think He deserves a little bit of 'down time' to just relax a bit too? I can fully understand His need to relax and UNwind in order to clear the mind so one can write, edit/fine tune one's existing stories... or to sit and create a new one when the urge to write 'strikes'!

If Sir won't mind the small plug... I know this to be true. I finally got a new story up (see my sig line)... and it's been at least two years since I wrote one!

Give Sir a break, please... and remember:

He never forgets about us! Never!​
 
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