The Door Into Summer

[Lyricalli]

The Door Into Summer

It wasn't your autumn eyes
or their brisk coolness
as your took your time
sizing me up and then down
It wasn't your winter's calm
or your snowflake words
with their many layered meaning
all said with fireside heat
It wasn't your spring blossom smile
or the blush in your cheeks
as you opened up
about your colorful past
It was all about your summer passion
the way you'd burn and sweat
for anything you believed in
or loved, like me

I love this! I love the way all the seasons move from one to the other. So very good.


I'm just going to mention a couple of quick typos:
as you took your time
with their many layered meanings

 

[Trixareforkids]

I love this! I love the way all the seasons move from one to the other. So very good.


I'm just going to mention a couple of quick typos:
as you took your time
with their many layered meanings

Thank you I edited

 

[Lyricalli]

Thank you I edited

You're welcome! Such a lovely piece. I have to say that again.