Sexually Explicit Poetry Challenge

[Fairytat]

Throwing my hat into the ring

What Sex Means to Me

I lie back on flannel
sheets, body soaked
with sweat and tears,
feeling you shifting and
turning between blood
stained thighs.

Your mouth covers mine,
tongue ring teasing tender
taste buds, swelled with the
expectation of sweetness
and love.

You arch above
my submissive form,
keening cry as you pour
into my unprotected womb.

I smile, at peace, no
longer a trembling girl-child,
but a woman born.

I reach between slicked
curls, touching our sex.



Ok, not that explicit but Im a bit new to the erotic poetry part since I normally don't write it

 

[JUDO]

Wow!

You dogs! This is turning out so great. I'm delighted with the stuff I'm reading.

Smithpeter...wow! Who knew? Fairytat - sounds like a first time to me. WE - what are you doing next Saturday? Manus - Yeah, keep trying...a little more to the right. RW - I love the shower, too. Pix, okay? Stargirl - Okay, okay, you got my attention, I'm watching. Brandy Chase - that was truly toe-curling. Daughter - you are so nasty! What a lucky man you have. lol.

And Drake, I love it...no, I pop it!


- Judo

PS - Mine to cum!

 

[daughter]

I enjoyed

smithpeter--

I like "bald". I want to talk to you about a feature.

Eve, I like the change and your second poem has lines that make me think I'll be bugging you again.


Glad you getting a good response, Judo.

Peace,

daughter

 

[WickedEve]

daughter, isn't your site keeping you busy enough?

asses are red and balls are blue
what's wrong with poem number two?

 

[Angeline]

Nothing Ventured, Nothing Gained

Tender is the night
and shining
in the silvery beam
alit in this moonpale room
I open
to your hard grace
poised in sweat and curling hair
and take you in
all in there
pointing hard against your chest
wrapping you in silken skin
and velvet pressed
to you enveloping
I dip, swirl, quiver
shudder, shake, explode,
breathe, breathe, breathe
and let you drink me dry.

 

[daughter]

Bugging you for permission to post

Nut!

Yeah, I might ask for a slight edit, too. It's my nature. :lol

And yes, I'm quite busy harassing folks like you for content.

Thanks.

Peace,

daughter

 

[Angeline]

New Version

ok ok. i hated the version i just posted. should have waited and edited it! here's the edited version.

Tender is the night
in moonpale room
awash in lambent silver.
The open window breathes afresh.
I watch the curtain flutter,
unfold to your hard grace.
Poised in sweat, in curling hair enjoined,
in half-closed eyes, in steady beat,
and holding back no more,
surrender with one broken whisper,
draw you in,
wrap you deep in silken skin,
push soft hard-peaked against your chest,
offer you sweet velvet pressed,
and thus you are caressed.
I dip, swirl, slide, and quiver
shudder, shake, explode,
then breathe, breathe, breathe
anointing you slick.

 

[lovetoread]

Mr Pinky

Mr. Pinky fucks me,
as long as I want.
Running not out of love,
but on C batteries.

It slides in and out,
dripping with my juices.
Moving fast within me,
so slick and hot.

Loving me like I want it,
not asking for anything.
Hitting all the right spots,
just like I need it.

I move my hand,
spreading myself wide.
Turning the notch,
vibrating just a little faster.

Throwing my head back,
moaning deep in my throat.
A hand goes to my breast,
pinching the nipple.

The waves hit me,
my pleasure complete.
I lay back satisfied,
Mr. Pinky still deep inside.

 

[REDWAVE]

Funny!

LOL, lovetoread. Makes me wish I was Mr. Pinky.

 

[lovetoread]

Re: Funny!

LOL, lovetoread. Makes me wish I was Mr. Pinky.

Thanks

 

[lovetoread]

Daddy

Slipping into his bed,
knowing it was wrong.
But the urges overtake me,
as I snuggle into his back.

“Daddy take me,” I tell him,
“I need you desperately.
Eighteen is not a little girl,
I know you want me.”

Rolling over with his dick
already long and hard.
Raising my arms above me,
shoving a thigh between my legs.

I am wet and tight as he enters me,
loving his moaning of my name.
Harder he thrusts,
telling me to call him daddy.

I do as he wishes,
his teeth biting down on my neck.
My body surges upward,
as my clit is pounded into.

Screaming out,
”Daddy, oh Daddy.”
As his body stills,
his cum exploding into me.

I can feel our juices
pooling under us.
His dick shrinking,
falling out of me.

Slowly his breathing slows,
and he moved slightly above me.
I gaze at him,
my father, my lover.

On his elbows,
his hands cupping my face.
"I love you baby," he whispers,
placing a kiss softly on my lips.

 

[REDWAVE]

Tsk, tsk

You are postively naughty, lovetoread. Yes, the father/daughter theme is taboo, but has a strong attraction anyway-- or perhaps because it is taboo.

 

[lovetoread]

Tis my very first incest theme.

I want to try as many of them (themes) as I can.

Non consent is next on my list.

 

[JUDO]

Encore!

Boy Show

by Judo©

Dripping runny sticky goo
Pulsing organ emptied fast
Tangy blast between us two
Melted ice cream on fingers cast

Air alive with smoldering parts
Nitrates ooze down bent delight
Glistening in low light heaving ho
I lick my lips for one last bite.

Teeth scrape the drooling sheen
Basking tongue for cherry cream
Tweak the nob for dollup's sup
As open the half moon's window beam.

Tartful crease jumps in spasm
Eyes too close - mouth open wide
Handful push, bite hairy hole
Tongue to swab the tender pride

Lazarus goads the dawning rod
As flick and lick and trick I go
Hand and knees scrape the floor
Stroke the stick and fury blow

Jet streams paint their Pollock spew
On chest, on cheeks and lips who know
The spotlight craves a second round
My mouth held wide for better show

Eyes look on from darkened seats
As fingers churn their sodden laps
Boy to boy pant reddened mouths
Fine nailed hands rain thunderous claps

Looking blithe we kiss one last
A lingering, smoldering, whimpering press
Sweaty, sticky our bodies grind
Giving the audience more than less

Arise as one now hip to hip
We bow and gather our winnings here
Curtains close to showers we go.
"Encore!" rings the women's cheer.

 

[WickedEve]

This is definitely a Judo poem. It's about time you posted on your own thread.

I keep going back and reading this part:
Lazarus goads the dawning rod
As flick and lick and trick I go

It's stuck in my head! lol

Gooood poem, Judo!

 

[Angeline]

Wow is right!

The play of words in your poem is one exciting dance Judo. Intricate and sly!

 

[JUDO]

Thanks to the General

Thanks WE and Angeline. You're dead right, it's about time.

Inspired from a thread on the General Forum about women's prurient interest in witnessing gay men's sexaul behavior.

Boy Show now posted.

"Two shows a night. We're here all week."


- Judo

 

[Blue Dolphin]

for your ingormation
Blue Dolphin was pleasureu.
my offering


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Sweet Taste
by Blue Dolphin ©


She lies, anticipating
Ecstatic for my touch
This precious angel ladylove
Whom I doth want so much
Her body so excite me
With breasts of milky white,
Her rosy red proud nipples,
My tongue did so delight

Relaxing, I do settle now
Between her spreading thighs
A playful smile upon her face
A glint within her eye
Pussy beckons as I stroke
With fingertips so light
There is no hurry now sweetheart
This could take all night

Gently spread pulsating lips
Reveal her rosebud sweet
Slowly peel disguising hood
What joy my eyes to meet
Her clitoris now standing proud
Impatient for my mouth
As easily my fingers rub
To lift it, north and south

Descending over throbbing clit
Tongue to swirl around
Feel her tremble deep within
As hear low moaning sound
Start to suck, draw it out
Rasp it for a while
Glancing over heaving mound
To see her subtle smile

Take it in my sensual lips
Its time for her to ride
In ecstasy to paradise
As shake it side to side
Slip a probing finger in
Her G spot to explore
A light caress precedes the touch
Her hips now leave the floor


For now she flies above the moon
As suck and lick take charge
So lost in her emotion
With clit as concrete hard
Feel it start to build within
The spasm slowly rise
Thrashing arms, and heaving hips
Through dark dilated eyes

Screaming now she fills the room
“Oh god I’m gonna cum”
Lift her hips to greet me
Await the rising sun
Orgasmic bliss enthral her,
Yet now it is my time
For hungry licks to lap it up
Sweet taste of honey wine.
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[REDWAVE]

Commentary on "Sweet Taste"

Trite, cliched, insipid.

I realize everyone makes typographical errors from time to time, myself included. But really, right in the top title line-- "ingormation"?

I certainly feel ingormated.

 

[WickedEve]

This poetry is not Dolphin-Free

"Whom I doth want so much" I think should have one more syllable. For example: Whom I doth desire so much.

Her body so excite(s) me

A glint within her eye(s)

"Feel her tremble deep within
As hear low moaning sound"
This part is a bit awkward. Maybe: As I hear low moaning sound.

"With clit as concrete hard"
How about: With clit that's concrete hard?

I like, "For now she flies above the moon."

Orgasmic bliss enthral(l) her,

You may want to polish this poem a little. I think finding some alternative words would improve the read. Some words like "bliss" and "ecstasy," and phrases like "milky white" and "rosy red" are used so often that you may want to avoid using too many of these clichés in one poem.
Try the thesaurus at Merriam Webster Online. You can find alternative words for rosy and red that you'll be delighted with.

 

[Lauren Hynde]

As Explicit As I'm Ready to Get Poetry Challenge

don't know if it's explicit enough, but I still wanted to play...


Whilst She Slept

She slept so serenely
Her legs so tender in bed
I approached her entranced
All my longings unsaid

She slept so serenely
Her fingers so innocent
I desired her with such ardour
All my qualms absent

She slept so serenely
Her unclosed lips so sweet
On her dream shaped bed
Where our naked bodies meet

She slept so serenely
Whilst I kissed her perfect cheek
I caressed her perfect body
We made love, did not speak

She slept so serenely
Shivers shooting up her spine
Our hearts drumming as one
I knew she would be mine

She slept so serenely
Our tongues entwined together
And for just one single second
We held each other, forever

She slept so serenely
As I slowly left the room
If you want to know heaven:
Her wet body, lit by the moon

 

[Angeline]

So Serene!

Absolutely beautiful Lauren! I love it.

 

[Star At Sunrise]

Laurens Poem

Wow Lauren! That really was a great poem! I'd be pressed not to change a thing. The last lines are hair-raising. Really good job! Yikes!

Hey Angeline!!!

 

[JUDO]

And now for something completely different...

You know, sometimes I like it rough.


Back Door Baby

by Judo©

Back door, back to back door, baby
Gimme back door, gimme back door

Back door, back to back door, baby
Gimme back door, gimme back door

Yeah!

Push me on my face
And slap my ass silly
Make my heart race
With that great big willy

Get a little rough
Just serpentine your hips
Thrust your best stuff
While pinching both my nips

With my ass upturned
My pussy's wet red
My knees are carpet burned
So, grab my cheeks and spread

Back door, back to back door, baby
Gimme back door, gimme back door

Yeah!

Now you're in deep
Pushin' and a shovin'
Darlin', make me weep
Gimme good, hard lovin'!

I can hear you grunt
Sweat rollin' down my back
As I'm diddlin' with my cunt
Balls're slappin' my crack

Tonight you're really hard
Give me all that I can stand
Baby, let down your guard
And show me you're my man!

Back door, back to back door, baby
Gimme back door, gimme back door

Yeah!

Racin' for a quick one
Diggin' down for honey
Pound me with a big one
'Won't do this for money

Spew it on my back
I'll bend me over clean
Just let it go and jack
And coat me with your sheen

Only for you, boy
Spasm, stars and flash
I'll be your girl-toy
"Sufferin' succotash!"

Back door, back to back door, baby
Gimme back door, gimme back door

Yeah!

 

[karmadog]

Kudos to Judo!

Back to Back Door sounds like a punk song. Maybe you could sell that to PJ Harvey.

My favorite line so far was "Jet streams paint their Pollock spew."

All these years and I was an artist and didn't know it. Should've saved those Kleenexes!