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Well, the reason that I said that I disagreed with the comment that it didn't meet the criteria is that I have seen haiku that do NOT include nature. It does fit the comparison technique in which the lines of the poem are all talking about one specific event.
I do appreciate everyone who has come to my defense in this thread and all who have said that they liked it.
I did not feel tagged or attacked, however having the poem voted down because it's too short or because one thought it not a real haiku... well, it is a little irksome. One would wish that readers would vote on soley the content and merit of the work itself, but we all know that there are readers out there who vote things up or down for their own reasons and not necessarily based on the story's (poem's) merit.
It's kind of funny that most of the poems that I wrote that I thought were decent and were either based on something that actually happened to me (for example, the wreck 1 & 2) or on feelings I have for the way I would like things to be between hubby and me have lower scores (on average) than the ones that I wrote just for fun. Oh well, I needed to write poems for the Survivor Contest, but I still wanted them to be decent and received well. I do hope that most readers get some enjoyment out of them or at least understand what they mean.
I do appreciate everyone who has come to my defense in this thread and all who have said that they liked it.
I did not feel tagged or attacked, however having the poem voted down because it's too short or because one thought it not a real haiku... well, it is a little irksome. One would wish that readers would vote on soley the content and merit of the work itself, but we all know that there are readers out there who vote things up or down for their own reasons and not necessarily based on the story's (poem's) merit.
It's kind of funny that most of the poems that I wrote that I thought were decent and were either based on something that actually happened to me (for example, the wreck 1 & 2) or on feelings I have for the way I would like things to be between hubby and me have lower scores (on average) than the ones that I wrote just for fun. Oh well, I needed to write poems for the Survivor Contest, but I still wanted them to be decent and received well. I do hope that most readers get some enjoyment out of them or at least understand what they mean.