Sensual metaphors

[bluerains]

Blue Revelations verse 1

touching your darkness
you avert my stare
I unfold obscene
thoughts in your mind
yet, you blink and bind...
you want me to show you
how to break the frame
of your indigo glass
as your clenched body
stumbles in murky gaze

would you be astonished
to feel lanced wounds
of knowing cut flowers never bloom
Do you want me to say I’m
sorry for breaking the
crystal madness
hiding your looking glass tomb
and could we both lament
unsheathing the sword...
draining its ravin

 

[ruminator]

touching your darkness
you avert my stare
I unfold obscene
thoughts in your mind
yet, you blink and bind...
you want me to show you
how to break the frame
of your indigo glass
as your clenched body
stumbles in murky gaze

would you be astonished
to feel lanced wounds
of knowing cut flowers never bloom
Do you want me to say I’m
sorry for breaking the
crystal madness
hiding your looking glass tomb
and could we both lament
unsheathing the sword...
draining its ravin

protected in obscurity,
unearthed by your compassion
sweeping dust away with care

relic found or crude display,
alternating roles portrayed
exhumed exhibit to maintain

suffocation came with breath,
soil's darkness not inhaled
yet sustaining hidden life the same.

burial removes all risk,
contravention or critiquing
thought incapable to invade.

sunshine startles every sense,
brush the darkness doubt away
in sweeping dust from long closed eyes.

 

[bluerains]

protected in obscurity,
unearthed by your compassion
sweeping dust away with care

relic found or crude display,
alternating roles portrayed
exhumed exhibit to maintain

suffocation came with breath,
soil's darkness not inhaled
yet sustaining hidden life the same.

burial removes all risk,
contravention or critiquing
thought incapable to invade.

sunshine startles every sense,
brush the darkness doubt away
in sweeping dust from long closed eyes.

the letter crypt/tag



programed to be nice
but
as cold as ice
whenever truth comes near
you put on your jumpsuit and bail

emerald eyes waltzes thru open doors
to greet your gaze in good grace
and offer a hand to embrace

showing depth of wonder inside without
regret or surprise

a circle of light unfolding open ended

meeting your heart never touching
the fear within
longing for release

the part of self
wanting
aching to reclaim
center point

that reconnection
of reflection lost in time

how then will you find yourself

you've never opened your heart
to the dance
or the lyrical siren of chance

you have music left unplayed
on your stage of imagination

for it takes someone
to kindle someone
and its easier to thrive than to find
reasons not to

so will you waltz with Venus
and place your stars
beneath winged feet of her doves

or forever backstep in time
looking for her reflection
on the dance floor of
tangible inspection....

 

[ruminator]

the letter crypt/tag



programed to be nice
but
as cold as ice
whenever truth comes near
you put on your jumpsuit and bail

emerald eyes waltzes thru open doors
to greet your gaze in good grace
and offer a hand to embrace

showing depth of wonder inside without
regret or surprise

a circle of light unfolding open ended

meeting your heart never touching
the fear within
longing for release

the part of self
wanting
aching to reclaim
center point

that reconnection
of reflection lost in time

how then will you find yourself

you've never opened your heart
to the dance
or the lyrical siren of chance

you have music left unplayed
on your stage of imagination

for it takes someone
to kindle someone
and its easier to thrive than to find
reasons not to

so will you waltz with Venus
and place your stars
beneath winged feet of her doves

or forever backstep in time
looking for her reflection
on the dance floor of
tangible inspection....

All of my life
I've traveled
extensively
in thought
until the day
I looked for
the bars that
surround me
it was then
that they appeared

 

[RhymeFairy]

All of my life
I've traveled
extensively
in thought
until the day
I looked for
the bars that
surround me
it was then
that they appeared

appearing
dubiously,
tail spinning
into vivacious
veins of
thoughtless
wool gathering.

dark
dreams dismiss
demeaningly.
nothingness,
crops this
haunted heart.

sharecropping,
she
begins
once more ...

 

[ruminator]

days when
morning sun sears
sweaty skin
drawn tight
in the dehydration

bulging from strain,
now torn inside
from relentless
sweltering
tasker's passion

 

[quietpoet]

Breathe this in!

Could you possibly pen deeper words? When your muse comes forth, torrents of knowledge break their once sealed boxes to deliver us...
Awesome inspired write Blue!

touching your darkness
you avert my stare
I unfold obscene
thoughts in your mind
yet, you blink and bind...
you want me to show you
how to break the frame
of your indigo glass
as your clenched body
stumbles in murky gaze

would you be astonished
to feel lanced wounds
of knowing cut flowers never bloom
Do you want me to say I’m
sorry for breaking the
crystal madness
hiding your looking glass tomb
and could we both lament
unsheathing the sword...
draining its ravin

 

[bluerains]

days when
morning sun sears
sweaty skin
drawn tight
in the dehydration

bulging from strain,
now torn inside
from relentless
sweltering
tasker's passion

grains of sand tread air
weight holds fast
its mass
unemptied
yet who inhales
the breath of a star
but the light of nothing

 

[ruminator]

grains of sand tread air
weight holds fast
its mass
unemptied
yet who inhales
the breath of a star
but the light of nothing

Stare upwards,
seeking heart's
starry summer sky
Unlimited potential
of lives
long ago lived,
reborn in discovery
with new sight,
gifted to those
who seek
unseen planets.

 

[bluerains]

wow

Stare upwards,
seeking heart's
starry summer sky
Unlimited potential
of lives
long ago lived,
reborn in discovery
with new sight,
gifted to those
who seek
unseen planets.

worlds within worlds...we know not the beauty of...in the reality of lofty clouds floating on the illusions of man...and his white picket fence...oh well...the sheep will stray sometimes...

 

[ruminator]

worlds within worlds...we know not the beauty of...in the reality of lofty clouds floating on the illusions of man...and his white picket fence...oh well...the sheep will stray sometimes...

Does that sometimes it's good to be baa'd?

 

[bluerains]

Does that sometimes it's good to be baa'd?

or its it baa...d to be good...uh...that seem to be the zen of the matter...

 

[ruminator]

or its it baa...d to be good...uh...that seem to be the zen of the matter...

hmm,.....it is the attraction of the placement in the polarity spectrum of the two naturally seeking balance within.

...so,.....you wanna be the good one or the bad one?

 

[bluerains]

hmm,.....it is the attraction of the placement in the polarity spectrum of the two naturally seeking balance within.

...so,.....you wanna be the good one or the bad one?

I am ever seeking the next highest light path...the nexus of order that flows into the sprials of my highest path here / now...that is the journey...

 

[ruminator]

I am ever seeking the next highest light path...the nexus of order that flows into the sprials of my highest path here / now...that is the journey...

Is the distraction from purpose encountered by someone like me, engaged in foolishness, detrimental to your journey?

 

[bluerains]

my journey

Is the distraction from purpose encountered by someone like me, engaged in foolishness, detrimental to your journey?

is your journey...we are symbotic...you know this are you pulling my chain again

 

[ruminator]

is your journey...we are symbotic...you know this are you pulling my chain again

Do you think it's possible that I ask too many questions?

 

[quietpoet]

The "Baa'd" one?

I think SHE wants to be the good one, and WE can be the "baa'd" ones! She IS very good!

hmm,.....it is the attraction of the placement in the polarity spectrum of the two naturally seeking balance within.

...so,.....you wanna be the good one or the bad one?

 

[carn-ie]

absolutely delightful readings. your writing's captivate me! thank you!

 

[ruminator]

I think SHE wants to be the good one, and WE can be the "baa'd" ones! She IS very good!

I think your reasoning supports the natural order of life.

I can't resist the chance to juggle absurdity.



you folks are all special.

 

[bluerains]

u R not 2 shabby U r self U know...

I think your reasoning supports the natural order of life.

I can't resist the chance to juggle absurdity.



you folks are all special.

the energy of conversing kicks the muse...to a deeper core...and thats a good thing..

thanks for stopping by to carnie...also...come back again...with some words to ponder...thanks...

all..

 

[ruminator]

the energy of conversing kicks the muse...to a deeper core...and thats a good thing..

thanks for stopping by to carnie...also...come back again...with some words to ponder...thanks...

all..

Some folks are eager to jump on a bandwagon.

I prefer to travel a circus wagon for curious souls.

 

[bluerains]

hum...thanks for asking

Some folks are eager to jump on a bandwagon.

I prefer to travel a circus wagon for curious souls.

so U r Not a ring master in a one man show...

can I bring peanuts and popcorn...

 

[ruminator]

so U r Not a ring master in a one man show...

can I bring peanuts and popcorn...

Absolutely.

I don't know the backstory but I've seen many times the monkeys are plentiful and quite playful here.

I always liked the analogy of one who plays guitar and harmonica at the same time is a musical wonder but strap cymbals on his knees and suddenly he's an idiot.



all in the perspective?

 

[bluerains]

ok ok....

Absolutely.

I don't know the backstory but I've seen many times the monkeys are plentiful and quite playful here.

I always liked the analogy of one who plays guitar and harmonica at the same time is a musical wonder but strap cymbals on his knees and suddenly he's an idiot.



all in the perspective?

...take off them cymbals a play a diddie and sing a metaphor...