The Meeting of Minds

[yeishia]

Having spoken with you Keana. I’m happier confronting Nyra knowing that the old cook will not loose her head or any thing lol.

 

[Veroe]

Finally posted to Wicked. Tomorrow I'll tackle Sorceress again.

 

[Kaena]

Very nice post. Worth the wait

 

[Kaena]

I see you have posted in Sorceress Veroe. Now to decide if Nyra tells him the truth or just eludes to it.... We shall see. Im hoping to get some writing caught up soon. Havent felt the best the last few days.

 

[Veroe]

Yeah me neither. My mojo was seriously messed up these last couple of days. It's maddening.

 

[Kaena]

I completely understand that. I have felt so drained the last few days. I am not sure if it is the time change or what it is.

 

[yeishia]

Thank you for posting Veroe.

Maybe a small edit, Serena was not crying when she left the room lol.

 

[yeishia]

Hope you feel better soon Keana

 

[Kaena]

I hope I feel better too Yeishia, thank you . I just need more energy. It seems to drain way too quickly lately.

On a side note, Veroe I have posted in Wicked. It may not be my best, but, I hope you like it. It has been a challenge to write a character that doesnt just outright dominate her lover. Though she is in control as the older , more experienced woman, she is still giving him allowance to do what he wants of course.

 

[Veroe]

Hopefully you've been finding it a fun challenge.

Yeishia would you like one of us to write an NPC character to give Serena someone to interact with while Nyra and Galan are involved in this scene?

 

[Kaena]

I am finding it fun. Difficult at times but fun.

 

[Kaena]

Posted in Sorceress. If you wish to have anything changed, please let me know.

 

[yeishia]

Yeah me neither. My mojo was seriously messed up these last couple of days. It's maddening.

Thank you for posting Veroe.



Maybe a small edit, Serena was NOT crying when she left the room lol

 

[yeishia]

Hopefully you've been finding it a fun challenge.

Yeishia would you like one of us to write an NPC character to give Serena someone to interact with while Nyra and Galan are involved in this scene?

Thanks for asking but I don’t think it’s necessary at this point.

My last post ended with Serena falling asleep in her own bed alone. Her last instruction from Nyra was to return early the next morning to tend to her needs.

So unless Serena wakes and decides to confront Serena with what she has learned during the night interrupting your scene and perhaps also injuring her wrath she’ll see you both then.

Any ways I don’t mind the usual wait I have bronchitis atm.

Later if I do need an NPC to interat with I’ll happily write my own as I did with the cook, it will be fun.

 

[yeishia]

Posted in Sorceress. If you wish to have anything changed, please let me know.

Post was great as usual.

I’m hoping Veroe will edit a bit for me re the tears though I guess it doesn’t really matter but you know me I like continuity I’m a tad ocd lol.

 

[Veroe]

To my mind when Serena was leaving Galan was not in a position to notice that detail about her tears. First his attention was pretty much absorbed by the pleasure he was feeling as Nyra was fucking him, and secondly that Nyra's body would've blocked his line of sight of Serena. So he'd be very much surprised that Serena feels the way she does, and am very much looking forward to a future scene where that is revealed.

 

[yeishia]

To my mind when Serena was leaving Galan was not in a position to notice that detail about her tears. First his attention was pretty much absorbed by the pleasure he was feeling as Nyra was fucking him, and secondly that Nyra's body would've blocked his line of sight of Serena. So he'd be very much surprised that Serena feels the way she does, and am very much looking forward to a future scene where that is revealed.

Exactly, that why I was surprised you wrote about tears that weren’t there and you couldn’t see.

No worries leave the comment if you wish.

Should be fun . Keana mentioned it might be fun for her to interrupt the punishment plot wise. It will depend if I’m feeling well enough to write when you guys get there lol.

 

[Veroe]

Oh, I left that in there? I'm sorry Yeishia, you were correct. When I wrote it I remember wanting to edit it out because it didn't feel right in that moment and all the reasons I stated before, but I guess I missed actually getting rid of that moment of him noticing the tears. I could've sworn I got rid of that line before posting it.

Edit: Fixed it. Funny thing was it was only the first half of that paragraph I wrote. So I guess I was in the middle of getting rid of it as I remembered doing and got stopped halfway and got distracted by something and posting it thinking I had edited it all out.

Silly me.

 

[Veroe]

Posted to Sorceress. Hope you like it.

 

[Kaena]

I do like it as always . Now should she let him or not that is the question. Maybe she make him finish himself off being denied release inside her.....

 

[Veroe]

I think she should go with your gut on that, but make him beg her some more first maybe do a few tricks (either physically or with magic) to push him right up to the edge again and to make him even more desperate for release.

 

[Kaena]

Go with my gut by making him take care of himself or...

 

[Kaena]

I have posted in return. Please let me know if you like it . I think he will be desperate at this point

 

[Veroe]

Posted for Wicked.

 

[yeishia]

As you know My whole family caught a nasty bout of Covid and we are all really sick and under quarantine. I’m finally feeling more human and hopefully by the the time your scene is done I’ll be ready to write again. Right now I don’t have a creative bone in my body. Time off work but no brain