The Meeting of Minds

[Veroe]

 

[Kaena]

Just a question. Is caleb wearing what he wore to work still or did he change at Tyrones?

 

[Veroe]

Good question I'd say he managed to change clothes into his regular attire. Jeans and a T-shirt with the New York Knicks NBA pro-basketball team's logo on it maybe a letterman jacket from his college too. If she's wearing a fancy evening gown he'll feel severely underdressed which may be an angle we might or might not wish to explore for this scene. It depends on you I think.

 

[Kaena]

I dont think she will wear an evening gown i was thinking some kind of lingerie. Will he have had dinner before going over? Or be expecting dinner? They could always order take out later if course

 

[Veroe]

Nah, no dinner for Caleb unless she has something for them both. He'd be worried about getting nervous and having tummy issues. Nothing kills the mood like puking up the spaghetti you had for dinner.

 

[Kaena]

Ok that works. Allows for a scene of eating takeout in bed later perhaps.

 

[Kaena]

I have posted in Wicked. Please let me know what you think and if anything should be changed/added.

 

[Veroe]

Kaena, Yeishia, I finally posted to Sorceress. Wanted to add some more at the end, but anything I could come up with would've controlled your characters. So I left it at a place where Kaena could do something fun to discipline him.

 

[Kaena]

Looks good. I will post as soon ad i can. I owe some other posts first. Now i have to think about what to do with him...

 

[Veroe]

Maybe use her magic to restrain him perhaps. She's gone a little too long without showing that she can do that, I think.

 

[Kaena]

I like that idea. Yes its been too long since she used her powers.

 

[yeishia]

Veroe I think one of us needs to edit as we apear not to be on the same time line in our story scene . My character had finished what she was requested to do where as yours is responding as if it’s about to happen. it probebly doesn’t matter and just me nit picking lol in which case please continue.

Actually, I am thinking maybe she can dismiss Serena for a job well done while she punishes him . With the incest thing not resolved I am finding this scene hard to write, especially if my character has to service her brother next

 

[Veroe]

Good point I'll look into editing my post to address what Serena was doing.

And I'm finding this scene challenging on my end as well for the same reason too.

 

[Kaena]

I think we need to move on and have it discovered they are not related so the thread can flow better. I think i am going to send serena from the room on my post

 

[yeishia]

Veroe was probably thinking what I was that you wanted Serena to taste him lol which was not the case hence his characters reaction.

Yup clear up the parentage

Mind you she could be bad find out from the old cook and not pass on the info lol.
I’m not going to do that but......insert evil laugh here.

 

[Kaena]

It was never my intention to have any sexual interaction between the two before they know they are not related. Remember nyra does know already though and i could put something alluding to her feeling guilty for not telling them yet

 

[Veroe]

I edited it at the end of my post to honor more of what Yeishia wrote. Sorry about that ladies. I hope this works better without boxing Kaena in too much in what she has Nyra do next.

 

[Kaena]

That works better. Ill try to post by tomorrow.

 

[Kaena]

I have posted in The Sorceress thread. I hope you both like it. It sets up for Serena to leave and go find out the truth, while Galen is left to endure whatever Nyra has in store for him

 

[Veroe]

Posted for Wicked. Hope you like it.

 

[Kaena]

Yes i like it .

 

[Kaena]

Been a busy week. Should have a post up for wicked tomorrow after work hopefully

 

[Kaena]

Finally posted in Wicked. Sorry about the wait. Please let me know what you think.

 

[yeishia]

I have posted.

Let me know how I fared.

I edited out a lots from a past post . I realized that I had written as If she knew about her birth.

I edited some of that out and popped it in this post . About being an egg in another birds nest differing looks etc.etc part.

I left her pondering what she will do.

I thought it might be fun to put Galen through the ringer before anyone tells him she’s not his sister .

Maybe that back fires on her because she falls in love and he hates her.

Maybe her Mistress is furious....maybe she’s in on the plot

I dunno let me know your thought please as where to take this.

 

[Kaena]

I think serena should confront nyra about it. Maybe she will be scared to do it but i think she would want to know if she knew and why she didnt tell her. As much as serena despises galen at times he does gave a soft spot for her and always watched out for her as a child though he thought she was a bit of a brat if i recall correctly. If i am wrong on that veroe please let me know.