Sensual metaphors

[Jennifer C]

mountains on high, reshaping the winds
charming the snowbirds, from the highest trees
anchoring the calm, from blithering storms eye
haunting calls, eerily echoing chants of freedom

freeing the musical chaos, stampeding the earth
honey mist transcends, love gently glows warmer
relighting loves lantern from long ago times
resurfacing the earths subdivisions sublimely ...

Lovely RF ... nicely done...

 

[bluerains]

rhythm

Lovely RF ... nicely done...

bouces from moutain through the trees and wisps into the winds of thought..nice one...smilin...

 

[RhymeFairy]

bouces from moutain through the trees and wisps into the winds of thought..nice one...smilin...

Thank you again my friends.
I cannot seem to write today.
So I am revisiting some earlier writes ...
Hope ya'll don't mind ..~

 

[bluerains]

Hey urself Artful dodger...

that should be a buzzzzz
lil stingers hehehe
hey Ryhme
hey blue

am gettin ready to fishin ...the winds are right the tides is out going...and that big grouper is just waiting ....I love to fish at night on the flats ...we wade on the sand bar...and see small sharks and other stuff...I caught a nice baracuda once off the bar...later all ...fishin calls John and I.....

 

[Jennifer C]

bouces from moutain through the trees and wisps into the winds of thought..nice one...smilin...

Yeah what blue said... lol

 

[RhymeFairy]

am gettin ready to fishin ...the winds are right the tides is out going...and that big grouper is just waiting ....I love to fish at night on the flats ...we wade on the sand bar...and see small sharks and other stuff...I caught a nice baracuda once off the bar...later all ...fishin calls John and I.....

Just for Blue .... and your fishing trip *weg* lol
Thinkin of submitting this.
Whatcha think?

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Fishing For Your Love~


Fishing for your love, is all I want to do.
Baiting my hook, with sweet things for you.
Casting all my love, into the sea of eternity.
Waiting patiently, for you to see my allure.

I shall shimmy ... shake, my body in your
direction. Hoping like hell you are paying
attention. Slowly, seductively I will dance
around. Can you smell all of me? Taste me
yet?

Running my fingers, through my short
golden hair. My breast lift, get perky
for you. Licking lucious lips now. For I can
taste you, so well. Fluttering my lashes,
as I watch you. Desire fills my eyes.

Oh, now I am really wet. Sinking, so low.
Teasing you, as I taste. Honey, you make
my pudding drip.

Now I have to swim away, just a lil.
Mmm yes Baby. I see, I do have
your attention now. Come on Big Boy.
Come ... Get me. Swim with me.
Make me yours, completely. For
if you do not know by now.
Let me tell ya a lil secret.

I started out, just fishing for your love,
in this lil poem of mine. Now Darling,
I am truly caught. For as it turns out,
it's you, who has caught me. Now,
whatcha gonna do about it?
Hmmmm?~~~~

 

[sweet GA peaches]

these peaches i leave you with ....

oh so do i go,
deep into the dips
where the cool water
drips,
into pools.
a delictable might
sensation of bite.
a gathering of sex and fools.
how i gather,
into mind the morsels,
that lay sweetly to
tease on my tongue..
dew drips and nectar
left licking,
increasing my thirst
for the 'one'.
tease of my soul
filled with passion
as i search
every hallow of eve,
a basket of peaches
i leave you,
and here i have planted
my seed.

 

[RhymeFairy]

oh so do i go,
deep into the dips
where the cool water
drips,
into pools.
a delictable might
sensation of bite.
a gathering of sex and fools.
how i gather,
into mind the morsels,
that lay sweetly to
tease on my tongue..
dew drips and nectar
left licking,
increasing my thirst
for the 'one'.
tease of my soul
filled with passion
as i search
every hallow of eve,
a basket of peaches
i leave you,
and here i have planted
my seed.

Curls of fuzz descends, in abandonment.
Fragrant aroma ... sweetness titillates, the air.
His member carves ... burrows deep, into pulpous pit.
Shaving ... circumventing, within circles of circles.
Looping 'round succulent fruit ... ripening the hole.
Pitted deep ... seed encounters seed.
Pollination ... fruitation complete ...

 

[bluerains]

drinking

morning coffee ..eyes pause on such lovely phrases dancing across a starlite scene..makes me want to write another dream..
you have all been busy while I was gone...geez..what lucious collection of images
gathering from these daydream queens...thanks RF...cheers...JC and Peaches...
so happy you stopped by..please don't be a stranger..thanks all..you can make a rainy day...into a rainbow..

 

[Jennifer C]

I'm loving your new av blue, it's almost as inspiring as your poetry ~ simply beautiful

 

[bluerains]

thanks JC

I'm loving your new av blue, it's almost as inspiring as your poetry ~ simply beautiful

the dolphins do inspire..I saw some last nite and a eagle ray...manatee...a sky of birds
and the sunset was stunning..just breathing such a picture ...is a treasure...the ocean always lifts me up...and turns my rain into dolphin dreams...and fairy wonder...thanks sweetie..blue

 

[bluerains]

Blue Revelations part IV...the end...

stardust, cloud to cloud
trance dancing across orbits
of stargazing thunder

moonstruck fairies
weave a primrose path
in terran fields
as kinsmen kingdoms
rejuvenate in dragonfly fields
of their felicity

liquid exotica
transports
realms of pleasure
as fairyland honors
potent treasures
bound to dominion
of elan´

 

[RhymeFairy]

stardust, cloud to cloud
trance dancing across orbits
of stargazing thunder

moonstruck fairies
weave a primrose path
in terran fields
as kinsmen kingdoms
rejuvenate in dragonfly fields
of their felicity

liquid exotica
transports
realms of pleasure
as fairyland honors
potent treasures
bound to dominion
of elan´

Mmmm I like ~~

I will have to bounce it ya know.
It is too delicious to resist.
Wonderfullll imagery and sweet Satiny flow ... Grrr

 

[Jennifer C]

stardust, cloud to cloud
trance dancing across orbits
of stargazing thunder

moonstruck fairies
weave a primrose path
in terran fields
as kinsmen kingdoms
rejuvenate in dragonfly fields
of their felicity

liquid exotica
transports
realms of pleasure
as fairyland honors
potent treasures
bound to dominion
of elan´

Blue huni this is wonderful ~

I just love the way you describe things and how you make it flow so flawlessly. you write with such beauty and reading you is always an absolute delight!

I just love this gorgeous piece...

 

[RhymeFairy]

stardust, cloud to cloud
trance dancing across orbits
of stargazing thunder

moonstruck fairies
weave a primrose path
in terran fields
as kinsmen kingdoms
rejuvenate in dragonfly fields
of their felicity

liquid exotica
transports
realms of pleasure
as fairyland honors
potent treasures
bound to dominion
of elan´

star fairies dance,
curtsy to the moon.
dragon flies duet
whirling ... swirling
through the skies.

shaking the shuffling
heavens loose. Lilting
swings to and about.

fairies ... dragons
heartily honoring the
majestic few, who
wonderingly notice,
the shifting heavens ...

 

[bluerains]

ell

star fairies dance,
curtsy to the moon.
dragon flies duet
whirling ... swirling
through the skies.

shaking the shuffling
heavens loose. Lilting
swings to and about.

fairies ... dragons
heartily honoring the
majestic few, who
wonderingly notice,
the shifting heavens ...

since you wrote a wee bit of wonder about..fishin...thought you might need a bit of me ole fairy wing muse...eh...

 

[bluerains]

some metaphor cliche...so it would seem..sometimes I find rewinds a good thing...like Rod Stewart singing in As time goes by...with his unique stlye..it moves the feel and a feeling to empathic erotic and exotic ..and.is not visual...thats really the crux of the matter feeling verses..image...imho...

Status/Objectification

SEX IS ACHIEVEMENT

I'd like to make it with her.
He's successful with women.
I went all the way with her.
I didn't get anywhere with her.

SEX IS PERFORMANCE

You were great last night.
I got rave reviews in bed.
He's good in bed.
She's a good screw.

WOMEN ARE OBJECTS

She's a cute thing.
Take off your clothes and show me your stuff.
How would you like a little bit of that?
She likes to flaunt it.
He played her like a violin.

WOMEN ARE ANIMALS

She works like a Playboy bunny.
She's real foxy.
Let's see if we can shoot some squirrel (or beaver.)
She's really a dog.
What a bitch!

WOMEN ARE CHILDREN

Do you like the girls at the office?
Janice is our playmate of the month!
Hey, baby!

SEX IS FOOD:

She was the best piece of ass I ever had.
What a dish!

WOMEN ARE THEIR GENITALS

She's a cunt.

MEN ARE THEIR GENITALS

He's been a real dick lately.
What a cock.

A PENIS' LENGTH is MANLINESS

He's hung like a bear.
He couldn't please anyone with that thing.
He's more man than she can handle.
She's not ready for my hot beef insertion.

A SEXUALLY ACTIVE WOMAN IS BAD:

What a slut.
She's a little tramp.
She'll spread for the break.

A SEXUALLY ACTIVE MAN IS GOOD

Boy is he a stud.
He's a player.
He's a master of the bedroom.

Dominance/Power

SEX IS A HUNT, A CONQUEST

I'm going to go out and get a piece of ass tonight.
They're going cock hunting.
He's looking for a good fuck.
He tamed her.

SEX IS BEING SERVICE BY A WOMAN

She wouldn't put out for me.
She did it for him but she wouldn't do it for me.
Last night she gave me a blow job.
She knows how to please me.

SEX IS INSTRUCTION

I know how to show a woman a good time.
You could learn a lot fom me, baby.
I could teach her a thing or two.

SEX IS TRIUMPH

I really put it to her!
I really stuck it to her!

SEX IS TRIUMPH THROUGH INFLICTING PLEASURE

Boy, did I make her moan!
I got her so hot she could hardly stand it!
She was in such heat she was begging for it.

SEX IS MADNESS

I'm wild with desire.
Every time I look at a woman I go crazy.

SEXUAL FEELING IS ELECTRICITY/FLUIDS CONTROLLED BY A WOMAN:

She turns me on.
She really got my juices flowing.
One look at her and I'm all stirred up.

FLIRTING/FOREPLAY IS ASKING FOR INTERCOURSE

She really wants it.
She's hot for you.
She's just asking for it.

SEX IS A POWER WOMEN HAVE OVER MEN

She's just a cock teaser.
If she wouldn't give it to him, why did she lead him on.
Women can have it any time they want it.

Possession/Control

SEX IS A COMMODITY

I've never had to pay for pussy.
Why should a man rape if he can get it for free?
She wouldn't give me any.
He's not one to let an opportunity pass him by.
You got her used.
She owed it to me.

VIRGINITY IS A COMMODITY

She lost it to him.
She's damaged goods.
I'm saving it for my husband.



SEX IS POSSESSION

I'd like to have her for a night.
I bet I could get her if I tried.
I want him to have me.

Hostility/aggression

SEX IS A SPORT:

I hope I score tonight.
I struck out with her.
I reached second base with her.
He made a pass at her.
He's playing the field.

SEX IS A AMBLING GAME

If you play your cards right, you'll score.
Your best bet is not to come on too strong.

SEX IS WAR

I tried to get her into bed but got shot down.
If I can wear down her resistance, I'll score.
He's always hitting on women.
She ignored his sexual advances.

SEX IS THEFT

She's good snatch.
If she won't give it, I'm going to take it.
He's robbing the cradle.
I'd like to cop some ass.

SEX IS HITTING A WOMAN'S GENITALS

I'd like to bang her box.

MASTURBATION IS HITTING ONES OWN GENITALS

I beat my meat last night.
I like to whack off.

IMPREGNATION IS AN ACT OF VIOLENCE

He knocked her up.

A PENIS IS A GUN; SPERM IS AMMUNITION

He shot his load into her.

SEX IS AGGRESSIVE DEGRADATION

I'd like to screw her.
I want to fuck her.

 

[quietpoet]

Hearts Colliding

Hearts colliding,
Facing a new day, a new reality.
Dipping deeply into our reserves
We pull forth into a new dimension.
Creating ourselves anew,
Forming a temporal bond
Within human constraints;
I hope I have touched you
As you have touched me.
Your eyes tell me all,
The genuine love that is undercover
Of time.

Gently the layers peel off the mask,
The hint of a smile encroaching
Across the abyss of yesterdays news.
Taking your hand in mine I feel the passion
Stirred up below the surface,
Just moments before its release,
Welcoming us to tomorrow.
Fortuitous signs gently nudge us
Along in the direction of our path.
Keys ring in my pocket as I walk,
Forward, always forward towards you,
Motions creating a jangling lullabye.
Your smile shoots tiny arrows
Ever deeper into my heart,
Where my past was hidden;
Forever destroying the walls and shields
That 'till now have kept us apart

 

[sweet GA peaches]

Wow!

Hearts colliding,
Facing a new day, a new reality.
Dipping deeply into our reserves
We pull forth into a new dimension.
Creating ourselves anew,
Forming a temporal bond
Within human constraints;
I hope I have touched you
As you have touched me.
Your eyes tell me all,
The genuine love that is undercover
Of time.

Gently the layers peel off the mask,
The hint of a smile encroaching
Across the abyss of yesterdays news.
Taking your hand in mine I feel the passion
Stirred up below the surface,
Just moments before its release,
Welcoming us to tomorrow.
Fortuitous signs gently nudge us
Along in the direction of our path.
Keys ring in my pocket as I walk,
Forward, always forward towards you,
Motions creating a jangling lullabye.
Your smile shoots tiny arrows
Ever deeper into my heart,
Where my past was hidden;
Forever destroying the walls and shields
That 'till now have kept us apart

****QP- " Your smile shoots tiny arrows
Ever deeper into my heart,
Where my past was hidden;
Forever destroying the walls and shields
That 'till now have kept us apart"....

OH this has to be my favorite part, and the arrows never fall short but deep into..
dear QP, I am quite impressed with this sensual side !!! very much like this , very much ..... -sweetGApeaches

 

[quietpoet]

Thank you Peaches!

I have always loved those GA peaches (pun intended)! I used to go to the fruit stands in Atlanta when I lived there and buy the fresh peaches, sometimes eating 9 or 10 at a sitting (that is NOT quite a metaphor, but isn't imagination a wonderful thing). I'm glad you liked this one! It has been a long time, though one never relenquishes our memories! This one may not be a lit poem... I am recycling some older things now and again. look below for my list!

QP

****QP- " Your smile shoots tiny arrows
Ever deeper into my heart,
Where my past was hidden;
Forever destroying the walls and shields
That 'till now have kept us apart"....

OH this has to be my favorite part, and the arrows never fall short but deep into..
dear QP, I am quite impressed with this sensual side !!! very much like this , very much ..... -sweetGApeaches

 

[bluerains]

thanks Peaches and QP

I have always loved those GA peaches (pun intended)! I used to go to the fruit stands in Atlanta when I lived there and buy the fresh peaches, sometimes eating 9 or 10 at a sitting (that is NOT quite a metaphor, but isn't imagination a wonderful thing). I'm glad you liked this one! It has been a long time, though one never relenquishes our memories! This one may not be a lit poem... I am recycling some older things now and again. look below for my list!


to bestir blue elements
from loves coral castle
that freed the mind
to the daughter
of his churning sea
letting her muse dance
to his poets heart
touching in sensual dreams

 

[sweet GA peaches]

elements

of rain,
and wind,
nor storm,
can throw a maidens
castle
from her form.
for she is beauty
at rest
and beauty
at beast,
she is the bluerain
that forms in the east,
and the winds blow
to an echoe,
that leave imprints
of smiles,
running all the while,
through my mind.

luv2theblu..rains.

 

[bluerains]

of rain,
and wind,
nor storm,
can throw a maidens
castle
from her form.
for she is beauty
at rest
and beauty
at beast,
she is the bluerain
that forms in the east,
and the winds blow
to an echoe,
that leave imprints
of smiles,
running all the while,
through my mind.

luv2theblu..rains.

and so does that mendedangel so bright
give honor and delight
as she grows her broken wings..

hint...http://www.parascope.com/en/articles/coralCastle.htm
http://www.world-mysteries.com/coralcastle.htm
am working on the romance about this mystery..what do you think any metaphor
of ideas...his love for this young woman is a enigma..that is sensual in itself to me..
the age difference ...the sacred knowledge he carried.both intrigue me...sensually

 

[ruminator]

Sometimes I can't stop reading long enough to do anything else.



Thanks to all the inspirational thinkers here....so many good ones all in one place here

 

[bluerains]

rumi

Sometimes I can't stop reading long enough to do anything else.



Thanks to all the inspirational thinkers here....so many good ones all in one place here

am disappointed...you can do better..ouy...times are frequent...sit on the fence ....watch the mouse .