Requesting Feedback/Bigrig Ch. 17

[athena_by_night]

after everything I just went through..... I hope you see it fixed soon as well, Billy! ​

 

[windstormy]

Chapter two is out, guys. Enjoy.....​

 

[windstormy]

after everything I just went through..... I hope you see it fixed soon as well, Billy! ​

Thanks, Marie. I really do appreciate your support. You are one of my most loyal supporters.​

 

[athena_by_night]

Thanks, Marie. I really do appreciate your support. You are one of my most loyal supporters.


As are you my friend... you have been tremendously supportive of my work. And I hope you will continue to be.....even if I throw ya curve balls in my story....

 

[kimber2k]

Wow that was amazing!!!

 

[windstormy]

Wow that was amazing!!!

Thank you Kim. I'm thrilled that you liked this chapter so. Hope so very much to see you back, commented more on my other works. Again, thank you so very much.

 

[dcraig]

Thanks, Marie. I really do appreciate your support. You are one of my most loyal supporters.


As are you my friend... you have been tremendously supportive of my work. And I hope you will continue to be.....even if I throw ya curve balls in my story....

Of course we will all continue to support you and befriend you, Marie. Why would you doubt that?

 

[dcraig]

Wow that was amazing!!!

You are most certainly correct, my dear... ​

 

[athena_by_night]

Of course we will all continue to support you and befriend you, Marie. Why would you doubt that?

Ahhhhh, Craig..love.. you misunderstood me. Your friendship and support is never in doubt. I meant only that with the continuing twists and turns of the story and drawinggggggggggggg it out, that you would get frustrated waiting for Pyotr to get better.....

Marie

 

[DGentleBen]

Posting for Billy, who is still away. He will return soon.

People, this chapter is incredible. I have read action/adventure and who done it novels, and this climax chapter is one of the best I have read in a long while. If you don't believe me, go read it yourself. Bigrig Ch. 17

Billy, I was elated to finally meet your illusive Mr. Bowman. And as I did, I found him to be most erotically wicked. A most salacious man he is that pulls you into his madness in such a way that you actually desire to be touched by it, and him. OMG!!! Awesome character, Billy. I loved him, hated him, and wanted to analize him so very much. lol.

This chapter holds so much, it's hard to comment without giving away the plot. But I must say, you really outdone yourself with this one. The fight was so realistic, Jonathan's thinking had me on the edge of my seat, and Peter was just too funny. But it ends with a cliffhanger that left me wanting to cry. What is going to happen to Peter, love?

I have to admit that this was one of the most thrilling and erotically spellbindy parts of a story that I've ever read. I had no idea you could write like that, Billy. I was really amazed by all of it. And I have to admit that I loved your characterization of Mr. Bowman. He was a smooth operator with a very lecherous mind to boot. As much as I wanted to hate him for all the wichedness he had posed in this entire novel, I couldn't help but become aroused by what he was doing to Bruce. It kind of made me want to sit back and analyze myself a little. Lol.....

And Peter's part in this chapter was priceless. I fell in love with him right away. Poor Jonathan having to see him get hurt like that made my eyes well with tears. The way you portrayed his emotional state about it was very well done. It jerked quite a few tears from me.

Tony and Maurice really had me involved. I almost hated the cut scene at that part, 'cause I wanted to read on about the fight and all that was going on at the moment between those two.

A very well written chapter, Billy. I look forward to more of this in your sequel.

 

[windstormy]

I have to admit that this was one of the most thrilling and erotically spellbindy parts of a story that I've ever read. I had no idea you could write like that, Billy. I was really amazed by all of it. And I have to admit that I loved your characterization of Mr. Bowman. He was a smooth operator with a very lecherous mind to boot. As much as I wanted to hate him for all the wichedness he had posed in this entire novel, I couldn't help but become aroused by what he was doing to Bruce. It kind of made me want to sit back and analyze myself a little. Lol.....

And Peter's part in this chapter was priceless. I fell in love with him right away. Poor Jonathan having to see him get hurt like that made my eyes well with tears. The way you portrayed his emotional state about it was very well done. It jerked quite a few tears from me.

Tony and Maurice really had me involved. I almost hated the cut scene at that part, 'cause I wanted to read on about the fight and all that was going on at the moment between those two.

A very well written chapter, Billy. I look forward to more of this in your sequel.

I hope I can pull it off as well too. I seem to have stalled on the sequel. But I keep going back and looking at it. It'll come to me soon. I hope....

Thanks for your awesome feedback, Ben. Really glad you liked this chapter.