Sensual metaphors

unfinished..

strings part
softly teasing
songbird

acoustic
talons play
private
solo
 
Moving it along

bluerains said:
strings part
softly teasing
songbird

acoustic
talons play
private
solo

seemingly
infinite digits
pluck melodies
from
wanton curves

qp
 
strings part
softly teasing
songbird

acoustic
talons play
private
solo




seemingly
infinite digits
pluck melodies
from wanton curves


heart of
flamenco
stokes
each burning
thread
 
Continuation/completion

bluerains said:
strings part
softly teasing
songbird

acoustic
talons play
private
solo




seemingly
infinite digits
pluck melodies
from wanton curves


heart of
flamenco
stokes
each burning
thread

rumbling bass
shakes dancefloor
attenuated curves
glisten in
cataclysmic eruption

qp
 
corporal glance
a sly view
yet tangible
feeling physicality
unraveling savage
cravings on demand
charms are without
morals or regret
without honor
yet raw passion
its emotive drive
casting contradictions
of this dilemma
as I follow pied piper's
rivers of corruption
and pour this divine cup into
a scorched cauldron
 
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bluerains said:
corporal glance
a sly view
yet tangible
feeling physicality
unraveling savage
cravings on demand
charms are without
morals or regret
without honor
yet raw passion
its emotive drive
casting contradictions
of this dilemma
as I follow pied piper's
rivers of corruption
and pour this divine cup into
a scorched cauldron

is a scorched couldron a metaphor for
burnt supper <grin>

hey blue~
 
dessert on the table,
sweet lil spread ...

succulent cherries ... ripened
banana boat surprise ... whipped
naughty nougats of chocolate ... dipped
mixed nuts ... sprinkled
poured pudding ( on me ) ... creamy

what a snack
for lovers to be,
you ... me ~

:p ;)
 
RhymeFairy said:
dessert on the table,
sweet lil spread ...

succulent cherries ... ripened
banana boat surprise ... whipped
naughty nougats of chocolate ... dipped
mixed nuts ... sprinkled
poured pudding ( on me ) ... creamy

what a snack
for lovers to be,
you ... me ~

:p ;)

blueberries whipped
yogurt creamy
lips snack heathly
hot and steamy
feed me
 
Feed Me ~

bluerains said:
blueberries whipped
yogurt creamy
lips snack heathly
hot and steamy
feed me


feed me freedom
catch a wave
sunrise explorations
together, we bath

creamy light thighs
lips snake around
steam, smolders
freedom found

waves washing ashore
feeding frenzy perfected
washed up ... out
two hearts reflected ~


:heart:
 
Pearls ~

Luminous pearls dipping
low, sizzling in, an outta
the hole. Curve forming,
to curves. Nice n tight,
glistening juices, round
the bite ...

:devil:
 
thanks RF...

RhymeFairy said:
Luminous pearls dipping
low, sizzling in, an outta
the hole. Curve forming,
to curves. Nice n tight,
glistening juices, round
the bite ...

:devil:
baroque succulent
secretions, silky white
slips thru soft fingers
as milky luster
tenderly lingers :cathappy:
 
breathless
simply reading
minds
wandering freely
taste
compelling flavors
stirring
flowing energy
thought
 
ruminator said:
breathless
simply reading
minds
wandering freely
taste
compelling flavors
stirring
flowing energy
thought
recedes in the stream
voices
 
Sonnet LXIX



Maybe nothingness is to be without your presence,
without you moving, slicing the noon
like a blue flower, without you walking
later through the fog and the cobbles,

without the light you carry in your hand,
golden, which maybe others will not see,
which maybe no one knew was growing
like the red beginnings of a rose.

In short, without your presence: without your coming
suddenly, incitingly, to know my life,
gust of a rosebush, wheat of wind:

since then I am because you are,
since then you are, I am, we are,
and through love I will be, you will be, we'll be.


©Pablo Neruda
 
Queen Bee



the bee's the bee's

honey bee's have taken me
captive
made me their queen
such a novel thing to do

reformed my body
they sugared me sweet
combed betwixt honey
I am the heavenly treat

my mind they keep a-buzz
with all the news
slow words they twitter
flying me so-high

combining nectarous longings
with a sinful pollination
sniffling their legs of prey
I am tied with the glue of life

I do not budge
from behind my kingdoms door
thinking I shall stay here
forever more...


*buzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz*


:p
 
this is so cute



RhymeFairy said:
Queen Bee



the bee's the bee's

honey bee's have taken me
captive
made me their queen
such a novel thing to do

reformed my body
they sugared me sweet
combed betwixt honey
I am the heavenly treat

my mind they keep a-buzz
with all the news
slow words they twitter
flying me so-high

combining nectarous longings
with a sinful pollination
sniffling their legs of prey
I am tied with the glue of life

I do not budge
from behind my kingdoms door
thinking I shall stay here
forever more...


*buzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz*


:p
 
does that make

RhymeFairy said:
Queen Bee



the bee's the bee's

honey bee's have taken me
captive
made me their queen
such a novel thing to do

reformed my body
they sugared me sweet
combed betwixt honey
I am the heavenly treat

my mind they keep a-buzz
with all the news
slow words they twitter
flying me so-high

combining nectarous longings
with a sinful pollination
sniffling their legs of prey
I am tied with the glue of life

I do not budge
from behind my kingdoms door
thinking I shall stay here
forever more...


*buzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz*

you a hive queen...

:p
:eek: pleasing the worker bees.... :D
 
Blue Revelations part III

Lacerated statue silently
poses in emerald eyes,
beneath pussy willow branches
near her mossy mound.

Coiled was her form round
depths of his body still
drenched in soiled inebriation.

Walls of imagination had
freed her musky sap
molding sensuality into clay.

His dagger, dampened her pool,
with tainted fleshly fever
cleansing stained karmic skin
under her willow tree
of forgiveness
sealing his mortal blood
inside her terra cotta ground.
 
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bluerains said:
Lacerated statue silently
poses in emerald eyes,
beneath pussy willow branches
near her mossy mound.

Coiled was her form round
depths of his body still
drenched in soiled inebriation.

Walls of imagination had
freed her musky sap
melting sensuality into clay.

His dagger, dampened her pool,
with tainted fleshly fever
cleansing stained karmic skin
under her willow tree
of forgiveness;
sealing his mortal blood
into her terra cotta ground.


Oh Blue huni this is gorgeous ~ Your imagery is wonderful and your chosen words compliment each other beautifully... :rose:

This is an absolute delight to read... :
:rose:
 
thanks JC

Jennifer C said:

Oh Blue huni this is gorgeous ~ Your imagery is wonderful and your chosen words compliment each other beautifully... :rose:

This is an absolute delight to read... :
:rose:

blue 3 was inspired from ..

kuruntokai 40: Red Earth and Pouring Rain


yâyum ñâyum yârâ kiyarô
entaiyum nuntaiyum emmuraik kêLir
yânum nîyum evvali aritum
cempulap peyalnîr pôla
anpuTai neñcam tâmkalan tanavê
What could my mother be
to yours? What kin is my father
to yours anyway? And how
did you and I meet ever?
But in love our hearts are as red
earth and pouring rain:
mingled
beyond parting.
 
bluerains said:
blue 3 was inspired from ..

kuruntokai 40: Red Earth and Pouring Rain


yâyum ñâyum yârâ kiyarô
entaiyum nuntaiyum emmuraik kêLir
yânum nîyum evvali aritum
cempulap peyalnîr pôla
anpuTai neñcam tâmkalan tanavê
What could my mother be
to yours? What kin is my father
to yours anyway? And how
did you and I meet ever?
But in love our hearts are as red
earth and pouring rain:
mingled
beyond parting.


Your welcome blue ~

It really is beautiful... :rose:
 
mountains on high, reshaping the winds
charming the snowbirds, from the highest trees
anchoring the calm, from blithering storms eye
haunting calls, eerily echoing chants of freedom

freeing the musical chaos, stampeding the earth
honey mist transcends, love gently glows warmer
relighting loves lantern from long ago times
resurfacing the earths subdivisions sublimely ...

:rose:
 
RhymeFairy said:
Queen Bee



the bee's the bee's

honey bee's have taken me
captive
made me their queen
such a novel thing to do

reformed my body
they sugared me sweet
combed betwixt honey
I am the heavenly treat

my mind they keep a-buzz
with all the news
slow words they twitter
flying me so-high

combining nectarous longings
with a sinful pollination
sniffling their legs of prey
I am tied with the glue of life

I do not budge
from behind my kingdoms door
thinking I shall stay here
forever more...


*buzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz*


:p

that should be a buzzzzz
lil stingers hehehe
hey Ryhme
hey blue
 
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