Sexually Explicit Poetry Challenge
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Debbie
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Phase One. Getting it on. 
Phase two. Down and dirty
Phase three. Sexually explicit
Here is phase One
Brush strokes
Caress of sheer silk upon your naked body
Soft warm breeze blows through open window
Sounds of birds singing and children playing
Noise you are barely aware of as I stroke you
You whisper softly, words of sensual encouragement
In response my soft oily fingers pinch ever so gently
The lovely pink petals of your sweet scented flower
Sharp intake of breath at touch on a sensitive clit
Binding you with silk, you arch your back in lust
How easily you are aroused, I see it in your eyes
Proud nipples the colour of pink rosebuds bloom
Peek at me from firm, twin mounds of pleasure
Reaching for the delicacies with my moist tongue
My long hair falls upon your skin, a tickling touch
You twist and moan, wrists straining in silken tie
My breasts brush against yours as I nuzzle you
With curling tongue encircling your nipples
Slipping your nub into my mouth, blowing gently
Small sighs escape from your pouty pretty mouth
From nipple to nipple I savour and suckle
Small bucking of hips and pants escape your lips
I stop to your moan and protest, breasts thrust at me
Tracing small circles widening to larger sensuous strokes
I coax from your body by mere slow touch, a deep longing
Untying you my love, holding you close to me
Our play is enjoyable but I know you want more
I turn you towards me, face to face, kissing
Small nibbles and tracing of tongue upon lip
In the dresser mirror I enjoy our joint reflection
My hands upon your back, carressing your bottom
Cupping a buttock in my hand, I espy your brush
It's smooth handle and elegant flat plastic back
It is my turn to whisper in your ear my thoughts
Without words you stand up and hand me our new toy
Across my knee, a bare cute bottom, soft as can be
With brush in hand, I softly bring it down upon cheek
One stroke, two strokes, pink marks appear, three strokes
A whimper, I pause, waiting till there is begging for more
My hand strokes your tender skin, you wriggle a lot
Four strokes, five, six, I am titillated at each stroke
My excitement builds and I sense you are totally aroused
Tossing the brush away, onto the bed,we hungrily embrace,
Lost in one anothers body parts we indulge in sexual release
Different strokes for different folks; brush strokes for us
Phase two. Down and dirty
Phase three. Sexually explicit
Here is phase One
Brush strokes
Caress of sheer silk upon your naked body
Soft warm breeze blows through open window
Sounds of birds singing and children playing
Noise you are barely aware of as I stroke you
You whisper softly, words of sensual encouragement
In response my soft oily fingers pinch ever so gently
The lovely pink petals of your sweet scented flower
Sharp intake of breath at touch on a sensitive clit
Binding you with silk, you arch your back in lust
How easily you are aroused, I see it in your eyes
Proud nipples the colour of pink rosebuds bloom
Peek at me from firm, twin mounds of pleasure
Reaching for the delicacies with my moist tongue
My long hair falls upon your skin, a tickling touch
You twist and moan, wrists straining in silken tie
My breasts brush against yours as I nuzzle you
With curling tongue encircling your nipples
Slipping your nub into my mouth, blowing gently
Small sighs escape from your pouty pretty mouth
From nipple to nipple I savour and suckle
Small bucking of hips and pants escape your lips
I stop to your moan and protest, breasts thrust at me
Tracing small circles widening to larger sensuous strokes
I coax from your body by mere slow touch, a deep longing
Untying you my love, holding you close to me
Our play is enjoyable but I know you want more
I turn you towards me, face to face, kissing
Small nibbles and tracing of tongue upon lip
In the dresser mirror I enjoy our joint reflection
My hands upon your back, carressing your bottom
Cupping a buttock in my hand, I espy your brush
It's smooth handle and elegant flat plastic back
It is my turn to whisper in your ear my thoughts
Without words you stand up and hand me our new toy
Across my knee, a bare cute bottom, soft as can be
With brush in hand, I softly bring it down upon cheek
One stroke, two strokes, pink marks appear, three strokes
A whimper, I pause, waiting till there is begging for more
My hand strokes your tender skin, you wriggle a lot
Four strokes, five, six, I am titillated at each stroke
My excitement builds and I sense you are totally aroused
Tossing the brush away, onto the bed,we hungrily embrace,
Lost in one anothers body parts we indulge in sexual release
Different strokes for different folks; brush strokes for us
lovetoread
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That was great Mrs. Debbie.
Lauren Hynde
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debbiexxx
Can hardly wait for phases two and three...
Can hardly wait for phases two and three...
The Huntsman
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implicit in the lines
I know it's pretty tame, but you gotta start somewhere.
I call it, "Ulu Ru:"
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=47244
She fits,
laces tight,
supports my heel,
when I stop.
She chews,
like a dog,
this miserable thing.
Carved of calf-skin,
to soften my hard
in-human sensitivity.
Come on, slave,
we go together.
Ité - slave,
we come together;
with hidden noise,
and secret, sticky death,
red rock, the yoga
of completion.
Ihmara
I know it's pretty tame, but you gotta start somewhere.
I call it, "Ulu Ru:"
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=47244
She fits,
laces tight,
supports my heel,
when I stop.
She chews,
like a dog,
this miserable thing.
Carved of calf-skin,
to soften my hard
in-human sensitivity.
Come on, slave,
we go together.
Ité - slave,
we come together;
with hidden noise,
and secret, sticky death,
red rock, the yoga
of completion.
Ihmara
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Debbie
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Re: Oooo...
Judo, (Is it hot in here?)
Phase Two is under construction and should be
on target for the next few days.
(Don't forget to critique as well people,
now that I am older and lol 'wiser' I can
take it.)
(Thanks lovetoread and Lauren.Hynde)JUDO said:(*fanning self*)
Uhm, nice start, DX. (whew!) How soon can I (pant, pant) expect the next installment? (NOTE TO SELF: Bring towel to Poetry Forum).
- Judo
Judo, (Is it hot in here?)
Phase Two is under construction and should be
on target for the next few days.
(Don't forget to critique as well people,
now that I am older and lol 'wiser' I can
take it.)
Sweetwood
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Laying vulnerable to your touch
Laying vulnerable to your touch
I see your silken and mysterious
Passion flower descend so moist
And warm to take my shaft within
A moan escapes my lips
Your hands with strength
Push my own hands with
Fingers intertwined
Against the sheets beside my head
And in a moment of submission
My head falls to the side to give
To you the bareness of my neck
For you – I am your prey
Teeth bared you growl your lust
At me – my naked self exposed
Before your heat.
Your hips begin to sway
Within the rhythm of your heart
That drums the music of arousal
Like waves of crashing oceans
In your ears
You want to take and conquer
Me
I feel your lips caressing
The tow’ring column
Of my flesh – yet your excitement
Quickly grows beyond caress
Hands tearing at my hands demand
That I must match the heated pulse
Of your aggressive lust
And nails and hands and teeth
Whip like a riding crop
The fleeting stud to rise
And jump to carry your desire
To it’s thrilling end
Hand reaching back
You spank the steamy loins
Until a growl arises in my throat
And shuddering I buck and throw
With ever quick’ning thrust
My heated self against your
Passionate self.
Gone is submissiveness
I feel your will contesting mine
Our hands and hearts
Now under the direction
Of our lust – you wonder
Whether you are steed or rider
Slave or master to my howling wants
As we both crash through surfaces
And enter in the height of passion
Into that space where in the waving
Spurting, wailing, moaning
Flight you and I, I and you
Become completely unadorned
copyright MCD 2000
Laying vulnerable to your touch
I see your silken and mysterious
Passion flower descend so moist
And warm to take my shaft within
A moan escapes my lips
Your hands with strength
Push my own hands with
Fingers intertwined
Against the sheets beside my head
And in a moment of submission
My head falls to the side to give
To you the bareness of my neck
For you – I am your prey
Teeth bared you growl your lust
At me – my naked self exposed
Before your heat.
Your hips begin to sway
Within the rhythm of your heart
That drums the music of arousal
Like waves of crashing oceans
In your ears
You want to take and conquer
Me
I feel your lips caressing
The tow’ring column
Of my flesh – yet your excitement
Quickly grows beyond caress
Hands tearing at my hands demand
That I must match the heated pulse
Of your aggressive lust
And nails and hands and teeth
Whip like a riding crop
The fleeting stud to rise
And jump to carry your desire
To it’s thrilling end
Hand reaching back
You spank the steamy loins
Until a growl arises in my throat
And shuddering I buck and throw
With ever quick’ning thrust
My heated self against your
Passionate self.
Gone is submissiveness
I feel your will contesting mine
Our hands and hearts
Now under the direction
Of our lust – you wonder
Whether you are steed or rider
Slave or master to my howling wants
As we both crash through surfaces
And enter in the height of passion
Into that space where in the waving
Spurting, wailing, moaning
Flight you and I, I and you
Become completely unadorned
copyright MCD 2000
JUDO
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"You've Just Cum?"
by Judo©
Behind my eyelids,
The searing flash of brilliance subsides
As I gently flow into darkness
Beat by beat,
Steadily becoming aware of my body.
Heart, tripping along quickly,
Stumbles down the storm-tossed path
While my ribs expand-compress, expand-compess…
Rasping runner's breath through my open mouth slows
Until I can lick my drying lips, gasping gently.
My reddened cheek lolls against
The damp pillow beneath my head.
Echoes of the exquisite explosion bounce
Off my hips, my toes, my breasts and shoulders.
My groin still rocks in time to this adult Merry-go-round
As it slowly stops spinning, spinning, spinning…
I open my eyes
And deeply sigh a hot column of air to the ceiling
As tension flows off the bed and out the door
Like the sweat pool at the base of my neck,
Trickling down my sternum.
My warm naked body sinks into the mattress,
The smoldering room stops its quaking,
And two shoes fidget at the door.
The corner of my mouth twitches to grin
As my lover dwells on the obvious.
by Judo©
Behind my eyelids,
The searing flash of brilliance subsides
As I gently flow into darkness
Beat by beat,
Steadily becoming aware of my body.
Heart, tripping along quickly,
Stumbles down the storm-tossed path
While my ribs expand-compress, expand-compess…
Rasping runner's breath through my open mouth slows
Until I can lick my drying lips, gasping gently.
My reddened cheek lolls against
The damp pillow beneath my head.
Echoes of the exquisite explosion bounce
Off my hips, my toes, my breasts and shoulders.
My groin still rocks in time to this adult Merry-go-round
As it slowly stops spinning, spinning, spinning…
I open my eyes
And deeply sigh a hot column of air to the ceiling
As tension flows off the bed and out the door
Like the sweat pool at the base of my neck,
Trickling down my sternum.
My warm naked body sinks into the mattress,
The smoldering room stops its quaking,
And two shoes fidget at the door.
The corner of my mouth twitches to grin
As my lover dwells on the obvious.
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dark stranger
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manhand rapture
my humble offering to your judo suggestion
please do lay back
and just hold your breath
for moments there
know the rapture of man
let me unzip the wetness of your slit
of your candy cunt slot
let my tongue dive in the pool
of your nether treasure
let my eyes nurse the ends
of your nipple cocks that rise
let my hands dial them
to sinful channels
let me pull their pucker
til they are engorged
and weeping their color
for me to suck hard to bruise
let me mark your thighs
with my hands as I spread them
like warm butter on my cock blade
feel them tremble in my hands
as I turn you in my eye sun
and perch your round ass there
like a flower with petals closed
then part you open firmly
feel my tongue in your valley
lapping from slit to end
between your cheeks feel my breath
up over your back feel my tongue
let me take your bitch wet
with my hound lusting
kneel in submission for my thrusts
let me be concussion from behind
grinding your womb edges smooth
with the veined embossing of my pricking
feel my nudging of your belly inside
my undulation in your deepest damp
feel your wound leak and cry
as your cum bathes my balls
as the wet fuck sounds of our orgy
plays music on your opening
feel my cream gush to your gully
as it froths your tunnel depths
feel it pry you full of heat
til your moans are banshee pierced
let me hold your wrists captive
and pierce your plunge place
let me capture your rapture pains
til you beg for my darkest demands
tremble with me...shudder with me
let your cum be my breakfast
when you rise from your night
feed me your residue that runs thick
give me your panting kiss after
my humble offering to your judo suggestion
please do lay back
and just hold your breath
for moments there
know the rapture of man
let me unzip the wetness of your slit
of your candy cunt slot
let my tongue dive in the pool
of your nether treasure
let my eyes nurse the ends
of your nipple cocks that rise
let my hands dial them
to sinful channels
let me pull their pucker
til they are engorged
and weeping their color
for me to suck hard to bruise
let me mark your thighs
with my hands as I spread them
like warm butter on my cock blade
feel them tremble in my hands
as I turn you in my eye sun
and perch your round ass there
like a flower with petals closed
then part you open firmly
feel my tongue in your valley
lapping from slit to end
between your cheeks feel my breath
up over your back feel my tongue
let me take your bitch wet
with my hound lusting
kneel in submission for my thrusts
let me be concussion from behind
grinding your womb edges smooth
with the veined embossing of my pricking
feel my nudging of your belly inside
my undulation in your deepest damp
feel your wound leak and cry
as your cum bathes my balls
as the wet fuck sounds of our orgy
plays music on your opening
feel my cream gush to your gully
as it froths your tunnel depths
feel it pry you full of heat
til your moans are banshee pierced
let me hold your wrists captive
and pierce your plunge place
let me capture your rapture pains
til you beg for my darkest demands
tremble with me...shudder with me
let your cum be my breakfast
when you rise from your night
feed me your residue that runs thick
give me your panting kiss after
JUDO
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(Judging by your poem, DS, you ask for a lot, don't you?)
But not nearly as much as you give!
Thanks for the scrumptious beginning, DS. And welcome to the Poetry Forum at Lit.
I particularly liked the "concussion from behind" use of words. Yummy!
- Judo
But not nearly as much as you give!
Thanks for the scrumptious beginning, DS. And welcome to the Poetry Forum at Lit.
I particularly liked the "concussion from behind" use of words. Yummy!
- Judo
JUDO
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REDWAVE
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Good, but . . .
Pretty good, Judo. I especially like the line "Echoes of the exquisite explosion." It's a lot of alliteration, but not too much, and effective, I think, with the repeat of the initial "ex-" sound. But you do have one typo: "expand-compess." Tsk, tsk.
Pretty good, Judo. I especially like the line "Echoes of the exquisite explosion." It's a lot of alliteration, but not too much, and effective, I think, with the repeat of the initial "ex-" sound. But you do have one typo: "expand-compess." Tsk, tsk.
dreamangel_4980
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I FEEL YOUR PASSION, FEEL YOUR STRENGTH
in your arms,where i want to be..
YOUR HANDS ON MY WAIST..YOUTAKE OFF MY JEANS,MY THONG.
they fall to the ground silently,i listen..
YOUR HEART IS BEATING SO RAPIDLY
i hear nothing else....
in your arms,where i want to be..
YOUR HANDS ON MY WAIST..YOUTAKE OFF MY JEANS,MY THONG.
they fall to the ground silently,i listen..
YOUR HEART IS BEATING SO RAPIDLY
i hear nothing else....
dark stranger
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lovely images
ms judo thanks for the welcome
not sure how this fits for replys,
but your cum was lovley enjoyed the read
dream angel...
listen to the warm
wear my whispers there
on seam of your sensual
press back your offering
to my willing voice
let me speak softly
to the bottom of your heart
ms judo thanks for the welcome
not sure how this fits for replys,
but your cum was lovley enjoyed the read
dream angel...
listen to the warm
wear my whispers there
on seam of your sensual
press back your offering
to my willing voice
let me speak softly
to the bottom of your heart
dreamangel_4980
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dark stranger I hunger for your touch
take me to heights unknown yet unreached
show me the truth of ecstacy
laying powerless...
captured by your spell.
take me now..breathe new life into me..
take me to heights unknown yet unreached
show me the truth of ecstacy
laying powerless...
captured by your spell.
take me now..breathe new life into me..
G
Guest
Guest
judo?/ thanks hun..Everyone needs a little constructive criticism once in a while..i feel worthy...{bows to judo}
S
ShamelessFlirt
Guest
Foreplay
Moistened lips,
parted thighs
Musky scent,
where her hunger resides
Dancing, probing,
my nimble tongue is relentless
Feeling overwhelming her,
nothing can prevent this
Fingers tangle
in my hair
Drawing me in,
her scent becomes my air
Juices flowing,
quench my thirst
Greedily I drink,
this is only the first
Heels hook
behind my neck
as her hand on my head,
keeps me in check
Petals open,
her sex glistens before my eyes
Exploring deeper
my head held fast between her thighs
Uncontrollably
with wild abandon she quivered
Refusing to let go
until I delivered
Urging me on,
almost over the top
teasing her clit
she cries out "Don't stop"
Steadily now,
picking up the pace
as the outline of her mons
I started to trace
Sharp intake of breath,
suddenly she is still
Except for the aftershocks
brought on from my skill
My reward is your pleasure,
I revel in your taste
as I put my lips back,
not a drop shall go to waste
Moistened lips,
parted thighs
Musky scent,
where her hunger resides
Dancing, probing,
my nimble tongue is relentless
Feeling overwhelming her,
nothing can prevent this
Fingers tangle
in my hair
Drawing me in,
her scent becomes my air
Juices flowing,
quench my thirst
Greedily I drink,
this is only the first
Heels hook
behind my neck
as her hand on my head,
keeps me in check
Petals open,
her sex glistens before my eyes
Exploring deeper
my head held fast between her thighs
Uncontrollably
with wild abandon she quivered
Refusing to let go
until I delivered
Urging me on,
almost over the top
teasing her clit
she cries out "Don't stop"
Steadily now,
picking up the pace
as the outline of her mons
I started to trace
Sharp intake of breath,
suddenly she is still
Except for the aftershocks
brought on from my skill
My reward is your pleasure,
I revel in your taste
as I put my lips back,
not a drop shall go to waste
G
Guest
Guest
wow shameless..after all that i think i might need to go take a shower..mmmmm that was wonderful..thank-you..looking forward
to more of your rotic poems...Angel
to more of your rotic poems...Angel
G
Guest
Guest
wow shameless..after all that i think i might need to go take a shower..mmmmm that was wonderful..thank-you..looking forward
to more of your rotic poems...Angel
to more of your rotic poems...Angel
Senna Jawa
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Thank God It's Friday
my crazy baby urges me:
i am slick
i am hot
use the whip
use my bod
bite my nip
push big dick
use my butt
gimmee big O!
fuck my brains out
like there is no tomorrow
i have to calm her down:
easy baby
it's only Friday
we'll skip Synagogue
we'll skip Church
i'm gona stay put in my Pussy Inn
'till Blue Monday
(I know, I know, it is not my, how to put It, it's not my cup of tea, not yet, I m just trying to be social
my crazy baby urges me:
i am slick
i am hot
use the whip
use my bod
bite my nip
push big dick
use my butt
gimmee big O!
fuck my brains out
like there is no tomorrow
i have to calm her down:
easy baby
it's only Friday
we'll skip Synagogue
we'll skip Church
i'm gona stay put in my Pussy Inn
'till Blue Monday
(I know, I know, it is not my, how to put It, it's not my cup of tea, not yet, I m just trying to be social
Senna Jawa
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--
there goes the shoe the shirt
the pantyhose the blouse the skirt
the bra the underwear the panties the socks
and jewelry
here comes the skin the hair the neck the legs
the breasts the belly and the belly button
the hips the butt and all
dips holes hills digits and protrusions
and now
application letters
a broken muffler
license plates
taxes
washing
vacuuming
groceries
not on my mind
my head falls
between your knees
keeps sliding down the valley
of your warm thighs
lips land on lips
the sweet taste of petals on my lapping flatten tongue
nose buried in clit
the petals part wide
the now dick-like tongue reaches the spicy depths
pulling my whole head in its wake
my face drowns in the wet motherland like
in a tropical night my arms
steady your hips with all their might
yes go
go high
where there are no
bills to pay
letters to answer
time to kill
there goes the shoe the shirt
the pantyhose the blouse the skirt
the bra the underwear the panties the socks
and jewelry
here comes the skin the hair the neck the legs
the breasts the belly and the belly button
the hips the butt and all
dips holes hills digits and protrusions
and now
application letters
a broken muffler
license plates
taxes
washing
vacuuming
groceries
not on my mind
my head falls
between your knees
keeps sliding down the valley
of your warm thighs
lips land on lips
the sweet taste of petals on my lapping flatten tongue
nose buried in clit
the petals part wide
the now dick-like tongue reaches the spicy depths
pulling my whole head in its wake
my face drowns in the wet motherland like
in a tropical night my arms
steady your hips with all their might
yes go
go high
where there are no
bills to pay
letters to answer
time to kill
Senna Jawa
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This used to be such a lively (lovely? ) thread. Then I have posted two and it was like a kiss of death. Am I a thread breaker/killer? I know that the two by me were merely a debiut in this so difficult to master field of art but all U had to do was just to go on and continue like nothing has happened.
Regards,
) thread. Then I have posted two and it was like a kiss of death. Am I a thread breaker/killer? I know that the two by me were merely a debiut in this so difficult to master field of art but all U had to do was just to go on and continue like nothing has happened.Regards
,
Lauren Hynde
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Don't worry, SJ
These things work in waves. People just need to be reminded once in a while. Good threads laying dormant need bumping. I'm sure we'll see a shower of new sexually explicit poems in the next few days...
These things work in waves. People just need to be reminded once in a while. Good threads laying dormant need bumping. I'm sure we'll see a shower of new sexually explicit poems in the next few days...
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