Recognition for New Poets

[WickedEve]

Met, I was playing around with your new poem about moving someone with words. I tried not to change your words but I did cut some out. And I thought it would look cleaner without punctuation and quotation marks. I like italics. I edited the typos.

Anyway, how does this look:

just because I say
get out of my way
that doesn't mean
you will obey

I could say
please
and you'll move
with a slow tease

I could say
I love you
you would wonder
does this guy mean me
the brain would search for answers
you wouldn't be moved
know what I mean

I could yell out
fire
then you'd look about
realize I'm lying
then probably pout
even if there were flames
all about our heads
it wouldn't be me that moved you
with what I said

but if I praised you
for literature that you've done
the words you put together
across your face
a smile would slightly rise

what I meant was to move you
down between your thighs

things like sultry summers
with a woman of wild desires
grasping and gripping
as she bounced higher

and if I haven't moved you
in any certain way
then exit this page
disappear into a blur

if I can't move you with just my words

 

[My Erotic Tail]

Re: Re: A lesson in Poetry

This one belongs in a chapter all by itself IMO.

An advice for both new and old poets, is to look at what you're trying to say, and then try to find new ways to say it. Using similies are one of many ways to do this. Here's a link to a site that lists a whole buch of other metods to vary one's language. This is not meant to be a handbook, just some reading for y'all to perhaps get inspired by. All those methods called "devices" or sometimes "figues" have weirdo old greek names. But don't let that scare you. Read the example phrases, and maybe get a little inspired to try out new forms of expression, that's all.

Linguistic Phenomena/Devices

You probably use alot of those already without knowing that they were "devices". Then my advice is to explore the others, and add them too to your arsenal.



#L

Cool Link...
thanks Liar...

Is that the only poem to be mentioned
in the new poems tonight...
if so...time to go to work?

I just wrote my sadest piece...
or close to it...
it only ryhmed once...hehehe
but after a quick peek at the link
and a burning desire to relay
an encounter today...
well I submitted...
"Bambi's Tears"
it's also in "Chasin' Chickens"
were I write my stuff...go figure
got a big river outside and I write better
in that thread...hehehe

thanks again wicked...liar,
hoping to graduate soon from,
nursery school...lol
here at .........a poem academey !...101
Art~

 

[Liar]

Re: Re: Re: A lesson in Poetry

Great link. I just book marked it.

http://www.americanrhetoric.com/rhetoricaldevicesinsound.htm

and

http://www.virtualsalt.com/rhetoric.htm

For those who with to dive even deeper into the swamp of rhetoric figures.

Catachresises, epizeuxises and diacopes are not only freaky greeky words, but really unseful poetry devices.

And hey, who can resist a good climax?

#L

ps. Art, I hope I'm not flooding this thread with too much of this balderdash. Stop me if I get out of hand.

 

[My Erotic Tail]

I Like....

Met, I was playing around with your new poem about moving someone with words. I tried not to change your words but I did cut some out. And I thought it would look cleaner without punctuation and quotation marks. I like italics. I edited the typos.

Anyway, how does this look:

just because I say
get out of my way
that doesn't mean
you will obey

I could say
please
and you'll move
with a slow tease

I could say
I love you
you would wonder
does this guy mean me
the brain would search for answers
you wouldn't be moved
know what I mean

I could yell out
fire
then you'd look about
realize I'm lying
then probably pout
even if there were flames
all about our heads
it wouldn't be me that moved you
with what I said

but if I praised you
for literature that you've done
the words you put together
across your face
a smile would slightly rise

what I meant was to move you
down between your thighs

things like sultry summers
with a woman of wild desires
grasping and gripping
as she bounced higher

and if I haven't moved you
in any certain way
then exit this page
disappear into a blur

if I can't move you with just my words

Well...now that's why your the teacher...
Here's an Apple...hehehehe

yep...that's a lot better...
I Thought perhaps I took the "Climax"
a little to far...
the ending was more of a telling the reader
to move it's mouse (should have added maybe)
hence I moved them to click out?????
perhaps I should play with the ending line...
but yep...that's much much better....

I tend to get spontanious with poems...
express my feelings and walk away
My stories I edit over and over rewrite..
I should do that with poems to I see...

and Liar...I'll go blind now...cause I will
read these words to add to my arsenal...

thanks
Art~

 

[WickedEve]

Re: I Like....

Well...now that's why your the teacher...
Here's an Apple...hehehehe

yep...that's a lot better...
I Thought perhaps I took the "Climax"
a little to far...
the ending was more of a telling the reader
to move it's mouse (should have added maybe)
hence I moved them to click out?????
perhaps I should play with the ending line...
but yep...that's much much better....

I tend to get spontanious with poems...
express my feelings and walk away
My stories I edit over and over rewrite..
I should do that with poems to I see...

and Liar...I'll go blind now...cause I will
read these words to add to my arsenal...

thanks
Art~

I think you have a good poem. I like the whole idea about moving people with your words, even literally moving them. It's interesting enough that it deserves more work on it. You really should play around with it some more.

 

[My Erotic Tail]

Taking notes

No periods????

No quotation marks?...
Italic is better[/b]

punctuation hindering?...

Break lengthy lines down?...

well now that should make it easier but....

BUT...these similes...metaphors...and witty words
take up the slack...hehehe....okay!

NOTE: I know I use dots.....way to much
the reason is my computer is old and the space
bar sticks and chooses not to work sometimes.
I noticed this bleeds into my stories badly...
and maybe a couple poems! Therefore it become
a bad habit, But we do what we can with what
we have to work with...

thanks again
Art~

 

[annaswirls]

here are some poems from some former novices:

hopefully we will get some more



Humble Pie

 

[Liar]

Re: Taking notes

Break lengthy lines down?...

well now that should make it easier but....

Here's how I tend to do it. Not that it is right or wrong, but it's one way.

I write the stuff straight out of my head. THen I read it out loud, and put single line breaks where I naturlly put a small pause in my reading. At new phrases, often at commas in the text. I put double line breaks where I have longer pauses, like at periods.

So the paragraph above would look like this if I had written it as a poem:

I write the stuff
straight out of my head.

Then I read it out loud,
and put single line breaks
where I naturlly put
a small pause
in my reading.

At new phrases,
often at commas in the text.

I put double line breaks
where I have longer pauses,

like at periods.

Some poets like it this way, others write long lines. There are no rights and wrongs here, just an ambition to try new and different things, feel them out for yourself, taste them on your tongue, and incorporate those that suits you into your toolbox.

#L

 

[My Erotic Tail]

Poems for 11/01

Here are a few poems that I read from 11/01
(I didn't mention any that was reviewed in the
new poems thread, just my way to encourage
and mention all who post poems here at LIT!

Hootieand the Blow = heck of a name "Fish"???
had this poem in the list...
Hello World

Hootie comes to life from a time of sadness,
cheerful and poetic...loved the momma cass line,
old fav of mine too...
thanks Hootie~
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On Edge
by Sandoula~

My body is still on edge
Since you left me on the ledge
My soul is still on fire
Since you left me in the mire
curious what a mire is...
or was it like Angeline and made up a
great word...grin~(I love words like that)
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Love's Lullaby By SassyDreamWeaver

hush-a-bye sadness
of fractured fairytales
cradled with songs
of heart string magic.
ChillVodka probably said it best in her comment...
great lullaby
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Do You feel the same? by Jennifer C
Erotic and endering mix. worth a steamy read...
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and lingers by ceruleon_link
dance of poetry here...darts the
mind in several ways...
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A Plea by Belle_in_south
No need to plea when you write like that...
<grin>
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This poem was a treat around halloween
about thanksgiving turkeys
of course...who else but Uncle Pervey
to bring a smile...
A Turkey Rebellion
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there are some great poems out as always
so as I always say
a poem a day to fuel the minds motor....

encouragement/Inspiration/and learning

Train the Body/ Sharpen the Mind/ Enrich the Spirit

Thanks
Art~

 

[Belle_in_south]

Thanks so much for the mention! This was my first attempt at erotic poetry and my first poetic post, so I'm glad that someone seemed to enjoy.

Belle

 

[My Erotic Tail]

Your Welcome

Thanks so much for the mention! This was my first attempt at erotic poetry and my first poetic post, so I'm glad that someone seemed to enjoy.

Belle

The first of the thread has some great links
for writing poetry posted by some great
lit poets...please check them out and
by all means ...hope to see ya back here
and back on the new poems list...<grin>
Art~

 

[My Erotic Tail]

new poets

here are some poems by some poets
that aren't recongnized enough in my book!
Encouragement/Inspiration/ and Learning
here at the Academy of Poems
thanks~ please read and vote and comment
Art
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Raindear816 say's she is partial to this one.
Trials toward peace
after reading it again...I recalled its very
very moving and raindear needs to be encouraged
to write more...
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Templeminded is "New" but I promise she is
a poet at Heart and has a drawer full of poems
and poetry published in books. (~_*)
Here she wrote for us Literotica
They have a name for poems that the first letter
all the way down the poem spell a word...
what is it?........great Poem Temple
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Way of life
LadyShianne wrote this wonderful witty poem and needs
to writing more...

thanks...I am to encourage poets to write poems.
smile....
Art~

 

[My Erotic Tail]

new poets

here are some poems by some poets
that aren't recongnized enough in my book!
Encouragement/Inspiration/ and Learning
here at the Academy of Poems
thanks~ please read and vote and comment
Art

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Templeminded is "New" but I promise she is
a poet at Heart and has a drawer full of poems
and poetry published in books. (~_*)
Here she wrote for us Literotica
They have a name for poems that the first letter
all the way down the poem spell a word...
what is it?........great Poem Temple
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Raindear816 say's she is partial to this one.
Trials toward peace
after reading it again...I recalled its very
very moving and raindear needs to be encouraged
to write more...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Way of life
LadyShianne wrote this wonderful witty poem and needs
to writing more...
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Devour me
by Honey123 another rising poet...

thanks...I am to encourage poets to write poems.
smile....
Art~

 

[My Erotic Tail]

New Poems

Some poems that I liked ...that weren't mentioned
in the new poems thread...

yesss by neonurotic
thanks neon for the mention at the new poems thread..
here at "a poem academy" we could all learn a thing
or two from this witty word wizard...
thanks neonurotic...
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Crazy dreams-mad schemes by Uncle Pervey
I love uncle perveys humorous charm and poetic way...
thanks perv...
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A Flash of Light by Nevedaman
this was intriguing and obviously a passion poet...
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Vintage Spirit by dcpoet44
this poem about moonshine would make
my uncle bill smile...he drives half way
across America to stock up on some
good Vintage Spirits...great poem.
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The Vagina by jay.palin
this was a cute limerick poem (learned that this week)
and humorous as limericks were designed to be...hehehe
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My Waking Prayer by Lonewolfsmate...
this poem was deep, dark and poetic
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here at the Poem Academy we try to...
encourage/ Inspire / and learn poetry...
thanks Art~

 

[templeminded]

angelina

Hi temple.

I just want to go on record as saying I would truely feel bad if I thought I were making anyone feel unprofessional or "un" anything about their writing. That is never my intent. I worked as an editor for years and when I comment on a poem I think that is reflected in my feedback. It's just the way I see writing.

The last thing I want to do is make anyone feel I am judging their poetry less worthy than anything I or anyone here writes. I just don't see it that way--when I comment I'm only trying to help. I do feel though that if I think something is good, I need to explain why. If I think something in a poem is not working I either don't say anything or I try to say it as objectively as possible. That is the way I was taught to edit.

Art, I like and respect you. I know you're a good guy, but I need to understand how this thread is different from other ones here that offer feedback. I'm not trying to be difficult, really, but I think you're suggesting that there's a difference here, and I don't understand what it is. Anyway, if you think my kind of feedback is not helpful, just say so and I'll stay out of the thread.





angelina,
just wanted to say that no, in no way have you or anyone here ever made me feel anything but welcome. as dana says "i'm my worst critic" i will be the first to admit i am not a pro. i just do it for fun. i enjoy playing around with words and putting them into how i am feeling at that moment. (and that changes often) lol. rest assured, everyone on this site has been nothing but kind to me. enjoy your reads
sandra

 

[templeminded]

annaswirls

Hey Temple, I just wanted to let you know that in another place I sometimes post poems, I feel like I might upset the "good" writers by not being professional as they are, so I know the feeling. It is all in degrees, you know?

And a matter of taste. Sometimes the "good" writers there I think omg what a bunch of crap, they just like to hear themselves talk, and that is not even a good poem, just a big name etc etc etc

I personally do not like much of the poetry out there that is supposedly good in that it follows the guidelines for being a good poem. I like it a little rough.

I like men whose teeth are not straight too.

Character, baby.

So welcome, feel free to tread wherever you feel comfortable, there are plenty of people here in addition to the moderators who have made me feel welcome. You will hopefully meet some with whom you click!

keep writing, that is the main thing,

~anna


__________________
anna,
everyone i have met here at this site has made me feel welcome. as far as clicking, i get alon well with other people because i am a people person. i say every one has his or her own taste and things that catches their eye. all of us being different is what makes the world the place it is. how boring it would be if we all did and liked the same things. TO EACH HIS OWN IS WHAT I SAY. my way is just that....my way.lol. guess i'll keep doing the best that i can while having fun with what i enjoy doing.
sandra
............hope you have a great day....................be good..........be kind....but most of all.........be happy

 

[My Erotic Tail]

New Poems

A Poem Academy is to encourage,
inspire and learn about poetry...I feel fortunate
that some great poets have helped and inspired me.
I can only hope to do the same for others...
heres some poems posted 11/04

No more tears by talk_2_me_whenever
I like the hint or suggestion but left me
curious perhaps that's the intent?
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Everyone I ever loved by steve porter

And if it all unraveled
like a cheap Chinese suit,
this is nobodys fault
and nothing more to it;
we did it to one another.
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Matter by pointless
I found this poem to be cute with a bit of reality
it doesnt matter yet it mattered enough to write about it...
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The Beach by Lildarlin
I was going to write a poem about gulls the way they
soar and chatter and fill the sky in darts and glides...
but this poem filled that need...thanks Lil
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surrender by tribalbutterfly77
We reflect the dark sides of each other.
...I truley loved this line...
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Limerick set 009 - farm critters by Uncle Pervey
I love critters and this was a doosey
thanks Uncle Pervey
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Open your heart by SassyDreamweaver
intellectual curves captivate desire
intellect is sexy...
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I tried to expose everyone with at lease one of
their poems a few had more than one and they
were just as great....heres a link to the new poems list
and of course the new poems review covered the rest
thanks Liar for the mention on my poem
Shaking my fist at the Heavens...kicking dust into Hell
I was truley upset and vented in this poem...
hope I didn't offend anyone but it's hard to
except somethings life trows you...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`
A Poem Academy is created to help give recognition
encouragement/inspiration/ and to learn about poetry
thanks for your posts/ help and reads...
thanks Art~

 

[LilDarlin]

~My Erotic Tail~

Thank You for the great comments, and the mention here on the board.. I think you and I are chasing after the same poems a lot.. Seem to think so.. chickens..sea gulls, love on the pillow next to me..etc.. I know you have to see this too..lol..

Thanks again..*Smiles*~

 

[SassyDreamweaver]

thanks!

i just wanted to say thanks for the comments about the poems.
i do appreciate the feed back.

thank you jd4george for your suggestions, i will attempt to iron the wrinkles..many thanks though.

 

[killallhippies]

Re: New Poems

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Matter by pointless
I found this poem to be cute with a bit of reality
it doesnt matter yet it mattered enough to write about it...
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yay me! thanks for the mention and the vote.

yeah, that's me.

 

[My Erotic Tail]

new poems

A Poem Academy is here to encourage
inspire and to learn about poetry...here sre some poets
who's poems posted 11/05...

My first read was Nov 3 by BigCraig

His poem is obviously about the Presidential election
a prose (a non ryhming poem/rant) I was once told
you write about religion/politics/music/or family and you'll
get someone who disagrees. I may not agree with the poem
but I understand the feeling. We all have an opinion...this one
is Bigcraig's

excerpt:
who's to blame in this game?
is it them? is it me?
did I do everything that I could
to prevent the worst from happening?
did I get the truth to enough?


Thank goodness this is america...still the land of the free
Thanks Bigcraig for a poem that inspires and stirs emotions
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How could you by Kinky Rachel

here's another protest poem about the
day of votes, I believe this was anothers words and
she posted them but in the spirit of victory from the polls
political poems arise

excerpt:
well the polls are closed,
and the votes are in,
the counting's finished,
we did not win.
on a personal note..I heard it said that after four years
on a job you just get the hang of what your doing...
so perhaps 8 years would make a veteran of someone.
We should support who ever leads us...and obviously
the majority of americans understands his ability to lead.
as I said politcs stirs emotions therefore makes for some
controversial poetry....thanks kinky
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A thorn in the flesh from the dark by hippiedude

I'll get all the sleep I need when I die...I say that alot
and this poem seem to touch along those lines...
then what made it better was the added write at the
bottom to put these words to a tune...hehehe..great idea.
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angry by jozef_the_dragon

angry would be a good name for this poem
poetry is an expression put into words...
jozef definetly expressed themself..
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over a year ago by wildtiger

wildtiger has several that posted...a growing poet for sure...
keep'em cummin tiger....
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okay there are some really great poems out this day
the new poems review touched on the great ones
and I have to say a couple of those were awesome

put your mind to pen and write again
inspire and encourage poetry when ever you read
a poem please at least comment respectfully

have a great weekend...
thanks
Art~

 

[Kinky Rachel]

Thanks for the mention of the poem I posted.

It was the work of a friend of mine, who I have thanked in some stories I have written as "Michael". So here's "Michael" with a few remarks. All my love, Rachel.

Hi,

Thanks for mentioning this in your forum. I really like that people are discussing it and not just getting upset that it's anti-Bush. A bad joke has just occured to me about an erotica site that's anti-bush, but I won't demean you with it.

The poem was written quickly and sort of as catharsis, which I feel rarely leads to great writing. I know the majority of people wanted him to continue running the country, and many anti-Bush liberals are consoling themselves that having gained a second term he 1) can't run again, and 2) might spend more time building a legacy for himself and less persecuting anyone who doesn't possess substantial oil interests. For myself, it just seems like a loss for America that the best candidate they could field against Bush was a barely competent, political ingenue like Kerry.

I mainly wrote "How Could You?" as a song. The language is deliberately very plain, aiming for a sort of stark effect. I also chose to vary the rhyme scheme to suggest discordancy. I'd love to know what people thought of it, so if you e-mail Rachel she'll pass your comments on to me.

Thanks again,

Michael.

 

[My Erotic Tail]

poems

I don't think I'm allowed to post PM's
but I got one back that stated that:

"the people at the poem forum scare me"

I am tryin to fix this problem...poetry seems
to be liked by many but newbies tend to
suffer from "I'm not liked/ or / I'm not
good enough...

like I said I'm working on that...
all critics are tough...I'm to dense to
be afraid of remarks on my stuff others
take it harshly...

this thread was developed from encouragment
by wicked...liar and angeline...

the poets....oblong/eliptic/shpere/circle
is intimidating to some...
so here at "A Poem Academy"
we are able to learn/share/and nurture
poets...(I hope)

this one was sent to me by Annora
trying to break into poetry and I see
so much talent that I have tried to
encourage her so she sent me this poem.
she wont submitt it so she allowed me to post
it if I was ready for the array of criticism.
(and would take up for her...)

I liked it...

A Mothers Kiss
by Annora

I touched you today
ever so lightly as not to awake...

Your breath smelled of my milk
your tiny little fists resting under your chin..

Your eyelids moved as you went away
to a place where I do not know..

A smile crossed your tiny little lips
And no it wasn't gas...

I traced your face to remember you
It made you snuggle into me deeper..

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need to write more Annora...thanks

 

[My Erotic Tale]

new poet

Annora wrote this...

and she should write more...and submit

check this out...

I knew a man would touch my soul
I just never guessed it would be you..

From meeting you the first time I knew
I was changed the world opened up to me anew..

You won my heart without doing anything
I was yours and you are mine..

You grew and grew
My heart was stolen by You..

Close my eyes and I can see your smile
It seemed to be a mile wide...

Yes, my son you touched my soul
All eleven pounds of you...

Annora

Daniel my son... November 2004..

I hope you liked it.
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yes I did...shared with all...

 

[My Erotic Tale]

new poems 11/06

another day in the world of poetry...
"A Poem Academy" tries to encourage
inspire and learn about poetry.

heres a few poems posted 11/06
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pretty regrets by
WickedEve

excerpt~_*)

he's tasted that woman,
had her slow dripped,
stirring beneath him.


Eve has that style that the great poets do...
I call guess what I'm saying...the pros call it
the ultimate in poetry...she had three poems
post I chose this one cause I understood it
or think I did. but all three of her poems out 11/06
are good...as always...thansk wicked...
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Heart strings by Andy Frankhauser

All the precious lies,
those oh-so-sweet lullabyes,
so many things untasted,
so much left, wasted,
so many stops and starts,
but our evil minds,
had already quaterized our hearts,

Very poetic and a darn good poem...
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Chills and Night by fabmax

Cold damp and drizzly
But my mind drifts quietly to you
This is so sweet this pre sleep time
I'm warmed with the memory of your mouth
and the huge hugs you give

gave me chills...wonderful read~
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Siobahn by Patrick-Donovan

wow...this poem was a tale...a great style with a
wonderful way to deliver this emotion/poetry...
Inspirational and artistic
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Go Away by OneDarlin

This vent was endearing, emotions clearly stated
and still had uniform in a poetic way. There is no
mistaking the meaning of this poem...<grin>
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The Affair dusty_gurly

This was a great poem...perhaps perfect...
I see others claim its short...but sometimes less
is more ...I think it was all said in a short poem

(A+ poem)
I read the other poem by this author and
simply said in short poems...great poet here!
(my opinion)
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To my Cyber-love by skip.69

cute ryhming poem...
a topic of the age and a poet craze...
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My Courage My Cowardice by mstryninja

this is a clever poem and touches on human
emotions we all have at one time or another...
this poets emotions in words...good poem!
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The Rose BY Ronrigo

clever writer and nice poem...
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Do it just like this by Jennifer C

Sizzling poem and what better place for it than
Literotica...HOT HOT HOT~
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Well there were alot of poems and all good
each one exspressed emotions and topics of
well deserved recognition...so read and comment
and encourage/inspire/and learn from others poems
thanks
Art~